i said this before in the general discussion but i want to point it out here
Also a really important point that i want to emphasize is that i Hs the vocals with the "soft-whistle" so if it's possible i want to keep it, that's why i haven't change the "finish spam" that kat point previously for a "Drum whistle" spam LOL, but if it's necessary i'll change it without problem!
00:13:257 (2) move it up to don't collide with the other jumps, 00:13:802 (5) overlap with the 00:12:711 (7,8,9) and move 00:13:984 (6) to the right a little, it looks messy hitting the 1 and 3 notes
00:09:075 (2,3,4) move all the jumps together and blank (make the same circle shape with the slider) the "3" note with the 00:08:711 (1) slider
00:21:802 (1,2,3,4) move this a little bit to the left to don't collide with 00:23:257 and space the 00:22:530 (3,4) from the 1,2. You can only move the 3,4 to the left and the 2 closer to the 1 for example
00:24:711 (1) overlap the sliderend to 00:23:984 (1) sliderend and overlap 00:25:439 (2) with 00:24:348 (1)
00:30:166 (9,1) you didn't use the same rhythm at 00:53:439 (9,10,1) . I do prefer the second rhythm because it maps all the rhythm in this section and btw i think you are missing some important triples in those sections. Ex: 00:29:075 - 00:31:984 there is a triple before every downbit (the large white tick). 00:52:348 - 00:55:257 same here. 01:02:348 (7,1) between those too :p
00:39:984 (5) move to the right a little to overlap the 00:40:711 (1) sliderend and then ovelap here this part 00:41:439 (1,2,3)
00:50:348 (2) try to don't collide with the other notes, if you do it then make them a little closer to each other, Ex: you can overlap it with this 00:50:893 (1) (you can make the idea of what i mean with the spacing from each other)
00:52:348 (1) blank it with 00:51:984 (1) sliderend and increase the space of this jump 00:52:711 (2,3)
00:55:620 (2,3) move it the 2 to the left to don't collide with the start of the burst and 00:56:530 (10) to the right
00:58:711 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) could move it down to don't collide with 00:58:166 (1) (or just move up that slider a little lol)
take care with the slider points (idk how it's called but is the points that makes the slider xd), don't put them away from the sliderend
00:17:439 - 00:40:711 - 00:43:620 - 00:59:257 (9,1)
00:07:257 (1,2,3) move the 2 to the right to don't collide and blank the 3 with the 1 slider (also you can move the slider to the left a little bit to make more space)
00:09:439 (4) move it away from the 00:08:711 (1) sliderend or put it closer to it (like a stack of triples/burst )
00:13:257 (2) move it up to don't collide with the other jumps, 00:13:802 (5) overlap with the 00:12:711 (7,8,9) and move 00:13:984 (6) to the right a little, it looks messy hitting the 1 and 3 notes
00:38:166 (2) blank with slider and move this down 00:38:348 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9). 00:39:257 (1,2,3,4) you could overlap the 2 with the slider, the 3 with the start of the burst and stack the 4 with the 2
01:03:620 (1) collide (move it a little up and right maybe) and 01:03:984 blank this with the sliderend of 01:02:893 (2)
01:03:620 (1) collide (move it a little up and right maybe) and 01:03:984 blank this with the sliderend of 01:02:893 (2)
00:09:075 (2,3,4) move all the jumps together and blank (make the same circle shape with the slider) the "3" note with the 00:08:711 (1) slider
00:21:802 (1,2,3,4) move this a little bit to the left to don't collide with 00:23:257 and space the 00:22:530 (3,4) from the 1,2. You can only move the 3,4 to the left and the 2 closer to the 1 for example
00:24:711 (1) overlap the sliderend to 00:23:984 (1) sliderend and overlap 00:25:439 (2) with 00:24:348 (1)
00:30:166 (9,1) you didn't use the same rhythm at 00:53:439 (9,10,1) . I do prefer the second rhythm because it maps all the rhythm in this section and btw i think you are missing some important triples in those sections. Ex: 00:29:075 - 00:31:984 there is a triple before every downbit (the large white tick). 00:52:348 - 00:55:257 same here. 01:02:348 (7,1) between those too :p
00:39:984 (5) move to the right a little to overlap the 00:40:711 (1) sliderend and then ovelap here this part 00:41:439 (1,2,3)
00:50:348 (2) try to don't collide with the other notes, if you do it then make them a little closer to each other, Ex: you can overlap it with this 00:50:893 (1) (you can make the idea of what i mean with the spacing from each other)
00:52:348 (1) blank it with 00:51:984 (1) sliderend and increase the space of this jump 00:52:711 (2,3)
00:55:620 (2,3) move it the 2 to the left to don't collide with the start of the burst and 00:56:530 (10) to the right
00:58:711 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) could move it down to don't collide with 00:58:166 (1) (or just move up that slider a little lol)
00:07:257 (1,2,3) move the 2 to the right to don't collide and blank the 3 with the 1 slider (also you can move the slider to the left a little bit to make more space)
00:09:439 (4) move it away from the 00:08:711 (1) sliderend or put it closer to it (like a stack of triples/burst )
00:38:166 (2) blank with slider and move this down 00:38:348 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9). 00:39:257 (1,2,3,4) you could overlap the 2 with the slider, the 3 with the start of the burst and stack the 4 with the 2
01:03:620 (1) collide (move it a little up and right maybe) and 01:03:984 blank this with the sliderend of 01:02:893 (2)
00:13:257 (2) move it up to don't collide with the other jumps, 00:13:802 (5) overlap with the 00:12:711 (7,8,9) and move 00:13:984 (6) to the right a little, it looks messy hitting the 1 and 3 notes