03:54:371 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i think this part that it can use more spacing like here 03:51:171 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - because you try to use more finishes on here, but i felt the part have more strongly than this part 02:04:371 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
I felt this part can use more spacing, and also reduce some spacing for this part 02:04:371 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - , but you can try to get more suggestion on here.