1. Hard (0 stars, 1 notes)
2. Normal (1.71 stars, 36 notes)

Crowie wrote:

short mod

[General]
bg miku is no. 1 not no. 2 wth!!11

1) The breaks in kiai are really small, maybe extend them to 1/1 tick
break 1 start 00:37:426 -
break 2 start 00:43:826 -

2) blankets are a bit rough

[Hard]

• 00:19:226 (3,4) - reverse it: slider - circle to fit music better- >Done
  00:29:226 (2,3,4) - 2, 3 change to sliders, 4 to a circle - >Done

[Insane]
General: change up DS sometimes, especially for changes in music like 00:49:826 (4,1)

• 00:26:426 (4,5,6,7,8) - this pattern is really weird, still couldn't get it after a couple tries - >Done
  
  v Try this v

  
  00:28:026 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^ - >Done
  00:36:826 (3) - separate into a jump followed by a triple or ministream
  
  v Like this v

  
  or something like
  
  00:37:226 (5) - end this on a white tick (if you don't change into a ministream)
  00:40:626 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing too large compared to the rest of the map, use DS 1.0 or below for this stream - >Done

• 
  General
  

1. If you want to use a silent sliderslide, make sure it's 44 byte, not 32-bit/64 bye, which is unrankable. You can replace it with this http://puu.sh/nVFh9/f6dc7ce852.zip
   
   Insane
2. 00:07:226 - Add circle here on top of 00:07:026 (1) -
3. 00:08:026 (3) - This slider is too long it should end 00:08:326 - here
4. 00:07:426 (2) - NC should be here and not 00:07:026 (1) -
5. 00:23:026 (4) - This should be a long slider ending 00:23:826 - here
6. 00:49:026 (1,2) - Make this into a slider like 00:48:226 (3,4) -
7. 00:47:426 (1) - don't NC here NC 00:48:226 (3) - here instead
   

6th wrote:

SPOILER

Please make sure I accepted your request before starting M4M... I hate the song so I should have denied it tbhSorry about that ;;;

What is that BG lol

[Easy]
00:26:626 (3,4) - Don't make them go back it's useless
00:36:226 (3) - What about rotating it to not make it look the same as before ?
00:43:426 (3) - CTRL+J, easier to follow and more predictable - > Fix
00:46:226 (2) - Move it up
00:57:826 - Change volume here - > Done

[Normal]
Don't make beginning exactly the same as Easy please
00:14:226 (3) - No jump in easier difficulties - > Fix
00:29:826 (5) - Move it up for better flow - > Done
00:33:426 (6) - This should be upper according to what you've done here 00:31:426 - > Done
00:49:826 (5) - Move it to the right to make it look as at 00:47:426 (1) -

[Hard]
00:24:026 (1,2,3,1,2) - CTRL+G then replace them - > Done
00:42:426 - It feels empty -> fix short slider -> long repeat slider

[Insane]
00:01:426 - I don't like it so much
00:22:626 (3) - Make it look like others please -> Fix
00:33:226 (5) - ^ - > Fix
00:34:026 (3) - Make it straight ? -> place left
00:45:434 - No reason to overlap since you can avoid it imo
00:56:226 (2) - Change to 2 circles ? - > Done

Good luck !

hyouri wrote:

Hello M4M

• 
  General
  

1. If you want to use a silent sliderslide, make sure it's 44 byte, not 32-bit/64 bye, which is unrankable. You can replace it with this http://puu.sh/nVFh9/f6dc7ce852.zip -> > change
   
   Insane
2. 00:07:226 - Add circle here on top of 00:07:026 (1) - > add
3. 00:08:026 (3) - This slider is too long it should end 00:08:326 - here > Fix
4. 00:07:426 (2) - NC should be here and not 00:07:026 (1) - > Fix
5. 00:23:026 (4) - This should be a long slider ending 00:23:826 - here
6. 00:49:026 (1,2) - Make this into a slider like 00:48:226 (3,4) -
7. 00:47:426 (1) - don't NC here NC 00:48:226 (3) - here instead> Fix

guineaQ wrote:

모드 하나 하나에 제대로 답변해주시길 바랍니다. 그냥 대충 "거의 다 고쳤습니다" "almost fixed"라고 하면 다신 모딩 안해드릴꺼니까요.

Insane

일단 전체적으로 봤을 떄는 노래에 비해 인세인이라고 부르기에는 좀 너무 쉽네요. 근데 이 맵에다가 OD 8 HP 8은 너무한듯;; OD 6~7 하고 HP 7이 적당할듯 하네요. 그리고 점프가 거의 없- 아니 아예 없네요? -> OD 6.5 HP 7.5 로 다운 시켰습니다. (디스턴스를 유지하다보니 점프가 거의 업다 싶습니다 ㅇㅅㅇ)

1. 00:01:026 - 에서 00:04:226 - 까지 - 일단 이 리듬은 하드에서 쓰기 매우 적합한 리듬인데 인세인에서 쓰기에는 임팩트가 너무 부족한 리듬인것 같네요. ->첫파트는 사진에 보이는 대로 했고 다음은 반복슬라이더 대신 노드를 앞에 2개다음 슬라이더가 오게했습니다.
   
