Rivals_7 wrote:

There's an ambiguous snap on the 4 highest diff that I concern. There's also quite a lot of missing Hitsound. so i have to pop the bubble for the time being.

[General]

Add "Arzenvald" for Ajee's new username ok

1|2|3|4

[W. Armato's Easy]

how about HP 6.8? well up to you tho ok

00:24:915 - your current pattern are kinda unpredictable to newbies yet doesnt relevant with the noise so here's a suggestion. (Dont forget with the Hitsound tho)
https://puu.sh/vF1UR/b4ccd8b6ce.jpg accepted, re-pattern to 4-1-4-1-4

01:07:826 (67826|1,68201|3) - not stacked? the have the same rythm with the stacking before? ok, decided to add note and re-pattern

01:08:826 (68826|1,69201|3) - this too and etc ^

01:30:576 (90576|1,90826|2,91076|2,91326|2) - ctrl+H. more relient movement towards the LN - 01:31:576 (91576|3) - ok

[ajee's Normal]

01:00:576 (60576|0) - 01:04:576 (64576|3) - 01:08:576 (68576|1) - 01:12:576 (72576|1) - should be LR_Snare Hit instead ok

02:01:076 - maybe end one of those 2 LNs here? ok

[Leah's Hard]

01:00:576 (60576|2) - end the LN 1/4 Earlier. refer Insane, Extra

01:02:576 (62576|2) - this too (But dont refer Insane, Extra yet since yea its wrong snapped) The noise only exist for a 1/2 snap

01:06:576 (66576|1) - this too and etc all accepted

[Insane]

00:44:076 (44076|0,44326|3,44576|0,44701|3) - 00:56:076 (56076|3,56326|0,56576|3,56701|0) - This doesnt land correctly at 1/4. They are all should be 1/12 Earlier oh my mistake, ok

01:02:576 (62576|1) - this should end 1/4 early. pay attention with the noise ok

01:06:576 (66576|2) - this too and etc ok

[Expert]

00:44:076 (44076|0,44326|3,44576|0,44701|3) - 00:56:076 (56076|0,56326|3,56576|0,56701|3) - 1/12 thing ok

01:02:576 (62576|1,62576|0) - and etc. 1/4 earlier ok

01:02:576 (62576|1,62576|0) - missing LR_SnareHit ok

02:01:076 (121076|0,121201|0,121326|0,121451|0) - would move this to 2 so left midfinger doesnt dying with all of those jack bias which is apparently really heavy on the left ok

02:01:742 (121742|1,121859|2) - move to left 1x if you agree with above ok

[Extra]

00:44:076 (44076|0,44326|3,44576|0,44701|3) - 00:56:076 (56076|3,56326|0,56576|3,56701|0) - 1/12 ok

01:02:576 (62576|1,62576|0) - 01:06:576 (66576|1,66576|0) - 01:08:576 (68576|1,68576|2) - etc. end 1/4 earlier ok

[Death]

1/12 thing and 1/4 earlier thing also applied ok

01:01:576 (61576|0) - 01:05:576 (65576|3) - and so on. missing LR_KickNormal. Refer your lower diffs ok

01:40:076 - think you forgot the LN. the rythm are similar too - 01:40:576 (100576|3) - ok

Protastic101 wrote:

Rechecked the snaps and hitsounds so it's good to go except for one thing in the death difficulty - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8031705 at 00:47:763 (47763|1,47794|0,47826|1) - . Would really not recommend using a 1/8 one handed minitrill at 240 bpm lol. I'd remove 00:47:826 (47826|3) - with the cymbal since the lower diffs only use the kick + snare, and make it like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8031722

Aside from that, got permission from rivals to rebub


third time's the charm

juankristal wrote:

Hey that is the next map I was planning to pop. Don't spoil my stuff

YaHao wrote:

juankristal wrote:

Hey that is the next map I was planning to pop. Don't spoil my stuff

L M A O

Do not nominate a beatmap if you cannot reasonably judge it. Being able to reasonably play a beatmap is a core part of being able to judge a beatmap’s quality. If you are multiple tiers below the playing level of the map we may call your ability to judge it into question.

YaHao wrote:

juankristal wrote:

Hey that is the next map I was planning to pop. Don't spoil my stuff

L M A O

Sinnoh wrote:

ok but why is the bg completely unrelated
i'm pretty sure there's enough kancolle wallpapers out there to choose from

Arzenvald wrote:

i think nowsmart himself has ability to judge what he mapped, dk much about rule
grats nowsmart and yay gd qualified /w/

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Arzenvald wrote:

i think nowsmart himself has ability to judge what he mapped, dk much about rule
grats nowsmart and yay gd qualified /w/

They're mentioning the BNs who nominated this map.

Maxus wrote:

after play this, i kinda feel the outro part lacks additional red line timing?
I mean, the part at 02:15:393 - , felt like they didn't really synchronize with the beats of the mentioned sound.
i think it should be like:

02:16:953 - Delete this first, since this red line makes 02:17:578 - doesn't sync properly with the beat.

02:15:393 - 165 BPM
02:15:574 - 180 BPM
02:15:907 - 143 BPM
02:17:585 - 123 BPM

not sure if worth mention / there's more, but i think this needs to be mentioned.

pishifat wrote:

02:15:907 - 02:17:585 - should each be like 10ms earlier
02:16:955 (136955|1) - also to make sure this isn't 10ms late after moving those timing points, might need to add another red line

Protastic101 wrote:

rip me and exams

all diffs
00:27:576 - You don't need the 1x SV here because when the BPM changes, the scroll speed is automatically affected again regardless of SV.

01:47:826 - Is this timing point necessary? It's still 4/4, 240bpm, and on the first downbeat of the measure, so it seems redundant. Kiai is toggled on for it, but you can do that just with a green point.