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Yuly - HERO A [OsuMania]

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Krimzen
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Krimzen
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, 28 August 2016 at 1:03:39 AM

Artist: Yuly
Title: HERO A
Source: Boku No Hero Academia
Tags: my academy
BPM: 120
Filesize: 5174kb
Play Time: 03:05
Difficulties Available:
  1. Go Beyond - 4Key (1.56 stars, 550 notes)
  2. Plus Ultra - 4Key (2.74 stars, 1294 notes)
Download: Yuly - HERO A
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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This is my first attempt at mapping, I'm super proud of this map and I hope you guys like it too!

Feel free to leave feedback! Thank you! :D

Changelog...

#1 - 16/7/16
* Improved timing with the help of guineaQ.
* Removed accidental "jack" notes.
* Filled in "Break Time", reccomended by guineaQ.
* Other minor note adjustments.

#2 - 17/7/16
* Finished the map.

#3 - 17/7/16
* Fixed an unwanted jack.

#4 - 17/7/16
* Added "Go Beyond" difficulty, (already complete).

#5 - 17/7/16
* Made adjustments from the advice of Chaos. (Irregular sliders & consistency mostly.)

#6 - 17/7/16
* Essentially restructured "Go Beyond", thanks Eternalie for mod.

#7 - 19/7/16
* Begun reworking "Plus Ultra", thanks Valentrixe for mod.

#8 - 20/7/16
* Finished reworking "Plus Ultra".

#9 - 31/7/16
* Made some note adjustments, thanks to genkicho.

#10 - 31/7/16
* Many adjustments made to "Go Beyond"
* "Go Beyond" is now Normal difficulty instead of Easy.

#11 - 28/8/16
* Begun adjusting "Plus Utra".

Current Status: Set in pending, hoping for mods while trying to also attain 12 star priority, not easy...
Last edited by Krimzen , edited 20 times in total.
Fubukicat
970 posts
Joined February 2012
Fubukicat
Don don Free mod

Don
Key collumn =1/2/3/4

[Go Beyond]
00:01:028 (1028|2) - This note isn't representing any drum sound , the drum sound is earlier (on the blue line , 1/4 snap at the top right corner) screenshot
00:01:278 (1278|1) - this note has a louder sound tham all the next ones (there is the little cymbal sound) so you can add another note to emphasize the impact
00:08:778 (8778|1) - add another note for the cymbal sound (as for here add another note in 1st collumn)

okay from here : 00:01:278 (1278|1) - to here : 00:17:278 (17278|3) -
you are following the drum simply , with 1 note every 1/1 , the thing is that some of the 1/1 aren't on any drum sound
it'd probably be more catchy and easier to move the following notes
00:07:278 (7278|2) - move up to : 00:07:528 (7528|2) - (red line) , actually there is another sound of the blue line but it has les impact tham the one on the red line here (the kick)
00:08:278 (8278|3) - move up to : 00:08:528 (8528|3) - ^same reason
00:12:278 (12278|3) - move up to : 00:12:528 (12528|3) - ^

00:14:778 (14778|1) - for here I suggest this

00:17:278 (17278|3) - add one more note for cymbal sound :3 (preferably to 2nd collumn)

00:17:278 (17278|3,17778|3,18278|3) - there is 3 time 4th collumn in a row for sounds that aren't really the same , a good alternative would be
00:17:778 (17778|3) - move this one to 1st collumn , so you have a [24] [13] 4 , pattern

this is consistently awesome : 00:17:778 (17778|3,17778|2) - on this part you use doubles for every snare sound
wich is a good thing to do
now from here : 00:27:778 (27778|3) - you stopped doing it , You should keep the concistency here and make this double
and so on until here : 00:32:778 (32778|0) -

00:33:278 (33278|1,33278|2) - this is a nice double , cause there is a cymbal sound
but now : 00:34:278 (34278|2,34278|3) - this dosn't , it's only a kick , and you used to make kicks only 1 note
00:33:778 (33778|0) - this however is 1 note but it should be two , cause you used to make 2 notes = snare

basically : kick = 1 , snare = 2 , kick + cymbal = 2 , snare + cymbal = 3 (it's not really complicated , just require abit of practice ? I guess)
and this apply to the whole diff .

basically as an example from here : 00:33:278 (33278|1,33278|2) - to here : 00:41:778 (41778|3) -
the kick notes that you put as doubles should be 1 note only
the snare that you put on one note should be 2
the first double is okay since it's a kick + cymbal

other parts of the map is simmilar and just need to be consistent overall .

