Here 01:23:307 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - jumps aren't consistent, it start like that : 01:23:307 (1,2,1,2) - and end up like that 01:23:707 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Try keeping the same jumps pattern as the song don't really change
01:06:907 (2) - This circle looks totally random, try to stack it with 01:07:307 (1) - maybe
Also, I would recommend to not mute all the sliders end, this is really just a personnal thought, but I think it could add rythm variation :) Like here 00:30:507 (1,2) -
00:21:307 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Same, no 1-2s needed, and try to structure your jumps. Remove all the 1-2's nc and put a NC at this note 00:22:507 (1) -
Hi ! 00:03:307 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Why 1-2s ? Try keeping the same jumps, but with two combo of 4, instead of 1-2s. Combo of 4 would be great because the background note changes to higher note.