00:17:019 - maybe add note since there is a snare + synt, just like you do on 00:15:762 - 00:18:275 -
00:22:045 (22045|0,22359|0) - if you following 00:21:574 (21574|3,21731|2,21888|1) - these sound, then it's a wrong snap. it should be on 00:22:124 - and 00:22:438 -
00:24:715 (24715|3,24872|1) - maybe move to 2 3 since 00:24:558 (24558|3,24715|3) - diffrent pitch
00:27:071 (27071|3,27385|3) - same like i mentioned before
00:28:014 (28014|0) - should be LN like before, except you want a variation
00:29:741 - 00:30:055 - should be 2 note just like 00:19:689 (19689|1,19689|2,20003|1,20003|2) - but if not, maybe just 00:30:055 - since there is a synt and kick here
00:49:532 (49532|0) - wrong snap, should be on 00:49:453 -
01:03:747 (63747|1) - i don't know what is this
01:13:799 (73799|2,73955|3) - i don't understand
01:30:527 (90527|3) - move to 3 ? 01:30:370 (90370|3,90527|3) - just not fit to any sound
01:38:851 (98851|0) - should be deleted since you are currently follow the synt not hithat
02:23:066 (143066|0) - actually hear nothing
02:48:118 (168118|2,168275|0) - move to 4 3 ? it just to heavy on the left, you also not using 1 collumn spesificly for kick or something like that
02:58:171 (178171|1,178328|3) - same like above ^
03:05:788 (185788|2) - tbh, i hear nothing, it just not fair with 03:05:946 (185946|2) - where the sound is so damn loud
03:42:307 (222307|1,222307|0) - maybe delete one of it ? it just no synt there, the synt ends 03:42:254 (222254|2) - and yeah i see 2 note only for kick+synt so..
04:46:312 (286312|2,286391|1) - should be 1 Line to up, it gonna break your pattern but please follow the sound. also i hear nothing on 04:46:312 (286312|2) -
04:57:307 (297307|0,297464|0,297621|2,297778|2) - 04:58:720 (298720|3,299035|3) - etc. i even hear nothing on my earphone, i just don't know what sound that you layer
05:16:076 - it just not fair when you make here empty while you make 00:49:532 (49532|0,49689|1,49846|2,50003|3,50003|2,50082|1,50160|0) - crazy LN pattern here
05:46:862 - add 1 more note please, there even 4 note on 8K
00:15:762 - 00:17:019 - you sure to just 2 note ? it jsut not fair with 00:10:736 (10736|3,10736|5,10736|7) - 00:11:993 (11993|3,11993|5,11993|7) - which the sound still fading imo
00:18:590 (18590|3,18590|5,18904|5,18904|3,19218|5,19218|3) - idk why just 2 note but i know you know dis so..
00:29:898 - maybe try
http://puu.sh/m64Xx/044c062f58.png for pitch, and yeah it's not simmilar to 00:19:689 (19689|6,19689|2,19846|6,19846|2,20003|2,20003|6) -
00:31:940 (31940|5,32097|5) - this jack isn't fit to any sound, if you want jack then i think 00:31:783 (31783|7,31940|5) - are supposed to be jack instead of 00:31:940 (31940|5,32097|5) -
00:49:532 (49532|3) - wrong snap, should start 00:49:453 -
00:58:092 (58092|6,58092|2,58406|6,58406|2,58720|6,58720|2,59035|2,59035|6) - i almost hear nothing tbh
00:58:249 (58249|5,58249|1) - 00:58:877 (58877|5,58877|1) - 00:58:563 (58563|7,58563|3) - almost hear nothing, or even there is nothing
01:00:291 - consider making 2 note since the snare is kinda loud, its oki tho if not
01:10:186 - i though you missed a note here, may take a look on 4K
01:10:343 (70343|6,70422|5) - Ctrl J ? maybe crazy but, up to you
01:20:003 - ummm actually you should add note for the synt here, since you layer it on 01:18:747 (78747|6,79061|1) - but.... idk
02:03:197 - according to what you mapped here and 02:08:223 - , 02:06:966 - 02:11:993 - this part should be 3 note if there is a kick ? o.o idk maybe this is one of the style, idk, it just not fair with the part which has kick every 1/2 02:13:249 -
02:23:066 (143066|3,143066|1) - ghost note ? it just no excuse for ghost note even for what style imo
02:21:888 (141888|4,141927|3,141966|2) - maybe move 1 collumn to left, since it shoudn't be same stair just like you do on 03:04:453 (184453|5,184493|6,184532|7,184610|4,184650|5,184689|6) -
03:05:788 (185788|2,185788|6) - delete one of it and move to 5th collumn ? since it's not loud as 03:05:867 (185867|5,185867|3,185946|2,185946|6) -
03:13:563 (193563|1) - consider to end the LN on 03:14:192 - since there is kinda a sound that stop there. (with some re-arrangement indded)
03:29:427 (209427|2,209427|4) - i only hear hithat, and you currently following the ysnt, please delete since no synt there
04:03:668 (243668|4) - consider moving to 6th collumn (1collumn to right) for better pattern
04:05:946 (245946|1) - inb4 these kind of sound should be on the Special key
04:05:946 (245946|1) - it was like playing 4K with one hand hahaha xD (i think only jhlee can do that)
04:45:134 (285134|1) - move to 4th collumn for better pattern
05:25:501 (325501|6,325501|5,325815|5,325815|6,326129|6,326129|5) - consider to move to left a bit since it's a snare not a kick like 05:24:244 (324244|5,324244|6,324872|5,324872|6) -
05:26:364 (326364|6,326364|5) - this is just not consisten with your pattern on this sound (05:26:443 (326443|3,326443|1,326521|4,326521|2,326600|3,326600|5,326679|4,326679|6) - )