   뭐 이런 리듬이라도 써서

   
   1/2들을 다 채우는게 난이도에 알맞을 겁니다
2. 00:04:626 (2,3) - 여기서 부터는 보컬에 중점을 두시는데 그러면 두 서클로 처리하는 것 보단 그냥 1/2 슬라가 더 분위기에 맞습니다, 솔직히 00:04:826 (3) - 이거는 피아노 때문에 넣은건 알겠는데 그냥 애매하게 둘다 잡으려고 하는것 보단 그냥 슬라 끝으로 처리하는게 일관성을 위해 더 좋습니다.->슬라이더로 교체
3. 00:05:426 (1) - 이거 보컬 3/4에 끝나는 거라서 -> 슬라이더 수정
   
   이 리듬이 맞음

   
4. 00:06:026 (7) - 이건 진짜 점프로 만들어주셔야 할 것 같네요, 아무리 들어도 전 음이랑 차이가 너무 나는 음이라서 -> 디스턴스 1.5 로 점프 만들었습니다.
5. 00:06:226 (3,4,5,6,7) - 뭐 이 리듬이 틀린건 아니지만 -> 수정
   
   저에겐 이게 더 난이도 상으로나 리듬으로나 더 땡김

   
   가장 중요한건 일단 00:06:426 - 여기가 누를 수 있는 무언가를 배치하는겁니다. 00:05:026 (4) - 이 노트와는 달리 1/4에서 음이 계속 이어지지 않고 끓어지기 때문에 그냥 1/4 리피트로 하면 무언가 어색한 느낌이 나요. 그리고 00:06:826 - 이 부분은 점프로 -> 수정
6. 00:07:426 (1,2) - 이런 심플한 담요 슬라 패턴보단 대칭 패턴이 훨 어울릴듯 -> 지금 상태가 좋은것같습니다.
7. 00:11:026 (1,2) - 리듬 ctrl+g -> 수정
8. 00:13:426 (2,3,4) - 일단 00:13:426 (2,3) - 이 리듬 ctrl+g 해주시고, 00:14:026 (4) - 이거 없애시고 3번 슬라를 리피트로 -> 수정
   
   이렇게

   
9. 00:14:226 (1,2,3,4,5) - ㅇㅅㅇ
   
   
   여기는 보컬이 늘어지고 있는 부분이라서 자잘한 피아노하고 드럼을 잡아주는 리듬이 좋음 -> 수정
10. 00:16:226 (1,2,3,4,5) - 중간에 1/4 드럼이 있으니 무시하지 말고 맵해주세요 -> 수정
    
    리듬

    
11. 00:17:426 (4,5) - 리듬 ctrl+g -> 수정
12. 00:19:626 (4,5) - 그냥 1/1 슬라이더가 분위기에 맞는것 같네요, 어차피 00:19:826 - 에 튀는 소리가 있는 것도 아니라서 -> 수정
13. 00:22:626 (3,4,5) - -> 수정
    
    ㅇ

    
    3에서 부터 피아노가 거의 없어지고 보컬만 남기 때문에 1/2를 쓰기에는 매우 애매해지니 1/1 슬라로 처리하시는게 좋습니다
14. 00:24:026 (1,2,3) - 그냥 심심하게 서클 - 슬라 -슬라 보단 그냥 5 1/2 연타로 하는게 더 재미있을것 같네요. -> 1/3연타 1/1 슬라이더로 수정
15. 00:26:426 (4,5,6) - 하고 00:28:026 (3,4,5) - 이런 3연타 치기 매우 뭐같습니다. 왠만하면 전 패턴 난이도 하나 때문에 뭘 바꾸라고 하지 않는데 이건 제발 바꿔주세요. Remote Control ㅁㅊ -> 아직까지는 괜찮아 보입니다. 다시한번 생각해볼게요.
16. 키아이는 전체적으로 배치를 더 어렵게 바꾸셔야 합니다, 지금 이대로는 그냥 1/4 연타 추가된 하드 수준밖에 되지 않습니다. 키아이만 봤을 때 1/2 슬라이더를 너무 많이 쓰셔서 노래에 비해 너무 쉬운 느낌이 났습니다. -> 알겠습니다.
17. 뉴콤에 대해서: 제가 한 5번 정도 맵을 다시 봤지만 도대체 무슨 기준으로 뉴콤을 넣으셨는지 이해가 안가네요;; 그냥 간단하고 쉽게 다운비트마다 뉴콤 넣어주세요. 뉴콤은 HP에도 영향을 주기 때문에 너무 가볍게 보시면 안됩니다. - > 콤보설정하는 것좀 알려주실수있나요??

일단 1시간 반이나소모해서 여기서 스톱
배치도 집을까 했는데 리듬을 바꾸면 쓸모없어지니 일단 배치는 잡지 않았습니다. 일단 점프좀 넣어주시고 디스턴스도 음에 맞춰서 변형을 좀 주시면 훨 나아질것 같습니다.

1. May I ask why you used 2 for tickrate? Most maps use 1 though.

1. 00:01:826 (2,3,4) - These red ticks 00:01:626 - 00:02:426 - 00:03:226 are much more prominent than what you have tbh, kinda understand that you want to put objects on white ticks but this really sounds a lot better when they're on those red ticks. Same applies to 00:51:426 (2) - 00:54:626 (2,3) .
2. 00:25:826 (2,4) - This overlap doesn't look nice imo.
3. 00:29:826 (3) - Up to you but you can flip this one up so it will look symmetric with 00:28:226 (1) .
4. 00:39:737 - Unsnapped green line, doesn't really matter that much but it would be nice if you can snap it to 00:39:726 .