00:39:528 (39528|2) - move this up to : 00:39:778 (39778|2) - and add another note (cause this is a snare sound)
or : 00:39:778 (39778|2) - add two notes here and keep the previous one at the same place it was
like this

01:05:278 (65278|1) - add one more note for cymbal
01:07:778 (67778|2) - add one more note for snare
01:08:778 (68778|2) - ^same

however , 01:09:278 (69278|1,69528|3,69778|0,70028|2,70278|1) - this dosn't require a double on : 01:09:778 (69778|0) -
note that , if the diff is to be easy , just the stream by itself is fine whithout doubles , if you want to make it hard then do something like this
if you map Easy or normal , it'd be better to not double in middle of stream , for hard or insane or higher it's totally okay to double / triple in middle of streams

01:14:778 (74778|2) - add one more note for snare

01:50:278 (110278|2) - move 1 to the left side
01:52:278 (112278|1) - move 1 to the right side
01:54:278 (114278|3) - move 1 to the left
01:56:278 (116278|0) - move 1 to the right
(3 same note in a row is okay for the same sound , but here the sounds are different and moving the middle note of each section gives it a better emphasize and flow of pattern overall)

02:01:278 (121278|3,121278|0,121278|2) - this is okay as 2 note only , since it's the end of a LN and you can consider that as already a triple note , this is up to you still it's okay as 3 notes

02:03:778 (123778|1) - this should be doubled cause it's a snare
02:04:278 (124278|1,124278|2) - this shouldn't be doubled , cause it's a kick
02:04:778 (124778|1) - snare here , so you should make this doubles

02:07:278 (127278|0,127278|3) - this is a kick so should be 1 , the note just before that : 02:06:778 (126778|3) - is the snare and should have 2 notes
try to listen closely when there is a snare and when there is a kick sound

02:07:778 (127778|3) - this is a snare aswell

02:08:778 (128778|0,128778|3) - here is a correct snare with doubles owob
02:08:278 (128278|0,128778|0,129278|0) - 3 notes in 1st collumn in a row , try to move on of them to 2nd or 3rd collumn
02:10:278 (130278|0,130278|3) - shouldn't be double cause it's a kick

from here : 02:10:778 (130778|2) - to 02:12:278 (132278|1) - the snares should be double notes

02:12:278 (132278|1) - I suggest :this for a better rythm flow and more catchy , this part feels empty whithout this not in the middle
you can still add only 1 note instead of the two suggested in that pic

02:15:278 (135278|1,135778|0,136278|1,136778|0) - I suggest this for a better flow and rythm , also the cymbals here are louder tham any other sounds so following them feels more natural imo

02:46:778 (166778|2,166778|3,167028|3,167028|2,167278|2,167278|3,167778|1,167778|0,168028|1,168028|0,168278|0,168278|1) - thoose notes shouldn't all be doubles , some are only kicks + they dosn't have the same sound so shouldn't be on the same collumns

02:56:778 (176778|2,176778|1,177778|1,177778|2) - this is really nice simple and catchy , you should also do that for this part : 02:49:778 (169778|2) - to here : 02:55:778 (175778|3) -

03:02:778 (182778|0) - hmm this is really hard to tell , maybe moving it up to the red line would be easier to catch up but idk , hmm well abit tricky rythm here

Here is the mod for the easieast diff , You can apply most of the same thing in the hardest one
Concistency on the number of notes is a simple way to keep the overall chart coherent , there is sometimes you would have to break the concistency
but most of the time it's probably better to follow it

Also try to focus on one or two instrument at a time ex : Drum + vocal , Drum + guitar , Guitar + vocal etc
unless you are mapping super hard diff then you can probably go with more instrus but well :3

Good Luck with your map , hope it will help abit 'w'b
Gravey-
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Joined July 2013
Gravey-
Good luck on your map la >w<)b
Krimzen
16 posts
Joined September 2014
Topic Starter
Krimzen

Gravey- wrote:

Good luck on your map la >w<)b
Oh, yay! Thank you! I didn't know why you replied at first but then I realised, thank you very much!

Hopefully this will get some more mods that I can give kudosu for, which might actually be difficult at this stage since there's not much advice people can give anymore, maybe I'll have to make another difficulty and ask for mods on that... We'll see.

Anyway, thank you again! ^u^
genkicho
449 posts
Joined May 2013
genkicho
FastMod
Column |1| |2| |3| |4|
Good map, i cant find mistake here..
00:41:153 add 1
00:49:278 add 1
01:07:778 add single note
01:19:778 delete 1 (single note)
01:37:153 add 1 at |2|
01:37:278 - 02:00:278 please .. (my opinion : remake that part)
02:01:278 add 1
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Note : LNs are cancer for me.
Krimzen
16 posts
Joined September 2014
Topic Starter
Krimzen

genkicho wrote:

FastMod
Column |1| |2| |3| |4|
Good map, i cant find mistake here..
00:41:153 add 1 Done.
00:49:278 add 1 Done.
01:07:778 add single note Done.
01:19:778 delete 1 (single note) Done.
01:37:153 add 1 at |2| Done.
01:37:278 - 02:00:278 please .. (my opinion : remake that part) Definitely thinking about it, will probably do so when I have more free time (School)
02:01:278 add 1 Done.
~~
Note : LNs are cancer for me. Same, dude, hahaha.
No_sync
380 posts
Joined November 2014
No_sync
hi!

From my NM/M4M queue.

Columns 4K 0|1|2|3



General
Well i check the BG first, is 1365x768, that "5" is killer because you need one more for 1366x768 that is accepted. (more info here "Skinning -> Background images...")
no problem, take the new one: http://i.imgur.com/lfruK6C.jpg

Now something about the difficulties. I see that "Go Beyond" is Easy, and "Plus Ultra" is Hard. Is intended? i mean you need [Easy, Normal] or [Normal, Hard] Spread (of course there some little exceptions...but...)
Your diff "Go Beyond" have StarRating: 1.35 but the "Plus Ultra" SR: 2.73. There some exceptions when you do a Normal diff for example and the SR reach 2.27/2.3 . That isnt the example here, your second diff is a bit more hard than normal.
I think you need decide: which will be Normal diff? My suggestion, increase the difficulty of "Go Beyond" because is more close to a Normal.
Remember:
Less than 1.5 SR, Easy.
Between 1.5 and 2.25 SR, Normal.
Between 2.25 and 3.75 SR, Hard.
For more info here.

