1. Cheesecake's Easy (1,42 stars, 100 notes)
2. Cool's Normal (2,03 stars, 168 notes)
3. Hard (3,32 stars, 245 notes)
4. Insane (4,2 stars, 376 notes)
5. Venture (5,36 stars, 470 notes)

SoundCloud
Pixiv

#1 Natsu
#1 Gero

• this can definitely have more than 4 combo colours.
  Uncheck widescreen support.
  Add tags. i.e: but not limited to: "EDM, Techno, Fast, DnB, Drum and Bass"
  Can I GD for this ouo? It would be a diff between insane and extra

• 00:27:581 (3,4) - I would remove this overlap. Not very attractive and takes away from the look of the map
  [list:1337]00:31:817 (2) - ^

• 00:35:346 (1) - sound is not strong enough for an SV change.
  01:00:934 (1,4) - Separate these two a tad.
  01:44:170 (1,2) - Blanket?

• Can't mod extra because a lot of it is subjective. But this song is a lot of fun

PolkaMocha wrote:

[General:]

• this can definitely have more than 4 combo colours. Added 2 more
  Uncheck widescreen support. Done
  Add tags. i.e: but not limited to: "EDM, Techno, Fast, DnB, Drum and Bass" Added
  Can I GD for this ouo? It would be a diff between insane and extra Eh I don't know, we will have a full ENHIX spread soon so I don't want to oversaturate it. Sorry

[Hard:]

• 00:27:581 (3,4) - I would remove this overlap. Not very attractive and takes away from the look of the map imo they look pretty good, might consider removing it if more people dislike it
  [list:1337]00:31:817 (2) - ^ ^

01:52:287 (2,3) - Not so good flow. move (2) above (3). Done
[Insane:]

• 00:35:346 (1) - sound is not strong enough for an SV change. Feels strong enough imo
  01:00:934 (1,4) - Separate these two a tad. Done
  01:44:170 (1,2) - Blanket? I want to keep the irregularity of this sound 01:43:640 (2) - which is why it's different

[Afterword:]

• Can't mod extra because a lot of it is subjective. But this song is a lot of fun

Hikan wrote:

Hi, from #modreqs

Ex

1. 00:30:934 (1,2,3) - I prefer using triangle as sliders here, It will look nicer I believe :3 ( example ) Yeah, yours looks nicer, but the current version has better flow imo so I'm keeping it
    
2. 00:34:287 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is hard, maybe a star? Intentional to increase spacing and difficulty with HR
    
3. 00:35:346 (1) - move this somewhere since this stack is hard to realize Changed
    
4. 01:52:464 (3) - overlapped with 01:51:934 (1) - . Maybe move (3) to 436;240 then (2) to 292;116 will be easier to read imo. There is more than one issues like this, but I think this is most important (4 no reason), lol Eh, all of these are intentional and they look pretty good imo, gonna keep these for now
    
5. 01:54:758 (1,1) - just my idea I want to keep this smooth since the music calms down so no angled spacing here 01:54:758 (1) -

In

1. 00:28:111 (4,5) - this will be better rhythm imo ok
    
2. 01:05:170 (9) - maybe Ctrl + G ok

That's all, good luck
sorry for short mod because I'm noob lol

Tomadoi wrote:

from #modreqs


[Venture]

00:34:287 (1,2,3,4,5) - hard to read intentional, gonna add a box to explain these things in the desc soon

00:38:170 (1,2,3,4) - kick sliders instead ? I'd change it, but I want to keep the same theme as above


[Insane]

00:31:287 (6) - higher spacing done

01:01:287 (2) - NC done

01:04:111 (2) - ^ done

01:56:170 (1) - move this note to x:408 y:64 done


thats it from me ._.

emu1337 wrote:

from #modreqs

[Cheesecake's Easy]

00:52:993 (6) - vertical flip for better flow
00:54:758 (2) - move to 72, 132 for better looks
00:56:170 (3) - horizontal flip for better flow

[Hard]

01:04:993 (5) - maybe this works better for flow Hmm, flow is better but it looks better the way I had it, changed it a bit to have a bit of both

[Insane]

00:44:876 (2,3) - ctrl+G and then move 00:44:876 (2) under previous slider end like this 00:44:170 (1,3) - is blanketed so it's better like this imo

[Venture]

