Sorry for late w
First of all, there’s a metronome problem here due to the anacrusis at 00:02:353 (1,2,3) ; a solution would be to put a red bar at 00:02:687 to reset metronome since every downbeat in the song is off by 1/1 due to first downbeat normally being at 00:02:687
[Melody]
00:02:687 (1,2,3,4) - don’t get what this rhythm is emphasising ; either it’s going for the piano and 00:03:354 (3) is then a mistake because the piano ends on its tail while it should end on its head, or it’s following that background thing and 00:02:687 (1) misses one of its notes
00:08:020 (1) - not a fan of red anchors here since it’s inconsistent with other 1/1 sliders earlier in the map ( also the only time it’s seen in that phrase )
00:16:020 (3) - logically NC should be here according to earlier
00:19:854 (2) - here again, first time there’s NC on downbeat with that piano thing
00:21:520 - why is that trumpet ignored here ? It’s emphasised in the rest of the measure
00:29:021 (1,2,3,4,5) - why does this transition break the circular flow going on as opposed to 00:23:687 (4,5,6,7,1) which didn’t ?
00:30:853 (1,2,3) - inconsistent slider shapes here, while all 3 are trumpet
00:34:687 (6) - you forgot NC there ; needs to be consistent with 00:24:021 (1)
00:38:520 (1,2) - possible blanket here
00:42:687 (1) - once again those red anchors feel kind of out of place ; I'm not gonna mention inconsistencies in slider shapes anymore cause I think you get it at that point, but I've found some more in the map
00:43:853 (1) - piano on tail shouldn’t be non-clickable ; to be fair, by now the player’s probably used to having hold sliders at each beginning of a measure, so a hold slider plus a circle would be more intuitive imo
00:47:021 (1) - I don’t understand the slider here ? if the goal was to reverse flow there are better alternatives that don’t kill the intensity like a slider does ( I understand the one at 00:48:021 (1) because there’s that weird sound going on but here there isn’t really anything that calls for a slider imo )
01:51:521 (2,3) - blanket could be improved
01:55:354 (1,2,3,4,1) - the flow here is different from 01:44:687 (1,2,3,4,1) while both are supposed to be identical due to the music being at a similar point
01:58:021 (3,1) - shouldn’t those be a reverse to be consistent with 00:22:020 (6,1,2,3) ?
03:12:687 (1,3) - maybe turn this into kicks to catch the power chords ?
03:38:021 (3) - flow here feels out of place, since those circles before had a back and forth flow ( eg 01:27:354 (3) ) while this is circular despite being a different angle
04:10:020 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't get the shape here ? there’s nothing that calls for a non-polished one
04:22:520 (1) - counter-intuitive since it contradicts the rhythm at 04:11:854 (1,2)
04:24:853 (4) - just my opinion but I think 04:25:020 would need more emphasis since it’s the first time it happens in the song
04:55:021 (1) - that slider again
05:03:020 (3) - to be fair this looks really good except for that part
rank this and give me pp already