1. 00:01:826 (2,3,4) - Same as Easy.
2. 00:10:626 (2) - Maybe NC here since you did the same thing in Hard.
3. Overall you need more 1/2 rhythms in kiai. The rhythm right now you have is pretty much same as Easy except that you cut some long sliders into smaller ones. I would like to see you use more 1/2 rhythms to follow vocals in kiai like what you did on 00:16:026 (1,2) - 00:18:626 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3) .

1. 00:14:826 (7) - Try not to use repeat sliders with 2 or more reverse cuz it will ruin the flow, rarely any maps do this these days.
2. Overall flows nice but needs some aesthetic stuff to work on.

1. Don't use HP 7.5 pls it's totally overkill, judge from the star rating I guess 6 is already enough.
2. 00:10:626 - Imo this should be clickable, I would just remove that spinner and map normally like what you did in other diffs.
3. 00:28:226 (6) - Feels better if this is a slider imo.
4. Overall flow and aesthetics could be improved in some points but I'm not good at modding higher diffs so I can't really point out those stuff, sry ;-;

Electoz wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue~

[General]

1. May I ask why you used 2 for tickrate? Most maps use 1 though.

[Easy]

1. 00:01:826 (2,3,4) - These red ticks 00:01:626 - 00:02:426 - 00:03:226 are much more prominent than what you have tbh, kinda understand that you want to put objects on white ticks but this really sounds a lot better when they're on those red ticks. Same applies to 00:51:426 (2) - 00:54:626 (2,3) .
2. 00:25:826 (2,4) - This overlap doesn't look nice imo.
3. 00:29:826 (3) - Up to you but you can flip this one up so it will look symmetric with 00:28:226 (1) .
4. 00:39:737 - Unsnapped green line, doesn't really matter that much but it would be nice if you can snap it to 00:39:726 .

[Normal]

1. 00:01:826 (2,3,4) - Same as Easy.
2. 00:10:626 (2) - Maybe NC here since you did the same thing in Hard.
3. Overall you need more 1/2 rhythms in kiai. The rhythm right now you have is pretty much same as Easy except that you cut some long sliders into smaller ones. I would like to see you use more 1/2 rhythms to follow vocals in kiai like what you did on 00:16:026 (1,2) - 00:18:626 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3) .

[Hard]

1. 00:14:826 (7) - Try not to use repeat sliders with 2 or more reverse cuz it will ruin the flow, rarely any maps do this these days. -> Change
2. Overall flows nice but needs some aesthetic stuff to work on.

[Insane]

1. Don't use HP 7.5 pls it's totally overkill, judge from the star rating I guess 6 is already enough. -> 7
2. 00:10:626 - Imo this should be clickable, I would just remove that spinner and map normally like what you did in other diffs.
3. 00:28:226 (6) - Feels better if this is a slider imo.
4. Overall flow and aesthetics could be improved in some points but I'm not good at modding higher diffs so I can't really point out those stuff, sry ;-;

Ok hope my mod helped, good luck~

1. Why not add a blank sound file as soft-sliderslide2.wav? when you use tick sounds in normal difficulty like 00:40:626 – , the sliderslide sounds a bit odd because the other parts’s slidersldie was muted.

1. 00:06:226 (2) -this isn’t snapped correctly, the triplet starts 00:06:026 -, while there is not beat at 00:06:326 -.
2. 00:36:826 (3) -try changing it to two circles, which fit the same drums in music better than a 1/2 slider
3. 00:53:826 (1) -miss a whistle
4. For the hitsounds of kiai time, I think you’d better keep a consistent. For example you could add clap on each 2ND/4th white ticks, like 00:37:826 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -. But 00:30:026 (1) -00:32:026 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) -these claps suddenly follows the vocal, this kind of shift doesn’t sound well too, The other way is that you could use claps on each white tick, like 00:41:026 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) –

1. 00:36:026 (4,2) -overlapping can be avoided by moving 00:36:226 (1) -to (306, 86), 00:36:626 (2) -to (440,136)
2. You need to add claps to KIAI times that would be good to sound when playing, only whistles sounds too soft for the chorus. Don’t forget tips for insane is applied for this difficulty too.

1. 00:50:626 (1) -00:53:826 (1) –‘s sliderhead need whistle to match the piano on music imo.

1. 00:31:426 (1,3) -you can adjust 00:33:026 (3) –‘s place to avoid overlapping, making your map moe neat!http://puu.sh/oPiKI/f549a0d04f.jpg，don’t forget to adjust 00:34:226 (4,1) –‘s place to meet the request for distance snap.
2. 00:50:626 -65% volume for this part is kinda noisy, try 50% instead.
3. 00:52:226 (3) -move the whistle sound from slidertail to sliderhead, these is no beat on music on 00:53:026 -, but there is an strong piano on 00:52:226 -

Fycho wrote:

[General]

1. Why not add a blank sound file as soft-sliderslide2.wav? when you use tick sounds in normal difficulty like 00:40:626 – , the sliderslide sounds a bit odd because the other parts’s slidersldie was muted.->Add soft-sliderslide2.wav

