1. PassionatE - 8Key (6.05 stars, 4793 notes)

ExUsagi wrote:

as your mom is modded!

ExUsagi wrote:

as your mom is modded!

ExUsagi wrote:

as your mom is modded!

abraker wrote:

8k could have been a good ranked map. Maybe someday!

[-Seiryuu-] wrote:

4k chart

mod nokudos pls

Column 1/2/3/4

02:21:731 (141731|1,141770|2,141809|0,141809|3,141888|1,141927|2,141966|0,141966|3) - Pattern here is a little awkward to play due to the anchor at 02:21:652 (141652|1,141731|1) - . Try using http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4018628 instead // done, make it 12 34 trill able

03:04:375 (184375|1) - Try shifting this note to column 3 or 4, so that it won't become a 4 note trill (03:04:296 (184296|0,184375|1,184453|0,184493|1) - ) // ok

03:06:024 - The slowjam here is pretty much going to kill anyone's accuracy, up to you to get rid of it though. // ;w; its not even 0.50

03:44:977 (224977|1) - Move this note to column 1, to avoid the anchor. // ok

04:46:234 - And of course the last part is really cluttered up with LNs, try nerfing them a little. // cant modify too much, already structured but i guess i made some change for the rest without modifying the structure itself c:

And i guess that's that. This is more or less just a pattern check so no kudos.

NlHIL wrote:

[4K]
00:10:736 - 00:15:762 - add?
00:18:275 - 00:18:590 - add!
02:15:762 - add? // keep, no 4 notes
03:36:181 - add?
05:44:977 - add?
[8K]
00:17:647 - add?

...sorry

Takane6 wrote:

I owe usagi a mod :')

okay :
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wuat! check AI MOD at 8K ExTrA *o* 00:54:479 (54479|1) - it just a 1ms faster... but still it is an unsnapped note >:D

4K ExTrA

00:50:317 - sampe 00:55:343 - when havong this stream... you'll add more note when its a snare... means 00:51:574 - delete 1 note
01:41:914 (101914|0,102071|3,102385|0) -im not sure about this note (doesnt hve one in 8K ) // 4K people favor more 1/4 ;3
02:53:223 (173223|1) - delete (reference as 8K)
03:23:616 (203616|0) - end at 03:24:087 - (reference as 8K)
03:45:291 - better change 1 note into LN (end di 03:45:605 - ) because the 8K use 1/12 stream at this part
03:48:747 - delete 1 note (no snare)
04:23:694 (263694|1) - should be 1/6 snap (reference as 8K)
04:35:553 - add note (snare)
05:36:809 - add note (finish)(same as 05:39:323 - ) // i hate this pattern
05:46:862 - the sound is a bit heavy... better add note here // even my mom asks me to add note, nope

