1. ajee's Normal - 4Key (2.1 stars, 596 notes)
2. DEATH - 4Key (6.26 stars, 2081 notes)
3. Expert - 4Key (5.27 stars, 1710 notes)
4. Extra - 4Key (6.01 stars, 1991 notes)
5. Insane - 4Key (4.12 stars, 1565 notes)
6. Leah's Hard - 4Key (3.28 stars, 1107 notes)
7. W. Armato's Easy - 4Key (1.31 stars, 361 notes)

ajeemaniz wrote:

5K again pls

- [ L e a h ] - wrote:

GD Finished (รีบปั่น )

http://puu.sh/pVEFY/002827a235.osu

WolfyArmato- wrote:

GD finished, AAAAAAAAAAAAAAA xD
http://puu.sh/pVQCx/97283c2689.txt
Thanks x3

Memories- wrote:

Hi, nowsmart
This is mod request from my queue

Mod

1|2|3|4
Leah's Hard
00:14:091 (14091|2) - Change it to column 1, maybe? Fixed
00:32:451 (32451|2) - Change it to column 2 to complete the pattern I think Fixed
00:40:201 (40201|3) - Change it to column 3? Fixed
00:40:326 (40326|2) - Change it to column 4? Fixed
01:38:826 (98826|0,98826|2,98826|1) - Why not merges with next LN I think that Pattern is good enough so i ll skip this mod
01:39:826 (99826|2,99826|3) - ^ ^
01:42:826 (102826|3,102826|2) - ^ ^

Well that's all, it maybe confusing and mazy, but hope you helped, good luck with your map

Thx 4 your mod

Memories- wrote:

Hi, nowsmart
This is mod request from my queue

Song Setup

Leah's HD: I think OD with 7.5 is better, cause there are few of LN

[box=Mod]1|2|3|4
ajee's Normal
00:14:091 - Remove one? no heavy sound here ok
00:16:562 - Missing note? ok
00:24:915 (24915|0,25033|1,25150|2,25268|3) - Flip? no thanks
00:27:576 - I think one LN is better, and pattern like this, is not able on Normal diff ok
00:33:826 (33826|1) - Remove? ok
00:43:826 (43826|1) - Remove this? ok
00:55:826 - I think it better with one LN ok
00:58:076 (58076|1) - Change it to 4, same as pattern before no thanks
01:03:326 - Change one of the LN with note ok
01:06:576 - Add one note here? heavy sound no thanks
01:07:326 - Remove one LN and change it into note or single LN ok
01:13:826 - ^ ok
01:23:326 (83326|1) - Remove? ok
01:23:326 (83326|3) - Change to 3 ok
01:23:576 (83576|1) - Remove? ok
01:23:576 (83576|3) - Change to 3 ok
01:42:076 (102076|2) - Change it to 2, same pattern as before no thanks
01:47:451 (107451|1,107576|0) - Remove it, since it very hard to do at Normal diff ok
01:47:326 (107326|2) - Change to 1, I think, then extend it until 01:47:826 re-pattern
01:47:826 (107826|2) - Don't use triples LN, remove one or two ok
01:48:826 (108826|1) - ^ ok
01:49:826 (109826|3) - ^ ok
01:55:951 (115951|2,116076|1,116201|0) - I have no idea, why the pattern is like this tr-pattern
02:01:736 (121736|1) - Change it to column 1, same pattern as 00:02:327 (2327|0)
02:01:853 (121853|3) - Change it to column 2, same pattern as 00:02:444 (2444|1)
02:02:794 (122794|0) - Change it to column 4, same pattern as 00:03:385 (3385|3)

KizunaBeniko wrote:

Does this map will be ranked ? cause the DEATH Difficulty has a really bad Star Rating, 6.99, but if I transform the LN as simple notes only in the spams, it will drop to 6.24, and there's no changes in the gameplay, it's only harder to read, anyways, it didn't match his Star Rating.

What i wanted to say ; Do not rank the map just for having the right to say : I did a high Stars map. It will be a Free PP map.

For example: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/407472 This map is egal to "DEATH" in terms of difficulty but she's got 5.82 stars

I hope you saw this message, because I really want to play your map, but not for the PPs, only for pure fun, because she's hard and the SVs are a good challenge.

