1. Calm (0.64 stars, 39 notes)
2. Challenging (1.44 stars, 68 notes)
3. Tears (2.01 stars, 81 notes)
4. Yuii-'s Relaxing (1.07 stars, 60 notes)

Yuii- wrote:

Alright, alright. Weas ma babl!?

Ascendance wrote:

I think "Challenging" is a bit out of place

Challenged

Ascendance wrote:

I came 33 hours too late

I-I'm only doing this because I want the kudosu.. n-not because I like your maps or anything..!

General

Tags

1. o

Metadata

1. ok

Spread/Other

1. I think "Challenging" is a bit out of place in a spread with "Calm", "Relaxing", and... ... ... "Tears". Maybe find a better, more fitting name? - These are based off diff names that used to be used more, I think it's fine.

Calm

General

1. The sliders like this 00:03:449 (3) - Where the tick is so close to the tail may be a bit confusing to a newer player, especially since their movements are so choppy, it can be very easy to miss it when directly after the tick, the next note is taking a sharp left/right turn depending on where the slider is in the map. I'd suggest restructuring the sliders like these to perhaps make the end part with the tick a bit straighter so it's less confusing. Or at least make the turns less jagged. - Made them slightly less sharp.
2. 00:13:061 (2) - The hitsound on the tail of this note feels really out of place to me. - Blame Yuii-.
3. 00:48:012 (4,1) - I think you can add a bit more space here, (1) feels really close to 4 for me. - Done.
4. 00:52:381 (1) - The spinner feels like it ends on the wrong spot. - Ends at the same place as on the standard mapset, and it sounds fine to me.

Challenged

General

1. 00:03:741 (3) - This feels much better as a single note than as a slider. The sound at the blue tick just doesn't feel like it belongs there. I think adding it as a hitcircle instead with some added distance is better in this scenario. - I think this slider is a nice way to follow the background guitar sound there.
2. 00:15:974 (8,1) - This dash required a pretty quick stop in order to catch it at the angle it approaches at, and I don't see this to be fitting (Cause it's almost like a tap dash which a newer player probably can't do). I'd suggest adjusting this by ctrl+g'ing 00:16:556 (1) - and moving it a bit closer to 8. - I think because these notes have a good enough reaction time, it should be fine.
3. 00:43:061 (5) - This note is pretty strong, are you sure you don't want to add some distance or even a dash to it? - Added a bit more distance.
4. 00:45:100 (3) - Moving this a bit farther away will make this dash a bit less confusing about "should I dash or can I make it?" - Increased distance.

Crystal

General

1. 00:13:643 (5) - I think placing this on top of 3 will give it less of a repetitive feel and introduce some back and forths. - I'd rather keep this section slightly more simple.
2. 00:14:226 (6) - Ctrl+g this if you do the above and shorten the distance as needed. - Ayy i get to use pink for once.
3. 00:33:449 (6,7,8) - This pattern is difficult in the sense that's a leftwards motion, followed by a right facing hyperdash, by another leftwards motion. I'd suggest moving 00:33:449 (6,7) - to the left and then make the hyperdash into a right facing 00:34:032 (8) - slider. - I think this is fine due to 6,7 not being a dash, just a normal movement.
4. 00:34:032 (8) - NC this - Denied all NC suggestions because I was following an NC pattern of one every 4/1.
5. 00:35:197 (1) - remove this NC
6. 00:37:527 (2) - add NC (?
7. 00:45:100 (2) - Curve this a bit better, maybe like an actual curve without a red point alright thanks - Oh.

Ascendance wrote:

OMG! It's Mike!!!!!

Yuii-'s Relaxing

1. 00:07:236 (1,2) - eh... I think you can put a repeat on (1) and start 00:08:401 (3) - on the previous blue tick, because I don't hear anything on 00:08:401 - . I'd point it out for the previous pattern you have too, but it's a little more acceptable there imo. - I really don't know if my headsets aren't working properly but... there's a beat on 00:08:109 - it's a piano hit. In fact, I'd have used 4 circles here instead, but you know.. density and all that.
2. 00:15:391 (5) - Ctrl+H and add a NC. The way you have it now kind of disrupts the flow you have coming out of the repeat slider. - As for the NCs: My new combos are placed every one stanza, meaning I don't NC according to strong notes as you pointed out. Basically, it's just a way of being really consistent throughout the difficulty. Probably, best way of NC'ing. Did apply the Ctrl+H anyway. It may be a bit too harsh because you kinda catch the following object in time and I wanted to make not so hard, but hey, looks nice so why not!
3. 00:52:381 (1) - Spinner distance in a cup diff needs to be 2(?) ticks away from the last note. It's low BPM but it's done on every other diff and heavily advised. - Really? That really sucks. I will wait for further advices onto this because it plays absolutely fine to me.

WildOne94 wrote:

Hey there again.
Here for my 2nd mod for a m4m.
Wow this could be my littlest mod ever !

