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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年11月14日 at 1:07:13

Artist: MIOYAMAZAKI
Title: Noise
Source: 地獄少女 宵伽
Tags: opening tv size jigoku shoujo yoi no togi hell girl Milan- Makyu kunkakunkakunkakunka
BPM: 225
Filesize: 18959kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:

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宵伽 Opening Song

闇に惑いし哀れな影よ、、人を傷つけ貶めて、、罪に溺れし業の魂、、、

いっぺん、、、死んでみる?

Milan-'s Extra by Milan-
Makyu's Insane by Makyu
Last edited by kunka on , edited 45 times in total.
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- hit sounds setting -
(soft) whistle - default
clap - bass sound

(soft2) whistle - bass sound
clap - snare sound
finish - cymbal sound

(soft3) whistle - default
clap - snare sound
finish - cymbal sound

When it becomes inconvenient,i might change it again...
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Hello, you interested in a Guest Difficulty? I can make one and you decide if you wan to add it if you like it! (A second Insane)
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Makyu wrote:
Hello, you interested in a Guest Difficulty? I can make one and you decide if you wan to add it if you like it! (A second Insane)

I'm looking for a guest of ☆4.2 - 4.5 of insane or the hard diff.
If you can agree to it, thanks :D
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Earned 2 kudosu.
Makyu asked me for a quick check.

Log (Spanish)
Code:
00:18 Gero: voy a empezar xD
00:22 Gero: Me pasas el mapa otra vez?
00:22 Makyu: https://puu.sh/wWK2i/8d641a2399.osz
00:29 *Gero is editing mioyamazaki - Noise [Makyu]
00:30 Makyu: asdf
00:30 *Makyu is editing mioyamazaki - Noise [Makyu]
00:30 Gero: 00:17:366 (2,3,4) - No me convence del todo el flujo y el tipo de salto que estas implementando, es decir el movimiento de (2) a (3) esta bien, pero hacia (4) se siente un poco raro
00:30 Gero: Podrias considerar hacer algo mas aqui?
00:31 Makyu: Puedo pensar en un patron diferente si
00:31 Makyu: quiero mantener el patron de 4,1 asi que pensare algo para los circles
00:33 Gero: 00:48:833 (1,2,3,4) - Considera aumentar el spacing entre estos objetos, cuando jugue esta parte me hizo confundirme un poco con el antijump, pensando que en realidad eran 1/2
00:33 Gero: 00:50:966 (3,4) - En comparacion a (3) (4)
00:34 Makyu: vale, me gustaria dejarlo asi, pero lo pensare si mas gente me menciona esa parte
00:34 Gero: 01:23:500 (2) - NC
00:34 Gero: 01:26:700 (1,2,3,4) - Ugh... antijump, solo aumenta un poco el espacio entre esos circulos y estara bien
00:35 Makyu: Habia una razon para no poner NC en este tipo de ocaciones, SaphireGhost fue el que me enseño buscare el post donde el me explico eso
00:35 Makyu: vale
00:36 Gero: En realidad eso solo se usa cuando no hay cambio de stanza en la cancion y hay un vacio entre las notas. Pero en este caso es el cambio a otra y hay espacio suficiente para que el jugador entienda el cambio de patron
00:37 Gero: Seria todo
00:37 Makyu: oh, si sientes bien el mapa?
00:37 Makyu: Lo termine relativametne rapido en dos dias
00:38 Gero: Si, hay algunos saltos como el primero que te mencione, los detesto pero no los vas a cambiar xd
00:38 Gero: El resto esta bien
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Also, here is the map finished! I will hitsound it later when you uplioad it, change the Diff Name to Makyu's Insane when you upload it

Guest Diff
Code:
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Noise.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54700
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 17633,20033,20833,21633,22433,43900,48833,50433
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.099999

[Metadata]
Title:Noise
TitleUnicode:ノイズ
Artist:mioyamazaki
ArtistUnicode:ミオヤマザキ
Creator:kunka
Version:Makyu
Source:地獄少女 宵伽
Tags:opening tv size jigoku shoujo yoinotogi Milan- kunkakunkakunkakunka
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6.5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7.5
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
300,266.666666666667,3,2,1,50,1,0
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80300,-100,3,2,0,60,0,0
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89100,-133.333333333333,3,2,0,10,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,128,255
Combo2 : 128,255,128
Combo3 : 128,255,255
Combo4 : 255,128,128
Combo5 : 255,255,128

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Also, I am so sorry, for this taking me so long to finish it, if you upload the map tomorrow I will try to hitsound it the same day.
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I updated all it!! and thanks Gero!
※Add guest name in tag
※Change of the diff name of the Makyu
※Deletion of the widescreen support
※Add video-play to Makyu's Insane

