00:39:864 (39864|3,39974|0,40084|1,40195|2) - due to the context that these notes are in, I think these should be normal notes because nothing is really supporting these sounds of that intensity ( plus u did it at 00:43:393 (43393|1,43504|0) - so idk why u don't do it here )

same thing happens in the second half

01:50:893 (110893|1) - I want to say that this LN should be released at so that it at least represents the drums at 01:51:224 - but this is up to u

00:19:925 (19925|3,19994|2,20062|1) - I really think it'd be cool if this was 434 similar to what u did at 00:18:289 (18289|0,18357|1,18425|0) -
I know this sorta messes up 00:20:130 - but what if u made the [34] doubles into [13] ?

00:55:106 - I think this part could be played similar to 00:54:834 - as some sort of a "call and response" kind of thing

02:53:947 (173947|2) - this LN here could be removed entirely imo - I don't think there has to be an LN for that organ sound

00:10:601 - column selection-wise, it's cool but 00:11:484 - makes it uncool
uncool as in there's hardly any noticeable differentiation for those drums because there are only singles
making a specific drum in 00:10:601 -'s small section to be a double would be enough to differentiate it

00:34:954 (34954|1,35042|1) - the minijacks where there's no tom + kick back-to-back feels a bit harsh for no reason just because you've basically already had the toms as doubles so making them minijacks at every instance seems to be overdoing them a lil bit

it's also a little hard to follow just due to the mastering of the song ( aka the kicks are really loud lmfao ) so it feels as if those minijacks are almost wrong ? taking account of the particular tom + kick syncopation would help make this section way more cohesive imo and not just a minijack for each tom that's being played

02:15:013 - I think you can make the wub here wayyy more pronounced or different; the way it plays just blends in too much with the previous section

02:22:425 - this part sounds hella trashy and has a bit of a circular motion to it
I'd be more aggressive with this part, it's too easy compared to the other kiais

02:25:601 - similar thing I had with 00:10:601 - the percussion doesn't feel pronounced enough and that's what's being primarily heard

02:29:307 - small downside of having minijacks throughout the kiais, this particular minijack for the wub doesn't feel different for its texture but 02:32:131 - it does feel different just bc the 2 note minijack is preceeded by the 3 note minijack

the context makes it hard to differentiate, so im not like too sure on how to really approach this given ur current structure

02:49:601 - strongly suggest playing with negative space for this section
the section feels really cluttered with all the dumped notes

02:53:837 - could show at least some sort of progression with that growl rising in pitch

04:41:837 - use a different pattern for this dubstep, the previous section plays exactly the same ( it's just jumptrill )

04:50:189 - maybe make the peaks of these pitches be triples instead of doubles

04:54:189 - swag one handing