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>Niva
Really thanks for your mod :3
Let me take some time to fix that !
Mystica
我音效大概加到00:51:892而且只是你自定的clap
你可以大概根據參照加後面同時還有太鼓音的使用也參照前面
大概加完可以PM或者ingame找我我繼續幫你看.
(主要偷懶了跪

Download: Kozato - 45nen no Yukizakura (LoliSora) [Sound Part].osu
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谢谢了~白天改好就上传
Katsuri
[general]
you need to full-submit your map due to problems in download link, i get the map not updated at all.
the size of your folder is greater than 10mb, the maximum allowed to maps without video, try reducing a bit the size of some files..
nice sb and map

[another]
01:45:539 (6) - this note is a bit hidden by note combo burst, try to move it a bit like this.
maybe you want to set tick rate to 2, this way you will have a constant 1/2 rhythm in this diff

[hyper]
your hitsounds are somewhat low, consider rasing them, the player needs some feedback from what he is playing.
why at another you silence the last spinner's hitsound and here you don't? consider silencing it in both diffs for better consistency.
same thing as another about tick rate here.

[standard]
tick rates, same thing as another.

[beginner]
nothing to poke at

hope to help ya
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Niva wrote:

Hi again LoliSora~

Here's mod for Hyper, as promised :3

[Hyper]

  1. 00:01:068 (1) - Hmm, whistle on slider's start here isn't bad, but I prefer finish because your finish sound is stronger here...
  2. 00:03:892 (1) - (optional) Because your previous (4) is curved upward, maybe curve this downward as well (to create an antagonistic effect here)?
  3. 00:10:068 (2) - Split into a circle + 1/2 slider? The song doesn't continue its 1/1 here...
  4. 00:16:068 (2) - Add clap here? (previously you had a clap on 00:11:833 (2), I think it's better to add also here for consistency)
  5. 00:20:657 (2) - I think it's better to stack this slider's end to (3)'s start instead... Stacking to (3)'s end isn't a good option because forcing it to stack perfectly will cause this touching (1) while your current stacking makes this slider's end not covered perfectly with (3)'s comboburst >_<
  6. 00:21:186 (1,2,1,2) - (optional) I personally disliked how the first (1,2) flows here... Maybe arrange them into a slider fan like this?
  7. 00:24:362 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This one also, you can just drag (2) and (4) further to create a fan formation here, it plays fancy :3
  8. 00:25:774 (3) - Add clap here? It will tell player where the triple ends~
  9. 00:29:657 (1) - (optional) CTRL+R this slider to create a small jump with (2)?
  10. 00:32:833 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Another optional thing here, because your next (1,2,3) is patterned I think it would be better if you used a more recognizable pattern here... This is just my suggestion, though >_<
  11. 00:37:068 (3,1) - Add clap on both slider's start, because you added clap previously on 00:36:010 (4)'s start
  12. 00:43:774 (1,2) - Try to make (1,2,1) and (2,1,2) in a straight line here? For example, 00:43:774 (1) should be on x:209 y:339 - adjusting (2) won't be that hard~
  13. 00:49:774 (1,2) - Move few grids right (or upper-right) so (1,3,1)'s spacing becomes equal? Will be more intuitive this way imo (:
  14. 00:56:833 (1,2,3) - I highly recommend to move (1) further from your previous slider's start - when I playtest this map, I missed here because of the uneven spacing >_<
  15. 01:03:186 (3,1,2) - Again, for the slowdown part like this it will be more intuitive if these three is spaced equally - for this case, you just need to move 01:03:892 (1) to x:476 y:138 xD
  16. 01:07:774 (1) - I can still hear a note here. Perhaps add a circle here and start the spinner 1/4 after?
  17. 01:22:245 (2) - Place this more upward? This will avoid clustering with 01:20:480 (3)'s comboburst :3
  18. 01:28:951 (4) - (optional) I think it will be good if you can put this slider's half cutted by (3)'s end lol, but this is purely optional~
  19. 01:33:539 (2) - CTRL+R this to create a small jump with (3)?
  20. 01:36:010 (5) - Uh, remove the clap on slider's end maybe? It kinda sounded out of place...
  21. 01:45:892 (5,6,1) - In any way, this is really similar to 1/4 triples (although they're actually 1/2 triples) - well, actually no need to change this because it flows good already, but for intuitivity I'd rather stack (6) above (1)'s start >_<
  22. 01:51:186 (1,2) - This also, looking at your previous (2,3)'s shape, I highly recommend to CTRL+R one of this (I prefer (2) though)
  23. 01:58:598 (1) - Again, I can still hear the song here. Add a circle here and start the spinner 1/4 after?
  24. 02:00:010 (1) - (optional) I'm not a big fan of putting post-spinner circles directly on the center actually... Spinner's comboburst will cover this note in play mode, but no need to change anything lol (it's just my opinion >_<)
  25. 02:05:127 (2) - Hmm, I don't really get the rhythm here to be honest, although it plays good but it will definitely fit the song more to use a slider + circle 1/2 after~
  26. 02:15:539 (1) - Silence this spinner's end, as the other difficulties did? Also add a circle on slider's start here and start the spinner 1/4 later if you want (as I previously suggested) xD
[Another]