01:17:699 (1) - blanket like this maybe Want to have it somewhat different because it's on a 1/3
01:47:699 (1) - consider adding a slider here, this section is overdone imo intentional as noted in the box in the description


thats it, good luck with your map

emu1337 wrote:

[Cheesecake's Easy]

00:52:993 (6) - vertical flip for better flow Sure
00:54:758 (2) - move to 72, 132 for better looks I changed the other slider which makes this point kinda invalid lol
00:56:170 (3) - horizontal flip for better flow Better as it is now imo

haha woah man wrote:

cheesecake's easy
00:26:170 (2,3,4,5) - and beyond. these would be better as repeat sliders. the big spacing is very awkward for an easy, that giant of a movement isnt natural for new players. also i would separate into 2 combos Repeats are a good idea
the intro also has lots of improvable slider shapes thats vague x)
00:51:228 (4) - NC here? I like to NC every 4 measures instead of 2
00:56:876 (4) - ^ (occurs elsewhere..)
01:00:405 (2) - odd / awkward slider shape This slider is great!
01:25:111 (4) - NC
01:34:287 (2,3,4) - might actually be unrankable, overlap in easy is looked down upon, even like this. check with someone more knowledgeable lol The approach circle first fades in juuust after the (2) dissapears, which is ample time for the baby player to be able to read it
01:38:523 (7,1,2) - ^
01:39:228 (1,3) - shapes clash Intentional to show the change in pitch of the synths
01:46:287 (3,4) - pointing slider directly at (or away, i guess) 4 looks nicer Sure
01:47:699 (5,6) - improvable blanket Adjusted the tail
some things like NC or overlaps happened more than how much i pointed out but you get the idea Like I replied I NC every 4 measures and overlaps I do consider the readability of every one!

haha woah man wrote:

Venture
00:30:934 (1,2,3) - i think instead of these being flipped / rotated 90deg, you should rotate each by -120. it looks neater and flows better into the next stream imo. http://i.imgur.com/GRT0pMr.jpg ok
00:34:287 (1,2,3,4,5) - this comes out of basically nowhere, its too 'shocking' and you dont reuse it or something similar in this section. this pattern is fine as long as you introduce things like it slowly. like maybe on the stacks: 00:32:699 (11,12,1) and 00:31:993 (6,7,8) make those into a triangle with low spacing. alternatively, a good idea imo is just making that one into a 5 circle instead of 3. intentional as a gimmick as noted in desc.
00:41:523 (2) - ctrl+g? 00:41:523 (2,3,4) is awkward flow intentional
00:42:228 (1,2,3) - i think switching 2,3 makes more sense from a flow standpoint this and the part above have back and forth flow instead of circular
00:47:523 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - pretty small spacing compared to how big this part feels I want to have a good transition to 00:48:317 (10,1) -
00:49:464 (2,1) - ^ this section focuses on SV changes and somewhat irregular flow instead of large spacing as the gimmick
00:54:052 (1,1) - this part plays ok but the spacing and slider shapes make the first slider seem like it ends on the blue tick. i also personally disagree with the first slider since its implied flow is in the opposite direction of the next slider the cut in flow happens a few times (which is the intended gimmick) and makes it noticeable that it's a 1/2 instead of a 1/4 http://i.imgur.com/0YHmSZ6.jpg
00:59:346 (5,6,7,8,1) - i think accenting this part with bigger spacing could be cooldone
01:03:758 (1,3) - slightly mismatched angle on 3 changed
01:04:287 (3,4) - bigger jump? don't want large jumps in this section
01:05:699 (1,1) - ^ ^
01:08:170 (1,1) - these being so close implies that the slider ends on blue tick increased spacing
01:08:523 (1,2,3) - i think this is better suited as a 5-stream not strong enough sounds imo
01:10:817 (1) - NC not needed, dont think you do anything like this anywhere else consistent as the SVs change, the other parts had circles instead
01:21:228 (2,3,4,5) - i dont like this rhythm, i think circles are needed here. this plays awkwardly. also consider 1/2 jumps for 5 instead of slider I like it
01:23:699 (1,2,3) - this jump pattern doesnt fit well i think. i think ctrl+g on 1,2 makes it play much more smoothly / fitted to the music. common in section
01:30:228 (6,7) - slider on the red tick of 6 fits much better i think. 7 jumps in a row feels like it abandons the music a bit.
imo in the kiai the overlaps do not feel like they correspond to the music very much at all. the jumps are mapped to the melody but the overlaps dont seem to line-up with anything, it makes them feel a little weird. i think it is 90% because the overlaps are on the offbeat instead of downbeat which is VERY emphasized here. also, the melody repeats (mostly) in groups of 3 notes, but the jumps are typically sorted into groups of two (see: 01:44:876 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)). its clashes.
ii also think the spike in difficulty is a little high. the first drop could be made harder to match. Music has a clear change in tone so I wanted to focus on that, I don't really see the music being grouped in 3 notes, 2 notes make more sense here imo so I'm gonna keep this. The first kiai is the buildup to the second one. Also the SR gain doesn't really matter imo since the gimmicks at the start barely add to the star rating.
01:38:876 (7) - end on blue tick? looks pretty awkward as a random 1/4, gonna keep it consistent

