1. Easy (2.56 stars, 113 notes)
2. Hard (4.74 stars, 253 notes)
3. Insane (4.97 stars, 355 notes)
4. Normal (4.1 stars, 162 notes)
5. Saya (4.96 stars, 286 notes)

Evil_Twilight wrote:

title should be ''Owari no Sekai Kara''

kioukiou wrote:

前面的BPM錯了,前奏那邊感覺有變速,所以應該要設2條以上的紅線

#1 BPM : 134.00 / offset : 1,536
#2 BPM : 148.00 / offset : 15,080
#3 BPM : 148.00 / offset : 15,282 (這條是為了校正重拍用的/For the heavy beat)

Airi wrote:

Greetings from Belarus ~
jesse, it will be good, if you change an artist name to Yanagi Nagi
Wish you good luck with with map ranking :3

[Tsukasa] wrote:

Hi~ Found this in modreqs so :3

Easy:

As you can see i nazi'd this one =w=

00:01:536 (2) -- Move the center waypoint (the thing you used to curve the slider) 1 grid to the left
00:15:282 (1) -- Move center waypoint 1 grid up
00:18:525 (1) -- Move center waypoint 1 grid up
00:28:254 (1) -- Center waypoint 2 grids left and 1 grid up
00:29:065 (2) -- Center waypoint 2 grids right and 1 grid down
00:41:227 (1) -- Center waypoint 2 grids right and 1 grid down
00:42:038 (2) -- Move the entire slider 2 grids up and 2 grids left, the waypoint 2 grids left and 2 grids down
01:09:606 (3) -- Center waypoint 1 grid left
01:18:525 (3) -- Center waypoint 3 grids up (adjust if it shortens)
All fixed

Normal:

00:04:894 (1,2) -- Remove the whistle sound on 1 and put it on the beginning of 2 only fixed
00:29:065 (2) -- Suggest you move it to 00:28:863 fixed
00:55:011 (1) -- Center waypoint by 1 grid left and up fixed
01:12:646 (5) -- Suggest replacing this with a note instead of a slider fixed
01:16:498 -- Add a note + Clap sound here fixed
01:23:187 -- Add a note I feel no note is better
01:31:700 (4) -- Move this to 01:31:903 and remove 01:32:309 (5) fixed

Hard:

00:35:146 (4) -- Remove this note fixed
00:46:700 -- Add a note (I recommend removing the note at 00:46:498 (4) ) fixed(just add a note)

Insane:

00:06:909 (1,2,3) -- Move by 2 ticks so they fall on the red tick Then remove the whistle on 00:08:028 (3) and put a whistle on 00:08:252 (1)I feel is not better sorry

1. Try this colors:
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 146,88,96
   Combo2 : 78,139,113
   Combo3 : 215,113,87
   Combo4 : 251,245,179

2. 01:13:660 - about kiai. Divide it into several parts, making for a fountain on an each outstanding place

1. AR = 2
2. 00:03:103 (3) - do something like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:10:267 (1,2) - remove the second slider, and make the reverse on the first slider on 00:10:938-
4. 01:02:714 (2,3,4) - 1 grid left lol
5. 01:13:660 (1) - make the angle of the slider less than this

1. 00:01:088 - i think you can do a larger spacing there, on this slow part i mean
2. 00:04:446 (2) - remove it, and replace reverce of the slider to 00:03:774 -
3. 01:02:714 (3,4,5) - make a triangle from this circles

1. 00:29:876 (1) - watch out for the triangles of the sliders
2. 00:34:538 (3) - prolong to 00:35:146 -

1. 01:05:146 (3) - stack with 01:03:727 (4) -
   and make this:
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:14:977 (8) - remove it, and stack circle with slider
3. 01:22:072 (7) - remove
4. 01:33:626 (6) - ^
5. 01:35:450 (8) - ^
6. try this rythm:
   
   SPOILER

   

Vass_Bass wrote:

Hi~

General

1. Try this colors:
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 146,88,96
   Combo2 : 78,139,113
   Combo3 : 215,113,87
   Combo4 : 251,245,179

2. 01:13:660 - about kiai. Divide it into several parts, making for a fountain on an each outstanding place

change the colors. Thx. and Kiai time add two place.

Easy

1. AR = 2 fixed
2. 00:03:103 (3) - do something like this: fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:10:267 (1,2) - remove the second slider, and make the reverse on the first slider on 00:10:938- fixed
4. 01:02:714 (2,3,4) - 1 grid left lol fixed
5. 01:13:660 (1) - make the angle of the slider less than this fixed

Normal
Hm, in Easy and Normal fast slider velocity, kinda..hard I just change Easy slider speed to x0.8

1. 00:01:088 - i think you can do a larger spacing there, on this slow part i mean fixed
2. 00:04:446 (2) - remove it, and replace reverce of the slider to 00:03:774 - fixed
3. 01:02:714 (3,4,5) - make a triangle from this circles fixed

Hard

1. 00:29:876 (1) - watch out for the triangles of the sliders fixed
2. 00:34:538 (3) - prolong to 00:35:146 - fixed

Insane

1. 01:05:146 (3) - stack with 01:03:727 (4) - fixed
   and make this:
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:14:977 (8) - remove it, and stack circle with slider fixed
3. 01:22:072 (7) - remove fixed
4. 01:33:626 (6) - ^ fixed
5. 01:35:450 (8) - ^
6. try this rythm:
   
   SPOILER

   
   fixed

Good luck

artist should be yanaginagi

due to

and



and official facebook/twiiter name

• Artist Yanaginagi
  Source Owari no Hoshi no Love Song(Not Owari no "Wakusei")
  Tags Jun Maeda
  ↑please fix at all diff

• 01:07:984 (1) - spaceing 1.5→1.2

• There is nothing.nicemap!

