00:34:954 (34954|1,35042|1) - the minijacks where there's no tom + kick back-to-back feels a bit harsh for no reason just because you've basically already had the toms as doubles so making them minijacks at every instance seems to be overdoing them a lil bit
it's also a little hard to follow just due to the mastering of the song ( aka the kicks are really loud lmfao ) so it feels as if those minijacks are almost wrong ? taking account of the particular tom + kick syncopation would help make this section way more cohesive imo and not just a minijack for each tom that's being played
ngl this was mostly me being indecisive with the section and using something safe so I'd finish it before the contest's deadline lol
aaaaalright made this part a bit trashier! honestly the percussion makes this a bit of a pain in the ass and makes it much harder for this to reach its full trashy potential, but I trashed it up enough that I think it works
hmm I feel like it could either make the percussion more interesting or I could focus on the "how we do", and I'd prefer to keep "how we do" on the same hand (which kind of sacrifices the percussion by necessity). To me at least the percussion is a noticeably quieter than the vocal sample
02:29:307 - small downside of having minijacks throughout the kiais, this particular minijack for the wub doesn't feel different for its texture but 02:32:131 - it does feel different just bc the 2 note minijack is preceeded by the 3 note minijack
the context makes it hard to differentiate, so im not like too sure on how to really approach this given ur current structure
mmm yea I see your point, it's pretty tricky to deal with
I'll make 02:29:395 (149395|3) - a double to emphasize it since it's slightly stronger than the one before it
ideaaaaallly I'd make it a [34] so you can feel it on the same hand but 02:29:572 (149572|2,149660|2,149748|2) - would make that pretty gross so I'm settling with a [24]
02:32:572 (152572|1) - this one'll stay as is though, a double would just suck and I think 02:32:131 (152131|0,152219|0,152307|0) - does an ok job at saying hey this part's different (and 02:32:572 (152572|1) - is different enough from 02:29:395 (149395|3) - in the music pitch/intensity wise that it's fine as is)
oooo strongly agree with that, I'll leave this one open since I wanna just knock out the easy stuff but I'll get back to this later
tbh I think 02:53:837 (173837|0,173925|0,174101|1,174189|1,174366|2,174454|2,174631|3,174719|3) - does a good job at that on its own, it's pretty noticeable to me as a player at least
o I'll get to the rest of these later, probably after I make more progress on my MWC spreads since they're the stuff I'm most excited about pushing lol