[Insane]

1. 00:06:226 (2) -this isn’t snapped correctly, the triplet starts 00:06:026 -, while there is not beat at 00:06:326 -. ->Change 1 circle
2. 00:36:826 (3) -try changing it to two circles, which fit the same drums in music better than a 1/2 slider->Change
3. 00:53:826 (1) -miss a whistle -> Done
4. For the hitsounds of kiai time, I think you’d better keep a consistent. For example you could add clap on each 2ND/4th white ticks, like 00:37:826 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -. But 00:30:026 (1) -00:32:026 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) -these claps suddenly follows the vocal, this kind of shift doesn’t sound well too, The other way is that you could use claps on each white tick, like 00:41:026 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) – ->change hitsound place

[Hard]

1. 00:36:026 (4,2) -overlapping can be avoided by moving 00:36:226 (1) -to (306, 86), 00:36:626 (2) -to (440,136) -> Move
2. You need to add claps to KIAI times that would be good to sound when playing, only whistles sounds too soft for the chorus. Don’t forget tips for insane is applied for this difficulty too.-> Done

[Normal]

1. 00:50:626 (1) -00:53:826 (1) –‘s sliderhead need whistle to match the piano on music imo.-> Done

[Easy]

1. 00:31:426 (1,3) -you can adjust 00:33:026 (3) –‘s place to avoid overlapping, making your map moe neat!http://puu.sh/oPiKI/f549a0d04f.jpg，don’t forget to adjust 00:34:226 (4,1) –‘s place to meet the request for distance snap.->Fix
2. 00:50:626 -65% volume for this part is kinda noisy, try 50% instead..->
3. 00:52:226 (3) -move the whistle sound from slidertail to sliderhead, these is no beat on music on 00:53:026 -, but there is an strong piano on 00:52:226 --> Done[/[/list]

Good luck~~

Kyle Y wrote:

[Easy]

00:26:626 (3,4) - poor overlap, which you should avoid using to make your map clear to read. -> Fix

00:40:626 (4,1) - If you really want this map become better, please blanket all slider.

00:47:426 - be careful with the slider end. big tick mainly contain strong beat sound, which you cannot put slider end here. Easy and Normal usually use 2 big ticks per one nc. Please do not put slider end at the nc position, like 00:47:426 - . ->Fixe to 1/1 slider
(ref: p/4694342)
suggestion:


I am really a free modder. I found that this Easy diff is totally the same with KanaRin's Version in terms of rhythm, Except 00:41:026 - ~ 00:50:626 - . I don't know why..... I hope it is okay by chance.

[Hard]

Same as Easy diff, please pay more attention on the overlapping.
00:04:826 (3,1) - 00:25:826 (3,1) - etc.

If you care about the looking of patterns, you can use more blankets
00:16:226 (2,3) - 00:43:826 (4,1) - etc. -> Fix

00:37:026 - you can try this also, I think it is better if you stack slider 5 and next slider 1. Just a little suggestion, fix it optionally. -> Fix


00:42:426 (4,1) - misleading ds, you use constant ds for the previous part, and it is un-predictable that you suddently make a jump -> Fix

00:56:626 (1) - spinner start at 00:56:526 - , if you heard carefully, there is no sound at 00:56:626 - but 00:56:526 - . Also, spinner only need 1/4 spacing for Hard diff, it is note-before-spinner pattern, which is very common to do so in mapping. -> Fix and change

[Insane]
00:02:826 (1,2) - again, pay attention on overlapping.
00:26:026 (3) - ctrl+g for better flowing. -> Fix
00:28:026 (4,5,6) - this kind of triple really weird...

Insane is more free in mapping, then I think it is acceptable for me. But if you want to rank it, I think you need more eyes, seems the quality not that high.

Hobbes2 wrote:

👌👌👌From my mod queue👌👌👌

ls this the song from the google chrome commercial? lol thats amazing -> Hahah

Easy -

00:49:026 (2) - bend to the left a bit to blanket better, adjust 00:49:826 (3) accordingly -> done

Other than that looks good.

Normal -

Can't find anything to talk about. Good map.

hard

00:06:026 (1) - stack this with 00:04:826 (3)? up to you -> done

00:31:426 (1) - angle the end of this slider up just a bit

Hm...also very solid difficulty. No other problems I can see.

Insane

00:02:826 (1,2) - Stack these

00:33:826 (3,1) - stack these

Also good.

This mapset looks very good to me! The song is nice also.

👌Good Luck!👌

Cirno-baka9 wrote:

From the worst modding queue. I wanted bad maps to mod (because I suck), but here's the mod for your M4M request.

Bold is unrankable.
Red should really be fixed.
Orange should be changed.
Blue is just a suggestion.

Easy

00:01:026 (1,2,3,4,1) - This part is boring, either remap or don't map this part and keep it as an intro.
00:10:626 (1,2) - Improve/add blanket.- > Done
00:14:626 (2,3) - ^- > Done
00:18:626 (3,1) - ^ - > Done

Normal

00:01:026 (1,2,3,4,1) - This part is boring (especially for a normal), either remap or don't map this part and keep it as an intro.
00:25:426 (2,3) - Improve/add blanket.- > Done

Hard

00:32:826 (4,1) - It would look better if these two were the slider at 00:33:226 (1) - but mirrored, it looks sort of odd to me now.
Nothing else wrong here.

