Gave a few suggestions in IRC. Maps are looking good - mostly just needs stronger pattern use and reduction of 1/4 spam in Hard/Insane and this'll be great!

Almost fix according your suggestion. (tick rate 2..,distance..,you point 1/4 rhythms..,etc. )
Thank for your IRC modding and star ~

雖然都要等MAT了但是我還是來看看好了 OvO (不要臉

random mod

[General]
kiai time在01:40:011 -結束才對

[Easy]
00:12:282 (1) - (建議) 有點太短了 可以延長到白線

[Normal]
00:10:267 (1) - 其實不太喜歡這種slider o.o 這樣如何
00:51:791 (4) - nc如何
01:03:930 (1) - 上finish ?後面的(2,3,4)都有了 (有用到記得去clap)

[Hard]
01:10:822 (1,2,3) - 有點無聊的part 試試做個跳 ?
01:37:376 (x) - 這條綠線是幹麻的x_x

[Saya]
01:42:917 (1) - 這邊應該要大聲一點 finish都聽不到了

[Insane]
01:31:498 (6) - +finish ? 很帶感



好吧我純粹來賺KD的 lol 等MAT來吧
加油 Star !

Flask wrote:

雖然都要等MAT了但是我還是來看看好了 OvO (不要臉 owo

random mod

[General]
kiai time在01:40:011 -結束才對 OK改了~這樣SAYA也統一了

[Easy]
00:12:282 (1) - (建議) 有點太短了 可以延長到白線 這也很麻煩 白線完全沒有vocal也沒任何音效 - - 把spinner往前一格然後延長1格一樣在紅線可能OK點

[Normal]
00:10:267 (1) - 其實不太喜歡這種slider o.o 這樣如何 這不是很大的問題就不改了0.0

00:51:791 (4) - nc如何 fixed
01:03:930 (1) - 上finish ?後面的(2,3,4)都有了 (有用到記得去clap) 這樣前後都是finish=口= 這邊也有連打接的鼓聲就果斷clap吧

[Hard]
01:10:822 (1,2,3) - 有點無聊的part 試試做個跳 ? 跳的地方保留給Insane吧
01:37:376 (x) - 這條綠線是幹麻的x_x 額...靜音spinner用 把它改放在結束地方了

[Insane]
01:31:498 (6) - +finish ? 很帶感 good 加了



好吧我純粹來賺KD的 lol 等MAT來吧
加油 Star !

還是有幫助的啦~~
Thanks for mod and star~

from my queue
all fine, and bubbled
it's kinda nice for a new mapper, hope you can do better in your future maps

edit: the mapper didn't know the bubble will be pepped if updating a bubbled map.. checked, all fine and bubble fixed

Thank you wcx!! ~~

瞎了自己戳泡 ？
Bubble了之后不能擅自再改动...
再联系wcx吧...

@wcx: 瞎了没到12个star不能泡的啊... 记得老板新改的 ?
..我射个好了.

好吧我自己太蠢了 wow
話說上面加一加有12星
泡之後馬上變11顆... 這就無解了..=口=
也感謝snowy補星 0.0

加油o.o/住早日rank 這曲子好聽!

(star)

Love this song <3
Star ~ >w<

@Flask & xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx : Thanks~ owo

Hey! According to the new rule, you must remove "Short Ver" from the song title. Thank you! Don't give me kudosu for this.

OK~ I will change when BAT come
Thx

Just saying, the new rule is now a guideline, and according to the guideline it should be (Cut Ver.) instead of (Short Ver.)

[Easy]

1. 01:28:660 (1) - Remove new combo.

[Saya]

1. 01:21:565 (4,5,1) - When playing, stacking with 01:20:754 (2) looks broken due to stack leniency. Move (4,5,1) right&below by 2 grids?
2. 01:40:214 (1) - I think this spinner's end doesn't need to be silenced. Turn the volume up a bit...around 30%?

Speaking of the title, you can keep to use Short Ver. Anyway, I leave it to you.

http://puu.sh/OkMd


ok

All fixed clear~
I keep use Short Ver. in title~

go go

Woops sorry there was a thing I overlooked.

Since you silenced the slidertick, please don't use tick rate 2 on Hard and Insane. It doesn't make sense.

fix ok and submission ~

For now, I can only rebubble because the tick rate has been changed.
So I'm going to call wcx back to recheck here, then I guess I'll be able to rank this after his rebubbling. Please wait a bit.

Thank Suzully :3

hi, Suzully call me back for a recheck :3
checked and all fine
inb4 rank, rebubbled

Thanks for recheck,wcx ~

A pity this is a cut version. The entire song's story is really sad. ;_;

[General]
I'm kind of sad that you silenced ticks the entire map. They'd sound fine after 00:15:080 - and tick rate 2 does fit this song best.

