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Aiko Kayo - Kokoro no Wakusei ~Little Planets~ (TV Size)

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Indra145
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Topic Starter
Indra145
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 07 Juli 2013 at 2:37:59

Artist: Aiko Kayo
Title: Kokoro no Wakusei ~Little Planets~ (TV Size)
Source: The Law of Ueki
Tags: Aiko Kayo Indra145 JT123 Lincolm The Law of Ueki no Housoku Ending
BPM: 144
Filesize: 2984kb
Play Time: 01:22
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,35 stars, 88 notes)
  2. Hard (4,68 stars, 205 notes)
  3. JT123's Normal+ (3,31 stars, 114 notes)
  4. Linc's Normal (3,06 stars, 110 notes)
Download: Aiko Kayo - Kokoro no Wakusei ~Little Planets~ (TV Size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Okay, This is my 2nd Beatmap, and my first TV Size beatmap.
The Difficulties :
Easy (Made by me)
Linc's Normal (made by Lincolm)
JT123's Normal+ (Made by JT123)
Hard (Made by me)
After 7 months graveyarded, I finally update this map lol.
Several things that I change :
~Removed the video ( It's better without video imo )
~Changed the mp3 to better quality ( Thanks to Loli Cjj )
~Changed the offset and other timing due to the mp3 change ( I didn't change the preview point though, it's good as it is )
~Removed JT123's Insane and replace it with JT123's Normal+
Yay for multi Background \(owo)/ , not sure if I should do this though ._.
Last edited by Indra145 , edited 22 times in total.
Bernkaztl
453 posts
Joined October 2010
Bernkaztl
EASY

why don't use 1/1

00:03:445 (2) - use slider sampek 00:05:112
00:05:111 add note
00:06:778 (2) - use slider
00:38:864 (6) - to hard for easy
00:50:948 (4) - use slider
00:24:279 (1) - remove nc
Lincolm
258 posts
Joined November 2011
Lincolm
Timing help!

BPM : 72 or 144. I prefer 72.
Offset : 837

Gak nyesel loe Ndra ngerepotin gua? 30 menit Ndra :!: :!: :lol:

Ajaib kalian bisa mbikin map padahal BPM Offset salah. (Saya pernah sih dan itu perlu 2 minggu mbuatnya :lol: )
Bernkaztl
453 posts
Joined October 2010
Bernkaztl

Lincolm wrote:

Timing help!

BPM : 72 or 144. I prefer 72.
Offset : 837

Gak nyesel loe Ndra ngerepotin gua? 30 menit Ndra :!: :!: :lol:

Ajaib kalian bisa mbikin map padahal BPM Offset salah. (Saya pernah sih dan itu perlu 2 minggu mbuatnya :lol: )

Yah kita emang ajaib kok :lol:
Lincolm
258 posts
Joined November 2011
Lincolm
Mod request from Indra145!

[Easy]

00:03:337 - 00:05:837 - Too empty
00:06:670 - 00:09:170 - ^
00:10:003 - 00:12:087 - ^
01:01:253 (9) - Don't stack it with end slider 8
01:05:837 (6) - ^
01:07:087 (7,8) - ^
01:14:587 (9) - ^

After that no comment.

[Normal]

00:00:732 (1,2) - Press K
00:04:274 (1,2) - Press J
00:07:607 (1,2) - ^
00:10:941 (1,3) - ^
00:11:670 - Add note
00:17:607 (1,2) - Press J
00:20:941 (1,2) - ^
00:24:274 (1,4,5,6,9) - ^
00:29:587 (1,2,3,6,7,11) - ^
00:32:920 - Add note
00:35:212 (3) - Press J 2X
00:42:295 (1) - End slider at 00:42:712
00:46:253 (9) - End slider at 00:47:087
00:47:295 (10,11) - Press K
00:48:753 (4) - End slider at 00:49:378
00:52:503 (2,4) - Press K
00:53:545 - Add note
00:54:587 (5) - Press J (and also end slider at 00:55:837, this optional)
00:55:837 - If you don't put end slider there, please add note here
01:02:503 (8) - Press J
01:03:128 - Add note
01:07:399 (7) - Press J
01:08:545 - Add note
01:10:420 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Press J
01:15:941 (4) - Press J
01:17:086 (4) - End slider at 01:18:128
01:19:170 (5) - Press J and also end slider at 01:20:212
01:20:316 - Add note
01:20:524 (6) - Press K
01:20:837 (7) - End slider at 01:21:878
Edit : 01:21:357 - Press J I must be daydreaming

Please add some hitsound some make it better, also you can decrease the circle and increase the slider to make it easier.

