00:13:113 (5) - consider deleting (or atleast lowering the spacing of ) this object and putting a slider on the 00:12:965 (4) - since the spacing on (5) is kinda not justified with its sound basicaly being an echo of the last note.
maybe place (5) in such a way that is close to (4) but with weird/harder flow to have a same effect as making it more spaced out with easier playability
map has some cool ideas that I like but it has a few problemss:
00:36:740 (5,6) - thhingf you are doing here is kinda random since on the same sound youve done this 00:35:074 (6,7) - it flows weird and doestn really justify its spacing imo
you should consider using bigger spacing on the downbeats 00:34:074 (1,4,6) -
PRVA STVAR:
ovaj verse od 00:21:700 (1) do 00:43:174 (1)
Nervira me to sto mapujes vokale i malo ignorises instrumental.To radis i u drugim mapama koje sam ti stalkovao.
Mene to licno nervira jer ti ceo deo mape ne ide uz pesmu zato sto ni sami vokali nisu sinergicni sa insturmentalom sto je uredu kompozitorski,ali meni u mapovanju to ne pashe bas najoblje.
Na primer:
00:23:595 (3,4,5) - prva varijanta snare emphasisa
00:26:121 (3,4,5,6) - druga varijanta snare emphasisa
00:29:595 (2,3,4,5) - treca varijanta
Sve ove varijante su uradu same za sebe,ali su inconsistent jedne sa drugima a nalaze se na istim stvarima.Ovo se desava zato sto mapujes vokale i onda po vokalima modifikujes ritam(sto je uredu) ali bi prioritet u vecini slucajeva ,kao sto je ovaj, trebao biti instrumental.
Po meni ovakav approach je inconsistent i ne flowuje dobro uz pesmicu.
DRUGA STVAR:
Meni licno se ne svidja ovaj koncept overmapovanja kao sto je ovo na primer : 01:02:121 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
Cini mi se malo bespotrebno although na nekim mestima veoma dobro flowuje i poboljsava kvalitet mape :
00:59:595 (1,2,3,4,5,1) i 01:03:384 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) .
Svakako ovo je samo moje misljenje,ceo ovaj koncept sa overmapovanjem je consistent kroz mapu tako da tu ne mogu nista da kazem.
TRECA STVAR:
01:13:805 (1,2) - Ovakav emphasis na snarovima je previse slab,pogotovo sto je ovo chorus (climax pesme/mape)
Znam da su u pitanju 1/4 jumpovi ali bi barem trebalo da dodaju dinamiku u pattern (promenu flowa npr)
ovako nesto na primer : https://ibb.co/JBpZ4f6
ZAKLJUCAK:
Mapa je svakako pog,ali ovo su samo neke stvari koje bi ja promenio.(ovo dolazi od unranked mappera btw)
Mapa je svakako pog
i dont really agree with the first part; I dont really see a song rising up in intensity the guitart solo is pretty consistent the drumming also; second part I agree with its much better now thanks
I agree, but I was js maping the long growl with those continues objects so that the whole section isnt the same patternl; also its the begging of it so I think its okay. Thats my excuse ig, but Ill consider changing it thanks
well you CLEARLY dont understand the situation here skyler....first and the last object are copy paste:
00:00:000 (1) -
01:57:797 (1) -
i moved slider up 5 pixels