03:47:690 (1,1,1,1,2,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,1,1,1) - I think you can start your build up here as u kinda did so on 03:46:460 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - so to reduce rhythm density again is a questionnable choice. You could simplify the vocals by using more 1/1 and 3/4 sliders to do a more subtle build up -> From 03:47:690 - https://gyazo.com/ceed2a64f1cf795c6d032f6b2d080365 , From 03:49:690 - https://gyazo.com/88afb254a2a9a1e6c9b7a9dae1a2b2cf
03:19:076 (1,2,3,4,5) - Skipping the downbeat here isnt good imo since theres strong kick sound. I suggest following the drums and vocals more closely like 03:19:846 (5,6,7,8,9) - . i.e. https://gyazo.com/e924b71bf7c1412275129cdfc87ef4e7
02:36:461 (1) - This spacing is too similar to 02:35:153 (2,1,2,1,2) - but it's 1/1 gap... Could move it further since this is a strong sound -> https://gyazo.com/b63c505829a39c03c5a781b010d9dc6d
02:19:538 (2,3) - vs 02:20:923 (3,4) - Random diff spike here when no sound suggest such a big jump. Maybe smth like https://gyazo.com/691c5a2941e7c94251241eb2e58c202c
I also changed some rhythms on 00:45:792 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - since I think the prevs was too rigid towards vocals