Insane

00:06:226 (2,3) - Might look a little better if you added a little blanket here.
00:24:026 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe add a curve to this small stream?
00:28:026 (4,5,6) - This triple feels a little odd in gameplay and visually.
00:30:426 (2,3,4) - Add/improve a few blankets here.
00:40:026 (3) - Might look a little better if you move this circle so the pattern looks like the image below.

00:40:626 (5,6,7,8) - Add curve to stream?

Eh I suck at modding. You don't need to mod my map if the mod was not useful at all.

Trent83 wrote:

From my queue



[Easy]

Easy diff

00:15:426 (3) - Ctrl+G? , Only for improve flow ->Fix

Good diff!

[Normal]

Normal diff

x1,10 of spacing? ¿sure?

00:33:026 (4,5,6,7) - hard for beginners
00:36:626 (2,3,4,1,2) - ↑

not bad but you included LOTS of random overlapping so try to reduce them

ProEzreal wrote:

M4M from my queue XD

Hard

1. 00:25:826 (3,1) - 둘이 붙어있네요. 00:26:826 (1) - 오른쪽으로 조금 이동하면 좋을거같네요
2. 00:37:026 (3,4) - 그냥 00:37:226 (5) - 에 스택하는것이 좀 더 깔끔할거같네요
3. 00:44:826 (2) - 아주 사소하긴 하지만 00:44:226 (1) - 여기에 좀더 붙었네요. 거리를 일정하게 잡는게 보기 좋아요
4. 00:51:626 (1,2) - 이것도 그냥 1/2 반복으로 해도 괜찮았을텐데 -> 수정
5. 00:54:026 (1) - 여기부터 뉴콤이 아니라 00:53:826 (2) - 여기부터입니다
6. 00:54:826 (3) - 이것은 뉴콤 해도 되고 안해도 상관은 없음
7. 00:56:426 (3) - 저는 매핑방식이 조금 특이해서 음에따라 노트를 두는게 제 스타일인데 여기는 역시 음이 점점 올라가니까 아래쪽보단 위쪽에 놓는것이 더 좋을거같다만 이것은 의견일뿐, 님 스타일에 안맞으시면 안하셔도 된다는점 기억하시길
8. 00:57:826 - 여기는 소리가 커지니깐 볼륨을 약간 높이시는것도 괜찮을듯

Insane

1. 00:08:026 (2,3) - 음.. 역시 둘이 붙여주는게 좋을려나
2. 00:09:026 (1) - 스피너 빼시고 그냥 매핑해주는게 좋을거같아요. 스피너도 좀 애매하게 끝나서
3. 00:12:826 (1) - 여기에 뉴콤이여야할듯
4. 00:13:026 (2,3,4) - 흐름이.. 이런건 어떨까요 http://puu.sh/piDpF/4e35b37462.jpg
5. 00:14:826 (2,3) - 흐름이.. 약간 이상하네요
6. 00:26:426 (4,5,6) - 이런 트리플은 치기가 조금 힘들어서 별로이긴한데.. 뭐 매퍼님 스타일이니 어쩔 수 없죠.. ㅋㅋ
7. 00:30:426 (2,3) - 블랭킷이 좋을듯 - > 수정
8. 00:48:026 (3,4) - 둘이 이렇게나 떨어져있는 이유가 무엇입니까 ->스택 맟출려고 떨어져있는

인세인은 솔직히 말해서 약간 흐름이 이상한것도 많고 좀 더 개선해야할 부분이란게 많다고 생각합니다. 제가 만들어줄수도 있는데

굳럭입니다~ ㅋㅋ

Momochikun wrote:

hi

[General]
00:44:226 - this kiai reset is just weird since the burst will appear later, you should've reset it from 00:44:126 - and then add it back on the next downbeat just like 00:37:826 - ->Done

[Insane]
00:04:826 (4) - there should be whistle here to continue the rhythm from 00:01:626 (2,2,2) - which has it ->Done
00:06:426 (3,5) - i would be visually pleased if they were on the same shape. just copy one for another ->Done
00:28:426 (1) - mind moving this a bit down since the reverse point is touching hp bar atm ->Done
00:38:626 (4) - i wonder if it didn't have clap just like the other white tick... 00:39:426 (1,2,4) - etc -> cuz is not match music
00:53:226 (1) - this single nc feels unnecessary for me, dont you wanna either delete the nc, or divide this into 3 note just like you did on other section ?

[Hard]
00:02:226 (2) - very sure you missed a whistle here at slider end, you did so at 00:01:626 (3,2) - exact same sound ->Done
00:09:626 - adding note here ? kinda awkward to start the slider 1/2 later when the actual vocal is started here
00:24:426 (2) - add something at the slider end ? there're kind of splashing clap sound on the bgm at the moment
00:27:226 (3,4) - this sliders play awkwardly because the highbeat were emphasized by the slidertail, i'd start them at the whitetick for more comfortable playability . 00:28:826 (2,3,4) - this one is different case though
00:32:026 (2) - i dont see a reason for the clap there ->Reomove Clap slider End
00:32:826 (4,1) - as i say before, it would visually appealing more if it was on the same shape, try copy-paste one to another for neater pattern->Done