IRC Modded from the log above~

I love this Hyper :3 :3
Good luck, LoliSora :3
Totally changed! Thanks for your mod ~O(∩_∩)O~
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Katsuri wrote:

[general]
you need to full-submit your map due to problems in download link, i get the map not updated at all. Sure~
the size of your folder is greater than 10mb, the maximum allowed to maps without video, try reducing a bit the size of some files..I don't know, maybe the SB folder is too big?(7MB)
nice sb and map

[another]
01:45:539 (6) - this note is a bit hidden by note combo burst, try to move it a bit like this.
maybe you want to set tick rate to 2, this way you will have a constant 1/2 rhythm in this diff

[hyper]
your hitsounds are somewhat low, consider rasing them, the player needs some feedback from what he is playing.
why at another you silence the last spinner's hitsound and here you don't? consider silencing it in both diffs for better consistency.
same thing as another about tick rate here.
Fix
[standard]
tick rates, same thing as another.

[beginner]
nothing to poke at

hope to help ya
Thanks for your mod~ but I'm fine with the tick 1, so no change about this.
BeatofIke
Niva pretty much covered most of the errors. I will still try to mod the map since you requested from my queue.
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>BeatofIke
Thank you!
yukinohara
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Makar
Hello, from my queue

[General]

  1. Nice SB :3
  2. The offset definitely seems late (should be ~10ms). If you don't agree with this then at least look for some timing experts to check and make sure.

[Beginner]

  1. 00:41:324 (4) - Due to the previous slider and the length of this slider, the second repeat is hard to predict and newer players will not expect this. Please shorten this by one repeat and add a circle after. Add a NC on this new circle and remove the NC on the next.
  2. Seems nice here~

[Standard]

  1. 00:43:441 (1,2,3,4,5) - This whole combo here doesn't really have that 3/4 feel to it and it's not very consistent with the rest of the map. please consider this time in the timing pattern (I highlighted what I changed) http://puu.sh/wii5 it feels much better in my opinion.
  2. Please consider looking over the Beginner diff and using it's hitsound pattern with the finishes. They fit much better especially in Kiai.
  3. Again, pretty nice here~

[Hyper]

  1. 00:13:441 (3) - Why is this stacked? It's inconsistent and very hard to read. Usually things like this are done on 1/4
  2. 00:21:559 (2) - Reverse (CTRL+R) this slider for better flow
  3. 00:43:421 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - This isn't much of a Hyper level pattern (er well at least its not very consistent in difficulty with the rest of the map). Consider using a different pattern here or make this easier to read?
  4. 01:33:206 (1) - Same thing mentioned before about the stack.

[Another]

  1. 00:03:206 (1) - This is so anti-flow... Adjust it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/323606
  2. 00:46:618 (6,7) - These sliders are completely hidden... its too hard to tell if they are sliders or not. If you are going to keep it like this, at least put a new combo on (6) so the color might make the sliderbody stand out more.
  3. 00:48:382 (3,4) - ^
  4. Goodjob~
ertyukjh010


Yo~我竟然完全忘掉這張圖, 我是按F2抽中才發現(炸
我到底遲到了多久

[Beginner]

OD+1
[Layout]
02:07:088 (4) - 與02:03:912 (1)重疊
02:12:382 (1,3,4) - 我是不建議在Ez上做這種重疊

[Standard]

Fine

[Hyper]

[Layout]
00:43:794 (1,2) - Ctrl+R嗎? 因為00:43:441 (1,2)和00:44:147 (1,2)都是從左上到右下

[Another]