BilliumMoto wrote:

Modding from:

BilliumMoto's Mania Workshop


First Impressions:
ur a lolicon
I was tempted to outright reject this map because of the song choice and how many others have already mapped this, but your SVs and difficulty spread differentiate this from this song's other mania maps

tinkerings inside

[Extra]
00:04:797 (4797|3,4797|2,4915|0,4915|1) - you had jacks on every thing before this, why not keep the minijacks going? this happens a couple more times in the intro. because it has only drum kit sound at this 00:04:915 (4915|1,4915|0) -

00:31:638 (31638|3) - i'm not hearing anything corresponding to this note. because of this, the shield to this note is especially painful to play there is a sound.

00:33:951 (33951|0,34201|3,34263|2,34451|3,34513|2) - keep your mapping of the buzz sounds consistent, also the buzz sound is not 1/4 ok

00:39:576 (39576|0,39576|1,39701|3) - these two buzz sounds are extremely similar, why is one a double LN and the other just a single note? make the note a double LN as well ok

00:42:013 (42013|2,42263|1) - i dont hear anything to these notes there are sounds

00:47:576 (47576|3,47576|0,47576|2,47701|3,47701|0,47701|2) - this feels like overkill for just some buzz sounds

01:02:201 (62201|2,62201|0) - why only two instead of three? i want to add drum sound

01:02:826 (62826|2,62826|3,62826|0,63076|3,63076|0,63076|1) - both of these should be 1/4th shorter than they are ok

01:03:576 (63576|1) - if this is for the hihat sound then it should be 1/4th shorter umm i'm not sure

01:07:826 (67826|2,67826|0,67826|1,67826|3,68076|0,68076|2) - this is really hard, try making the 01:07:826 (67826|2,67826|0) - 1/4th shorter or making then regular notes. whatever you do to them, make sure the same is done for the rest of them too reference DEATH diff, it's a little bit more easy and deserve with 6 stars

01:10:326 (70326|2) - keep your layering consistent with everything before this hihat sound

01:10:513 (70513|2) - ghost note? drum sound

01:11:576 (71576|2) - I don't hear much going on for this LN hihat sound

01:25:763 (85763|1) - ghost same sound with 01:25:701 (85701|0) -

01:27:701 (87701|0) - ima stop pointing out your ghost notes now, you should go over the map and listen carefully for all of these ok ghost (actually there is vocal sound)

ghost notes aside, the rest of this map is pretty good actually, be careful that the SVs to become too much, but i'm not quite good enough to nail all these patterns anyway so I can't tell
remember to hitsound this too

[DEATH]
ohboy

00:31:638 (31638|3,31763|2) - again, more ghost notes, the rest of them are up to you to find and weed out there is a sound but it isn't drum kit sound, idk how to call that sound in english

00:36:951 (36951|2,36951|3,37013|2,37013|3,37076|0,37076|1) - flip this, give the right hand some rest and make the left hand to some work ok and re-pattern

00:39:701 (39701|0) - here is also a buzz, make the same as 00:39:576 (39576|0,39596|1,39617|2,39638|3) ok

01:02:826 (62826|0,62826|3,62826|2,63076|1,63076|0,63076|3) - both should be 1/4th shorter than they are ok

01:10:826 (70826|2,70826|1,70826|3,71076|2,71076|0,71076|1,71076|3) - ^ ok

01:40:576 (100576|0,100638|1,100701|0,100763|1) - what are these 1/4ths going to that is actually 1/4?

02:00:701 (120701|0,120763|2,120763|3,120826|0,120826|1,120888|3,120888|2,120951|0,120951|1,121013|3,121013|2,121076|0,121076|1,121138|2,121138|3,121201|1,121201|0,121263|2,121263|3,121326|0,121326|1) - this gets softer, change the pattern a bit, remove some notes ok

Final impressions:
Good map, best of luck getting it ranked!

