02:11:167 (1,2) - I don't think you can afford to ignore the sound between 02:11:167 (1) - and 02:11:341 (2) -, right?
00:45:702 (4) - It's really just a detail, but rotate this clockwise by 1°, so that it looks better with 00:45:179 (3) -
01:03:841 (6) - It's really minor, but throughout the entire map, you avoid overlaps
Yet this object overlaps with 01:03:144 (2) - , you could, just maybe, move it a bit up?
01:04:888 (3,4,5,6) - There's a sound that is ignored between 01:05:062 (5) - and 01:05:237 (6) - for seemingly no reason
00:01:400 (1,2,3,4) - Why not make this a perfect square? :x This is quite unsatisfying to look at
01:07:966 (2) - You should probably map the vocals actively instead of passively
Make that slider 1 full beat long instead of 1 and a half, and add a circle when the "ba" of "bara" is sung
While we're at it, it would look better if its start didn't overlap with 01:07:142 (6) -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16336411/5542 -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16336410/0ae3
03:06:279 (5,6) - Same argument as last one plus the fact that the song suggests sliders for both objects, at least to me. There can't be any objectivity, it really just is how I feel about this part
You could also use that suggestion for 03:05:933 (4,5) - , where 03:05:933 (4) - doesn't need to be a slider compared to 03:06:279 (5,6) -, but I respectfully disagree
03:06:971 (1) - All NCs around that part are made of sliders with >=4 points, so that isn't the issue here; The issue's the shape, which I will change, thanks!
01:35:010 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Didn't notice, ty!
02:32:817 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Intended, and it does increase overtime without ever decreasing. Unless other people complain about it, I'm leaving it like it is
02:41:125 (1) - This whole kiai time could, and thus, I NCed quite a bit of stuff in it
02:47:818 (8,9) - I certainly had a reason for those two, but I forgot it so agreed, however changing 02:47:702 (7,8) - would create inconsistency with at the very least 02:47:010 (3,4,5,6) -
03:02:471 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - Also made them more consistent with 02:47:702 (7,8,9,10,11) - while at it
03:05:586 (2,3) - I would have to change half the kiai time then as this pattern is repeated multiple times, I'm fine with how it is
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00:30:048 (1) - Right, I honestly felt like a 1/4 slider fit better because of the music, so I made the sacrifice of consistency. Changed that
00:50:817 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - & 00:58:086 (3,4) - I actually got a reason for that! So 00:50:356 (1,2,3,4,5) - is focused on whatever noise I can't describe, 00:50:817 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - and 00:57:740 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - are focused on the sound that I represent with Claps, the intention there is that you have to move each time that sound happens, therefore it is consistent enough to me.
01:13:779 (12,13,14) - I actually agree! I changed 01:14:010 (14,15,16) - so the movement feels more natural, thus making it easier despite the spacing being harder only on paper
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