this is why i always ask for irc mod... i cant find a lots of issues too :v

8K ExTrA via IRC

17:13 Takane6: aku bisa
17:13 Takane6: tapi gk proh
17:14 Takane6: mangnya map apa?
17:14 ExUsagi: -A-
17:14 *ExUsagi is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/689600 ETIA. - Claiomh Solais]
17:14 Takane6: claiomh o,o
17:20 *Takane6 is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/752772 Yooh - MariannE [8K ExTrA]]
17:21 ExUsagi: eee
17:21 Takane6: irc aja yah? :p
17:22 *ExUsagi is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/752772 Yooh - MariannE [8K ExTrA]]
17:22 Takane6: capek nulis lagi di notepad T_T
17:22 ExUsagi: klo post udah reply dari kemaren kali
17:22 ExUsagi: oo
17:22 ExUsagi: lol
17:22 ExUsagi: ok
17:22 Takane6: 00:16:076 (16076|5,16076|3,16076|7,16391|5,16391|3,16391|7) - hmm... oke... tapi ini 00:18:590 (18590|5,18590|3,18904|3,18904|5,19218|5,19218|3) - ?
17:23 Takane6: 3 note? 2 note?
17:23 *ExUsagi is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/752772 Yooh - MariannE [8K ExTrA]]
17:23 ExUsagi: dah di add
17:23 ExUsagi: oiya
17:24 ExUsagi: bentar, kok 333 22 222 33 222
17:24 ExUsagi: aaa bentar
17:24 Takane6: :3
17:24 ExUsagi: keep aja, suara snare lebih besar dari kick
17:24 ExUsagi: setelah dari 00:18:275 (18275|4,18275|6,18275|7) -
17:25 Takane6: ooo... keras suara ya...? okeoke
17:26 Takane6: 00:18:275 (18275|4,18275|6,18275|7) - sengaja dikosongin? ada bass disini
17:27 ExUsagi: e
17:27 Takane6: wait salah timing lol
17:27 Takane6: 00:36:024 - maksudnya yang ini
17:27 ExUsagi: fokus ke synthesizer
17:28 ExUsagi: and style :^)
17:28 Takane6: meh... 
17:28 ExUsagi: 01:01:155 -
17:29 ExUsagi: konsisten sama yg ini dan selanjutnya
17:29 Takane6: iya iya :p
17:29 Takane6: 00:49:532 (49532|3) - masih agak bingung sama ini
17:29 ExUsagi: 00:49:218 (49218|1,49532|3) -
17:29 ExUsagi: sama suara
17:29 Takane6: suaranya itu sekitaran di 00:49:453 - 
17:29 ExUsagi: 00:49:689 (49689|5,49846|7) - growl
17:29 Takane6: iya... yang growlnya itu
17:30 ExUsagi: oooo
17:30 ExUsagi: reverb
17:30 Takane6: verb?
17:30 ExUsagi: reverb, audionya kyk di tarik ke depan dan kebelakang
17:30 Takane6: oo... 
17:30 Takane6: :3
17:31 ExUsagi: tapi entah deh, soalnya peak soundnya mulai di 1/2
17:31 Takane6: sama... aku juga masih gk yakin snapnya dimana :3
17:31 Takane6: 00:54:244 (54244|2,54323|3,54401|1,54872|2,54951|3,55029|1) - agak kurang nyaman dijari
17:33 Takane6: saran aku 00:52:987 (52987|2,53066|3) - di switch?
17:33 Takane6: 00:52:987 (52987|2,53066|3,53616|2,53694|3,54244|2,54323|3,54872|2,54951|3) - 
17:33 ExUsagi: ok
17:35 Takane6: 00:58:014 (58014|4,58328|4,58642|4,58956|4) - memang sengaja 1 note?
17:37 Takane6: asdasdasd
17:38 Takane6: dc :3
17:38 Takane6: terakhir sampe dimana?
17:38 ExUsagi: rip dc
17:38 ExUsagi: yg swao
17:38 ExUsagi: *swap
17:38 ExUsagi: itu udah
17:38 Takane6: o oke
17:38 Takane6: 00:58:328 (58328|4,58642|4,58956|4) - ini sengaja 1 note?
17:39 ExUsagi: ya, 22122 chain
17:39 Takane6: oke
17:40 Takane6: 01:01:155 - sengaja di kosongin... memang konsisten sama yang lain sih... tapi memang sengaja dikosongin?
17:40 ExUsagi: yaps
17:40 ExUsagi: kalau di isi semua
17:40 ExUsagi: semua phase jadi 1/2
17:41 ExUsagi: boring dan gk sync sama synthesizer
17:41 ExUsagi: 1/1 beat spacing buat ngasih 'spice'
17:41 Takane6: hmm... 
17:41 Takane6: 01:00:998 - kalo ini diganti jadi 1/1 LN ? salah satu notenya
17:41 ExUsagi: toh cuma filler doang