• 00:23:187 (4) - slider return is hidden by 00:22:173 (1) - in a moment.
  so,move to other places.but it is up to you.
  01:17:714 (5) - move to x:203 y:134
  01:20:146 (9) - new combo
  01:20:754 (1) - remove new combo

• 00:18:727 (2) - put on 00:17:917 (4) -
  00:38:390 (4,5,6) - make more simply. http://puu.sh/tAbC
  01:01:498 (1,2) - remake slider 3rd red point.
  01:19:538 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Please make more beautifully. http://puu.sh/tAcP
  01:38:592 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^ http://puu.sh/tAdi

jamxx wrote:

hi,from modreqs

General

• Artist Yanaginagi
  Source Owari no Hoshi no Love Song(Not Owari no "Wakusei") fixed. thanks
  Tags Jun Maeda
  ↑please fix at all diff

Easy

• 01:07:984 (1) - spaceing 1.5→1.2 fixed

Normal

• There is nothing.nicemap!

Hard

• 00:23:187 (4) - slider return is hidden by 00:22:173 (1) - in a moment. fixed
  so,move to other places.but it is up to you.
  01:17:714 (5) - move to x:203 y:134 fixed
  01:20:146 (9) - new combo fixed
  01:20:754 (1) - remove new combo fixed

Insane

• 00:18:727 (2) - put on 00:17:917 (4) - fixed
  00:38:390 (4,5,6) - make more simply. http://puu.sh/tAbC fixed
  01:01:498 (1,2) - remake slider 3rd red point. fixed
  01:19:538 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Please make more beautifully. http://puu.sh/tAcP fixed
  01:38:592 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^ http://puu.sh/tAdi fixed

nice map & song thx.
if you can't understand my English,please send a PM in game.

ykcarrot wrote:

[General]
First offset should be negative : -255
You're using x0.5 timing section for intro. But the note(s) that before 1st offset don't belong to x0.5 timing section.
It isn't big problem in Standard mode, but it looks weird in Taiko.
I know every diff isn't for Taiko only. However, if you take negative offset, it will make more sense.

Looks like this

fixed. offset change to -255

[Insane]
00:46:498 (8,9,10,11) - They look forced streams. fixed
00:52:984 (3,4) - That spacing a bit weird for me. just have a small jump's sense
00:54:200 (10) - Move finish from tail to head fixed
01:00:687 (3) - Add finish to head fixed
01:02:410 (5) - Delete fixed


[Hard]
00:54:200 (9) - Move finish from tail to head fixed
01:00:687 (8) - NC. Add finish to head. fixed
01:02:106 (1) - Remove NC fixed
01:19:741 (5) - NC fixed


[Normal]
01:12:038 (3) - NC or adjust spacings of next notes. fixed


[Easy]
I suggest changing timing section from x0.5 to x0.75
It's too big change between x0.5 and x1.0 for easiest diff. fixed

00:04:894 (1) - Start from 00:05:118. Leave end-point as it is. fixed
00:12:058 (1) - Start from 00:12:282. ^ fixed
00:54:200 (5) - NC. Move finish from tail to head fixed
00:59:876 (3) - Add finish to tail fixed


Yeah nice song, Good luck ;D

1. It's perfect ~

1. 01:17:917 - 01:18:322 Slideruu~

• Size circle - 1

1. 01:20:146 - off nc
2. 01:21:565 - nc
3. 00:55:417 - 00:55:822 move here Slider from 00:55:011
4. 00:56:227 - Circle.

Ryu wrote:

From Ryu's queue~ :3

Easy:

1. It's perfect ~ thx

Normal:

1. 01:17:917 - 01:18:322 Slideruu~not problem?

Hard:

• Size circle - 1 Insane is 3,so remains the same.

1. 01:20:146 - off nc fixed
2. 01:21:565 - nc fixed
3. 00:55:417 - 00:55:822 mohe here Slider from 00:55:011 ?
4. 00:56:227 - Circle. not problem?

That's all. I hope I was not useless~
Good luck with map, Map is mmoemoemeomeo~ ^w^

ertyukjh010 wrote:

安安~我來囉

[Easy]

