if you want 01:46:820 to stand out more, you neeeed to turn down the intensity of 01:45:226 these quiet sections. theyre so dense that going into the denser jumpstream bursts provides no emphasis and flow too similarly imo. try keep it to minimal double usage throughout until you get to 01:46:820 and focus on single notes rather than doubles. the visual density is just too high consistently here

01:43:880 (103880|1,103930|3,104179|1,104229|2,104478|0,104528|2,104777|1) - feel wayyyy too unnatural given how dense they are compared to the music. the triples kinda need to stand out given how impactful the sounds are here compared to any other bg noise.

honestly just remove the highlighted notes and youll feel the emphasis way more than with them there

01:25:392 (85392|2,85442|3,85442|1,85442|0,85541|1,85591|0,85591|2,85591|3) - ctrl + h these, changing up the triples to be different each hit makes them feel more impactful, and the jacks it would create at 01:25:292 (85292|1,85392|1,85442|2,85541|2) [when flipped] help provide that emphasis

01:01:372 - these drums need a bit more structure to em as they all roll the same way in a nonsensical sorta flow that doesnt really support the rhythm of the drums. the notes at 01:01:571 and 01:01:870 should stand out for example as theyre the few drums not connected by 1/4th drum beats if ya get me

if it doesnt make sense, look at how https://youtu.be/yfeYAGEyAiM?si=ujm748Y2dUTU13Yr&t=61 does it. theyre distinct from each other, the standalone drums and the faster rollier sounds.

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19145726/05b0 could work better?

00:51:904 (51904|0,51953|1,52003|2,52103|2,52153|1,52203|0) - these structures are kinda jarring and a bit awkward to hit for such quiet drums, there arent really any obvious 1/4th, and the patterning being slightly minijacky implies emphasis where there really shouldnt be any

simplify these mini breaks between lns to just 1/2 where you can unless its really necessary imo

00:38:249 (38249|1,38249|3,38249|0,38449|1,38548|3,38548|2,38648|0,38648|1) - i think these sounds need to stand out way more comparatively to the drums following it, theyre such a stark contrast to everything else being the only standout harmonic instrument through this section given the lack of vocals now

like if you made these the only LN patterns, and removed the ln from 00:38:847 (38847|0,38847|3,39047|3,39047|2,39047|1,39246|1,39246|0,39246|2) and patterns similar to this without any sort of harmony, it could provide a way stronger emphasis both visually and through playing

00:24:695 - i think youd be better off matching the intensity of the drum beats consistently throughout this break, and maybe give a bit of a structured flow to it too. the drums kinda follow a 1 23 1 23 rhythm where the first of each set of triples is strongest, so emphasise that a bit more imo

somethin like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19145714/1d3e could work (the ln at the end isnt needed in your current version)