17:41 Takane6: kayak 01:11:050 - 
17:42 ExUsagi: hmmm
17:42 ExUsagi: 1/2 LN?
17:42 Takane6: e... maksudnya 1/2 LN!! ya ya
17:42 ExUsagi: setelah 01:10:422 (70422|0) - , phasenya ganti, di sebelumnya sengaja no LN biar selanjutnya bisa ada LN
17:42 ExUsagi: variation per each phase
17:42 Takane6: oke oke
17:43 Takane6: 01:10:186 - gk ada suara (?)
17:43 ExUsagi: ni lagu susah di akalin biar gk repetitif
17:43 ExUsagi: yup
17:43 ExUsagi: gw lupa remove
17:43 Takane6: lol
17:43 Takane6: oke 
17:43 ExUsagi: kedengeran di headset
17:43 ExUsagi: cuma keciiiiiil bgt
17:43 ExUsagi: jadi dulu gw pasang note disitu deh
17:44 ExUsagi: o anyway check bookmark di bawah
17:44 Takane6: sebenarnya ada sih... tpi gk sekeras 01:10:343 (70343|6) - 
17:44 ExUsagi: tiap warna biru lewat, stylenya ganti
17:44 ExUsagi: ya
17:44 ExUsagi: gk sekeras disitu
17:44 Takane6: oo...
17:44 Takane6: wuih banyak style :3
17:44 ExUsagi: dual style kok
17:45 ExUsagi: ngakalin lagu panjang biar gk boring itu susah
17:46 Takane6: 02:23:066 - gk ada suara juga (?)
17:46 ExUsagi: kalau itu ada
17:47 Takane6: eh masa?
17:47 ExUsagi: suara pluukk
17:47 ExUsagi: entah
17:48 ExUsagi: 02:33:118 (153118|1) - ini kosong
17:48 Takane6: ua
17:48 Takane6: ya
17:48 ExUsagi: 02:53:223 (173223|3) -
17:49 Takane6: ada suara... tpi kecil
17:49 ExUsagi: remove aja
17:49 Takane6: ya
17:50 Takane6: gak dibuat 1/6? 03:43:406 (223406|5,223485|7,223563|5) -  kayak 03:42:202 (222202|1,222254|2) - 
17:50 ExUsagi: ooo iya
17:51 Takane6: 04:03:511 (243511|4,243590|3,243668|2) - ini juga
17:51 ExUsagi: ok
17:51 Takane6: 04:23:616 (263616|5,263694|7,263773|5) - ini juga :p
17:52 Takane6: 04:43:720 (283720|4,283799|5,283877|4) - dan ini juga :'v
17:52 ExUsagi: lagi
17:52 Takane6: :'v
17:53 Takane6: 04:51:574 (291574|1,291888|7,291888|1,292202|7) - karena kedua note ini shielding... bagusan yang lain juga shielding sih
17:54 ExUsagi: ngga ah
17:54 ExUsagi: anchor
17:54 Takane6: gk semua juga sih
17:54 ExUsagi: nganu, kalau di move, anchor di 1 & 7 pada ilang
17:55 Takane6: oo... 1 dan 7 doang :3
17:55 Takane6: yya
17:55 ExUsagi: ya
17:55 Takane6: 04:58:014 (298014|5,298014|2,298328|5,298328|3,298642|2,298642|5,298956|3,298956|5) - sengaja di turunin jadi 2 note?
17:56 ExUsagi: ooooo
17:56 ExUsagi: nice catch
17:56 Takane6: consistency
17:56 Takane6: karena aku payah ngemod soal placing... :'v
17:56 ExUsagi: yg sebelumnya jadi 2 3 2 3
17:56 Takane6: oo!
17:57 ExUsagi: 2 3 2 3 > 2 3 2 3 > 3 3 3 3 > 3 3 3 3
17:58 Takane6: okeoke
17:59 Takane6: 05:06:652 - part terakhir sengaja dibikin phasenya semakin turun... 
17:59 Takane6: nais
17:59 ExUsagi: ya iya lah
17:59 Takane6: 05:31:626 - add
18:00 ExUsagi: added
18:00 Takane6: 05:45:605 - ada suara sih... btw kolom 1 buat suara finish kan?
18:00 ExUsagi: noooo
18:00 ExUsagi: biarin kosong
18:01 Takane6: okay
18:02 Takane6: 05:03:040 - notenya nge jomblo
18:03 ExUsagi: ya
18:03 ExUsagi: 22122 di opening
18:03 ExUsagi: sisanya brrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
18:03 Takane6: ooo... ngerti ngerti
18:04 Takane6: aa... siplah
18:04 Takane6: itu aja :3
18:04 ExUsagi: updated
18:04 ExUsagi: post gih
18:04 ExUsagi: 4K?
18:04 Takane6: wuih langsung updated :3
18:04 *Takane6 is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/758056 Yooh - MariannE [4K ExTrA]]
18:05 Takane6: em... 4k kayaknya post mod... gk enak kalo irc mod kelamaan
18:05 ExUsagi: ok
18:05 Takane6: entar gk bisa kelarin project lain juga
18:05 ExUsagi: lel