爛圖

既然都星星了我就隨便看一下好了,趕快Rank掉><
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>Makar8000
Thanks for your mod :3 fix those things.
>Ert
妹妹大笨!不过谢谢mod和星星了,都改了,除开hyper那个...感觉玩起来还算顺畅吧。
kosiga
Hi~ LoliSora :3

from m4m ~

here my mod ~

[General]
  1. Song folder - soft-clap.wav - maybe this is useless ? >:(

[Beginner]
  1. 00:29:677 (5,6) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/wjA2 i think this one fits an SB, and the beginner is easy to play :3
  2. 00:42:382 (5) - add NC and 00:42:735 (1) - remove NC. It matches an SB, and the appearance becomes clean, too
  3. 00:50:853 (4) - Looks like the flow of the slider a little bad for me >< because 00:48:735 (2,3) - you are using the slider there is a roundness. my suggestion form: http://puu.sh/wjTX . http://puu.sh/wjU4 . http://puu.sh/wjUf ↓code
    SPOILER
    348,345,48735,2,0,B|444:345|460:253,1,160,4|8
    400,200,49794,2,0,B|384:108|288:108,1,160,4|8
    240,172,50853,2,0,B|144:172|128:264,1,160,4|8
    176,328,51912,5,4
    324,268,52618,1,8
    324,268,52971,2,0,B|396:223|396:134,1,160,4|8
  4. 00:57:206 (1) - remove NC. ( i think do not need NC )
  5. 01:02:500 (5) - add NC. ( i think too long NC in easy )
  6. 01:28:971 (5) - try use 01:27:912 (4) copy. and rotate -10° http://puu.sh/wjXj
    346,253,87912,2,0,B|346:173|422:117,1,160,4|8
[Standard]
  1. 00:30:559 (x) - 00:29:677 (2,3) - If you do not put anything between here, I prefer to put a note here :D
  2. 00:33:912 (4) - add clap to repeat and end of the slider ? ( same as 00:42:382 (2) ? ) but I think that clap of start is unnecessary.
  3. 01:27:206 (3) - maybe DS1.38x is Intentional? DS is not a problem. but 1.20x to put at the position has good appearance imo. http://puu.sh/wkfa
  4. 01:53:324 (1) - http://puu.sh/wkhn try use symmetrical form. You should clean an appearance than you make DS uniformity here. so 01:51:206 (1) - Ctrl + c,v,h
[Hyper]
  1. why HD7,OD7 ;x;? it is better to lower than another diff. so HD , OD -1 or -1 is better imo.
  2. 01:05:235 (1) - remove NC and 01:05:677 (6) - add NC and 01:06:030 (1) - remove NC ? ( I prefer to do the same as 01:56:059 (3) )
  3. 01:07:882 - Why do you put kiai here? I do not think the problem with 01:07:794 in the same way as other diff.
  4. 01:54:382 (4) - add NC ?
[Another]
  1. 00:43:088 (7) - change to 1/8 kick slider is better? ( same as 00:34:618 (6) )
  2. 00:46:618 (1,2,3) - I do not think that you put it in the place same as 00:45:912 (4,5) to be a good idea >< for ex: http://puu.sh/wkTX . http://puu.sh/wkJY
  3. 00:48:382 (1,2) - ^
  4. 00:51:382 (10) - add repeat. end to 00:51:735 ?
  5. 01:25:088 (5,1) - i think does not match the rhythm a little >:( try simple rhythm: http://puu.sh/wkN5
poor mod again :o

great map & SB ! Star~☆ :) Please do not throw kudosu if worthless x3

Good luck~ :)
Topic Starter
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Give me some time to fix that XD Thanks for your mod and star~kosiga-chan~
BeatofIke
Your map and storyboard are flawlessly good. Didn't really find anything. Added to my favorites!

General
-> Nothing found

Easy
-> Nothing found

Normal
-> Nothing found

Hard
-> HP Drain (-1) for better difficulty spread.
-> Overall Difficulty (-1) for better difficulty spread.

Insane
-> Nothing found

Sorry dude, this map is just above my scope of modding it. I wish I could star, but I'm out of kudosu! I really love this map.
BeatofIke
STAR~
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>BeatofIke
Fix all of them!
I'm appreciate you can add it as your favorites :3
Thanks for your mod and your star XD
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kosiga wrote:

Hi~ LoliSora :3

from m4m ~

here my mod ~

[General]
  1. Song folder - soft-clap.wav - maybe this is useless ? >:( Fix!