首先說一下，Easy大部份情況都不建議減速，原因是新手不適應甚麼時候會加速
Easy的靜音部份(或者是減速部份)，您可以用長滑條來作，減少拍子的密度也可以做到減速效果 把減速全拿掉了
HP+1 fixed
[Layout]
00:15:282 (1) - NC bug fixed
00:29:876 (1) - Remove NC；因為前面的規律是兩個長白線1種顏色 fixed
00:31:498 (3) - NC fixed
00:47:714 (2) - 這裡比00:46:903 (1)更適合開始NC fixed
00:48:525 (1) - Remove NC fixed
00:50:957 (2) - 這裡比00:50:146 (1)更適合開始NC；後面不理您了lol 習慣長白線開始NC吧 我對NC真的不太會掌握
01:13:660 (1) - 距離錯誤!? 改掉per的slider後有重抓distance了
[rhythm]
00:03:103 (3) - 節奏有點怪怪的，因為折返在00:03:998比較適合；試試取消折返，然後在00:03:998結束 fixed
00:04:446 () - Add note fixed
00:05:118 (1) - 這個位置放轉盤好像怪怪的0.0 試試用這個節奏來取替轉盤：http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/312438 fixed
00:10:267 (1) - 情況應該與00:03:103 (3)相同 fixed
00:12:282 (1) - 轉盤的長度有點短，在00:14:073結束會比較理想 把轉盤往前移動一格後end延長到00:14:073了
01:12:038 (3) - Easy不建議放2次折返的滑條，新手會提早放手lol ，改為長滑條在01:12:646結束 fixed
01:39:403 (2) - 01:39:809沒有下拍子的必要；將這個滑條結束在01:40:011就好了 fixed
[Setting]
00:25:008 - Useless inherited point fixed
01:13:657 - Resnap inherited point fixed 4dif. (其實9成的inherited point都提早3-4 offset =.=)

[Normal]

Normal也是不建議加速，例如00:16:295 (3)這裡的加速我就覺得很突然，新手更是不容易適應
01:11:227 (1,2) 和 01:12:444 (2,3) 也是個很明顯的例子，距離相同節奏卻快了一倍 同Easy
[Layout]
00:15:282 (1) - NC bug fixed
[rhythm]
00:03:103 (3) - 取消折返，然後在00:03:998結束 fixed
00:04:446 () - Add note fixed
01:23:390 (1) - 在01:23:795結束 fixed
01:23:998 () - Add note fixed
[Setting]
00:25:008 - Useless inherited point fixed
01:13:657 - Resnap inherited point 同Easy

[Hard]

[Setting]
00:15:080 - 這個紅線刪掉? 我不太清楚這種情況要怎樣處理，有需要就問一下MAT或者BAT暫時保留!?
00:23:994 - Useless inherited point fixed
01:13:657 - Resnap inherited point 同Easy

[Insane]

[Setting]
00:03:783 - Useless inherited point fixed
00:15:080 - 同Hard 同Hard
01:13:657 - Resnap inherited point 同Easy

感覺還不錯:) 加油囉

AoiX wrote:

Request from Queue

>>Aoi's Mod

default=suggestion||bold=notice||red+bold=unrankable
General

1. 建议把滑条本体用自定义音效静音了，略不和谐啊 加入了
2. 不是完整版不带感>_<

Insane

1. 00:01:312 (2) - nazi.上移一个，这样曲线更圆润 fixed
2. 00:06:013 (4) - whistle 感覺有點突兀0.0
3. 00:24:403 (3,4,5,6,7) - 这段用Normal音效普通就好了啦，你的那个whistle太轻了完全没效果 Normal好像感覺有點怪呢
4. 00:26:836 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
5. 00:27:646 (5,6,7,8,9) - 挪下位置，下面两个点被挡住了会让玩家误判 如果是說的是前面3連檔到的話 應該是不會 0.0
6. 00:53:187 (4) - 这里有大跳所以要NC下 fixed
7. 01:12:038 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 这里用三连不太合适，普通的4个1/2拍circle就够了 把最後一個3連的circle去掉了 但前面保留我覺得有必要~
   整体还可以，但细节的地方玩起来还不够流畅

Hard

1. 00:06:013 (4) - whistle 同Insane
2. 01:05:957 (5) - NC fixed
3. 01:22:376 (3) - 反转箭头略微被挡住了，会影响到正常游戏 fixed

Normal

1. Normal和Easy之间难度拉的太大了,Kiai段适当降低密度来减难度 有些改過前面一點以及Kiai之後的note密度了

Easy

1. 01:19:133 (4) - Easy最好不要用1/2 fixed
2. 01:25:417 (3,4) - ^ fixed
3. 01:32:714 (1,2,3) - 这叫新手怎么玩>_> fixed

唉 被裁减了后还是不带感 残念

Mystica wrote:

here comes my mod.

[Easy]
00:08:700 - 加個whistle好點 fixed
00:53:390 - 這個位置跟折返一樣用鼓聲好 fixed

[Normal]
00:17:917 - 怎麼說我覺得兩個N-clap會更好? 中鼓的音效我想保留~
00:54:606 - 這位置應該像00:55:417 - 一樣加clap了 fixed 全難度都加了

[Hard]
01:33:727 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 這兩個三連破壞了之前的節奏感 fixed 砍掉circle5!!

[Insane]
00:10:267 (1) - 拉正點? fixed

很不錯的圖.另外有幾個建議,個人覺得OXX這種的梗會很適合這首歌.你可以多在音效上進行嘗試. I will try
值得擁有這顆星星 thx

wingman_dw wrote:

hi/ from #modreqs

[Normal]
00:01:088 (1,2,3) - I think, straight line is not best here.For example fixed
00:08:252 (1,2,3) - ^ fixed
00:35:146 add circle? keep primary
00:39:606 (1) - NC is here fixed
00:50:349-00:52:984 - Suggestion
01:07:984 (1,2) - Do Your Best fixed
01:10:822 add circle fixed
01:12:038 (1) - delete NC fixed
01:18:525 (1) - ^ fixed


[Hard]
00:17:714 (1) - delete NC because it breaks your pattern. 00:20:754 (6),00:24:200 (5)
00:29:876 (1) - delete NC
00:52:782 (1) - delete NC
00:53:390 (7) - NC because allow song and your pattern.
01:02:917 (1) - delete NC it's not need
01:33:727 (1) - delete NC
01:34:133 (x) - NC