Now a little comment of the names of the map, If you see in the link above the difficulties have a rule, fitting "difficulty grades" + something else.
for example: "EZ Beyond" and "Plus HD". Only examples because i dont know the exact context you decide those names. Take your time to decide a good creative name! Up to you ;)

Try to decrease the hitsounds volume to 40% at least. Is too loud.

Last thing, You need add some Kiai times in the "Go Beyond" diff, more info here.

Go Beyond
About this diff, i will take it like one "Normal" diff. So expect adding some notes lol.

I think you repeat a lot of patterns, this screenshot is clear in that: 00:24:778 (24778|3,24778|0,25278|1,25778|3,25778|0,26278|2,26778|3,26778|0,27278|1,27778|0,27778|3,28278|2,28778|0,28778|3,29278|1,29778|0,29778|3,30278|2,30778|0,30778|3,31278|1,31778|3,31778|0,32278|2,32778|0,32778|3) - http://i.imgur.com/Fxwazvm.jpg
I dont know if is your first time mapping mania, so for help you, take this guide: t/439430 (in the wiki too): https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Osu!mania_Mapping_Guide


00:01:278 (1278|1,1278|2) - You can move to |0|1| or |0|3|.

00:03:278 (3278|2) - to |1| I think is good to alternate a bit this part...

00:04:778 (4778|1,4778|2,5278|2,5778|1,5778|0,6278|3,6778|2,6778|1) - If is normal (for me)... maybe this can works: http://i.imgur.com/bddadye.jpg <- at least one stair there is good, only one.

00:07:528 (7528|2,7778|3,7778|2,8528|3,8778|1,8778|2,9278|2) - http://i.imgur.com/jhRizhz.jpg

00:09:778 (9778|0,9778|1,10278|3,10778|1,10778|2,11278|2,11778|2,11778|3,12528|3,12778|2,12778|1) - http://i.imgur.com/mdDaCD3.jpg

00:13:278 (13278|2,13778|0,13778|1,14278|3,14778|1,14778|2,15153|3,15403|1,15778|0,16278|3) - http://i.imgur.com/SHTQnK5.jpg

^^After those examples you can alternate the rest.....

00:18:528 - I hear a cymbal here.

00:27:778 (27778|3,27778|0,28278|2,28778|3,28778|0,29278|1) - I think you can add some notes here in the between the red lines...

00:31:278 (31278|1,31778|0,31778|3,32278|2,32778|3,32778|0,33278|1,33278|2) - Again here.

00:34:153 - I hear a cymbal here. (is a blue line, lol)

00:35:278 (35278|0,35778|0,35778|1,36278|3,36778|2,36778|3,37278|0,37778|1,37778|0,38278|3,38778|2,38778|3,39278|0,39778|0,39778|1,40278|3,40778|3,40778|2,41278|0,41778|1,41778|0) - repetitive ... you can alternate like this: http://i.imgur.com/ygbz0YQ.jpg

00:41:278 (41278|1) - cymbal here, add a note in |0| Or Put a LongNote to 00:43:278, (erase this: 00:42:278 (42278|0) ) Because you start the LongNote in 00:41:278 here, but in the Hard diff not: http://i.imgur.com/SD9TnV3.jpg

00:49:278 (49278|2) - cymbal, add a note in |0|.

00:49:778 - 00:50:778 - 00:51:778 - 00:52:778 - 00:53:778 - 00:54:778 - 00:55:778 - 00:56:778 - 00:57:778 - 00:58:778 - 00:59:778 - I dont know why here (you are doing well before) dont put one note more for the kicks...

00:57:278 (57278|1) - cymbal. add a note in |0|.

01:01:278 (61278|2) - cymbal. add a note in |0| or |1|...

01:01:278 (61278|2) - cymbal. add a note in |2| or |3|...

01:08:028 - you can add a note here in |1|.

01:08:278 (68278|1) - move to |0|.

01:13:028 - add a note in |1| for snare.

01:18:528 - ^^.

01:21:278 - add a note in |0| cymbal.

01:27:278 (87278|3,87778|2,87778|1,88278|3,88278|2,88778|1,88778|0,89278|3,89278|2,89778|1,89778|0,90278|3,90278|0,90778|2,90778|1,91278|1,91528|2,91778|3,92278|2,92528|1,92778|0,93278|3,93278|2,93778|2,93778|1,94278|1,94278|0,94778|2,94778|1,95278|3,95278|2,95778|2,95778|1,96278|1,96278|0) - between this notes in the red line you can add SingleNotes... up to you.

01:45:278 - add a note for whistle. |0| or |3|, if is |3| 01:45:778 (105778|3) - move to |2|.

01:49:278 - same here.

01:53:278 - same.

01:59:278 - ^^.

01:59:278 (119278|1,121278|2,121278|0,121278|3) - Even for a normal, (like said as take this diff) 3 notes is too much, at least 2 is good.