Ochasan wrote:

Hi~

NM Request From Ocha's Kwiuwik

Leah's Hard

Leah's Hard
00:41:951 (41951|3,42076|2) rearrange
01:26:076 (86076|1,86201|3,86326|2) ^
02:04:147 (124147|3,124147|1,124264|0) lost timing with song

Extra

Extra
00:37:451 (37451|1,37576|2,37576|3,37576|0) ctrl+h maybe will consider
00:40:951 (40951|3,41076|3) rearrange on this, middle finger weighed (need break after jackhammer) 6 stars, no need a rest lol

DEATH

DEATH
01:20:576 (80576|0,80638|1,80701|0,80763|1,80826|0) i don't know what reason for this .-. rearange maybe there is drum sound

DONE!!!
short mod owo so neat~
call me if spector's expert and insane are clear
bye~

Ochasan wrote:

Hi~

NM Request From Ocha's Kwiuwik

Leah's Hard

Leah's Hard
00:41:951 (41951|3,42076|2) rearrange Fixed
01:26:076 (86076|1,86201|3,86326|2) ^ Fixed
02:04:147 (124147|3,124147|1,124264|0) lost timing with song Fixed

DONE!!!
short mod owo so neat~
call me if spector's expert and insane are clear
bye~

Shinzo- wrote:

[1|2|3|4]

[DEATH]

00:31:763 (31763|2) - i think it's ok to delete this since no sound tho, but it's up to you hehe xD there is a sound lol
00:36:784 (36784|3,36805|2) - hear it again, there's no sound here burst?
00:38:326 - should be 3 note for consistency with 00:36:201 - and 00:37:576 - OK
01:01:701 - 01:05:701 - i just think that you missed a note here ? well other diff's LN is end on the red tick tho it is too hard to put note in this part i will ask to QAT
01:02:326 (62326|1) - kinda wrong snap but idk it will be awkward tho if it's not on the white tick xD so idk snare?
01:03:201 - i think there can be a note here this part has SV, i can't put note lol
01:09:701 - 01:13:701 - maybe same as before OK
01:17:242 (77242|2) - maybe move to 2 for hand balance OK
01:23:326 (83326|0,83326|2,83326|3,83576|2,83576|3,83576|0) - a bit dissapointed lol lol will consider change this to burst pattern
01:39:326 - why not just 2 note on every 1/2 tick ? since this will be just make the gap too far with Extra diff
01:48:576 (108576|2) - the sound is end on 01:48:638 - pls hear again carefully yes i know, but i decide to put 1/2 beat because this part is too hard to focus on the beat
01:55:638 - add note on first collumn pleaseeee @_@ (for consistency tho) haha will consider (previous note is single note)
02:01:326 (121326|0,121388|3,121451|0) - delete, the sound is faded enough from 02:01:326 - nice OK
02:14:220 (134220|1,134387|1) - move to 4th collumn please, just feel unfair with 02:13:593 (133593|0,133747|0,133900|0,134054|0) - since it has 4 note jack OK
and i suggest to make 02:14:387 - into 2 note for consistency with 02:13:900 - OK

[Extra]

00:31:763 (31763|2) - same like DEATH, delete same lol
00:37:326 - should be 3 note ? srsly there's a finish sound
00:38:326 - should be 3 note for consistency with 00:36:201 - and 00:37:576 -
01:22:742 (82742|1,82742|0) - just siggest to reduce 1 note since the sound just not loud as 01:22:076 no thanks, i want to emphasize that beat(82076|3,82076|0,82076|1,82326|1,82326|3,82326|2,82576|2,82576|0,82576|3) - etc.
01:38:826 - you can follow the synt with a LN's so the gap won't be too far with DEATH diff (example change 01:38:951 (98951|1,99076|3,99201|2) - to LN) will consider
01:48:576 (108576|3) - same as DEATH, end on 01:48:638 - but maybe for this diff i just suggest to make it to normal note ? idk same
02:01:388 (121388|3,121451|0,121501|2) - move to 2 3 4. same as DEATH diff, the sound is faded on 02:01:326 - so i think don't make it thrill 02:01:501 (121501|2) - this is hihat sound
02:14:387 (134387|2) - make it 2 note for consistnecy with 02:13:900 (133900|1,133900|0) - OK

Good Luck !

thanks for helpful modding UPDATED

nowsmart wrote:

hi

i'm not sure about my timing

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/478161

thank you

ajeemaniz wrote:

nobody mod easier diffs :C

feel free to reject with replies ^^

Timing http://puu.sh/q8cj5/ebad02bbb2.png
use green for kiai, there's no difference i think

