00:31:926 (8,9,1) - 00:35:150 (8,9,1) - both would look better if they were straight instead of diagonal
00:21:045 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - dont really like how this looks (but you do it again so its fine) still maybe something else would work idk