From 02:01:528 to 02:17:278 - I think you can add notes in the red lines for that rhythm...

02:17:278 (137278|2,137278|1,138278|0,138278|3,139278|2,140278|0,140278|1,141278|2) - I think will be enough with only one LongNote each time...

02:17:778 - add a note for cymbal

02:18:278 (138278|3,138278|0) - this starts in 02:18:028.

02:20:278 (140278|0,140278|1) - this starts in 02:20:028.

02:21:278 - add a note for cymbal.

02:22:278 (142278|3) - this starts in 02:22:028.

02:23:278 (143278|0) - this starts in 02:23:028.

02:24:278 (144278|2) - this starts in 02:24:028.

02:25:278 - add a note for cymbal.

From 02:26:028 to 02:33:278 - Look your Hard diff, copy the LongNotes that have more than 1/4 snap only and use it in this diff. (all those LongNotes of before are well started in the Hard diff, you need take those changes through all diffs too, take care.)

02:33:278 - add a note for cymbal.

From 02:33:278 to 02:41:278 - Add notes in the white lines, (1/1 snap) feels a bit empty...

02:41:278 - add a note for cymbal.

02:44:028 - add a note for snare.

02:55:153 - add DoubleNote for kick+snare in |2||3|.

02:56:153 - add DoubleNote for kick+snare in |0||1|.

02:56:653 - http://i.imgur.com/THN21WJ.jpg

02:59:153 - add DoubleNote for kick+snare in |2||3|.

03:00:153 - add DoubleNote for kick+snare in |2||3|.

03:00:528 - since here add notes in the red lines and white lines to 03:02:153.

03:02:153 - add DoubleNote for kick+snare in |0||1|.

03:02:403 - add DoubleNote for kick+snare in |2||3|.

03:02:778 - http://i.imgur.com/jW3i4n4.jpg

Plus Ultra
Well, compared with "Go Beyond" i see more effort here, good job.

00:12:903 - add note for snare in |1|.

00:15:278 (15278|1,15278|2) - These two go in 00:15:153. <- and i think they are only one... erase one.

00:15:403 (15403|3) - this need one more (snare+kick) add it in |2|.

00:15:778 - snare+kick add a note...

00:16:028 - http://i.imgur.com/lCCZdsD.jpg those are snare+kick, erased one note, and the last one is for cymbal i add one note there. If is the most difficult level, (i see 3-notes already) you need map with the most important sounds there (drums and cymbal), because after that you need put hitsounds there... but thats is another matter.

00:17:278 (17278|3,17528|1,17778|3,17778|2,18028|2,18278|1,18528|3,18778|1,18778|2,19028|1,19278|2,19278|3) - ... spread the notes. LN + repetitive notes (in the same column) are harsh. http://i.imgur.com/T0EdGMl.jpg

00:20:153 - snare left...

00:20:403 - snare left...

00:20:653 (20653|0) - erase this.

00:20:903 (20903|3) - this too.

00:21:153 - snare left...

00:21:278 (21278|1,21528|0,21778|1,21778|2,22028|1,22278|0,22528|2,22778|1,22778|0,23028|0,23278|1,23278|2) - same that 00:17:278 (17278|3,17528|1,17778|3,17778|2,18028|2,18278|1,18528|3,18778|1,18778|2,19028|1,19278|2,19278|3) -.

00:24:028 - kick left...

00:24:153 - snare left? I think is a whistle of background... you decide.

00:24:403 - kick + snare left.

00:24:653 (24653|0) - i doubt of this one, maybe is a whistle...

00:27:903 (27903|2) - ^^ same.

00:28:153 - kick + snare left.

00:28:278 (28278|3,28278|0) - erase one.

00:28:403 - kick + snare left.

00:28:653 (28653|1,28903|1) - same that 00:24:653 (24653|0).

00:29:278 (29278|2,29278|1,29528|0,29778|1,29778|2,30028|2,30278|1,30528|0,30778|0,30778|1,31028|2,31278|2,31278|0) - same that 00:17:278 (17278|3,17528|1,17778|3,17778|2,18028|2,18278|1,18528|3,18778|1,18778|2,19028|1,19278|2,19278|3) -.

00:31:028 - The drums start before actually, so do something with the LN for less difficulty: http://i.imgur.com/GMvVjpu.jpg <- you can end the LN before the stream starts, but depends of you.

00:33:528 (33528|0,33778|0,34778|0,35028|0) - no stacks, same that 00:17:278 (17278|3,17528|1,17778|3,17778|2,18028|2,18278|1,18528|3,18778|1,18778|2,19028|1,19278|2,19278|3) -.

00:35:028 - http://i.imgur.com/Ax4Vfs9.jpg <- That LN in the start is somewhat a problem... is like before, I think the two notes between the LN in 00:37:278 are bad, i dont hear cymbals/kicks there. Erase one.

00:37:278 (37278|0,37528|0,38778|3,39028|3) - same that 00:17:278 (17278|3,17528|1,17778|3,17778|2,18028|2,18278|1,18528|3,18778|1,18778|2,19028|1,19278|2,19278|3) -.

00:39:028 - http://i.imgur.com/3QZLsn8.jpg

00:41:278 (41278|3,41528|3,41778|2,42028|2,42528|2,42778|2,43028|3,43278|3) - ... same that 00:17:278 (17278|3,17528|1,17778|3,17778|2,18028|2,18278|1,18528|3,18778|1,18778|2,19028|1,19278|2,19278|3) -.