[Leah Hard]
00:08:680 (8680|1,9033|1,9150|2,9385|1,9738|1,9856|2,10091|1) - ctrl + h
00:19:974 (19974|0) - http://puu.sh/q8bYY/0025996b04.png
01:19:576 (79576|3) - use 1/4?
01:27:701 (87701|1) - remove
01:37:326 (97326|0) - to 2
01:43:326 (103326|1,103326|0,103826|1) - 21 2
02:08:088 (128088|0) - ctrl + H, ctrl + Left Arrow http://puu.sh/q8ccn/ad9be5914b.png

ajeemaniz wrote:

[W. Easy]
some spacing feels very empty and rather doesn't works with the flow, considering how strong and intense this part
no reply mean accept
00:24:915 (24915|0,25033|3,25150|1,25268|2) - 1243 for easier reading no, thanks
00:34:826 (34826|1) - stop at 00:35:326 -
00:35:326 (35326|3,36076|0,36701|2) - change to note, LN it makes it harder than NM
00:36:951 - add in 4
00:37:576 - add in 3
00:38:076 - add in 4
00:40:076 - add in 3, 00:40:326 (40326|2) - move to 2
00:41:701 (41701|0) - move to 00:41:576 -
00:42:326 - add in 4
00:42:826 (42826|3) - start in 00:42:701 -
00:48:076 - add pls
00:50:076 - ^
00:50:576 (50576|2) - make ln
00:51:451 (51451|1) - start in 00:51:326 -
01:08:576 - 01:09:576 - 01:10:576 - add
01:11:326 (71326|2) - make ln, 01:11:576 (71576|3) - remove

01:16:076 - 01:17:076 - just like i mention before, the spacing etc still needs to be added
01:18:826 (78826|3) - move to 01:18:701
01:19:076 (79076|1) - move to 01:19:201

01:20:076 - 01:21:076 - add

01:21:826 (81826|0) - try this http://puu.sh/q8bJl/63cb180d37.png
01:29:826 (89826|1) - http://puu.sh/q8bL9/72f2ceda08.png

01:31:826 - until 01:38:826 - add 1/1 QuQ
01:42:076 add

other part is good!

WolfyArmato- wrote:

โทษทีนะพี่ ดาวมันพุ่ง หลัง accept mod จาก ajee อ่ะ ผมขอโทษษษษษษษษ ;w;

Update : http://puu.sh/q9hbm/9b8c88ac41.txt

snoverpk wrote:

