06:45:927 - the grace notes could be substituted for a quad, or if too hard hitting a [23] double with 06:40:927 (400927|0,400927|3) - being extended on to fill where the 1 and 4 LNs on 06:45:927 - stretch to and 06:40:927 (400927|1) - ending around 06:45:127 -
05:40:827 (340827|0,340927|1) - suggestion to move selected notes both one column to the right to avoid the 5 long jacks
05:33:927 - i wanna suggest a nerf to this pattern, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/15769548/f9b0 shortening the trill and changing the hand before quad into a double for ease of transitioning
05:30:727 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/15769518/66a6 re-patterning to remove hand bias and keep the pattern somewhat in similar difficulty to rest of section with use of minijacks and in theme with one handed doubles, if too hard the notes on 05:30:877 - 05:31:177 - could be moved outwards
05:17:827 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/15769491/e13a some stream re-patterning to avoid the back to back minijacks on same hand https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/15769486/2524
03:13:815 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/15769426/8479 the way the 1/4 jack mixes in with the 1/6th trill makes it look really odd here, a slight re-patterning to avoid that would look nicer http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/15769436/b3fc