00:43:028 - http://i.imgur.com/uQ1iS7A.jpg

00:47:028 - http://i.imgur.com/UdejYCw.jpg

For now on, I advice you... Use 25% Playback Rate for hear those sounds like whistles, cymbals, snares, kicks or snares. Dont use it always, just when you dont know where is certain sound, but here is really helpful.

00:53:528 (53528|2,53778|2,53778|0,54028|0,54528|2,54778|2,54778|0,55028|0,55278|0) - stop... if you follow those whistles? sounds well I can do an exception here.

00:55:778 (55778|1,56028|1,56778|3,57028|3) - again...

00:57:653 (57653|1,57903|0,58028|1,58278|0,58278|1,58528|1,58653|0,58903|1) - MY HAND!! just move 00:58:278 (58278|0,58278|1) - to |2||3|.

00:59:653 (59653|2,59903|3,60028|2,60278|2,60278|3,60528|2,60653|3,60903|2) - ^^ same but 01:00:278 (60278|2,60278|3) - to |0||1|.

01:01:528 (61528|1,61778|1,62778|1,63028|1,63278|1) - ... 00:17:278 (17278|3,17528|1,17778|3,17778|2,18028|2,18278|1,18528|3,18778|1,18778|2,19028|1,19278|2,19278|3) -.

01:03:528 (63528|2,63778|2,64778|2,65028|2) - .... 00:17:278 (17278|3,17528|1,17778|3,17778|2,18028|2,18278|1,18528|3,18778|1,18778|2,19028|1,19278|2,19278|3) -.

01:07:528 - I like those 1/4 LN. (think very well if you really have those in this diff, Insane have a lot of those, Hard... i doubt.) I will change 01:07:778 (67778|1,67903|2,68028|3,68153|2) - these to noteS and do bursts/trills patterns.

01:07:528 (67528|1,67653|0) - I dont think these two are really 1/4 LN, Replace with noteS. Up to you.

01:08:278 (68278|1) - I will move this to |0|...

01:09:278 (69278|2,69528|2) - ..... 00:17:278 (17278|3,17528|1,17778|3,17778|2,18028|2,18278|1,18528|3,18778|1,18778|2,19028|1,19278|2,19278|3) -.

01:10:278 (70278|2,70403|2) - jack detected! Arrange it.

01:15:778 (75778|2,75903|1,76028|0,76153|1) - same that 01:07:528.

01:15:528 (75528|2,75653|3) - same that 01:07:528.

01:16:278 (76278|2) - to |3|

01:16:528 (76528|3,76778|0,76778|2,76903|1) - Ctrl+H.

01:19:528 (79528|0) - to |2|.

From 01:21:278 to 01:33:278 - Do something about those stacks.

01:34:278 (94278|1) - to |3| please.

01:53:278 - add a note here whistle.

01:56:278 - here too maybe.

01:59:278 - ^^.

02:00:528 (120528|1,120528|3,120653|0,120653|2,120778|3,120778|1,120903|2,120903|0,121028|1) - http://i.imgur.com/Ykzkutc.jpg <- Exactly that.

From 02:01:278 to 02:14:278 - Use 25% Playback Rate and listen carefully those sounds, (decrease to 0% your effects volume too if is necessary) Those patterns arent fitting the song.

02:14:278 - http://i.imgur.com/vcA5UTI.jpg <- 1/6 snap appear!

02:15:278 - http://i.imgur.com/4FmnJqN.jpg <- :3

02:17:528 (137528|1,137778|1,137903|0,138028|1,138153|0,138278|1) - ...... 00:17:278 (17278|3,17528|1,17778|3,17778|2,18028|2,18278|1,18528|3,18778|1,18778|2,19028|1,19278|2,19278|3) -. Now you are adding stairs to the LN so i will skip this...

From 02:17:278 to 02:49:278 - Decide what you want to map: drums, cymbals, guitar riffs, bass, You cant do it all with 4 columns (unfortunately...lol)

02:49:278 to the end - There some notes for the whistles that not fit, check 25% Playback Rate for this. Is more easy do that here than in the kiai time...

Keep up the good work! You can do it better! :)
This song have a lot of things you can learn so try more.

Hope this was helpful to you, bye!
Krimzen
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Krimzen

No_sync wrote:

hi!

From my NM/M4M queue.

Columns 4K 0|1|2|3



General
Well i check the BG first, is 1365x768, that "5" is killer because you need one more for 1366x768 that is accepted. (more info here "Skinning -> Background images...")
no problem, take the new one: http://i.imgur.com/lfruK6C.jpg Shoot me, please.

Now something about the difficulties. I see that "Go Beyond" is Easy, and "Plus Ultra" is Hard. Is intended? i mean you need [Easy, Normal] or [Normal, Hard] Spread (of course there some little exceptions...but...)
Your diff "Go Beyond" have StarRating: 1.35 but the "Plus Ultra" SR: 2.73. There some exceptions when you do a Normal diff for example and the SR reach 2.27/2.3 . That isnt the example here, your second diff is a bit more hard than normal.
I think you need decide: which will be Normal diff? My suggestion, increase the difficulty of "Go Beyond" because is more close to a Normal. Sounds good to me.