↑ fixed

[Insane]
00:16:498 (6,7) - too hard jump for the first playing. It can't expect. fixed
00:33:525 (9,10,1) - fmmm.you made equilateral triangle. But 00:33:727 there is no note,so maybe it confuses some players. fixed.add a circle in 00:33:727
00:50:349 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - chaos NC imo
00:51:565 (1) - delete NC. 00:52:173 NC,00:52:579 (1) - delete NC 00:53:187 (1) - delete NC,00:53:390 NC
and 00:53:187(4,5,1) need to change spacing fixed
01:01:498 (1) - delete NC, and (2) add NC, same as 01:00:484 (1) fixed
01:02:917 (1) - delete NC,01:03:727 add NC? fixed.01:03:727 no NC
01:15:079 (8) - NC, and next (1) delete NC. same as 01:16:700 fixed
01:19:538 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - delete (1,2)? it's not your stream pattern. I don't want to remove

About New Combo, you can ignore if you thought my suggestions are wrong.
But please listen to the music carefully, combos are supposed to follow the music. Some NC are fixed.

[Katsura]_Hinagiku wrote:

偶。。。看似被射了好多星星了喵，恭喜恭喜XDDD

jesse7419 wrote:

[Katsura]_Hinagiku wrote:

偶。。。看似被射了好多星星了喵，恭喜恭喜XDDD

沒上OSU??神隱到這裡了....-.-?

Unrankable if in red and bold
Consider if in bold only
Suggested if in normal font

1. Timing sections are inconsistent across all diffs

1. 00:28:254 (1,2,3) - You may want to use a rotated pattern, like you have at 00:41:227 (1,2,3) - .

1. 01:02:714 (3,4,5) - This can be mapped closer to the vocals.

1. 01:04:336 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Spacing here is really awkward. I almost click too fast both times I played it.

Megurine Luka wrote:

/Queue

Unrankable if in red and bold
Consider if in bold only
Suggested if in normal font

[General]

红线不一致，HI多了两根红线，红线必须改到一致。 fixed
虽然问题不是很大不过letterbox可以关掉

[Easy]

00:12:058 (1) - 试试看从00:12:282这里开始 fixed
00:22:579 (2) - 试试看x=168 y=134 重弄了~
其他没什么

[Normal]

00:12:058 (1) - 同E fixed
00:24:403 (5) - try x=184, y=160 fixed
00:38:592 (3) - 试试看这样 fixed

01:03:930 (1) - try x=40, y=104 fixed
01:05:552 (3) - 关掉gs调整下位置，和前一个slider放在一条水平线上 fixed
01:38:592 (1,2,3,4) - 可以整体往右边移动一格 fixed

[Hard]

00:12:058 (1) - 同E fixed
00:17:714 (7) - try x=184, y=144不好去做調整~
00:24:403 (6,7,8,9,10) - 有种突然声音被降下来的感觉/w\不大好，其实我觉得N的hitnormal来当这里的串挺好的丫 不太好做調整~但把音量調大了0.0
00:32:714 (3) - 往右边一格 fixed
00:55:619 (5) - try x=336 y=152 fixed
01:13:660 (2) - try x=152, y=168 間距不好取

[Insane]

00:08:252 (1) - 感觉应该往右边去1~2格的样子 fixed
01:03:119 (6) - 尾巴稍微收进来点 fixed

呜应该没有了/w\就我看来排版还稍微有一点点乱嗯=3=/

加油

those wrote:

From .:Let those mod those maps:.

[General]

1. Timing sections are inconsistent across all diffs

already fixed

[Easy]

1. 00:28:254 (1,2,3) - You may want to use a rotated pattern, like you have at 00:41:227 (1,2,3) - .

fixed

[Normal]

1. 01:02:714 (3,4,5) - This can be mapped closer to the vocals.

fixed

[Hard]

1. 01:04:336 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Spacing here is really awkward. I almost click too fast both times I played it.

fixed

[Insane]
-

Sorry, I couldn't really find much. Good luck :3

Fenya wrote:

Rules:
3.- No more than 4 diff

Fenya wrote:

Hi~

Fenya wrote:

Rules:
3.- No more than 4 diff

It has 5 diff, as I accept the request... Decided not to mod the Diff "Saya"~

sorry,that diff submited last night,so no mod that diff is OK.
Easy:
Good diff o/
00:39:606 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/uxjv? fixed

Normal:
00:46:903 (1) - End Slidertick 1 grid right fixed
01:27:038 (1,2,3) -I think this kind of patterns can be tricky for a beginner...imo~ I think is OK.