Insane
00:26:698 (6,7) - this almost looks like a streamjump. i would space more. I don't think that stream jumps would show up in insanes :thinking:
00:29:876 (1) - this plays better as 2 circles sliders fit the music more imo
00:30:934 (4,5,6,1) - quite large jumps for this part All of these parts have similar spacing
00:36:405 (5,7) - dont like this being a full overlap. something like 00:33:228 (2,4) works better Changed
00:36:228 (4,5) - i think a 1/2 slider should start on 4 to match the rhythm used elsewhere in this section Changed
00:42:228 (4,5,6) - too big fine imo, stays consistent with the rest of the spacings
00:42:758 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - switching from bass to lead feels super weird with this rhythm gap. just adding a circle before the first circle would help the bass cuts off from there so it's fine imo since it follows the music well
00:45:934 (2,3) - dont like this overlap in an insane, where the other overlaps right after / before are triples fine after a slow section imo
00:53:876 (9,1) - these slider angles clash they're vertically flipped and look nice imo
00:56:523 (7,1) - increase this jump done
00:57:934 (6) - huge jump, nerf? done
01:07:817 (6,1) - increase this jump done
01:10:993 (1) - SV very low, broke here twice in testplays. increased
01:21:228 (2,3,4,5) - this could look neater. rhythm still plays weird imo
in this kiai i think you should use bigger jumps, the jumps in the drop were much larger in comparison, it makes this part feel less important eh it's good imo
01:53:346 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing too small increased

Hard
00:29:876 (1,4) - dont like this overlap in a hard, the jumps feel out of place here too don't feel like they are jumps since the spacing is consistent and overlap is fine because it's a triangle?
00:35:346 (1) - this isnt emphasized at all Anchored slider
00:39:052 (3,4) - improvable blanket Fixed
00:42:228 (4,5,6,1) - pretty complicated overlap for a hard regular triangles, feel fine to me but I couldn't tell ;_;
00:44:170 (1,2,3) - same suggestion as insane same as insane
00:46:640 (3,4,5) - feels sort of weird to only have 1 triple in an entire map only one to not be in a rhythm mapped with hitcircles (having 5+ hitcircles in a row is a bit too much imo
in the drop i dont like the complete overlaps that much in such a low diff, but i'll try to help you improve them
00:54:052 (1,3) - a lot of 3's slidershape is obscured, maybe cover it less Done
00:58:287 (1,2) - these shapes clash a bit in unison Changed
00:59:346 (3) - 1/4 buzz slider here? A bit overkill imo, current one has good flow
01:09:581 (1,2) - shape looks lazy, improvable idk how
01:13:817 (1) - not symmetrical Made it more even, not perfect though because it looks a bit strange when completely symmetrical
01:20:346 (3,4,1) - curving 4 slightly towards one might make this flow better Done
01:21:052 (1) - very short spinner for a hard, i can barely even reach 1000 most people in #modreqs said it's fine so I kept it, gonna change if more people point it out
01:27:581 (4,1) - flip 4 horizontally and use that angle for 1? this is better imo
01:28:993 (3,2) - a lot of the overlap slider shape covered Changed
01:51:581 (5,6,1) - this could trip people up since other overlaps in the section are just 1/2 stacks
01:54:758 (1) - i think lowering this SV by a minuscule amount would feel good while being ok in a hard Done

good luck!