Remember:
Less than 1.5 SR, Easy.
Between 1.5 and 2.25 SR, Normal.
Between 2.25 and 3.75 SR, Hard.
For more info here. Understood, thank you.

Now a little comment of the names of the map, If you see in the link above the difficulties have a rule, fitting "difficulty grades" + something else.
for example: "EZ Beyond" and "Plus HD". Only examples because i dont know the exact context you decide those names. Take your time to decide a good creative name! Up to you ;) Damn, alright, thanks for informing me. ^_^

Try to decrease the hitsounds volume to 40% at least. Is too loud. Will do.

Last thing, You need add some Kiai times in the "Go Beyond" diff, more info here. I'll check it out.

Go Beyond
About this diff, i will take it like one "Normal" diff. So expect adding some notes lol. Sounds good.

I think you repeat a lot of patterns, this screenshot is clear in that: 00:24:778 (24778|3,24778|0,25278|1,25778|3,25778|0,26278|2,26778|3,26778|0,27278|1,27778|0,27778|3,28278|2,28778|0,28778|3,29278|1,29778|0,29778|3,30278|2,30778|0,30778|3,31278|1,31778|3,31778|0,32278|2,32778|0,32778|3) - http://i.imgur.com/Fxwazvm.jpg
I dont know if is your first time mapping mania, so for help you, take this guide: t/439430 (in the wiki too): https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Osu!mania_Mapping_Guide


00:01:278 (1278|1,1278|2) - You can move to |0|1| or |0|3|. |0|3|

00:03:278 (3278|2) - to |1| I think is good to alternate a bit this part... Done

00:04:778 (4778|1,4778|2,5278|2,5778|1,5778|0,6278|3,6778|2,6778|1) - If is normal (for me)... maybe this can works: http://i.imgur.com/bddadye.jpg <- at least one stair there is good, only one. Done as in image.

00:07:528 (7528|2,7778|3,7778|2,8528|3,8778|1,8778|2,9278|2) - http://i.imgur.com/jhRizhz.jpg Done

00:09:778 (9778|0,9778|1,10278|3,10778|1,10778|2,11278|2,11778|2,11778|3,12528|3,12778|2,12778|1) - http://i.imgur.com/mdDaCD3.jpg Done something similar

00:13:278 (13278|2,13778|0,13778|1,14278|3,14778|1,14778|2,15153|3,15403|1,15778|0,16278|3) - http://i.imgur.com/SHTQnK5.jpg
Something similar, but a bit harder.
^^After those examples you can alternate the rest..... Will do eventually.

00:18:528 - I hear a cymbal here. Uh, I don't, sorry.

00:27:778 (27778|3,27778|0,28278|2,28778|3,28778|0,29278|1) - I think you can add some notes here in the between the red lines... Added two in that area.

00:31:278 (31278|1,31778|0,31778|3,32278|2,32778|3,32778|0,33278|1,33278|2) - Again here. Added 3, not sure if it works, will find out hahaha.

00:34:153 - I hear a cymbal here. (is a blue line, lol) Again, I can't, hmm...

00:35:278 (35278|0,35778|0,35778|1,36278|3,36778|2,36778|3,37278|0,37778|1,37778|0,38278|3,38778|2,38778|3,39278|0,39778|0,39778|1,40278|3,40778|3,40778|2,41278|0,41778|1,41778|0) - repetitive ... you can alternate like this: http://i.imgur.com/ygbz0YQ.jpg Did something similar.

00:41:278 (41278|1) - cymbal here, add a note in |0| Or Put a LongNote to 00:43:278, (erase this: 00:42:278 (42278|0) ) Because you start the LongNote in 00:41:278 here, but in the Hard diff not: http://i.imgur.com/SD9TnV3.jpg Replaced long note with earlier starting one, added a couple more beats too.

00:49:278 (49278|2) - cymbal, add a note in |0|. Done

00:49:778 - 00:50:778 - 00:51:778 - 00:52:778 - 00:53:778 - 00:54:778 - 00:55:778 - 00:56:778 - 00:57:778 - 00:58:778 - 00:59:778 - I dont know why here (you are doing well before) dont put one note more for the kicks... Fixed, oops.

00:57:278 (57278|1) - cymbal. add a note in |0|. Done.

01:01:278 (61278|2) - cymbal. add a note in |0| or |1|... Done

01:01:278 (61278|2) - cymbal. add a note in |2| or |3|... Done

01:08:028 - you can add a note here in |1|. Done

01:08:278 (68278|1) - move to |0|. Done

01:13:028 - add a note in |1| for snare. Added one in |2| and moved the one above to |4|

01:18:528 - ^^. Nothing there? :c

01:21:278 - add a note in |0| cymbal. Done

01:27:278 (87278|3,87778|2,87778|1,88278|3,88278|2,88778|1,88778|0,89278|3,89278|2,89778|1,89778|0,90278|3,90278|0,90778|2,90778|1,91278|1,91528|2,91778|3,92278|2,92528|1,92778|0,93278|3,93278|2,93778|2,93778|1,94278|1,94278|0,94778|2,94778|1,95278|3,95278|2,95778|2,95778|1,96278|1,96278|0) - between this notes in the red line you can add SingleNotes... up to you. Will avoid for now, I don't wanna make it too much like "Plus Ultra", might do something like this another time if still needed.