Hard:
00:17:714 (7,8,9,10) - http://puu.sh/uxYN ? fixed
00:53:390 (4) - Spacing fixed
00:55:011 (4) - 2nd slidertick move to x:264 y:64 fixed
01:03:119 (9,10,11) - 1 grid up fixed
01:10:417 (7) - 1 grid down fixed
01:26:430 (5) - 1 grid right
01:26:633 (6) - 1 grid down whole remake

Insane:
00:03:103 (1) - End slidertick move to x:328 y:296 fixed
00:22:781 (3) - 1 grid left ?
00:22:984 (4) - 1 grid right ^
00:42:849 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Not have the same distance nothing
01:01:498 (6) - 1 grid up? fixed
01:05:957 (1,2,3,4) - Not have the same distance~ nothing
01:18:322 (9) - 2 grid down? fixed

Well, I'm not good at this, I did everything I could >_<
Sorry for my bad English, I hope you serve something.
Good song, good luck~

wowshakhov wrote:

[General]
soft-hitwhistle2 is almost unhearable, can you replace it with more loud/powerful hitsound? fixed!!
raise the volume a bit in the kiai part fixed

[Easy]
00:01:088 (1) - move to (88;136) fixed
01:07:984 (1) - maybe add soft-hitwhistle (regular, not custom) on the end of the slider? also on the start of 01:08:795 (2) (applies to other diffs as well) all diff fixed
01:25:011 (3,4) - make a blanket here (like this http://puu.sh/uDMY) also
00:42:038 (2,3), 00:56:633 (4,5), 01:23:390 (1,2) and probably 01:31:092 (3,4) fixed

[Normal]
most of objects here overlap D: just space them all out a tiny bit all move~
01:19:133 (6) - replace it with a circle on 01:19:133 fixed
01:19:741 - 01:19:944 - add circles fixed

[Hard]
00:17:917 - 00:18:322, 00:24:403 - 00:24:809 - just use normal-hitnormal here. sounds much better fixed
00:54:200 - 01:03:930
try to add whistles on the 3rd white tick in this part
00:55:011
00:56:633
00:58:254
and so on
^fixed

[Saya]
fine

[Insane]
00:04:894 - remove whistle fixed
00:05:118 - add whistle on the start fixed
00:10:267 - remove whistle fixed
00:27:646 (5,6,7,8,9) - pretty hard to read (not a problem though) fixed
01:35:552 (8,9,10) - plays somehow bad ._. fixed

1. [Insane] 00:20:957 有多余的timing线(我看了 可删)
2. saya难度和你的kiai有微弱区别 在我看来可以让他们一致 你们商量一下吧

LKs wrote:

From 【All requests posted here will be modded】 queue

[General]

1. [Insane] 00:20:957 有多余的timing线(我看了 可删) 已刪
2. saya难度和你的kiai有微弱区别 在我看来可以让他们一致 你们商量一下吧 OK

[Easy]

00:01:088 (1) - 变成X80 Y120? fixed
00:06:685 (2) - 听到这个whistle感觉稍微有那么点违和 虽然理论上可以 但我建议迎合歌曲去掉 fixed
00:11:610 (4) - 这种还有余地放的note我不建议做大角度改变 尤其是在easydiff 你可以放到 x0 y296 fixed
00:16:092 (2) - 间距不对 fixed
01:36:363 (1) - 虽然人声是红线收 但我觉得放白线更舒服 或者你把spinner音量调低点 all diff fixed

[Normal]

00:11:162 (2) - 结尾貌似不应该whistle fixed
01:13:660 (2,3) - 两个slider的形状都不太如人意 fixed
我觉得custom whistle的使用是个亮点 那种低音听上去不多不少 不过有多少人能玩的时候感觉到就不好说了 也覺得有點不清 把vol.開大又不好..有時間處理這音效 0.0

[Hard]

01:11:633 (3) - 间距有点不好 fixed
01:23:390 (1) - 向左一格向上一格 fixed

[Insane]

00:06:909 (1,2,3,1) - 造型不好 多花点时间做成菱形
00:13:849 (6) - 目测可以不要whistle
00:23:795 (7) - 左一格 或者其他一些调整间距的措施
00:31:700 (2,3,4,5) - 这种节奏略不对 应该起红线三连 白线三连一般都让人觉得卡
感觉你kiai之前前奏之后这段音量有点大 建议降低10% 因為音效關係 ~"~
01:13:660 (3) - shape
01:14:876 (7) - 位置很微妙 这种时候最好想做点形成一个想左凸的弧形 也就是把7往左
你在01:40:011 (7) - 这没放音效 在其他难度这里却放了 统一一下

all fixed

GL

Melophobia wrote:

[General]
I'd suggest you to mute sliderslide, it sounds noisy~ I already put on the mute sliderslide sounds in my folder last time,maybe I need fullsubmit once again

the last Kiai should end at 01:39:606 - in all diff all fixed

[Easy]
01:18:525 (3) - add finish at the beginning fixed
01:25:011 (3) - fixed
01:36:363 (1,1) - kinda soon after spinner for an Easy spinner bake to white nail

[Normal]
01:18:525 (5) - add finish at the beginning
01:27:849 (3) - add finish at the end (Insane has it)
01:29:471 (3) - ^
01:38:592 (1,2,3,4) - place them somewhere else to avoid overlapping
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/317024

all fixed

[Hard]
00:06:909 - add note plz
00:07:804 - ^
00:11:834 - ^
00:34:538 (3) - end this at 00:34:944 - and add note at 00:35:146 -
01:07:173 (4) - missing finish
01:18:322 (6) - add finish at the end
01:24:809 (5) - ^
01:39:200 (5) - ^

all fixed

[Insane]
00:03:103 (1) - doesnt fit music well imo, you should follow the piano at 00:03:327 fixed
00:04:670 - add note to follow the piano? fixed
00:06:909 (1) - whistle fixed
00:10:267 (1) - same as 00:03:103 (1) - fixed
00:11:834 - add note to follow the piano? fixed and adjust some distance -.-
01:03:930 (10) - finish fixed
01:12:038 (4) - sounds weird to me, try this instead~ http://puu.sh/uR8w I put note with the music rhythm
01:18:322 (9) - add finish at the end fixed
01:24:809 (8) - ^ fixed
01:31:700 (7) - clap doesnt fit here fixed
01:39:606 (11) - add finish at the beginning. fixed
01:39:606 (11,12) - maybe just for me, but it'll make more sense if you delete (11,12) and add a note at 01:39:606 - with a finish, i think~ reserve

nice mapset, especially Saya's diff. i like it thx
have my star and good luck! thanks for your star

