01:22:143 (6) - you can move this note something on the left side to match your slider's flow. Also there's nothing to represent here for you to stack it
01:08:423 (2,3,4) - Good Aesthethic, Bad Flow. Consider crtl g'ing one of the slider to have more movement rather than being linear
01:05:680 (2) - Im expecting slider here since in this part you can blend the drums and main instrument together but emphasizing the main instrument more than drums
Like you did here 00:59:277 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -