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I would remove this to make this section less dense so you can increase the density later on in the kiai
also applies to 00:07:824 (4,5) - and 00:08:769 (7) -
when you remove these you can also remove 00:12:076 (6) - to create a increase in density leading into the kiai (also 7 note patterns are the longest you can go on a futsuu idk if its fitting to have a max lenght pattern in the intro)
00:34:517 (7) -
00:37:587 (16) -
00:39:359 (22,23) - (this one you can also choose one to keep but I think it works even if you remove both)
00:50:580 (16,17) -
00:46:564 (5) -
you can remove these notes to create a smilar density to the intro while keeping the variety you introduce as a main element it should also help figure out where to add breaks.
01:24:713 (22,23) -
01:27:430 (7) -
01:31:918 (5) -
I would remove these if you apply the previous mods for consistency
00:46:091 (3,4) - reverse colors to emphasise higher pitch vocals
00:46:800 (6,7,8) - this could be kdk to better emphasise the higher pitch vocals and main deeper vocals in the melody
during the bpm switch you should remove the following notes to not go over the maximum pattern lenght
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02:05:132 (29) -
02:07:314 (37) -
02:09:495 (45) -