01:45:278 - add a note for whistle. |0| or |3|, if is |3| 01:45:778 (105778|3) - move to |2|. Added to |3| and moved to |2|

01:49:278 - same here. Done

01:53:278 - same. Done

01:59:278 - ^^. Yep.

01:59:278 (119278|1,121278|2,121278|0,121278|3) - Even for a normal, (like said as take this diff) 3 notes is too much, at least 2 is good. Good point, removed one.

From 02:01:528 to 02:17:278 - I think you can add notes in the red lines for that rhythm...

02:17:278 (137278|2,137278|1,138278|0,138278|3,139278|2,140278|0,140278|1,141278|2) - I think will be enough with only one LongNote each time... Same as above, will only add if needed. I will remember to check your mod for these areas, though.

02:17:778 - add a note for cymbal Done

02:18:278 (138278|3,138278|0) - this starts in 02:18:028. Yep

02:20:278 (140278|0,140278|1) - this starts in 02:20:028. Yep

02:21:278 - add a note for cymbal. Yep

02:22:278 (142278|3) - this starts in 02:22:028. Yep

02:23:278 (143278|0) - this starts in 02:23:028. I think I removed this one, haha.

02:24:278 (144278|2) - this starts in 02:24:028. Yep

02:25:278 - add a note for cymbal. Done

From 02:26:028 to 02:33:278 - Look your Hard diff, copy the LongNotes that have more than 1/4 snap only and use it in this diff. (all those LongNotes of before are well started in the Hard diff, you need take those changes through all diffs too, take care.) Will do later.

02:33:278 - add a note for cymbal. Done

From 02:33:278 to 02:41:278 - Add notes in the white lines, (1/1 snap) feels a bit empty... Done

02:41:278 - add a note for cymbal. Done

02:44:028 - add a note for snare. Done

02:55:153 - add DoubleNote for kick+snare in |2||3|. Done

02:56:153 - add DoubleNote for kick+snare in |0||1|. Done

02:56:653 - http://i.imgur.com/THN21WJ.jpg Done

02:59:153 - add DoubleNote for kick+snare in |2||3|. Done

03:00:153 - add DoubleNote for kick+snare in |2||3|. Done

03:00:528 - since here add notes in the red lines and white lines to 03:02:153. Done

03:02:153 - add DoubleNote for kick+snare in |0||1|. Done

03:02:403 - add DoubleNote for kick+snare in |2||3|. Done

03:02:778 - http://i.imgur.com/jW3i4n4.jpg Done
Will complete "Plus Ultra" in another post, out of time right now, thanks heaps for this! :D
Krimzen
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[THIS EDIT IS STILL WIP]


No_sync wrote:

Plus Ultra
Well, compared with "Go Beyond" i see more effort here, good job.

00:12:903 - add note for snare in |1|. Done

00:15:278 (15278|1,15278|2) - These two go in 00:15:153. <- and i think they are only one... erase one. Good spot, done.

00:15:403 (15403|3) - this need one more (snare+kick) add it in |2|.

00:15:778 - snare+kick add a note... Done

00:16:028 - http://i.imgur.com/lCCZdsD.jpg those are snare+kick, erased one note, and the last one is for cymbal i add one note there. If is the most difficult level, (i see 3-notes already) you need map with the most important sounds there (drums and cymbal), because after that you need put hitsounds there... but thats is another matter. Something similar.

00:17:278 (17278|3,17528|1,17778|3,17778|2,18028|2,18278|1,18528|3,18778|1,18778|2,19028|1,19278|2,19278|3) - ... spread the notes. LN + repetitive notes (in the same column) are harsh. http://i.imgur.com/T0EdGMl.jpgDone

00:20:153 - snare left... Done

00:20:403 - snare left... Something similar

00:20:653 (20653|0) - erase this. Done

00:20:903 (20903|3) - this too. Done

00:21:153 - snare left... Similar

00:21:278 (21278|1,21528|0,21778|1,21778|2,22028|1,22278|0,22528|2,22778|1,22778|0,23028|0,23278|1,23278|2) - same that 00:17:278 (17278|3,17528|1,17778|3,17778|2,18028|2,18278|1,18528|3,18778|1,18778|2,19028|1,19278|2,19278|3) -. Done

00:24:028 - kick left... There's already a beat there? Hmm...

00:24:153 - snare left? I think is a whistle of background... you decide. I think so, it fits though.

00:24:403 - kick + snare left. Done

00:24:653 (24653|0) - i doubt of this one, maybe is a whistle... Fixed

00:27:903 (27903|2) - ^^ same. Fixed

00:28:153 - kick + snare left. Done

00:28:278 (28278|3,28278|0) - erase one. Done

00:28:403 - kick + snare left. Similar

00:28:653 (28653|1,28903|1) - same that 00:24:653 (24653|0).

00:29:278 (29278|2,29278|1,29528|0,29778|1,29778|2,30028|2,30278|1,30528|0,30778|0,30778|1,31028|2,31278|2,31278|0) - same that 00:17:278 (17278|3,17528|1,17778|3,17778|2,18028|2,18278|1,18528|3,18778|1,18778|2,19028|1,19278|2,19278|3) -.

00:31:028 - The drums start before actually, so do something with the LN for less difficulty: http://i.imgur.com/GMvVjpu.jpg <- you can end the LN before the stream starts, but depends of you.

