Senkou

00:22:722 (2,3) - maybe put it further from 00:22:553 (1) - for cymbals emphasis (probably moving them to around 297|326 would do the job)

00:24:576 (3,4,5) - stack them to 00:23:227 (1) - instead, it's a bit messy when you stack it to 00:23:901 (1) - as both of them are still visible

00:25:250 (1,3,5) - issa bit personal but you might want to temporarily lower your AR and check your visual distance for this kind of patterns

i only did some sort of eyeballing but thats what i was expecting for such repeating patterns for held vocals

00:28:620 (1,3) - 00:29:969 (5,6,7) - overlap police

dont make them touch/too close to each others bodies as it looks so random and a bit messed up

I like when you do sliders like this01:25:921 (6) - instead of 00:33:508 (1) - without the node in the middle.

01:18:086 (2) - 03:29:545 (2) - at least add some hitsounds if you're overmapping it for feedback thingy

01:20:192 (4,1) - ctrl + g rhythm to support snares on 01:20:361 - as an active object?

01:25:752 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 01:31:314 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - i do get it you wanted to follow vocals but skipping those snares on 01:26:090 - 01:28:786 - 01:31:483 - sounds really off for me especially when you mapping something dense on latter parts 01:29:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 01:33:842 (2,3,4,5,6,7) -

Could burst this 01:41:427 (5,1) -

01:59:123 (8,9) - ctrl g rhythm for vocal rhythm + supporting snares as active rhythm on 01:59:460 -

02:03:842 (3) - maybe map this as 2 circles instead as both of them has kick drums
02:04:685 (2) - hitsound too

<3 02:07:719 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) -

02:08:899 (7,9) - avoid those overlaps, just moving 9 somewhere should be good

Back and fourths here seem to be a really passive rhythm for this section 02:20:696 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,3,1,1,1) -

02:22:045 - im aware you wanted to do something something sliders based sections but having a reverse on strong cymbals isnt it mang

i'd probably suggest put some 1/2 or 3/4 slider on 02:21:708 - then put 1/1 slider on 02:22:045 - instead

02:37:213 (1,2,1,2) - 02:39:910 (1,2,1,2) - you can technically make these objects spacing bigger as vocals are also getting higher

02:40:921 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) -

fix ur combo to 123 123 12 for those snares/cymbals pattern

02:56:595 (1) - maybe split it into 1/2 slider + 1/1 slider? having a reverse on 02:56:932 - feels kinda wasted

Super duper over-mapped 03:04:011 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - this should not be a stream, bursts and take a look at the music again c:

Spacing here is pretty small compared to the rest of the pattern 03:06:371 (1) -

03:09:067 (2) - n e w c o m b o