wouldn't make this a 1-1 slider since it ends on a snare which is a really strong sound 00:54:401 (1) -
Try to use more of the playing field. Everyone who starts mapping or is new does this (I did as well and it was a shocker to see) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19154347/d4b5
I do love bursts, but unfortunately there isn't any reason for this to be here :( 00:39:963 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - if u turn off hitsounds there is no drums or build up that resembles it, but there are these sounds which could be good with 2 circles 00:40:526 (1,2) -
I really like the slider creativity! Overall, I would focus a bit more on making some of the jumps more interesting (since 1-2s are a majority of the map), making the rhythm more interesting / following it a bit better, and lastly the distance between some of the jumps and patterns seem really spiritic and not thought out as much as it could be. Keep it up!
I see this back and forth slider a bit, but the rhythm choice doesn't seem to be ideal 02:59:703 (2) -