irc

2016-07-22 10:33 nowsmart: what problems?
2016-07-22 10:33 nowsmart: i will fix it
2016-07-22 10:34 nowsmart: so appreciated if you help me improve this map
2016-07-22 10:34 snoverpk: 00:59:826 - REMOVE ALL LNS
2016-07-22 10:34 snoverpk: 3k isn't meant for long notes
2016-07-22 10:35 snoverpk: 00:31:326 (31326|0,31326|1,31388|0,31388|1,31492|1,31513|0,31576|0,31576|1,31701|1,31701|0,31826|0,31826|1) - this is too much
2016-07-22 10:35 nowsmart: okay i will consider this issue
2016-07-22 10:35 snoverpk: burst is too fast
2016-07-22 10:35 snoverpk: 00:34:951 (34951|2,34951|3,35013|0,35013|1,35076|2,35076|3) - change to 14 23 14
2016-07-22 10:36 snoverpk: this map is obviously made for pp
2016-07-22 10:36 nowsmart: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5663215
2016-07-22 10:36 nowsmart: is it ok?
2016-07-22 10:36 snoverpk: i think so i'll check later
2016-07-22 10:37 nowsmart: okay
2016-07-22 10:37 snoverpk: 01:09:576 (69576|2,69596|1,69617|0,69638|2,69659|1,69680|0) - these bursts are too fast
2016-07-22 10:38 snoverpk: 01:32:451 (92451|0,92451|1,92513|3,92513|2,92576|1,92576|0,92576|3) - instead of having a jack
2016-07-22 10:38 snoverpk: change to 13 24 13
2016-07-22 10:39 snoverpk: 01:33:201 (93201|0,93201|1,93263|2,93326|0,93326|3,93326|1) - same here, change to 14 23 14
2016-07-22 10:39 snoverpk: 01:34:451 (94451|2,94451|3,94513|1,94576|3,94576|0,94576|2) - 14 23 14
2016-07-22 10:39 snoverpk: 01:35:263 (95263|1,95326|2) - 32
2016-07-22 10:40 snoverpk: 01:37:826 (97826|0,97951|0,98076|0,98201|0,98326|0,98451|0) - this feels weird
2016-07-22 10:41 snoverpk: 01:39:326 (99326|3,99388|2,99451|3,99513|2,99576|3,99638|2,99701|3,99763|2) - your decision but you could change this to 43424342
2016-07-22 10:41 snoverpk: 01:55:826 - remove these LNs from the jumptrills, they inflate star rating too much
2016-07-22 10:42 snoverpk: map feels like 5.5*
2016-07-22 10:42 snoverpk: that's everything for death diff i guess
2016-07-22 10:42 nowsmart: okay
2016-07-22 10:42 nowsmart: thank you so much
2016-07-22 10:43 snoverpk: i'll mod extra too
2016-07-22 10:43 snoverpk: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1023071 LeaF - NANO DEATH!!!!! [Extra]]
2016-07-22 10:43 snoverpk: 00:33:951 (33951|0,34201|3,34201|2) - your decision but you don't need to have these LNs just because of the bursts being fast
2016-07-22 10:43 snoverpk: 00:33:951 (33951|0,34201|2,34201|3) - there's too much 12 34 12 here
2016-07-22 10:44 snoverpk: consider removing some
2016-07-22 10:44 snoverpk: 00:40:951 (40951|2,40951|3,41076|3,41076|2,41201|3,41201|2,41326|3,41326|2,41451|3,41576|2) - this pattern is harder than the one in DEATH
2016-07-22 10:45 snoverpk: it's really weird to hit when there's no note on 3 with the long note
2016-07-22 10:45 nowsmart: umm
2016-07-22 10:45 nowsmart: how to fix this part
2016-07-22 10:46 snoverpk: make it more random
2016-07-22 10:46 snoverpk: instead of always having 12 34 12 34 12 34
2016-07-22 10:46 snoverpk: everywhere
2016-07-22 10:46 snoverpk: this map is almost boring because you overuse 12 and 34 patterns
2016-07-22 10:46 snoverpk: 00:59:826 - also i still don't agree with this long note part
2016-07-22 10:46 snoverpk: it's much harder than everything else in this map
2016-07-22 10:47 nowsmart: wil consider about LN
2016-07-22 10:47 snoverpk: 01:15:076 (75076|1,75076|0,75138|3,75138|2,75201|0,75201|1,75263|2,75326|1,75326|0,75326|3) -
2016-07-22 10:47 snoverpk: 01:15:576 (75576|0,75576|1,75638|2,75638|3,75701|0,75701|1,75763|2,75826|0,75826|1,75826|3) -
2016-07-22 10:47 snoverpk: 01:16:576 (76576|2,76576|3,76638|1,76638|0,76701|2,76701|3,76763|1,76826|2,76826|0,76826|3) -
2016-07-22 10:47 snoverpk: no
2016-07-22 10:47 snoverpk: pp patterns are boring
2016-07-22 10:48 snoverpk: so there's everything i have to say
2016-07-22 10:48 snoverpk: just please remove some of the pp patterns
2016-07-22 10:48 snoverpk: the map is extremely bland with them
2016-07-22 10:48 nowsmart: thank you very much
2016-07-22 10:49 snoverpk: and especially DEATH difficulty's long notes are much harder than the rest of the map
2016-07-22 10:49 nowsmart: and i will ask to QAT again
2016-07-22 10:49 snoverpk: extra is also annoying to play
2016-07-22 10:50 snoverpk: i'll post log on thread
2016-07-22 10:50 nowsmart: ok

Another Lie wrote:

meanwhile~
NANO DEATH!!!!! old version & this new version
kinda much different Ignore me pls~
*Stars

Lenfried- wrote:

WELL WELL WELL WHAT DO WE HAVE HERE

posting for accessibility

will consider full modding. crap ill ditch 100%-ing epic battle fantasy for this

also if you have more lolicore, just PM me for mods *wink wink

REUSE-ABLE wrote:

Im blessing this map
In the name of master mapper,and the rookies.
+1kudosu
/-A-)/~*

nowsmart wrote:

(i don't want to see Stepmania pattern.)