[Easy]
01:36:363 (1) - This feels better ending at 01:39:403 -

[Normal]
00:34:538 (3) - Adding a default soft whistle here would help accent the hihat
01:36:363 (1) - This feels better ending at 01:39:403 -
In general the map is okay, but it feels more like an easy Hard rather than a Normal. You use waaaay too many 1/2 rhythms. Try to simplify things a little bit to make it fit more to the level of play expected after going from Easy -> Normal.

[Hard]
It's really weird that the beginning of this is slower than the start of Easy and Normal.
01:39:200 (5) - Repeat is hidden from the hitburst of 01:36:363 (1) -
01:36:363 (1) - This feels better ending at 01:37:984 -

[Saya]
00:34:741 (1,2) - I'm not understanding why this rhythm is here
00:53:998 (6) - This felt a lot better at about 1.65x spacing
00:49:133 (5,6,1) - More of those weird 1/4 rhythms. The way this songs phrases are done, if you really really want to use 1/4 spam, use them on beat 3, not beat 4. They feel much more natural.
01:10:518 (1) - If you're going to end this on that last drum hit, at least make it audible please.
01:17:917 (4,5,6) - Ah, there you go. That's where the 1/4s should be.

[Insane]
Same comment about the beginning being slower than your Easy and Normal difficulties.
00:27:849 (6,7,8) - This gets kind of messy due to the hitburst from 00:27:241 (4) -
00:34:538 (3) - Adding a default soft whistle here would help accent the hithat
00:40:619 (5) - ^
Same applies for the next phrase if you do this.
01:36:363 (1) - This feels better ending at 01:37:984 - If you do this, add a circle at 01:38:288 - and 01:38:390 -
Kind of the same commentary about the 1/4 rhythm use applies here too. The triples tend to work best on beat 3 in each measure for this song.

Garven wrote:

A pity this is a cut version. The entire song's story is really sad. ;_;

[General]
I'm kind of sad that you silenced ticks the entire map. They'd sound fine after 00:15:080 - and tick rate 2 does fit this song best.
I think these sound are enough in this map,so the ticks are not very should have. sor ._.

[Easy]
01:36:363 (1) - This feels better ending at 01:39:403 - ok!

[Normal]
00:34:538 (3) - Adding a default soft whistle here would help accent the hihat All add in my whole difficulties.
01:36:363 (1) - This feels better ending at 01:39:403 - ok!
In general the map is okay, but it feels more like an easy Hard rather than a Normal. You use waaaay too many 1/2 rhythms. Try to simplify things a little bit to make it fit more to the level of play expected after going from Easy -> Normal. I known the 1/2 rhythms are too many,but I think that I have the Easy and this map is really easier than Hard. Although I have already fixed a little part ~

[Hard]
It's really weird that the beginning of this is slower than the start of Easy and Normal. Yeah..the slow part before 00:15:080 - is weird , and I fix it in 1.0 speed ~
01:39:200 (5) - Repeat is hidden from the hitburst of 01:36:363 (1) -
01:36:363 (1) - This feels better ending at 01:37:984 -

All fixed!!

[Saya]
00:34:741 (1,2) - I'm not understanding why this rhythm is here because this feel more accent
00:53:998 (6) - This felt a lot better at about 1.65x spacing ok!
00:49:133 (5,6,1) - More of those weird 1/4 rhythms. The way this songs phrases are done, if you really really want to use 1/4 spam, use them on beat 3, not beat 4. They feel much more natural. This is symmetry with 00:47:511 (5) - . And he don't known where other 1/4s are weird
01:10:518 (1) - If you're going to end this on that last drum hit, at least make it audible please. ok!
01:17:917 (4,5,6) - Ah, there you go. That's where the 1/4s should be.

[Insane]
Same comment about the beginning being slower than your Easy and Normal difficulties. The slow part I feel better than Hard ..so I think I will reserve this slow part.
00:27:849 (6,7,8) - This gets kind of messy due to the hitburst from 00:27:241 (4) - fixed

SPOILER

00:34:538 (3) - Adding a default soft whistle here would help accent the hithat fixed
00:40:619 (5) - ^ ^
Same applies for the next phrase if you do this.
01:36:363 (1) - This feels better ending at 01:37:984 - If you do this, add a circle at 01:38:288 - and 01:38:390 - I known the ending part...but I don't understand add a circle at 01:38:288 -
Kind of the same commentary about the 1/4 rhythm use applies here too. The triples tend to work best on beat 3 in each measure for this song. About the 1/4 rhythm I have fix more part , remove that I think in unnecessary circle. And I remain the 1/4 rhythms are that I think need. I hope it will be better because I don't really known where 1/4s are very unnecessary. ._.