[Hard]

Slider velocity too fast! 1,2 is the max (for me)
HR -3
OD -2

:arrow: If you don't want change it, change the diff, it's not for hard, it's insane :!:

No comment for the note because still not change the BPM and offset...

Good Luck!
Last edited by Lincolm , edited 1 time in total.
Bernkaztl
453 posts
Joined October 2010
Bernkaztl

Lincolm wrote:

Mod request from Indra145!

[Easy]

00:03:337 - 00:05:837 - Too empty
00:06:670 - 00:09:170 - ^
00:10:003 - 00:12:087 - ^
01:01:253 (9) - Don't stack it with end slider 8
01:05:837 (6) - ^
01:07:087 (7,8) - ^
01:14:587 (9) - ^

After that no comment.

[Normal]

00:00:732 (1,2) - Press K
00:04:274 (1,2) - Press J
00:07:607 (1,2) - ^
00:10:941 (1,3) - ^
00:11:670 - Add note
00:17:607 (1,2) - Press J
00:20:941 (1,2) - ^
00:24:274 (1,4,5,6,9) - ^
00:29:587 (1,2,3,6,7,11) - ^
00:32:920 - Add note
00:35:212 (3) - Press J 2X
00:42:295 (1) - End slider at 00:42:712
00:46:253 (9) - End slider at 00:47:087
00:47:295 (10,11) - Press K
00:48:753 (4) - End slider at 00:49:378
00:52:503 (2,4) - Press K
00:53:545 - Add note
00:54:587 (5) - Press J (and also end slider at 00:55:837, this optional)
00:55:837 - If you don't put end slider there, please add note here
01:02:503 (8) - Press J
01:03:128 - Add note
01:07:399 (7) - Press J
01:08:545 - Add note
01:10:420 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Press J
01:15:941 (4) - Press J
01:17:086 (4) - End slider at 01:18:128
01:19:170 (5) - Press J and also end slider at 01:20:212
01:20:316 - Add note
01:20:524 (6) - Press K
01:20:837 (7) - End slider at 01:21:878
01:21:357 - Press J

Please add some hitsound some make it better, also you can decrease the circle and increase the slider to make it easier.

[Hard]

Slider velocity too fast! 1,2 is the max (for me)
HR -3
OD -2

:arrow: If you don't want change it, change the diff, it's not for hard, it's insane :!:

No comment for the note because still not change the BPM and offset...

Good Luck!

:cry: mw diff is so cool
congaan
163 posts
Joined July 2011
congaan
IRC modding logs( renamed lol
http://puu.sh/Jdkc

If you have any problems or questions, please ask me again.
Lincolm
258 posts
Joined November 2011
Lincolm
My GD as request.

http://puu.sh/Maxr

:)
Bernkaztl
453 posts
Joined October 2010
Bernkaztl
indraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

[hard]

distance snap na km ganti jadi 1.2x aja

00:29:170 (10) - prasaan ga cocok kalo ditaru sana
00:30:420 (4,5) - terlalu ngikuti lagu km
00:32:816 (9,10) - ga pas
00:34:587 (1,2,3) - kombinasi pake slider jangan pake circle aja jadi na aneh
00:38:753 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - kombo na apuz aja ,jangan pake gitu an
00:52:503 (2) - buat lebih melengkung dong :v
00:53:753 (5) - ^
slider start 01:05:836 (5) - end here 01:06:670
slider start 01:19:170 (5) - end 01:20:003
slider start 01:20:837 (8) - end 01:21:670
Indra145
54 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
Indra145

JT123 wrote:

indraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

[hard]

distance snap na km ganti jadi 1.2x aja aku pke 0.8x ama 1.0x aja ._., 1.2 agk kjauhen

00:29:170 (10) - prasaan ga cocok kalo ditaru sana sep, fixed
00:30:420 (4,5) - terlalu ngikuti lagu km fixed
00:32:816 (9,10) - ga pas fixed
00:34:587 (1,2,3) - kombinasi pake slider jangan pake circle aja jadi na aneh ini mksdnya apa, g mudeng aku ._.
00:38:753 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - kombo na apuz aja ,jangan pake gitu an fixed
00:52:503 (2) - buat lebih melengkung dong :v fixed
00:53:753 (5) - ^ ^
slider start 01:05:836 (5) - end here 01:06:670 fixed
slider start 01:19:170 (5) - end 01:20:003 gmaw :p
slider start 01:20:837 (8) - end 01:21:670 nope