Melophobia wrote:

I'd suggest you to mute sliderslide, it sounds noisy~

Good mapset all
lovely yanaginagi <3
starrr

spboxer3 wrote:

:idea: general

• 
  Settings
  (For the setting/general issue.)
  

1. 考慮加個靜音的sliderslide吧 前面那地方的slider真的不適合有聲音 加上去了

Easy

• 
  
  mapping
  (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  

1. 00:41:227 (1,2,3,4) - 這個你應該是想做成正方形的吧 但是現在這樣(4)的地方有些歪掉了 fixed
2. 01:07:984 (1,2,3) - 讓3的位置置中於(1,2)之間吧 fixed
3. 01:31:092 (3,4) - 給點建議 把這個弧度做好些 然後把(4)放在(3)的中間 fixed

Normal

• 
  
  mapping
  (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  

1. 00:06:909 - ,00:07:804 - 在這兩個位置加個note如何? 這邊有音高變化 可以放個物件而不是讓這邊留空. fixed
2. 00:10:267 (1) - 後段作點弧度 讓這個排列看起來不會這麼死板? 就像這樣↓ fixed
   
   photo

   
3. 01:38:592 (1,2,3,4) - 被壓在spinner 後的文字底下 盡量避免這樣做 因為這會對player造成讀圖上的困擾 fixed

Hard

• 
  
  mapping
  (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  

1. 00:44:471 (1,2,3,4) - 這個是不平均的間距 你可以檢查一下 然後稍微修改一下... 稍微調整了
2. 01:05:957 (1,2,3,4) - 如果你是要做正方形的話 這個有些歪掉了 fixed
3. 01:28:660 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ 同樣的問題 fixed

Insane

• 
  
  Overlaps
  (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap each other could space them farther apart. yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)
  

1. 00:12:730 (3,6) - It's OK..

mapping
(These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

1. 00:48:525 (1,2,3,4) - 這地方是正方形? 如果是的話你悲劇摟... 00:48:525 (1,4) - 間距明顯不同於(2,3) 沒有要排4方 但稍微調整為菱形了
2. 01:15:281 (2,3) - 為何是(3)才跳 照理來說應該是在重音上下跳阿 改一下吧 或許讓(2)直接放到(3)的上面 fixed
3. 01:25:619 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 這段是不平均間距 舉例來說01:26:430 (7,8,9) - 的地方仔細看一下 點住8 然後看看右上角的黃色字 那就是間距了 都調平均了
4. 01:32:309 (9) - 這個沒有完全覆蓋到 把這個覆蓋起來吧 現在看起來有點缺陷的感覺 稍微修了
5. 01:38:592 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 同 01:25:619 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 像01:38:592 (1,2,3,4) - 的位置就是沒有一樣的spacing 稍微看一下吧. 不是說不能差 但是超過0.5對於串來說 確實有些過大了... 連串部分都調整0.69平均間距了

紅色是unrankable的 一定要改 藍色的是需要討論的問題 黑色就只是建議

就這樣 加油吧~

Ryafuka wrote:

Randomly mod~

just all suggestion

[General]
- You should set preview point as "73254". (Although it is a little problem,but you should to place on a white tick,I think ) OK
- same suggestion as Melophobia

Melophobia wrote:

I'd suggest you to mute sliderslide, it sounds noisy~

I already add the sounds.
[Easy]
01:36:363 (1,1) - Spacing to the slider after sppiner is too far.maybe,it will be difficult for Easy player.. I think x:256 y:88 is not far
01:39:403 (2) - Add clap at beginning of slider? all diff fixed
01:39:403 (2) - Remove clap and add finish at end of slider? all diff fixed

[Normal]
OD+1? OK
00:07:804 - Add note here? That is follow the Piano. already fixed
01:38:592 (1,2) - Overlapped by spinner-osu. already fixed
01:39:200 (2) - Add clap at repeat of slider?
01:40:011 (4) - Remove clap and add finish?

[Hard]
OD+1? I think original OD is OK
00:04:894 (1) - Remove whistle. fixed
00:05:118 (2) - And add whistle at beginning of slider. fixed
00:07:804 - Add note here? That is follow the Piano. already fixed
00:16:700 (6) - Add NC here? reserve
00:19:944 (5) - ^ reserve
01:10:417 (7,1) - Swap NC? reserve
01:12:038 (5) - And add NC here? fixed
01:39:200 (5) - Rotate 45゜? I remake all note
01:39:200 (5) - Add clap at repeat of slider?
01:40:011 (7) - Remove clap and add finish?