@Makyu If hitsounds is completed, give call me. I update it immediately ;)
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Earned 1 kudosu.
little mod in Makyu's diff
chatlog
19:41 Makyu: Me gustaria saber tu opinion de un mapa <3, pero cuando salgas de MP
19:41 ErunamoJAZZ: ya
19:42 ErunamoJAZZ: cual es/
19:42 ErunamoJAZZ: ?
19:42 Makyu: t/618237
19:43 *ErunamoJAZZ is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1370620 mioyamazaki - Noise [Makyu's Insane]]
19:44 Makyu: espectando
19:48 ErunamoJAZZ: OD 7.5?? xD
19:48 ErunamoJAZZ: dejelo en 7
19:48 Makyu: No me preguntes
19:49 Makyu: en el mio
19:49 Makyu: olvide cambiar las especificaciones
19:49 Makyu: xD
19:49 Makyu: luego del primer mod lo hago
19:49 Makyu: o si quieres un kudo free puedes hacer un irc mod de mi diff y la posteas
19:49 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:06:433 (1,2) - la distancia entre estos no es igual que en 00:03:233 (1,2) -
19:50 Makyu: done
19:52 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:21:633 (3) - mueva este un poquito más para arriba, de forma que quede como hizo en 00:19:900 (2,3,4) -
19:52 Makyu: oh, no habia notado eso
19:52 Makyu: oki
19:53 ErunamoJAZZ: Yo no sé por qué noto esas bobadas xD
19:53 ErunamoJAZZ: en la parte lenta
19:53 Makyu: Al menos no son cosas nazis como blankets
19:53 Makyu: que no voy a mover ni un solo blanket
19:53 Makyu: xD
19:54 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:33:100 (1,2) - hiciste un montón de esos
19:54 ErunamoJAZZ: imho, no es que sean feos, si no que hay muchos xD
19:54 Makyu: Lo dejare asi, me gusta mucho como se juega
19:54 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:29:900 (1,2,1) - por ejemplo acá, quedan super bueno, pero en otras partes es como.. sí, pero siempre es lo mismo, entonces se le pierde la gracia
19:55 ErunamoJAZZ: es que se juegan bien
19:55 ErunamoJAZZ: pero mi punto es, que pienso que sería mejor no ponerlos por cada compas
19:55 ErunamoJAZZ: si no porai cada dos compases
19:55 ErunamoJAZZ: o 3 o 4, no sé xD
19:55 Makyu: xD
19:56 Makyu: Lo pensare, pero dudo que lo cambie, buscare una mejor forma de acomodarlo
19:56 Makyu: tampoco quiero abusar de los slider 1/1
19:56 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:34:300 (3,1) - un jump acá que tal?
19:57 Makyu: Alguna razon, yo diria que no, pierde consistencia con el resto
19:57 ErunamoJAZZ: Pero la voz lo merece
19:58 ErunamoJAZZ: imo
19:58 Makyu: hm
19:58 ErunamoJAZZ: 01:04:033 (3,4) - este jump lo sentí incómodo
19:58 Makyu: Puede ser, buscare un jump "invisible"
19:58 ErunamoJAZZ: 01:11:233 (3,4) - este también se sintió como fuera de lugar
19:58 Makyu: si, tampoco me gusto mucho como quedo, esos jumps son dificiles de hacer que funcionen
19:59 Makyu: Ese lo tenia por el patron, puedo ajustarlo
19:59 ErunamoJAZZ: sí, muchas veces uno pone las cosas, pero hasta que la gente no lo juega no se sabe cómo se siente
19:59 ErunamoJAZZ: cero determinismo xD
20:00 Makyu: xD
20:02 Makyu: Eso es todo?
20:03 Makyu: pon el chatlog



General


Easy
  • 00:01:900 (3,4) - Flow here will not be very friendly for noobs, imho.
  • 00:06:700 (1) - I think that changing concavity will be better in order of a smooth flow:
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  • there are many places where you made a similar way... My suggestion is to polish flow a bit more :3


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Here is the diff with changes, I will give it to you hitsounded by tomorrow!

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Code:
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Noise.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54700
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 17633,20033,20833,21633,22433,43900,48833,50433
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.099999

[Metadata]
Title:Noise
TitleUnicode:ノイズ
Artist:mioyamazaki
ArtistUnicode:ミオヤマザキ
Creator:kunka
Version:Makyu's Insane
Source:地獄少女 宵伽
Tags:opening tv size jigoku shoujo yoinotogi Milan- Makyu kunkakunkakunkakunka
BeatmapID:1370620
BeatmapSetID:640797

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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General
  • For some reason, the light green combo color have a white arrow, doing that difficult to read: https://puu.sh/wXsMW/57341e80e1.png hmm,,i don't mind. but it's ok. I switched to slightly dark green.