Thank you for the mod ><

Now I remember, Garven loves yanaginagi

Thanks for your support wcx.
/me waiting

[Normal]
00:54:200 - I really wanted a hit object to click here. It might be too many 1/2s in a row though. Consider deleting 00:53:592 (2) - if you do add this suggestion?

[Saya]
00:34:538 (10) - The accent is here though, with the hithat that would sound better with the soft whistle
And the 1/4 rhythm would actually go with the music at 00:35:653 -
00:40:417 (3) - Here is one of those weird 1/4s. As said earlier, it feels best on the 3rd beat. If you listen to the drum set, you can actually hear it pretty well. A rhythm like this would transition pretty well imo

00:49:133 (5,6,1) - This isn't the same part as 00:47:511 (5) - though. It doesn't fit since the rhythm isn't really there in the song.

[Insane]
If you insist on having the slow part, maybe do it at .75x speed? .5x feels too slow, and the transition to 1x feels too much.
00:20:957 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - This could look a lot better curved instead of a sharp corner like that
00:31:802 (3) - Unnecessary 1/4 rhythm
00:38:694 (5) - ^
00:39:707 (4) - ^
00:42:140 (3) - ^
00:46:295 (3,4) - This stack is a little weird. Breaks your flow of movement.
00:52:072 (7) - Unnecessary 1/4 rhythm
00:52:173 (1) - Remove new combo
00:52:579 (2) - new combo
00:56:734 (9) - Unnecessary 1/4 rhythm
00:59:977 (10) - ^
01:07:984 (1,2) - The whistles sound better on the start of the slider instead of the end
01:26:126 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - This stream's shape feels too sharp at the end. Smooth the curve a bit

Garven wrote:

[Normal]
00:54:200 - I really wanted a hit object to click here. It might be too many 1/2s in a row though. Consider deleting 00:53:592 (2) - if you do add this suggestion?

All fixed!

[Saya]
00:34:538 (10) - The accent is here though, with the hithat that would sound better with the soft whistle
And the 1/4 rhythm would actually go with the music at 00:35:653 - OK!
00:40:417 (3) - Here is one of those weird 1/4s. As said earlier, it feels best on the 3rd beat. If you listen to the drum set, you can actually hear it pretty well. A rhythm like this would transition pretty well imo If fix to your rhythm,and the front circles will feel so weird..so only no cgange this~

00:49:133 (5,6,1) - This isn't the same part as 00:47:511 (5) - though. It doesn't fit since the rhythm isn't really there in the song. OK!

[Insane]
If you insist on having the slow part, maybe do it at .75x speed? .5x feels too slow, and the transition to 1x feels too much. OK. I try to fix the slow section to 0.75x and the distance fix the same with original distance. just a end slider is no change.
00:20:957 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - This could look a lot better curved instead of a sharp corner like that fixed
00:31:802 (3) - Unnecessary 1/4 rhythm ^
00:38:694 (5) - ^ ^
00:39:707 (4) - ^ This 1/4 rhythm I don't want to fix ;_; because this is symmetry in next part.
00:42:140 (3) - ^ This I think is hit in hihat.
00:46:295 (3,4) - This stack is a little weird. Breaks your flow of movement. ok. no stack (3)
00:52:072 (7) - Unnecessary 1/4 rhythm fixed
00:52:173 (1) - Remove new combo ^
00:52:579 (2) - new combo ^
00:56:734 (9) - Unnecessary 1/4 rhythm ^
00:59:977 (10) - ^ ^
01:07:984 (1,2) - The whistles sound better on the start of the slider instead of the end If change, next part sounds are a little weird.
01:26:126 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - This stream's shape feels too sharp at the end. Smooth the curve a bit ok

Almost fix in your suggestions.
Thank you again!

All yours, Suzully!

Yeah let's go!

Ohhh Yeaaahhhh ! Love this song <3

Congratz :3

stop

Congratz > <

gratz~!

Thanks everyone >w<

YO~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

恭喜喔 Jess

也恭喜Saya第三張GD rank~

ERT出現了!!!!!

恭喜jesse ~~~

感謝2位 ~~

YO~ ERT消失好久了

麻枝大魔王
沙耶的GD很不错的说

yeah congratz!!!

Yanaginagi <3
Congrats ! >w<

I want someone to map the full ver. of this song ~ ;w;

Congrats!!

恭喜ww 等好久了呢

Congratz~~

Finally

Short Ver. is supposed to be "short version" in tags and not in the title

Thanks :3

slow grats \D:/

oh~ thank you >w<

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