[Saya]
00:51:971 (7) - Add NC here?
01:38:592 (7) - ^
01:39:403 (9) - Add clap at beginning of slider?
01:40:011 (10) - Remove whistle and add finish?

good diff to me <3 yeah

[Insane]
00:32:714 (6) - Add NC here? fixed
00:45:687 (5) - ^ fixed
00:58:254 (5) - ^ fixed
01:12:038 (4) - ^ fixed
01:15:079 (1,2,3) - maybe, this part should become like this. fixed

01:27:646 (5) - Add NC here? reserve
01:29:268 (5) - ^ reserve
01:31:092 (6) - ^ reserve
01:40:011 (12) - Remove clap and add finish?


Good mapset all
lovely yanaginagi <3
starrr

ikari_kyon wrote:

hello

[General]

1. Attention!! silence the slider slide and slider tick together is indeed unrankable, go to wiki for moar info http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria
   currently you can silence one of this two elements, but you are doing it wrong too I delete the silence sound of the soft-slidertick
2. dont use a 0 byte file for silence slider slide or slider tick, use an empty audio file, just like this > http://up.ppy.sh/files/blank.wav
   why? some soundcards may crash or have errors because of this files, a simple audio software also have problems opening this sort of files:
   SPOILER

   
   you may notice that this file has 44 byte filesize but dont worry is the one that rules are giving all change 44 bytes

[Easy]

hmmm the spacing is high, although set a lower distance snap would overlap the objects a bit is better since newbies dont know a lot about this game is difficult to change all composing -.-

1. 00:05:118 (1,2) - add whistle at end of (1) and start of (2) this currently sounds pretty empty comparated with the other parts fixed
2. 00:17:106 (3) - for a better flow, put this moar to the left and down, the flow should be more soft on this combo then fixed
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:22:579 (2) - flow issue, maybe curve a bit this slider in direction of next slider, or place the next 00:23:592 (3) - a bit moar down and left fixed (make curve in(2))
4. 00:28:457 ~ I preffer custom whistle but you are using currently pretty nice 0.0
5. 01:03:930 (1,2) - the follow points get covered by hitburst of 01:03:525 (4), ctrl+j'ing (2) will fix this problem, and for this 01:06:363 (4,5), you know, overlap stuff I think (4) no cover in next(2)~
6. 01:38:592 (1) - leorda says stuff about this, get covered by previous spinner "sucess" text fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:36:160 (3) - try that the start of this slider dont get overlaped by 00:34:538 (3) fixed
2. 00:52:376 (6) - whistle on repeat? reserve
3. 01:02:106 (4,5,6) - stack with end of 01:00:687 (2), also start a new combo on (6), its a pretty long combo comparated with previous reserve

[Insane]

1. 01:38:592 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - just maybe make some volume changes because of irregular drums fixed

nothing moar to say, nice generic =v= and of course nice usage of hitsounds I like it thx
please fix your 0byte files as soon as you can all change. thanks for your remind!!

Konei wrote:

From my moding Queue


This color = Advices = Feel free to ignore

This color = You must change = Unrankable

This color = You are recommend to change it = Not good



Easy


00:50:957 (1) Silder beginning finish? a little not harmony

01:41:025 Add note with finish on red tick? ^


I found nothing - nice work


Normal


00:13:659 Let Spinner end on white tick? the vocal is red tick 0.0

00:48:119 (4) add clap/finish? Sounds good to voice IMO is has whistle sound

00:49:741 (3) ^ ^

01:39:809 (3) add clap? fixed in all diff except saya,easy


Very nice Diff again



Hard


Absolutly fine IMO



Insane


Looks fine to me



Very nice map - I'm sure you get it ranked thx


Good luck!

1. Everything looks fine, I suppose? Well, to the diffs.

1. 01:39:403 (2) - I'd rather replace this with a spinner that ends @ 01:41:025.

1. 01:40:011 (12) - I would like this to be replaced by a slider that goes until 01:41:025 with 0.5x BPM. Or maybe just a spinner.

Hinsvar wrote:

\:D/

*Note: Gold ones are a must-do. Everything in red are things that look awkward or wrong to me (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler and a bit better.

>General

1. Everything looks fine, I suppose? Well, to the diffs.

>Easy

1. 01:39:403 (2) - I'd rather replace this with a spinner that ends @ 01:41:025. I think this should done the same with other diff. except Insane.

>Insane

1. 01:40:011 (12) - I would like this to be replaced by a slider that goes until 01:41:025 with 0.5x BPM. Or maybe just a spinner. use the x0.5 slider replace the note(12)

This mapset is... already great. I can't think of anything that looks really wrong here.

Good luck on the way

BeatofIke wrote:

Map so pro.

BeatofIke wrote:

Couldn't find any suggestions on your map, so I decided to find the video for you (if that counts):

http://puu.sh/wNjY

1. 00:10:267 (1) - looks agly, don't overlap the head with body
2. 01:39:809 (3) - seems overmap, delete

1. 00:47:917 (5) - ctlr+r will be more playable

1. 01:40:214 (1) - delete this spinner like other diffs or add in other diffs too

Star Stream wrote:

From my queue

[Normal]

1. 00:10:267 (1) - looks agly, don't overlap the head with body fixed
2. 01:39:809 (3) - seems overmap, delete I move note(4)

[Hard]

1. 00:47:917 (5) - ctlr+r will be more playable OK

really good map, but most of sliders are weird, plz fix them and find a MAT ._. I will recheck sliders ~
Good luck with rank

hi >w<

Request from my queue

Light blue : Must be fixed.
Green : I think that should be fixed.
Black : Suggestion

great mapset

fight~ ><

-Gamu- wrote:

hi >w<

Request from my queue

Light blue : Must be fixed.
Green : I think that should be fixed.
Black : Suggestion

