01:50:258 (1,2,3,4) - maybe consider using a different rhythm here since it's a bit confusing, it's the only time you've used a double starting on a white tick. It also doesn't really make a lot of sense because 3 starts on a drum sound which is much weaker than the stronger drum here 01:50:708 - which isn't mapped at all. My suggestion is to focus on the vocal, something like this https://scalyx.s-ul.eu/qodw9b4D
04:05:471 (1) - Kinda minor but since there's no piano here I think you should remove this circle. You could then leave it like that, or instead make 04:05:310 (6) - a slider ending where 1 is right now to represent the weird noise that builds up right at the end (i think that's more interesting but it's up to you)
02:11:945 (1) - This strong beat doesn't get barely any emphasis from being the end of the stack 02:10:655 (1,2,3,4,1) - . I really think you should space out the strong beat more like 02:10:332 (4,1) - so that it has at least some impact.
changed 00:42:124 (3) - and 00:44:947 (3) - to add variation while keeping a predictable rhythm every couple downbeats