00:30:342 -> 00:49:242 the patterning here could be improved on, its a bit repetetive right now
youre using this 00:30:642 (2,3,4,5,6) - triangle pattern for this entire section which gets repetetive quickly after once or twice. and the vocals are different enough to support other ideas aswell.
you could use different patterns based on the pitch of the vocals too like how it goes deeper 00:36:792 (9,10,11,1) - 00:31:992 (9,10,11,1) - here
for example 00:31:992 (9,10,11) - here the vocal goes more deep than before so you could emphasize that by lowering the spacing and making it more linear, kinda like this https://zolizoli.fs.boltz.hu/2t1l7x.png
and then here 00:33:042 (3,4,5,6,7) - the vocals go back to before how it sounded, but the lyrics are different so you could try something that fits to this, like a square for example https://zolizoli.fs.boltz.hu/c8b1um.png
00:56:442 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - this build up could be more gradual
instead of going big jumps from the start, you could just slowly increase it to have a more effective build up.
kinda like this https://zolizoli.fs.boltz.hu/y82z3n.png
also the nc on 00:57:042 (1) - is not needed
i double checked and the ones you pointed out were mostly fixed other than like 2 which should be better now
03:35:037 (4,5,6,7) - kick seems to be on time at 03:35:037 (4) - and then 03:35:344 (1,2,3,4) - is on time so 03:35:114 (5,6,7) - is just the drummer doing weird stuff, not much you can do about that, would do more harm if i put a random redlines there.
" (EDIT: and buncha these kind of fix themselves by the snap post I made)" this is the part that confused me
and sorry for resolving, didnt know it worked like that