haha woah man wrote:

cool's normal
00:25:817 (1,2) - i disagree with this rhythm in a normal. there are too many gaps in the rhythm. this point is rather confusing and contridictive dude, you see it's a normal yet you say there are many gaps in the rhythm, have you listened to all the other sounds avaliable in that section? if it's not only 1/4 sounds there are a couple of 1/2's but they are way too faint to be mapped and it would just make the calm section really spammy for no reason
00:25:817 (1,2) - angles dont match lo fixed
00:34:993 (2,3,1,2,3) - bad rhythm choice that's your opinion, i think otherwise
00:38:523 (1,2) - angles dont match lo fixed
00:39:934 (1,3) - questionable overlap for a normal huh, how is this questionable what, the ar is high enough for a overlap like that to be spotted by the player without any problems
00:41:346 (3,1) - ^ ^
00:46:464 (3,4,1) - 1/4 in normal? this rhythm is bad choice that's what you think, since it's there since the sounds are pretty unique and are mapped so that they aren't really that difficult to hit, but althout it is 1/4 i agree that it might be changed later if more people complain
00:47:876 (3,4,1) - ^ ^
00:49:111 (2,3) - offbeat rhythm plays weird it's going with the vocals what, and it's not offbeat anyway, its just missing a fainter sound on the white tick, you could argue that it's strong and all but the one at it's sider end is much much more noticable and stronger and the gap of catching both of those sounds is more or less weird to map imo
00:53:346 (6) - dont complicate slider shapes this much in normal it's not really complicating it if it doesn't have weird overlaps it's just going with the wubs
00:55:640 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - i think these rhythms are much too complicated that's what you think
01:04:640 (6) - slider shape o thanks i thought that was a circle
01:06:934 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - same as earlier. nice same as me i choose that card too
both 01:10:993 (1,1) - and 01:12:405 (1,2) - overlap but different rhythm. it's because both of the overlaps you mentioned aren't as standing out of the rhytm as 01:13:817 (1) - for example so they are stacked
01:35:523 (5,6,1) - poor flow / overlapping ok
01:37:817 (5,6) - dont overlap this z
01:41:170 (5,6,1) - poor flow / overlapping z
01:46:287 (3) - this is way too confusing ok changed
01:49:111 (6,7) - again confusing overlap z
this diff needs a lot of work on rhythm and overlaps you seem to have a really big problem with overlaps , idk why no idea but you do know that overlaps aren't a bad thing right? and for the rhythm choice i totally disagree with you, since 1. rhythm choice is subjective (that's why there's so many mapping styles) and 2. this is a normal so not all sounds can be caught/ I chose to prioritize some sounds over others that i think have more potential and are more standing out and are more fun to play.

good luck!

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ikorza wrote:

from mod reqs hope it helps!

top diff

00:25:817 (1) - if you dont want to lead in with a stream use kick sliders. undermapping one stream in the same measure means you are emphasizing 00:26:346 (2,3,4,5,6) - which isnt ideal. 00:25:817 (1) - this sound covers the 1/4s enough for it to be a slider imo
00:31:464 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:34:287 (1,2,3,4,5) - triangle stream is a lot trickier but they are the same sound. its honestly pretty random intentional, the first one isn't a triangle stream because of the kicksliders before it and it wouldn't flow as well. Whereas 00:34:287 (1,2,3,4,5) - has good flow going into it even if you follow the triangle flow or hold it in the center which justifies the gimmick imo
00:54:758 (2,1) - visual spacing looks too close and is noticeable in gameplay changed
00:58:287 (1,2,3,4) - not sure why you are stacking the slider heads when they should be emphasized, putting the circles on the slider tails would work better stacks are used as a form of emphasis here
01:01:287 (2,3) - kick sliders here and 01:01:640 - 1/2 slider here would represent whats happening in the music currently better than the 1/2 spam you currently have. This part doesn't have any 1/4 or extended sounds so 1/4s wouldn't fit here imo
01:08:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - wait you actually do it here lol, change the other one to be consistent there are actually sounds on 01:08:611 - and 01:08:787 - so no
01:16:287 (7,8) - circles with higher spacing than the previous stream would be better imo because 2 kick sliders that you currently have emphasize the white red ticks but they dont need to be if you listen to the music. high spacing into low spacicng would constrast well aslo since the stream is a unique sound. done
01:32:346 (2,3,4) - 1/8 slider here is needed. i dont think it is fine to undermap this because it wont cause gameplay issues and a 1/4 stream is coming up which is also stacked so they have 0 constrast. ok
01:33:052 - kick slider here to emphasize the red tick ok
01:49:817 - you didnt undermap these sounds previously first time this specific sound comes, and it's different from 01:44:170 (1,2) - and 01:38:523 (5,6) - because they don't have extended sounds nor 1/4 sounds