00:43:426 (3) - suddenly heard a 1/4 spammed whistle here, that's kinda suprising imo ->Done

[Normal]
00:01:026 (1,2,3,4) - eh this want is the same rhythm with easy, you may want to make this one more complicated for better spread. ->Done
00:14:226 (3,4) - pretty bad rhythm, the (4) was didn't land on nothing and offbeat. just end this 00:14:226 (3) - at 00:14:826 - and you can start a slider from 00:15:226 - to catch the instrument ->Done
00:24:026 (4) - maybe nc to give that "new phase" emphasizement ? ->Done


[Easy]
00:25:026 (1,3) - this kind of overlap maybe will confuse beginners, idk
00:37:826 (1) - missing finish
00:56:626 (1) - start this from 00:56:426 - because the instrument ended there -> Done

the map could be more improved aesthetically though, i can't help much since it's kind of style problem

gl ~

Chalwa wrote:

Hello!
Mod from my queue!

Easy

00:25:026 (1,3) - Overlap
00:28:226 (1) - Move it a bit left, cause overlap - 00:27:426 (4,1)
00:29:826 (3) - Ctrl + J?
00:46:626 (3,4) - Blanket Improve
00:47:426 (4,1) - ^
00:48:226 (1,2) - ^->Done

Normal

00:40:226 (5) - Make this slider like this: ->Done

00:45:826 (3,4) - Make this slider like this:

00:49:026 (4,5) - Blanket?
00:50:626 (1,2) - Blanket improve ->Done
00:53:826 (1,2) - ^ ->Done
00:56:226 (4) - End of slider at x:381 y:315 ->Done

Hard

00:29:626 (4,1) - Blanket improve->Done
The best diff!

Insane

00:26:426 (4,5,6) - Imo it's too hard to Insane, stack it
00:28:026 (4,5,6) - ^
00:45:626 (5,1) - Improve blanket ->Done

END!
Good luck!

CookieKivi wrote:

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hard

00:01:626 (3) - why don't you put it like this? http://puu.sh/pzqAO.jpg
00:12:026 (4) - blanket error (?)
00:20:026 (4) - put to x:352 y:312 -> Done
00:33:626 (2) - underlap with end of 00:34:226 (4) - -> Done
00:47:126 - circle here should fit

coυldɴ'т ғιɴd мore

Down wrote:

모딩 요청하셔서 왔습니다.

[General Setting]
■ 콤보컬러 3번에 흰색은 언랭커블하다고 알고 있습니다. 약간 흐리게 바꿔주시던가 다른색으로 대체해주세요.

[Easy]
■ 대부분 이지 같은 경우에는 OD:2, HP:2로 두더라구요. 특별히 의도하신게 아니면 저 세팅으로 가주시면 좋겠습니다.
■ 00:25:026 (1,2,3,4) - 이 패턴 한번 다시 짜보시는게 어때요? 00:25:026 (1,3) - 이 두개의 오버랩이 별로 좋지 않게 보이고, 그 후에 나오는 00:27:426 (4,1) - 이 흐름과 모양도 솔직히 이상하다고 느꼈어요. 이지의 나머지 부분들은 그래도 괜찮으니까 이부분들은 꼭 고쳐주시면 좋겠네요. ->수정

■ 00:47:426 (4) - 여기에 뉴콤이 들어가고, 00:48:226 (1) - 이건 빼는것이 앞에서부터 지켜오신 뉴콤주기를 계속 지켜나갈 수 있습니다. ->수정

[Normal]
■ 00:09:826 (1) - 이곳은 못갖춘마디라서 뉴콤을 넣어주시면 좋습니다.
■ 앞부분이 뉴콤주기가 상당히 불규칙합니다. 뉴콤을 넣는 방법을 대략 알려드리자면 이지와 노말에서는 대부분 2다운비트마다 뉴콤을 넣어주시고, 하드 이상의 난이도에서는 1다운비트마다 넣습니다. 다운비트에 대한 설명은 밑에 박스에 넣어두겠습니다.->수정

다운비트

■ 박자에 대해 말씀드리자면, 앞부분은 보컬을 따라가신듯 보이고 키아이부분 부터는 다른 악기들을 따라가신듯 보입니다. 따로따로 보면 나쁘지 않은데 이어지니까 어색한 감이 좀 있죠. 저는 00:09:826 ~ 00:23:026 이곳을 다시한번 배경음을 따라서 매핑하시는 것이 좋다고 생각합니다. 다른 난이도들은 괜찮아요.

일단 노말에서 알려드린 뉴콤넣는 방법으로 상위난이도들도 넣어주세요. 지금은 제가 좀 바뻐서 나중에 시간되면 다시 봐드릴께요.
수고하십쇼

-NanoRIPE- wrote:

Hi ~ M4M Reply :>

[General]
looks fine ~

[Easy]
00:10:626 (1,1,1) - would be nice if you stacked it ~
00:37:826 (1) - finish here -> done
00:37:826 (1,2,3) - make the pattern like this http://prntscr.com/bl6odz *it looks neat for me ~

[Normal]
00:09:826 (1,3) - overlap
00:49:026 (4,1) - try to stacked it ~
00:54:826 (2,3,4) - bad flow-> Fixe

ehh why u use 1/2 on slow part ( 00:09:826 until 00:23:026 ) ? and make 1/1 on kiai time part?
i think u must make 1/2 too on kiai time (since the kiai time should be harder than slow part)

