01:22:143 (6) - you can move this note something on the left side to match your slider's flow. Also there's nothing to represent here for you to stack it
01:08:423 (2,3,4) - Good Aesthethic, Bad Flow. Consider crtl g'ing one of the slider to have more movement rather than being linear
01:05:680 (2) - Im expecting slider here since in this part you can blend the drums and main instrument together but emphasizing the main instrument more than drums
Like you did here 00:59:277 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
01:53:423 (1) - ignored 1/8 ticks but 01:57:265 (3) - applied here(?), pretty sure you're putting it there where there are no vocals but there's 1/8 beats but here there's vocals and 1/8 beats like here 01:53:423 (1) -
00:00:533 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Lastly, use corners since this map is 5.68 stars you can resonably put notes on corners for some reason.
00:23:390 (3,4) - there is pause on this part it can be mapped better if you stack up the next note after the 00:23:390 (3) -. Other suggestion is make this 00:23:516 (4) - far from this 00:23:390 (3) - so it can emphasize more of its breaking sound.
00:20:491 (1) - Imo spinner will ruin the consistency of the map, I think it is not necessary to put it.
00:13:180 (1,2,3,1) - Too stack and dirty placements on notes, too sharp angles which makes it a choke points
00:04:982 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - player will be confused on this alt streams since you didn't made a preview before and after of the map
00:00:533 (1) - you mapped in this part but not on this part 00:07:651 (4) - , skipping a significant beat
Fix Offset and bpm 00:00:533 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - everything is offbeat
00:56:560 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - you can use 1-2 jump here to make a hype before the streams