00:33:528 (33528|0,33778|0,34778|0,35028|0) - no stacks, same that 00:17:278 (17278|3,17528|1,17778|3,17778|2,18028|2,18278|1,18528|3,18778|1,18778|2,19028|1,19278|2,19278|3) -.

00:35:028 - http://i.imgur.com/Ax4Vfs9.jpg <- That LN in the start is somewhat a problem... is like before, I think the two notes between the LN in 00:37:278 are bad, i dont hear cymbals/kicks there. Erase one.

00:37:278 (37278|0,37528|0,38778|3,39028|3) - same that 00:17:278 (17278|3,17528|1,17778|3,17778|2,18028|2,18278|1,18528|3,18778|1,18778|2,19028|1,19278|2,19278|3) -.

00:39:028 - http://i.imgur.com/3QZLsn8.jpg

00:41:278 (41278|3,41528|3,41778|2,42028|2,42528|2,42778|2,43028|3,43278|3) - ... same that 00:17:278 (17278|3,17528|1,17778|3,17778|2,18028|2,18278|1,18528|3,18778|1,18778|2,19028|1,19278|2,19278|3) -.

00:43:028 - http://i.imgur.com/uQ1iS7A.jpg

00:47:028 - http://i.imgur.com/UdejYCw.jpg

For now on, I advice you... Use 25% Playback Rate for hear those sounds like whistles, cymbals, snares, kicks or snares. Dont use it always, just when you dont know where is certain sound, but here is really helpful.

00:53:528 (53528|2,53778|2,53778|0,54028|0,54528|2,54778|2,54778|0,55028|0,55278|0) - stop... if you follow those whistles? sounds well I can do an exception here.

00:55:778 (55778|1,56028|1,56778|3,57028|3) - again...

00:57:653 (57653|1,57903|0,58028|1,58278|0,58278|1,58528|1,58653|0,58903|1) - MY HAND!! just move 00:58:278 (58278|0,58278|1) - to |2||3|.

00:59:653 (59653|2,59903|3,60028|2,60278|2,60278|3,60528|2,60653|3,60903|2) - ^^ same but 01:00:278 (60278|2,60278|3) - to |0||1|.

01:01:528 (61528|1,61778|1,62778|1,63028|1,63278|1) - ... 00:17:278 (17278|3,17528|1,17778|3,17778|2,18028|2,18278|1,18528|3,18778|1,18778|2,19028|1,19278|2,19278|3) -.

01:03:528 (63528|2,63778|2,64778|2,65028|2) - .... 00:17:278 (17278|3,17528|1,17778|3,17778|2,18028|2,18278|1,18528|3,18778|1,18778|2,19028|1,19278|2,19278|3) -.

01:07:528 - I like those 1/4 LN. (think very well if you really have those in this diff, Insane have a lot of those, Hard... i doubt.) I will change 01:07:778 (67778|1,67903|2,68028|3,68153|2) - these to noteS and do bursts/trills patterns.

01:07:528 (67528|1,67653|0) - I dont think these two are really 1/4 LN, Replace with noteS. Up to you.

01:08:278 (68278|1) - I will move this to |0|...

01:09:278 (69278|2,69528|2) - ..... 00:17:278 (17278|3,17528|1,17778|3,17778|2,18028|2,18278|1,18528|3,18778|1,18778|2,19028|1,19278|2,19278|3) -.

01:10:278 (70278|2,70403|2) - jack detected! Arrange it.

01:15:778 (75778|2,75903|1,76028|0,76153|1) - same that 01:07:528.

01:15:528 (75528|2,75653|3) - same that 01:07:528.

01:16:278 (76278|2) - to |3|

01:16:528 (76528|3,76778|0,76778|2,76903|1) - Ctrl+H.

01:19:528 (79528|0) - to |2|.

From 01:21:278 to 01:33:278 - Do something about those stacks.

01:34:278 (94278|1) - to |3| please.

01:53:278 - add a note here whistle.

01:56:278 - here too maybe.

01:59:278 - ^^.

02:00:528 (120528|1,120528|3,120653|0,120653|2,120778|3,120778|1,120903|2,120903|0,121028|1) - http://i.imgur.com/Ykzkutc.jpg <- Exactly that.

From 02:01:278 to 02:14:278 - Use 25% Playback Rate and listen carefully those sounds, (decrease to 0% your effects volume too if is necessary) Those patterns arent fitting the song.

02:14:278 - http://i.imgur.com/vcA5UTI.jpg <- 1/6 snap appear!

02:15:278 - http://i.imgur.com/4FmnJqN.jpg <- :3

02:17:528 (137528|1,137778|1,137903|0,138028|1,138153|0,138278|1) - ...... 00:17:278 (17278|3,17528|1,17778|3,17778|2,18028|2,18278|1,18528|3,18778|1,18778|2,19028|1,19278|2,19278|3) -. Now you are adding stairs to the LN so i will skip this...

From 02:17:278 to 02:49:278 - Decide what you want to map: drums, cymbals, guitar riffs, bass, You cant do it all with 4 columns (unfortunately...lol)

02:49:278 to the end - There some notes for the whistles that not fit, check 25% Playback Rate for this. Is more easy do that here than in the kiai time...
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