01:23:509 (2,3) - I dislike the flow coming from slider (1) before, rotating it like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/15317981/6000 feels a lot more appropriate, how it was before felt uncomfortable because the map suddenly went from jumps to very decreased spacing.
00:31:172 (5) - this and the slider end before it is the same sound as 00:32:351 (3) , yet you mapped them differently, I suggest making them the same as to not cause confusion.
3 and 4 are the kick and snare, these are spaced out to represent both, there's no noticeable big sound on 5 so for this part the jumps follow this pattern, spaced jumps on the kick and snare, and smaller spaces between circles for the hi-hats. But I do agree spacing could be changed for other jumps. Slight adjustments were made.