Thanks for modding :D

Lincolm wrote:

My GD as request.

http://puu.sh/Maxr

:)
Thanks for the GD xD
Saturnalize
1,490 posts
Joined March 2011
Saturnalize
Quick mod

> Better mp3 http://www.4shared.com/mp3/UuY8AZ1E/30- ... le-pl.html
> Avoid overlap on easy and normal, use DS to make constant spacing.
> Imo one background picture is enough, since this map has video, that may waste memory.
> Kiai starts 00:42:503 ends 01:22:503

I'll continue tomorrow
Good luck
Saturnalize
1,490 posts
Joined March 2011
Saturnalize
orz dopost
Lincolm
258 posts
Joined November 2011
Lincolm
Revision of my map :

http://puu.sh/OhQb

Thanks
Alltur
530 posts
Joined July 2012
Alltur
From the queue!

I'm slacking, sorry XP..
My modding is not good, so everything is suggestion except in BOLD.
Strong suggestions are is underlined.


[General]
* Unused file? - Delete .osb file in your folder if you are not using storyboard.

* MP3 - 128 kbps OK!

* BG image - All 800x600 OK!

* Tags - You don't need to put your name in your tags because you are the creator. Maybe adding Japanese name of the anime, "Ueki no Housoku" in the tags. In that case, don't repeat Ueki by the way.

* Combo color - they are all green-based color, it might confuse the players because they are pretty much similar color.

[Easy]
00:32:503 (4) - Move this to 00:32:087 sounds much better.
00:35:003 (1) - Move this to 00:34:587 ?
00:58:753 (6) - Remove whistle on the slider body.
01:09:170 (4,2) - Overlap perfectly? Overlap itself can be hard for easy diff imo.

[Linc's Normal]
00:34:587 - Add a note here?
00:40:628 (1) - Way too much reverse arrows, it will confuse the normal diff players. Decrease the amount of reverse arrows by making the slider itself longer.
01:03:128 (2,3) - Spacing infringement, follow distance snap :)
01:09:587 (1,2) - Line up these two sliders horizontally
01:10:420 (2,1) - Use distance snap please. These sliders are too close.
01:12:087 (2,1) - ^

[Hard] I don't mod 4.50 star+ diff :P.. sorry.
00:09:170 (5,6,7) - Equal space between two sliders.

[Insane]
00:46:670 (3,4,5) - Spacing here is confusing. (1,2,3,4,5) all consistent beat, but the distance between 4 and 5 seems too close.
Many slider ends are not snapped. Check it one by one..
Lovelyattack
317 posts
Joined May 2012
Lovelyattack
fast modding
[Insane]

coba deh denger ulang beat yang insane..... ada yang gak nyambung beatnya.... susah di tulis di sini waktunya intinya coba denger berkali kali.... makasih
Indra145
54 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
Indra145

SE_Soul wrote:

fast modding
[Insane]

coba deh denger ulang beat yang insane..... ada yang gak nyambung beatnya.... susah di tulis di sini waktunya intinya coba denger berkali kali.... makasih
Iya gan, ane taw kok, yg mbwat Insane bkan ane tpi, tpi fren ane, lgi diperbaiki kok itu ama fren ane, cman nunggu .osunya blom dapet" ane --"
Lincolm
258 posts
Joined November 2011
Lincolm
Another mine again. :|

http://puu.sh/OMlx

Thanks
Indra145
54 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
Indra145

Loli Cjj wrote:

Quick mod

> Better mp3 http://www.4shared.com/mp3/UuY8AZ1E/30- ... le-pl.html Uwaaaa,Thanks xD
> Avoid overlap on easy and normal, use DS to make constant spacing. okay :v
> Imo one background picture is enough, since this map has video, that may waste memory. Kay
> Kiai starts 00:42:503 ends 01:22:503 Kay

I'll continue tomorrow
Good luck
Thanks 4 the mod :D

Akashi_S wrote:

From the queue!

I'm slacking, sorry XP..
My modding is not good, so everything is suggestion except in BOLD.
Strong suggestions are is underlined.


[General]
* Unused file? - Delete .osb file in your folder if you are not using storyboard. Damn, I Always forget this

* MP3 - 128 kbps OK!

* BG image - All 800x600 OK!