[Beginner]
  1. 00:29:677 (5,6) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/wjA2 i think this one fits an SB, and the beginner is easy to play :3
  2. 00:42:382 (5) - add NC and 00:42:735 (1) - remove NC. It matches an SB, and the appearance becomes clean, too
  3. 00:50:853 (4) - Looks like the flow of the slider a little bad for me >< because 00:48:735 (2,3) - you are using the slider there is a roundness. my suggestion form: http://puu.sh/wjTX . http://puu.sh/wjU4 . http://puu.sh/wjUf ↓code
    SPOILER
    348,345,48735,2,0,B|444:345|460:253,1,160,4|8
    400,200,49794,2,0,B|384:108|288:108,1,160,4|8
    240,172,50853,2,0,B|144:172|128:264,1,160,4|8
    176,328,51912,5,4
    324,268,52618,1,8
    324,268,52971,2,0,B|396:223|396:134,1,160,4|8
  4. 00:57:206 (1) - remove NC. ( i think do not need NC )
  5. 01:02:500 (5) - add NC. ( i think too long NC in easy )
  6. 01:28:971 (5) - try use 01:27:912 (4) copy. and rotate -10° http://puu.sh/wjXj
    346,253,87912,2,0,B|346:173|422:117,1,160,4|8
Fix All!

[Standard]
  1. 00:30:559 (x) - 00:29:677 (2,3) - If you do not put anything between here, I prefer to put a note here :D
  2. 00:33:912 (4) - add clap to repeat and end of the slider ? ( same as 00:42:382 (2) ? ) but I think that clap of start is unnecessary.
  3. 01:27:206 (3) - maybe DS1.38x is Intentional? DS is not a problem. but 1.20x to put at the position has good appearance imo. http://puu.sh/wkfa
  4. 01:53:324 (1) - http://puu.sh/wkhn try use symmetrical form. You should clean an appearance than you make DS uniformity here. so 01:51:206 (1) - Ctrl + c,v,h
Fix All!

[Hyper]
  1. why HD7,OD7 ;x;? it is better to lower than another diff. so HD , OD -1 or -1 is better imo.
  2. 01:05:235 (1) - remove NC and 01:05:677 (6) - add NC and 01:06:030 (1) - remove NC ? ( I prefer to do the same as 01:56:059 (3) )
  3. 01:07:882 - Why do you put kiai here? I do not think the problem with 01:07:794 in the same way as other diff.
  4. 01:54:382 (4) - add NC ?
Fix All!

[Another]
  1. 00:43:088 (7) - change to 1/8 kick slider is better? ( same as 00:34:618 (6) ) Fix!
  2. 00:46:618 (1,2,3) - I do not think that you put it in the place same as 00:45:912 (4,5) to be a good idea >< for ex: http://puu.sh/wkTX . http://puu.sh/wkJY Sorry, I like such pattern QAQ
  3. 00:48:382 (1,2) - ^ ^
  4. 00:51:382 (10) - add repeat. end to 00:51:735 ? Fix in the other way!
  5. 01:25:088 (5,1) - i think does not match the rhythm a little >:( try simple rhythm: http://puu.sh/wkN5 keep this one :3
poor mod again :o

great map & SB ! Star~☆ :) Please do not throw kudosu if worthless x3

Good luck~ :)
Nice mod! Thank you again :3 and your star~
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ LoliSora ~ :)

Mod time for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. Inconsistency Kiai Time for 'Hyper' diff.

[Another]


  1. 01:08:853 - Move break time line to here.

[Standard]


  1. 01:08:853 - Same as above.

[Beginner]


  1. 01:08:853 - Same as above.

That's all ~ Very cool sb and nice mapset ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~
;)
Topic Starter
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>Rika
Thanks for your mod :3
Fix all of them~
Kawayi Rika
OK ~ Good job ~

雪樱 ☆ it's soo cool ~


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>Rika
Thank you~ >w<
yukinohara
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whymeman
Hmmm....... honestly, I don't get to see cleanly made artistic maps like these often. Didn't notice any issues to hinder the map so i'll go ahead and rank then.
Nymph
变态
JoJo
变态去屎
S o r d a
gratz 神SB and map!
No_Gu
变态再见
spboxer3
神mapper 我等弱比跪了
tameenuwen
I was compelled to post for the first time on the forums because this beatmap is beautiful ;_;!!
It was enjoyable to play it. Who did the animation for the background? It's very nice!!
yukinohara
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NatsumeRin
咦,这个是妹子吗?你好,你住哪里?上几年级了?
sayamaster
为啥unrank了
JoJo
Let's get this rerank asap =A=
We need more awesome SB like this!
whymeman
Okay...... had to unrank the map since the SB wasn't update like it was supposed to be (and missing the skin it needed).

Next time, don't rush your maps and the people you're working with to get them done.
yukinohara
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yukinohara
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Pokie

NatsumeRin wrote:

咦,这个是妹子吗?你好,你住哪里?上几年级了?
光這麼看其實就一怪叔叔嗎 :roll:
No_Gu

NatsumeRin wrote:

咦,这个是妹子吗?你好,你住哪里?上几年级了?
收好节操出门左转。。
Scorpiour
瓜子花生清茶板凳默默围观
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