Mir wrote:

#modreqs actually works wow

Hard

[Hard]

1. 00:30:228 (2,3,4) – For this section in particular, this rhythm you had at 00:28:640 (1,2,3) – follows the music better. In fact most of the rhythm changes you use aren’t as good as the rhythm you use at 00:37:111 (1,2,3) – for example either. You can use the same rhythm, just vary patterning. The sounds you’re mapping to in this part are repetitive, so your map can be repetitive in parts too. current one fits the song better imo
   
2. 00:44:170 (1,2) – This plays weird imo. If you extend 1 to be a reverse, you can have more emphasis on 3 (which would be 2 if you made it a reverse) if you make it a small jump. done
   
3. 00:47:876 (3) – Starts too early, the ¼ starts at 00:48:052. A bit too difficult for a hard imo
   
4. 01:28:993 (3,2) – Stack these like you’ve been doing so far? 01:29:699 (2) - tail gets covered a bit too much when stacked
   
5. 01:34:993 (1,2,3,4,5) – This rhythm fits better than 01:36:405 (1,2,3,4,5) – tbh. first one is stronger than the other one
   
6. 01:46:640 (3,4) – Reason to stack? changed
   
7. The entire kiai has weird flow, sometimes you stack for a double but it’s not consistent, and I don’t really understand what you’re trying to represent in the music using this flow since the music is quite fluid in the kiai. It’s fine if you stack for emphasis but the stacks you have now I cannot understand. Replaced most stacks with back and forths, the ones that I kept are for emphasis

Insane

[Insane]

1. 00:42:758 (1,2,3) – Why do you only follow the bass for one measure? It honestly feels weird if it’s not at 00:44:170 (1,2,3) – as well. Tbh the whole rhythm at 00:44:170 (1,2,3) – feels really weird, because there’s a 1/1 gap between slider, then from 3 there’s a 7/4 gap? the best possible rhythm choice here to represent the music imo
   
2. 00:44:876 (2,2,3) – Manual stack these so it doesn’t look so weird? Like so: https://puu.sh/sO4ww/cddf8f1c05.png Then fix stack with 00:46:993 (1). Can do this for most other instances of these weird stacks. I don't see the problem here? They're already stacked fine and look normal in-game, it's just how the editor sees them
   
3. 00:47:876 (1) – NC this please slider velocity change is pretty big in my opinion. there is no SV change though
   
4. 00:49:993 (1,2) – Ignoring ¼ here but mapping less audible and what actually seems to be a long held note as a stream at 00:53:346 (4,5,6,7,8) - ? You ignore it at many other places like 01:01:287 (1,2,3) – as well. But 01:08:523 (2,3,4,5,6) – here you don’t? It breaks consistency. the 1/4 there is literally pretty much inaudible unless you focus on it and ignore the rest of the sounds going on
   
5. 01:29:699 (3,5,2) – This stacking looks really bad. I suggest changing this around until you find something more aesthetically pleasing. You can try this: https://puu.sh/sO4Ud/f2dc92cdb7.png (the circles are offset from the slider end.)
   
6. 01:32:346 (2,3,4) – This is clearly 1/8. done
   
7. 01:54:758 (1) – Space this out a bit more? It’s a really sudden decrease in SV and might mislead the player. Could also stack 01:56:170 (1) – underneath it? spaced out more

Venture

[Extra]

1. 00:28:022 (7,8,10,11,1) – This looks pretty unsightly if I’m being honest. I recommend stacking 00:28:464 (10,11,1) – with 00:28:111 (8). Manually stacking would probably end up nicer. Makes a triangle and it's not noticeable while playing (unless with easy lo)
   
2. 00:32:876 (1,4) – These overlaps. ;w; 00:32:876 (1,4) - makes a triangle
   
3. 00:59:346 (5,7) – NC both of these for pattern? Up to you. nah, don't really see a need for it
   
4. The only problems really are the ugly stacks. The aesthetic isn’t my cup of tea (but that can be said for all diffs, no offense) so I won’t really comment on that. I actually really like the stacks, and they're an intended gimmick for this diff.

Good luck with this.~