* Tags - You don't need to put your name in your tags because you are the creator. Maybe adding Japanese name of the anime, "Ueki no Housoku" in the tags. In that case, don't repeat Ueki by the way. Okay :v

* Combo color - they are all green-based color, it might confuse the players because they are pretty much similar color. I'll think about it

[Easy]
00:32:503 (4) - Move this to 00:32:087 sounds much better. kay, I'll think about it
00:35:003 (1) - Move this to 00:34:587 ? ^
00:58:753 (6) - Remove whistle on the slider body. Kay
01:09:170 (4,2) - Overlap perfectly? Overlap itself can be hard for easy diff imo. I'll fix it :D

[Hard] I don't mod 4.50 star+ diff :P.. sorry. it's okay
00:09:170 (5,6,7) - Equal space between two sliders. Ooops, Fixed


I'm gonna leave the Normal and Insane diff to my friend, since it's their diff not mine :v
Thanks 4 the mod anyway :D

Lincolm wrote:

Another mine again. :|

http://puu.sh/OMlx

Thanks
Kay, Thanks :D

P.S. : I can't upload my map yet, cause my PC is busted, and all of my data is on my PC X_X
Bernkaztl
453 posts
Joined October 2010
Bernkaztl
Here i come http://puu.sh/1LfkH
KinkiN
2,626 posts
Joined March 2012
KinkiN
A special mod for my Bromance partner Indra145 <3

[General]

BPM : 143.85 imo :(

Please watch the usage of circles and sliders. on easy map, circles < sliders are waaayyy better. I won't mod Easy diff since idk why the beat seems too off for me.


[Linc's Normal]

00:03:128 - consider changing it into sliders until 00:03:961 - , both circles should be removed
00:05:628 - ^ , until 00:06:461 -
00:08:961 - ^ , until 00:09:794 -
00:17:294 - ^ until the next circles
00:23:961 - ^
00:24:794 - ^
00:36:461 - making it into circles is not a good idea imo, since in that part i can't barely sense any 'beats' at all. consider changing it into sliders until 00:38:128 -
00:37:294 - should be removed
00:38:128 - ^
01:15:628 - ^

[Hard]

00:14:794 - how about making it stack with 2 other notes, (2) and (3) ?
00:43:544 - consider changing it into sliders until (7)
00:56:044 - sliders with <--- arrow (didn't know what is it) until (3)
00:56:878 - ^
01:02:711 - consider removing this
01:02:919 - ^
01:04:794 - ^
01:09:378 - again, sliders with <---- arrow (really wtf i didn't know what is it) until (3)
01:10:211 - ^
01:18:128 - consider removing this


Sorry for the nazi mod, cuz my mod is generally about changing circles and sliders, but i think this way your map will be better Indra <3

Ty ~

EDIT : Will mod my other bromance partner JT123 later, cuz i can't download any maps ryt now (here it's still considered as Insane)
KinkiN
2,626 posts
Joined March 2012
KinkiN
Another mod~ no need for Kudosu xD

[General]

JT123 diff : please review your OD, Hp Drain and approach rate, imo it's too hard for Normal+. overall, it's a nice diff :D

[JT123's Normal+]

00:17:294 - NC?
00:30:419 - remove it?
00:52:294 - NC?
00:56:044 - better change it into a slider , along with (2) and (3)
00:56:878 - ^ , no need for NC
00:57:711 - ^
01:01:044 - Jump? i don't think it's appropriate for Normal+, it's too confusing and too hard. imo it would be better if you remove it
01:09:378 - ^
01:21:461 - new circle?



Ty :D
Luso1221
13 posts
Joined August 2012
Luso1221
lol bromance partner
Indra145
54 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
Indra145
Hellooo~, sorry for the late reply, I'm slow at mapping :(

Otonashi Yuzuru wrote:

A special mod for my Bromance partner Indra145 <3

[General]

BPM : 143.85 imo :( Nahh, I think 144 is better

Please watch the usage of circles and sliders. on easy map, circles < sliders are waaayyy better. I won't mod Easy diff since idk why the beat seems too off for me. Oookayyy :(


[Linc's Normal] I'll let Lincolm's fix this, dunno if he's done with his fixing or not

00:03:128 - consider changing it into sliders until 00:03:961 - , both circles should be removed
00:05:628 - ^ , until 00:06:461 -
00:08:961 - ^ , until 00:09:794 -
00:17:294 - ^ until the next circles
00:23:961 - ^
00:24:794 - ^
00:36:461 - making it into circles is not a good idea imo, since in that part i can't barely sense any 'beats' at all. consider changing it into sliders until 00:38:128 -
00:37:294 - should be removed
00:38:128 - ^
01:15:628 - ^

[Hard]