DixonBlackwing wrote:

Hello Nowsmart :3
Mod here Sorry for long delay x.x

[Insane]
00:17:621 (17621|3) - move to col 3 more balance? no thanks
00:34:513 - why not add here, you even layer much less prominent sound at 00:34:763 (34763|2) - i follow drum kit sound
00:35:013 - the kick here also prominent, suggest to add here OK
00:37:326 - you can turn one of the note into LN to cover the long synth sound here. no thanks
00:43:263 - http://puu.sh/qu3RD/39371757c0.png this will fit the PR better. ^
00:48:076 (48076|1) - move to col 3? this triple different Pitch with the triple before and after this. will consider (i head they are same sound)
00:53:076 - ^ the same ^
00:58:201 - there's a bit kick sound there, i suggest add to make it consistent. OK
01:06:826 - http://puu.sh/qu487/5e1f121af5.png a bit of my suggestion here since the synth sound here actually 2 sound instead of one. no thanks
01:19:576 - you can add a 1/2 LN here to cover the buzz sound here, more fun imo OK
01:33:263 - i don't think you should ignore this, you even map the less audible sound at 01:34:513 - OK
01:36:076 (96076|2,96201|2,96326|2) - don't understand why this triple jack, try move 01:36:201 (96201|2) - to col 2? OK
01:37:263 - also add one more note here. OK
01:44:826 - started from here, make the triple at different column? here a bit different pitch, i think you can make it different. OK
01:50:826 (110826|3,110951|3,111076|3,111201|3,111326|3,111451|3) - i recommend to just move all of this to column 3, the trill at this section have clearly different pitch with the trill at 01:49:826 - ,you might want to make it different. no thanks
01:55:201 - try mapping the buzz here? a bit empty here. OK
[Extra]
00:27:371 - 0,5x SV here a bit unreadable here, maybe you can try to gradually speed up the sv so it comes out more smoothly? will consider
00:39:451 (39451|1,39513|3) - i expect 1/4 LN here for buzz sound. no thanks
00:42:701 (42701|0) - move to col 2 more balance. OK
00:42:701 - sv 1,5x? 2,0x seems too strong because no special emphasis there. no thanks
00:46:076 - 00:46:451 - 00:46:701 - 00:47:076 - 00:47:326 - i suggest add a note here, they are the same kick as 00:46:326 - and 00:46:826 - OK
00:48:576 (48576|3,48638|0,48701|3,48763|0,48826|3,48826|2,48826|1) - Ctrl+H this? so it would mirror 00:49:576 - , they both are different pitch no thanks
00:57:701 - add note here, have same kick as 00:58:701 - OK
00:59:326 - also add to be consistent with 00:57:826 - OK
01:10:201 - why not map the LN the same as 01:09:826 - ? you make it the same with the previous LN. same as 01:02:201 -
01:18:701 - the sound isn't that strong to warrants 4 notes imo, delete one and add one at 01:18:638 - ? there is cymbal
01:32:451 - just want to say that this pattern is even harder than death diff, due to 01:32:201 (92201|1,92326|1,92451|1,92576|1,92701|1) - 01:32:326 (92326|1,92326|0,92451|1,92451|0,92576|1,92576|0) - .. the anchor at this bpm would be too much even for this kind of SR diff.. re-patterned
01:32:951 (92951|1,93076|1,93201|1,93326|1) - this one that comes after 5 notes anchor before also makes unnecessary spike imo. ^
01:47:826 - jumptrill here, i notice it's all 12-34 jumptrill, maybe you can make 14-23 jumptrill for drum that have distinctive different pitch there? so it won't be constant same jumptrill. no thanks