[Hard]
00:21:026 (3,4) - bad flow ~ how about move circle (4) to x:32 y:184? -> Fixe
00:25:625 (2) - move it slightly down ~ for good flow
00:36:026 (4,3,4,5) - overlap

[Insane]
00:05:426 (6) - i think ended the slider on red tick (00:05:626) for good rhythm imo
00:32:026 (3) - i think curve slider would be better imo -> Fixe
00:33:826 (3,1) - stacked?
00:53:226 (1) - increase curve (try to same shape as 00:54:026 (2) )

GL ~ sorry for short mod and my terrible english ;w;

Left wrote:

전체적으로 맵에 모양을 내셨으면 좋겠어요. 그냥 노트가 흘러간다는 느낌밖에 들지 않습니다.

[easy]
음 x

[normal]
00:09:826 (1,3) - 오버랩 별루 보기에 안좋은 거같아요.
00:14:226 (2,3) - 블랭킷 -> 수정
00:31:426 (1,2,3) - 1-2-3머리가 일직선이 되도록 해보는건 어떨까요? 지금 모양이 별루에요.
00:42:226 (3) - 다운비트에 슬라가 끝나는게 상당히 어색하게 들려요. 2부터 시작하는 슬라를 그리던가, 아예 전부 단타로 만들어주세요.

[Hard]
00:08:826 (4,5) - 소리는 오히려 사라졌는데 왜 디스턴스가 늘어났죠? 일정하게 만드시던가 4 5를 묶어서 슬라로 만드는 쪽이 좋을 것 같아요. -> 1.15로 통일
00:27:226 (3,4) - 또 다운비트에 슬라가 끝나네요. 보컬이라도 뒷받침된다면 납득이 가는데, 이런건 정말 피해주셔야되요..00:27:226 (3) - 같은 경우는 보컬도 슬라 꼬리에서 높은음을 치는데, 클릭커블로 만들어야 할 위치가 잘못된 거 같네요. - > 수정
00:37:026 (3,4,5) - 그냥 스택시켜주시거나 직선, 또는 동선방향으로 꺾어주세요. 동선이 연타모양때매 꼬여서 좀 처리가 힘들거같아요...
00:43:426 (3) - 이 노트를 뒷받침할 음이 있나요? ->뒷음이없어서 이노드를 빼면 빈느낌이 들음니다.
00:44:226 (1,2) - 너무 가까워요. 지금까지 해왔던 DS를 생각하면 이해가 안되는 배치네요. - > 1.2X up
00:56:226 (2,3) - 현재까지 찍어온 난이도랑 지금 노래의 텐션을 생각하면 좀 머네요.->1.7 -> 1.4

Sanctus wrote:

안녕하세요? 이제 막 기말끝나서 기분 째지는 Sanctus입니다.\ =_=-)
이거 참 오래간만에 모딩하군요 ㅎㅎ

! 저의 주관적인 생각이 많이 들어가 있으므로 그점 유의하시기 바랍니다 !

제가 모딩할 난이도(Difficult)는 하드(Hard)와 인세인(Insane)입니다.

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[ Hard ] (저의 관점 : 이 난이도에서는 대체로 맵의 부드러움을 주로 평가합니다.)

00:10:926 (1) 이 슬라이더가 위로 구부러져 있는데 플라유저(Flashlight User)들이 많이 지적할거 같습니다. 그러므로 위쪽으로 구부린 슬라이더를 아래쪽으로 구부리시는게 좋을거 같습니다.

00:23:026 (4) 흠... 이 슬라이더는 뭐라 지적하기가 힘드네요... 다른 하드 전문 모더들이나 Sonnyc님 같은분께 질문해보시는게 어떨까요?

00:33:226 (1) 이 슬라이더가 (2)서클이랑 약간 동선이 너무 불안정 하지 않나요? 이또한 플레이어에게 혼돈, 언랭요소가 될수 있으니 한번 고려해 보시길 바랍니다. -> 수정

00:37:026 (3,4,5) 흠... 저거 동선이 구곡에서 많이 쓰던 패턴이네요. (어려운 하드~쉬운 인세인에서 많이 보이던 패턴) 시대에 많게 차라리 (3,4,5)를 겹치고 이 (3,4,5) 서클의 위치를 약간 옮기거나 (5)슬라이더의 동선도 개선해보는것도 좋을거 같은데요?

00:44:126 ~ 00:44:226 (Timing Point) 다름아니라 여기에서 Kiai(하이라이트) 가 다시 꺼졌다가 켜저서 더 큰 효과를 창조하려 한거같은데 과도한 kiai반복 사용은 오히려 해가될것으로 얘상합니다. 그냥 kiai를 00:50:626까지 연결하시는게 좋을거라 생각합니다. (아, 00:37:726 ~ 00:37:826 구간에 kiai 꺼졌다가 키는것은 제생각에서는 좋은것 같습니다.)

00:55:826 (1,2) 그냥 슬라이더 곡선으로 하나 배치하는게 플레이상 좋을거 같습니다. 슬라이더는 그냥 1/1길이로 부탁드립니다. 그러면 마지막 (3)번 노트랑 잘 어울릴거 같아요.