00:14:794 - how about making it stack with 2 other notes, (2) and (3) ? Okay
00:43:544 - consider changing it into sliders until (7) Nope, I'll make it jumps instead :p
00:56:044 - sliders with <--- arrow (didn't know what is it) until (3) Okay, It's called Reverse Arrow lol, read the tutorial :p
00:56:878 - ^ Kay
01:02:711 - consider removing this Nope
01:02:919 - ^ ^
01:04:794 - ^ ^
01:09:378 - again, sliders with <---- arrow (really wtf i didn't know what is it) until (3) Nopee, It's dah Reverse Arrowwhhh
01:10:211 - ^ ^
01:18:128 - consider removing this Sorry, no


Sorry for the nazi mod, cuz my mod is generally about changing circles and sliders, but i think this way your map will be better Indra <3

Ty ~

EDIT : Will mod my other bromance partner JT123 later, cuz i can't download any maps ryt now (here it's still considered as Insane)
Thanks for modding :)

Otonashi Yuzuru wrote:

Another mod~ no need for Kudosu xD

[General]

JT123 diff : please review your OD, Hp Drain and approach rate, imo it's too hard for Normal+. overall, it's a nice diff :D

[JT123's Normal+]

00:17:294 - NC?
00:30:419 - remove it?
00:52:294 - NC?
00:56:044 - better change it into a slider , along with (2) and (3)
00:56:878 - ^ , no need for NC
00:57:711 - ^
01:01:044 - Jump? i don't think it's appropriate for Normal+, it's too confusing and too hard. imo it would be better if you remove it
01:09:378 - ^
01:21:461 - new circle?



Ty :D
Thanks for the mod, JT is currently fixing this, and he may change it to hard diff somehow :p

Luso1221 wrote:

lol bromance partner
SPOILER
Losertic
461 posts
Joined May 2012
Losertic
Hello! noob modder

Modding

General

  1. Pass.

Easy

  1. Check distance.
  2. 00:02:295 (1) - move y-68.
  3. 00:14:795 (1) - move y-148.
  4. 00:36:461 (2) - change this pattern. too many reverse.
  5. 00:49:794 (3) - move y-152.
  6. 00:50:628 (4) - move x-220.
  7. 01:06:878 (1) - move y-220.
  8. 01:08:961 (4,2) - too hard. change this pattern.
  9. 01:16:461 (1,2,3) - too hard. change slider.
  10. 01:25:523 - add hitsound less then 5%. "tick"sound..

Linc's Normal

  1. Check distance.
  2. 00:05:628 (4) - move x-256.
  3. 00:23:959 (1,2,3,4) - maybe... normal user confusion pattern. change slider start at 00:23:961 end at 00:24:378
  4. 00:34:795 (3) - overlap.
  5. 00:42:295 (1) - ^
  6. 00:41:879 (3) - move y-320.

JT123's Normal+

  1. Check distance.
  2. 00:13:544 (4) - move x-376.
  3. 00:20:211 (1) - NC.
  4. 00:20:628 (2) - Remove NC.
  5. 00:37:295 (5) - move x-356. y-60.
  6. 00:38:128 (6) - move x-112.
  7. 00:48:545 (4) - straight slider.
  8. 00:51:461 (4) - NC.
  9. 00:53:128 (6) - move y-68.
  10. 00:53:961 (7) - move x-84 y-68.
  11. 00:54:795 (8) - move x-256 y-296.
  12. 00:58:545 (1) - NC.
  13. 01:25:523 - add hitsound less then 5%. "tick"sound..

Hard

  1. I think.... this is a "hard". how about this one? "distance spacing 1.0x"
  2. 00:03:128 (7) - move y-220.
  3. 00:06:878 (8) - move note anythere. i can't see this.
  4. 00:08:545 (4) - move y-324.
  5. 00:13:128 (5) - NC.
  6. 00:14:378 (8) - move x-136.
  7. 00:20:628 (1) - move x-216.
  8. 00:23:128 (7) - remove.
  9. 00:22:711 (6) - reverse slider. end at 00:23:336
  10. 00:23:961 (1) - move x-180.
  11. 00:27:920 (4) - remove.
  12. 00:28:128 - add note.
  13. 00:34:795 (3,4) - overlap.
  14. 00:40:836 (1,1) - use same slider.
  15. 00:42:711 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/852824
  16. 01:16:045 (1,2,3,4,5) - overlap.
  17. 01:18:128 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
  18. 01:21:878 (1) - move x-272 y-284
  19. 01:25:523 - add hitsound less then 5%. "tick"sound..
Senbatsu
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