Sorry not much, running out of time :3
Good luck for nano desu

- Ly0572 - wrote:

hi nowsmart~
req from Ly0 and Syadow's MANiA QUEUE
|1|2|3|4|

ajee's Normal

00:31:326 - y nat map the sound here, try putting LN no thanks
01:18:617 - missed a note here i guess what?
01:20:576 - try adding LN here too OK
01:42:034 - i suggest this http://puu.sh/rjAMe/407c6308ee.png no thanks

w.armato's easy

01:43:326 (103326|1) - move to 1 no thanks
rest are fine to me

thats all i can help~ gl

Lenfried- wrote:

might as well mod this now

DEATH

00:28:826 (28826|2) - to 4 or 00:28:951 (28951|2) - to 2 nice! ok
00:34:451 - if you're mean enough, adding 1 is possible no thanks
00:42:701 - now you can quad this because of the short empty space after it. Much more expressive same sound as 00:43:326 (43326|2,43326|0,43326|3) -
00:47:201 (47201|1,47263|0) - swap col for some counter flow ok
01:35:263 (95263|2,95326|1,95451|2) - swap for balance no thanks
01:37:701 (97701|0) - would be cool if this short LN was in 4 ^
01:47:576 - rather bland transition
01:48:576 - might as well utilize super jumps on stuff like this (x1.9, x.0.1 combinations) these will be really perfect for 01:52:951 - will consider
02:00:326 (120326|0,120326|1,120451|0,120451|1,120576|0,120576|1,120701|0,120701|1,120826|0,120826|1,120951|0,120951|1) - swap col, the left hand LNs staying at 1 is visually really boring. swapping them barely makes any difference in gameplay but it aesthetically helps nice OK

extra

00:59:451 (59451|2,59513|3) - swap for counter flow no thanks
01:34:951 (94951|1,95013|0) - swap for longer trill ok

there's not a lot to pin point but there are some unbalanced sections which could be intentional for laning and similarity reasons

expert

00:47:201 (47201|0,47263|1) - swap col cause why not ok
00:59:826 - to 01:14:576 - you kinda botched your chances of utilizing a lot of triple combinations. This is a really "safe" pattern usage. re-patterned

welp good luck!

Another Lie wrote:

Req mod from my queue

ajee's normal

00:25:385 - why not add LN until here 00:26:069 - ? added
01:02:826 (62826|3,63076|0) - why not same column? or double note? no thanks
01:17:242 - maybe add note? added

Leah's Hard

00:31:326 (31326|2) - why not make it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6295838 re-pattern
01:17:242 - add note? since you're adding note to this place 01:16:992 - added

Sorry nowsmart, i can't mod any higher diff. You are not "nowsmart" but "alreadysmart".

Valentrixe wrote:

fun map <3

Mod Inside

[Insane]

1. 00:10:562 - better add note in here, to continue the flow ok
2. 00:10:915 (10915|3,10915|2) - inconsistent with 00:08:091 (8091|2,8091|0,8091|3) - , it's okay to use triple here imo no thanks
3. 00:11:974 (11974|1,11974|2,12503|3,12503|1) - make them triple? i think they have the same sound as 00:11:268 (11268|3,11268|0,11268|2) ok
4. 00:16:562 (16562|3,16562|2) - triple? no thanks
5. 00:21:856 - same as before ok
6. 00:22:209 - ^ ok
7. 00:23:268 (23268|2,23268|1,23797|2,23797|0) - ^ ok
8. 00:28:076 (28076|1,28326|1,28576|1,28826|1,29076|1) - heavy on left side, consider to rebalance this no thanks
9. 00:34:326 (34326|0) - double? ok
10. 01:00:201 (60201|1,60201|0,60201|3) - i think it's reversed with 01:00:076 (60076|3,60076|2) - , it's should be double while the lower one should be triple (because the snare) i follow the main sound, will consider
11. 01:01:076 (61076|1,61076|0,61201|2,61201|3,61201|0) - ^ ^
12. 01:02:076 (62076|2,62076|3,62201|0,62201|1,62201|3,62451|2,62451|3,62576|0,62576|2,62576|1) - ^
    and so on ^
13. 01:30:826 (90826|0,91076|0) - add LNs? i think it's a nice touch if you do no thanks
14. 02:10:098 - same as before ok

sorry if i'm only modded one diff Dx