05:12:951 (3,4) - Maybe a bit lame but I'd ctrlg this or turn the slider into 2 circles since the higher vocal on 05:13:118 - sounds more prominent than the one on 05:12:951 - even though the white tick vocal doesn't have a syllable on it.
01:14:343 (1,2) - 01:26:123 (7) - These kicksliders are a nice idea but I think they would work better if they are repeated more often in this song since they currently feel a bit out of place.
01:15:914 - 01:19:526 - 01:23:610 - consider adding them on these spots for instance.
01:27:379 (6) - 01:28:636 (11) - 01:26:594 (2) - or maybe replace these circles with kicksliders to reflect the vocals.
00:33:976 (1,2,3,4) - This linear flow feels a bit out of place in this section so maybe consider this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19530225/3915
00:09:816 (4) - I recommend this rhythm because 00:10:222 - is very prominent for it to only have a sliderend https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19530220/62cc