I think overall its quite a fun map to play but I feel like some things are really holding it back from feeling cohesive when I play it.
01:24:317 (6,1) - feels really overly spaced compared to the rest of the kiai and its more difficult compared to the version you use in the second chorus (02:29:182 (6,1) - )
01:57:155 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3) - I feel like this would be better served being half the current stream letting the pattern evolve into a full stream the second time around before the last drop.
03:14:993 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3) - it feels much better to start with the stream and then hit the reverse sliders instead of having you start with the reverse sliders like before but the ending on reverse sliders gives less contrast when the stream ends with the single note which for visual contrast could be a kickslider.
03:08:507 (1) - this might be better served being 3 spinners for each held vocal and removing 03:12:358 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - (it felt a bit weird to play the melody that had a break earlier for 20+ seconds just to play it for half a second at the end
03:53:507 (4,5,6,7,1) - this would probably visually give better feedback being spaced out like 01:04:047 (3,4,5,6,7) - which also works well to seperate it from the doubles which require different movement. (I also thought it would be a triple the first time I played since all the triples were stacked the way this 5 note was stacked)
04:06:480 (7) - I strongly feel this should be a kickslider to drive home how "abrupt" the song ending feels when playing.
Nice map!! <3
during the bpm switch you should remove the following notes to not go over the maximum pattern lenght
02:04:314 (26) -
02:05:132 (29) -
02:07:314 (37) -
02:09:495 (45) -
00:46:091 (3,4) - reverse colors to emphasise higher pitch vocals
00:46:800 (6,7,8) - this could be kdk to better emphasise the higher pitch vocals and main deeper vocals in the melody
I decided to apply the sv concept to all the patterns after the kiai to show progression compared to the first time these patterns show up at the start of the map and consistency within this section.
I was using it to avoid repetition and create some emphasis on the different sound.
I think I will keep it like this for now.