00:12:374 (12374|2,12936|3) - if you are representing the voice with these notes, perhaps you should invert them, since the first - 00:12:374 (12374|2) - ends in - 00:12:561 - but the second 00:12:936 (12936|3 ) - extends the voice until - 00:13:311 -
00:24:389 (24389|0,24546|3) - these notes could be double, the sound resembles the one you represent in 00:24:858 (24858|1,24858|2) -
00:46:577 (46577|2,46733|2) - I don't see much sense in these mini-jaks, not because they are "difficult" for a "normal" difficulty, but because they don't seem suitable for that part of the map, you could use them in this part instead 00:47:046 -
Under my suggestion it would be something like this -> https://prnt.sc/uy6OpeDVLaU_
00:51:577 (51577|1,51733|1,52202|3,52358|3) - On the other hand, if you apply my suggestion, you could eliminate these, since as I said before, they don't make much sense based on the melody
After thinking about it for a while, I decided that the triple notes would be changed to doubles and in the section that you had mentioned that "inconsistencies" were found compared to the first part of the map, doubles were added.
(the truth is that it was faster to do this than to talk to the owner of the Insane difficulty lol)
I understand your first point, but I think there is a clear and big difference in sound between - 00:04:722 (4722|2,4722|3) - and - 00:05:293 (5293|3,5293|0,5293|1) - that's why I used triples
About the second point, the reason for that difference is that in the previous part (from the beginning to