03:00:858 - what about this: https://prnt.sc/1LiQyYQotp-l it combine the sound of the guitar and drum imo.
02:19:880 (139880|1) - i think can you extend this ln until 02:20:206 - for sound guitar, or maybe add a ln 1/4 imo
02:19:228 (139228|2,139228|3) - remove a note? is a bit inconfortable and i don't hear sound strong here