Easy
  • 00:01:900 (3,4) - Flow here will not be very friendly for noobs, imho. fixed
  • 00:06:700 (1) - I think that changing concavity will be better in order of a smooth flow: ok~
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  • there are many places where you made a similar way... My suggestion is to polish flow a bit more :3 Because i'm not obedient, I perform opposite placement for a flow unconsciously lol I made some modifications. Thank you!


Makyu wrote:
Here is the diff with changes, I will give it to you hitsounded by tomorrow! ok! By the way, a description of the "Video,0,"Noise.avi"" disappears at every update :(
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Hey from #modreqs


Milan-'s Extra
00:01:100 (3) - Fix blanket
00:03:900 (2) - I would suggest a Ctrl + G since it's going against the pattern you used for the same notes at the beginning of the song


Insane
00:33:766 (6,1,4) - How about you save yourself from this overlap and try something like this:
Your Version:
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My Version:
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00:33:100 (5) &amp; 00:36:300 (5) - Imo, based on what I heard in the music, these two sliders might reflect the notes better if they were reverse sliders


Makyu's Insane
00:26:300 (2) - Fix blanket?

Rest seems fine


General
This mapset is honestly really good and high quality. There were very little mistakes I could find.

Sorry if the mod was short, I'm trying to practice.

GL with ranking this!
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Starz15 wrote:
Hey from #modreqs

Insane
00:33:766 (6,1,4) - How about you save yourself from this overlap and try something like this: I changed placement to remove overlap of it.
Your Version:
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My Version:
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00:33:100 (5) &amp; 00:36:300 (5) - Imo, based on what I heard in the music, these two sliders might reflect the notes better if they were reverse sliders Rhythm smoothens by clicking the beginning of the lyrics imo. I carry out coherent triplet.

Thank you for sparing your precious time for me ;)
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hello kunka~

Milan-

  • 00:00:700 (2,3) - 00:13:100 (1,2) - blanket
  • 00:15:100 (3) - reverse...... the entire section has no reverse. it makes the flow stop, which is not that suitable imo. try this?
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  • 00:44:166 (4) - how about stacking this on the pink 2? then 3 -> 4 is a back&forward flow, and 4 -> 1 has a sudden change on direction, which could be juggling enough to emphasis the change of music.


Makyu



Insane

  • stack leniency -1. then the stuffs with 1 beat off can be perfectly stacked.
  • 00:06:433 (5,1) - fix blanket
  • 00:12:833 (5,1) - i think this 3/4 slider is unpredictable. suggest u change the shape of the slider. i.e. deeply curve it
  • 00:44:300 (4) - personal taste: how about changing this reverse into 2 circles with 1 beat gap (1/1)? normally, the downbeat is corresponding to a reverse slider's turning point, but your reverse slider does opposite things.
  • 00:37:100 (1) - remove the finish?


Hard

  • 00:37:900 (3) - snap the slidertail on red line. current slidertail does not follow anything, even the only sound here, singer's breath, does not start or end on the current point.
  • nothing much to say to a Hard diff with distance snap......


Normal

  • 00:26:566 (2,3) - avoid 1/2 stack pattern in normal diff. newbie players are hard to identify this. there are many patterns like this, here and after the kiai time ended, so i don't list them all.


that's all from me. really a solid set. good luck!
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Adol Christin wrote:
hello kunka~ yay adol~~

Insane

  • stack leniency -1. then the stuffs with 1 beat off can be perfectly stacked. I think that it's not necessary to change the stack leniency personally. I change it if it becomes the big problem. I keep it now.
  • 00:06:433 (5,1) - fix blanket fixed
  • 00:12:833 (5,1) - i think this 3/4 slider is unpredictable. suggest u change the shape of the slider. i.e. deeply curve it ok. I change it and hear more opinions.
  • 00:44:300 (4) - personal taste: how about changing this reverse into 2 circles with 1 beat gap (1/1)? normally, the downbeat is corresponding to a reverse slider's turning point, but your reverse slider does opposite things. In fact, feel sense of incongruity me, too w However, the 00:44:433 - has a sound, and sense of incongruity occurs in snap when I remove it. So, I switch to 1/2slider and circle.
  • 00:37:100 (1) - remove the finish? ww As I thought, do you feel sense of incongruity? However, I want to express it because there is clear cymbals sound! So, i added soft1 (all diff)


Hard

  • 00:37:900 (3) - snap the slidertail on red line. current slidertail does not follow anything, even the only sound here, singer's breath, does not start or end on the current point. I also noticed it during a correction imao FIXED!!
  • nothing much to say to a Hard diff with distance snap...... DS is very convenient ww


Normal

  • 00:26:566 (2,3) - avoid 1/2 stack pattern in normal diff. newbie players are hard to identify this. there are many patterns like this, here and after the kiai time ended, so i don't list them all. If it's in kiai time, it becomes a reason to remove stack. However, this doesn't have any problem.


that's all from me. really a solid set. good luck! Thank youuuuuu!


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