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[Insane] (저의 관점:Insane은 부드러움을 추구하면서 약간의 재미를 주면 좋겠다는 생각입니다.)

흠... 일단 인세인에 대헤서는 kiai전부분은 저한텐 많이 아쉬워서 다 지적해드릴려면 맵의 개성을 잃을까봐 kiai전 부분에는 지적을 드리지 않겠습니댜.

일단 3연타에서 지적을 해드릴껀데 슬라이더가 너무 45더 이상 꺾... 아니 3연타가 너무 꺾여있으면 부자연스러운거 같아요. 겹치거나 슬라이더로 대체. 아니면 조금만 꺽어보는게 어떨까요?

그리고 아까 하드에서 설명한 00:44:126 ~ 00:44:226 (Timing Point) 이부분은 다른난이도에도 꼭 수정해주시길 바랍니다.



(솔직히 인세인은 켜보고 놀랐습니다. 좀 부자연스러운게 많아서 "ㅇ..어? 이거 어떻게 모딩해야 하지..." 라고 당황해 버렸습니다ㅠㅠ... 저는 이 난이도의 인센을 그냥 갈아엎고 다시만드는것도 경험을 쌓아가는 단계라 생각하기 때문에 저는 Insane난이도는 개인적으로 리맵하셨으면 좋겠습니다. 대신, 5연타는 제 취향에 딱이더군요. 5연타 보고 "내맵에도 써먹어볼ㄲ..." 했습니다. 5연타는 좋은 선택인거 같고 cs는 그냥 cs4.3대신 cs4.5로 바꿔서 난이도를 조금 올리는게 좋다고 생각합니다.(

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'우에에ㅔㅔㅔㅔㅔㅔ에엥ㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠ 내시간ㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠ 내 시가안ㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠ'\
ㄴ 죄송합니다...

어후 모딩에 몰입해버렸더니 30~1시간은 걍 지나가는군요.

개인적으로 하드 난이도는 좋았습니다. 인세인은 뭐, 다른분이 모딩해주시겠죠 ㅎ

이맵 랭크되시길 기원합니다

-July 7th

Write by, Sanctus

Taeyang wrote:

• General

1. 힛사길이 뒤에 사용안 하는부분 자르세요 ->DOne
   
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2. 맵이 곡선위주가 좀많아서 조금 심심한 느낌이 있는데 다음엔 직선슬라도 섞으면 어떨까요?->가능한 섞어보았습니다.

• Easy

1. 00:41:026 (1) - 컨쥐한쪽이 더 나아보입니다.->수정

• Normal

1. 00:10:626 (2) - 그냥 다운비트 뉴콤 추천->수정
2. 00:24:026 (1) - 앞 보컬을 잡기위해 두번 누르게 해주면 좋을것 같습니다.->수정
   
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3. 00:43:026 (4) - 하위난이도에서 슬라꼬리는 가야하는 방향으로 하는것이 좀더 초보분들께 직관적일것 같습니다..->수정
   
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• Hard

1. 00:09:026 (5) - 여기 소리가 약간 미약해서 안어울린감이있는데 00:08:826 (4) - 슬라로 만들거나 아예 지우는건 어떠신지 .->슬라이더로
2. 00:19:226 (2,3,4) - 가능하면 DS 거리 같게 .->수정
3. 00:43:426 (3) - 그냥 1/2 슬라? 다른곳도 3연타 스킵한 부분많은데 이곳만 할필요는 없을것 같습니다.->수정
4. 00:49:826 (3,1) - 사이거리가 다른곳에 비해 너무 멀다고 생각됩니다.->음이 바뀌는 부분이라 크게 냅둬도 될거같아서 수정안했습니다.

• Insane

1. 00:04:226 (1,2,3) - 좀더 물흐르는듯한 흐름으로?
2. 00:24:026 (1,2,3,4,5) - 연타보단 그냥 하드처럼 보컬에 맞추는게 노래에 더어울린다고 생각됩니다..->수정
3. 00:26:426 (4,5,6) -00:28:026 (4,5,6) - 3연타 거리가 너무 큽니다. 줄이거나 그냥 스택해도 괜찮을것 같습니다...-> X1.2 로수정
4. 00:44:026 - 소리도 들려오고 충분히 노트추가 가능하다고 생각됩니다.
5. 00:50:226 - 슬라 꼬리 여기서 끝내고 00:50:426 (5) - 여기 노트 추가 해서 슬라꼬리고 음잡는것이 좋다고 생각합니다. ..->수정
   
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6. 00:56:426 (3) - 노트 중앙으로?.->수정

ProEzreal wrote:

이제 생각해보니까 소스를 Google_jp 라고 두는건 좀 아니라고 생각하는데..
물론 광고를 위해 이 노래를 만든건 맞는데 그렇다고 소스를 Google_jp라고 놓는건 조금 생각을 해볼 필요가 있는거같네요.

plz help IamKwaN

_ Hatsune Miku wrote:

ProEzreal wrote:

이제 생각해보니까 소스를 Google_jp 라고 두는건 좀 아니라고 생각하는데..
물론 광고를 위해 이 노래를 만든건 맞는데 그렇다고 소스를 Google_jp라고 놓는건 조금 생각을 해볼 필요가 있는거같네요.

plz help IamKwaN

태양님께서 태그와 관련되어있으니 괜찮다고 하셨습니다. (일단 냅둠.)