Nisemono
01:15:676 (75676|1) - maybe to col 1 because 01:15:176 (75176|1,75276|1,75376|1), 01:15:576 (75576|1,75676|1,75776|1), 01:15:976 (75976|1,76076|1), i understand the concept but this is a bit more playable
01:57:576 (117576|0) - maybe remove since its a ghost note i think and you can add a note here in col 1 01:57:776 for the kick, and since thats where the vocal starts
02:15:576 missed rice for the note here potentially,
if you add it maybe this could be in col 1 02:16:076 (136076|2) (assuming you add the note in col 4)
04:16:801 (256801|1) - kind of overly simplified imo, i would at least add a weird sv here if you want to keep the simple slider since rn its kinda underwhelming
04:34:551 (274551|1,274651|1,274751|1,274901|1,275001|1,275101|1) - maybe give some love to other cols,
04:34:901 (274901|1,275101|1,275301|1) - to col 1 and
04:35:201 (275201|0,275401|0) - to col 2 perhaps
03:41:454 (221454|0,221538|0,221538|1,221623|1) - 03:43:477 (223477|3,223561|2,223561|3,223645|2) - again i think these should definitely be 2 hand patterns
03:01:614 (181614|2,181641|3,181694|2) - this is really uncomfy to be a one hand pattern, just do 03:01:297 (181297|0,181323|2,181376|0) - but ctrl+h
01:47:431 (107431|2,107544|2,107656|2,107881|0,107993|0,108105|2,108105|0,108218|2,108330|2), 01:46:532 (106532|2,106645|2,106757|2), 01:49:229 (109229|3,109341|3,109454|3) - - are these 3 note anchors intentional, they kinda start appearing randomly, 01:49:903 (109903|0,110015|0,110128|0) - here it makes sense because its emphasizing the instrument but otherwise just seem random
01:45:521 (105521|1,105633|1,105746|0,105858|1,105858|0,105971|1) - i think 3 minijacks on same hand in rapid suggestion is kinda overkill, might need to do some restructuing to fix the hand balance
01:39:791-02:01:364 im unsure in how youre layering this, especially the doubles since currently its half/half on double or a single minijack 01:40:015 (100015|3,100015|2,100128|3,100128|1,100128|0) - 01:41:701 (101701|0,101701|3,101813|0,101813|3,101813|2) - and it just switches randomly, its okay if its intentional but imo it can result in messy layering and unwanted hand bias ex 01:44:510 (104510|1,104510|0,104622|1,104735|0,104847|0,104847|1,105072|1,105184|1,105184|0,105296|0), 01:53:836 (113836|2,113948|2,113948|3,114060|3,114173|2,114285|3,114285|2)
01:15:676 (75676|1) - maybe to col 1 because 01:15:176 (75176|1,75276|1,75376|1), 01:15:576 (75576|1,75676|1,75776|1), 01:15:976 (75976|1,76076|1), i understand the concept but this is a bit more playable
01:57:576 (117576|0) - maybe remove since its a ghost note i think and you can add a note here in col 1 01:57:776 for the kick, and since thats where the vocal starts
02:15:576 missed rice for the note here potentially,
if you add it maybe this could be in col 1 02:16:076 (136076|2) (assuming you add the note in col 4)
04:16:801 (256801|1) - kind of overly simplified imo, i would at least add a weird sv here if you want to keep the simple slider since rn its kinda underwhelming
04:34:551 (274551|1,274651|1,274751|1,274901|1,275001|1,275101|1) - maybe give some love to other cols,
04:34:901 (274901|1,275101|1,275301|1) - to col 1 and
04:35:201 (275201|0,275401|0) - to col 2 perhaps
this kinda also compliments this pattern here 01:02:881 (62881|2,62881|3,62937|1,62993|0,63049|3,63049|2) -
artist is here 2177689#4360203 rn but ill put it in description once i get 2 bns since the map desc is there now
ello 2037591#3961907 on my ranked camellia map i had to put fa, featured artist because the its an artist featured in fa regardless of the song being there or not, thats why the tag is there, ill raise hitsounds tho