General
Never seen a diff below cup before O_o I won't judge it cause I think it's fine but let's see what others say xD. - Yeah, it's more of an experimental thing from me, than anything else.
SV is soooo low. need to increase it or it's difficult small movements for all diffs imo. - Low SV feels fine to me for the opposite reason, you can stand still for longer in sliders, so you have to tap less.

Calm

00:27:042 (2) - Could really flip this is you're going for a diff below cup as it's an awkward direction flow for this type of diff. would Ctrl + G and ds again right of (1). - Yeah, done.

00:30:537 (1,2) - It would be so much easier if these were combined to a reverse slider instead. - I feel like the backforth movement would make it confusing.

Challenging

00:04:906 (5) - I think this could be moved left more to about x:88 - I'd rather not have a dash here, it doesn't sound that strong to me.

00:14:226 (6) - This could be a bit bigger distance. Try right in the middle of the map at x:256 - Did 232 instead.

00:16:556 (1,2,3) - (1) should be mirrored to the previous note. so Ctrl + G this and move to x:88. Also when doing this move (2,3) to x:248 for a much more nice room space for next note. - Did similar, but with 1 vertical instead of horizontal.

00:22:090 (3,4) - Could move these right a bit also. - Done.

00:30:537 (1,2,3,4) - More distance ? Try moving (4) to x:160 - x:192 instead.

00:38:109 (3,4,5) - (5) is a different distance to (3,4). It seems weird in play. Try make all the same distance. - These are all different distances because they're not the same strength, but I made it more comfortable to play generally.

00:50:342 (2,3,4) - Since it's the very last bit I think you need to increase the spacing here. Specially (3) and (4). Could be a nice glide dash here. - Didn't want a dash, but increased distances slightly.

Tears

00:03:158 (2,3,4) - (4) seems like a very low jump and seems out of place to see if it's a dash or not. Try DS or increase space here. - This isn't meant to be a dash, and that looks quite obvious in my opinion, so I'd rather not increase spacing.

00:47:430 (5,6) - I would Ctrl + G (6) and move so that (5) hypers to it as it fits very nicely here. - Done.

00:51:799 (6) - Just due to OCD reasons I think you should consider placing this in exactly the centre at x:256 XD - I'd rather keep HDash momentum here.

Wow that was quick yet soothing!
Hope it gets ranked cause it's so nice!
GL guys

JBHyperion wrote:

do u evn vape bro

General Comments:

1. Song Folder: No issues
2. Song Setup: No issues
3. Metadata: No issues
4. Timing: I got really confused as to why the downbeats weren't lining up but I noticed the metronome is actually a mix of 4/4 + 3/4 (and needs to follow the background drum rather than the foreground piano/synth.) It doesn't strictly change anything in play, but for the record, the correct timing is here: - Thanks.
   
   SPOILER

   [TimingPoints]
   3741,1165.04854368932,4,2,0,30,1,0
   13061,1165.04854368932,3,2,0,30,1,0
   16556,1165.04854368932,4,2,0,30,1,0
   30536,1165.04854368932,3,2,0,30,1,0
   34031,1165.04854368932,4,2,0,30,1,0
   48011,1165.04854368932,3,2,0,30,1,0
   51506,1165.04854368932,4,2,0,30,1,0
   53838,-100,4,2,0,15,0,0

5. Hitsounds: No issues
6. AImod: No issues

Difficulty-Specific Comments:

Easy Cup

1. 00:16:556 (1) - Why not just map this as a repeat slider? It's the only beat you "skip" in this way in the whole map and it already follows a repeat slider path anyway. For consistency, please make this a 1/1 repeat slider - Fixed.

Normal Cup

1. 00:14:226 (6) - 00:31:702 (4) - 00:49:177 (1) - Consider extending these into 3/4 sliders, or even 1/2 sliders as you do in the Tears diff - there's a fainter but noticeable hold note present on each, and it would allow you to create a dash to the following strong beat for a more interesting experience - Done.
2. 00:08:109 (4,5) - (5) is stronger than previous sounds, so I would at least expect a direction change here to emphasize it a bit better. Continuing in the same direction feels odd here - Should be better now.

Hard Cup

1. 00:29:954 (6,1) - Why include a hdash here when there was none at 00:12:478 (2,3) - for identical sounds? You also included one at 00:47:430 (5,6) so maybe it would be better to add a hdash at the first instance instead - I'd rather not add them during the intro.
2. 00:43:352 (6) - Ctrl+H and respace for a direction change would be nice here for the pitch change - note that the similar pattern at 00:08:109 (4,5) had a dash!. Also might allow you to give 00:44:226 (7,1) a bit more spacing for emphasis there if you want it - Did some general restructuring here.

I was super nitpicky on variety/consistency so I can't see many people finding much more with this. Call me back after you've applied.

Yuii- wrote:

Yeah, she's right. Auxent sucks tbh

IamKwaN wrote:

囧

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Ascendance wrote:

good morning mbomb

Yuii- wrote:

Auxent sucks tbh