[General]

●Song Setup > Storyboarding > Remove the "Letterbox buring breaks" OK

[Easy]

●OK~

[Normal]

●OD-1? Too high.. fixed
●00:16:700 (3) - Such a don't recommend. I two slider would be good. fixed
●01:38:592 (1,2) - hmm... I think this a good rhythm http://puu.sh/x4JL use your rhythm to remake mapset~

[Hard]

●01:12:646 (5) - I think that repeat slider match. http://puu.sh/x4NP I think so wired..
●01:14:268 (3,4) - Flow will be well. http://puu.sh/x4Ov (3) - Move (x:424 y:184). (4) - Move (x:432 y:216) fixed but not in your give place

[Insane]

●01:28:052 (7) - Move (x:112 y:112) reserve
●01:40:011 (12) - Add new combo. Because,speed ​​of the slider has changed. fixed

great mapset

fight~ ><

Katty Pie wrote:

hi ^^ sorry for waiting That's OK

GENERAL

in file .osu you need add color of edges of a slider on all diff's

SliderBorder : 255,255,255

I no have skin...

INSANE

00:55:619(5,6) - i think better to trade places slider and note sound better (with 5 note remove clap and add on end slider) this I don't want to change rhythm
00:58:863(6,7) - ^ ^
00:55:822 - here new combo
00:59:065 - ^
01:25:619 - maybe you make this slider so http://puu.sh/xeXn looks better fixed
01:36:160(10) - unnecessary note( it in any way here doesn't sound remove this note with vocal
01:40:011(12) - new combo. you change speed here I have already remove this slider ><

HARD

00:09:595 - correct spacing between end slider and note fixed
00:56:025 - make perfect stack between end slider and note fixed
01:28:660(5,1) - stack this better fixed
01:32:815(2,4) - i think better delete this notes bcz they create too big pressure peculiar for Insane diff fixed
01:41:025 - there should be an end map Draining Time on all diff's (except for the guest diff's) should be identical

NORMAL

00:37:173 make this so http://puu.sh/xf63 fixed
00:50:146 - add note fixed. use slider
00:57:241 - make this slider shorter to big white tick and add note on 00:57:646 sound better the same with Insane
01:00:484 - ^ ^
01:41:025 - there should be an end map Draining Time on all diff's (except for the guest diff's) should be identical

it's all for me ^^ good luck~~

Leorda wrote:

Hi there

[Normal]
00:31:092 (5) - Add whistle fixed
00:34:538 (3) - Make a same pattern as 00:36:160 (3,4)? fixed


[Hard]
00:07:804 (7) - This object is touch the HP Bar fixed
01:39:200 (5) - This object seems almost covered by spinner-osu and hitbursts fixed


Sorry for my poor mod orz

Phish wrote:

heya, some random suggestions from #modreq

General: Why are 2 timing sections on the same place in the song? 00:15:080 - and 00:15:282 - I'm not so good at timing, but i think one section is enough
Folder seems ok, previewpoint is set.

The 2nd timing in 00:15:282 - is order to make the forehand in the big white needle . If not set,it will start at red needle.

[Easy]

nothing found

[Normal]

00:02:207 (4) - end of slider touches end of window, pls move a little bit up
00:21:768 (1) - if you bend the slider in the other direction it would give better playflow http://puu.sh/yB8x
01:31:903 (4) - also touches the window end
01:34:538 (1) - ^

all fixed

[Hard]

00:55:011 (4) - I know this is nazi modding, but this could look better if you perfectly adjust the sliderform to 00:55:619 (5) - (before: http://puu.sh/yBc4 after:http://puu.sh/yBdi) fixed
01:03:525 (10) - Circles under sliderends are ugly to play on hidden, especially for hard diffs i suggest not to do this. move the circle over the start from slider 01:03:727 (11) - reserve

[Insane]

00:08:700 (3) - Copy that one, rotate it 180° and set it instead of 00:09:371 (4) - this slider. ( just for the perfect looking )
01:28:052 (7) - stack with 01:27:342 (3) -

all fixed

nice mapset though...

Flask wrote:

雖然都要等MAT了但是我還是來看看好了 OvO (不要臉 owo

random mod

[General]
kiai time在01:40:011 -結束才對 OK改了~這樣SAYA也統一了

[Easy]
00:12:282 (1) - (建議) 有點太短了 可以延長到白線 這也很麻煩 白線完全沒有vocal也沒任何音效 - - 把spinner往前一格然後延長1格一樣在紅線可能OK點

[Normal]
00:10:267 (1) - 其實不太喜歡這種slider o.o 這樣如何 這不是很大的問題就不改了0.0

00:51:791 (4) - nc如何 fixed
01:03:930 (1) - 上finish ?後面的(2,3,4)都有了 (有用到記得去clap) 這樣前後都是finish=口= 這邊也有連打接的鼓聲就果斷clap吧

[Hard]
01:10:822 (1,2,3) - 有點無聊的part 試試做個跳 ? 跳的地方保留給Insane吧
01:37:376 (x) - 這條綠線是幹麻的x_x 額...靜音spinner用 把它改放在結束地方了

[Insane]
01:31:498 (6) - +finish ? 很帶感 good 加了



好吧我純粹來賺KD的 lol 等MAT來吧
加油 Star !