very solid marathon map!!!
good luck usagi >///<)b

Star btw~

1. Add KAKATTEKOYEAH!!!! for the album name Yes, I know from what album this song is
2. Add C.H.S. Cutie & Headshaking Sounds for the circle that releases this album
3. Add C87 comiket comic market for which comiket releases this album

MEGAtive wrote:

M4M's here // finally

Yooh - MariannE

Column
4K - |1|2|3|4|
7K+1 - |S|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

[General]
Tags:

1. Add KAKATTEKOYEAH!!!! for the album name Yes, I know from what album this song is
2. Add C.H.S. Cutie & Headshaking Sounds for the circle that releases this album
3. Add C87 comiket comic market for which comiket releases this album

Timing: I don't know why, but the kiai in 4K ExTrA and 8K ExTrA are different. IDK if it's okay or not, though.

[4K ExTrA]

Mods

1. 00:00:056 - You can make this into triple actually to emphasize this section with 00:02:569 or 00:03:825 . // will only add triplets in huge & loud down beat.. hence keep
2. 00:09:008 - Lol why's this section empty? I think this section got the same piano like 00:02:726 or 00:03:982 . // probably i will keep this for spacing, the song has quiet lack of variative rhythm and repetitive 1/2 beat.. the spacing will spice up the chart c:
3. 00:15:762 - 00:18:275 - Not a double? This section actually plays Snare and Piano, just like 00:13:249 or 00:14:506 . I prefer you to add the note in |3| since it plays pretty nice for me. // ok
4. 00:18:590 - I think you should make this double, since you're clearly doing that at 00:16:076 or 00:16:391
5. 00:19:061 - You forgot the piano sounding here. // same reason above, spacing for sauces c:
6. 00:19:689 - I think this section is really a nice place to put SV gimmicks. Nevermind. Just a thought from me. // ok
7. 00:21:574 (21574|3,21731|2,21888|0) - Assuming that you're actually following the vocal vox here, you can try something like http://puu.sh/lK8r2/8403e3dce1.png with additional normal notes for the piano. Anyway, it's really different with 00:26:443 even though it sounds same. // ok
8. 00:24:087 (24087|3) - Actually, I prefer you to put this note on |3|. Since at 00:28:956 you're not jacking the notes. // ok
9. 00:26:443 - Maybe you can do the same thing like 00:21:574 since it sounds same. // yap
10. 00:34:139 - I actually prefer the pattern to be like http://puu.sh/lK8Cg/e1f8cb3e28.png . Less Jackie.... *pun // chan pls... will keep
11. 00:36:024 - 00:37:281 - Is these empty column is intentional? Because I can hear the kicks here. Without Piano, yeah. // without piano = spacing.. more spacing = more love <3
12. 00:38:694 - I actually prefer http://puu.sh/lK8HT/bd9b0b0a85.png as the pattern. Current pattern are pretty hard to read. // rearranged so it could be jump-trill able
13. I don't know why, but is it your intention to ignore the pianos like 01:03:747 onwards? I think it's better to map those pianos. // O_O woah how did you notice this.. added
14. 01:10:422 to 01:11:207 - This is patterned so different compared to 01:00:370 even though they're sounded same. // intended, different phase
15. 01:43:092 (103092|3,108118|1) - I don't know for what purposes are these LNs.... // to layer long string ?_?
16. 03:09:323 - 03:14:349 - 03:19:375 - I think you can just make those normal notes ahead into LN to cover the Pad sounds.... // nice idea
17. 03:16:862 - I think you missed the Pad that's changing its pitch. // lel ok
18. 05:04:139 - Wow, these LNs just fit those overloaded-esque melody lol // jej
19. 05:16:705 - I think you should map the kicks in the 05:17:019 ahead, since you're still mapping the kick at 05:26:757 // ooooookaaay
20. 05:46:862 - I think you can emphasize this section since it's the ending impulse. // ;w; i really want to, but i guess it would be fine for now

[8K ExTrA]

Mods

1. You can add notes in |S| at some places like 00:11:050 and 00:11:364 onwards to cover the bassdrop. Just like what you did on 00:21:103 // the S only for the pad / piano thingy, while the next phase i use the bass drop c:
2. 00:31:155 - You forgot to add notes in |S| for the bassdrop sounds.
3. 01:10:422 - Why's this section is a little different compared with 01:05:396 or 01:00:370 ? (The notes on the 1/2 snap. // yuss, like 4K do, spacing thingy
4. 02:18:275 - You actually can add notes on the |S| for the snare until 02:21:731 // rip, added
5. 03:02:412 - Forgot the kick here.
6. 03:03:668 - The snare here. You forgot it. // keep both, spacing thing
7. 03:09:323 (189323|6,189480|4,189637|2) - You can make these and some sections like this into LN for the pitch-changing pads. // ok
8. 05:15:605 - I think you can make the pattern here into http://puu.sh/lKbn0/d7e7b577f9.png since it's pretty reasonable to play a bassdrop sound with a turntable scratches. // better to keep, longer break after big boss section lmao

Nice to finally see this song, though. Kurang apdet *plok
Good Luck~

01:43:092 (103092|3,108118|1) - I don't know for what purposes are these LNs.... // to layer long string ?_?

05:46:862 - I think you can emphasize this section since it's the ending impulse. // ;w; i really want to, but i guess it would be fine for now

pocket-Gao wrote:

Hi~

4K

00:36:024 - and 00:37:281 - add note or LN (It's strange to playing with a sudden break...Because have drums // ;w; i want it empty for reason..
01:04:925 (64925|1,65082|1,65239|1) - plz follow the musical scale to pattern （some note maybe changes // done
01:20:003 - add note (have tweedle
01:40:893 (100893|0) - |2| (comfortable than 01:40:893 (100893|0,101050|0,101207|0) - // ok
03:02:254 (182254|0,182412|0,182569|0,182726|0,182883|0,183040|0,183197|0) - too hard... I think can change 03:02:412 (182412|0,182412|1) - // ok
05:26:757 - add a note // ok

8K

|S|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

00:36:024 - Same as 4K // ;w; i want empty
00:38:380 (38380|7,38459|6,38459|5,38537|7,38616|5,38616|6) - This patterns is hard for Keyboard player ;w; // hehehe rearranged

00:58:014 - 00:58:328 - and behind,have electronic music,have tweedle,but 1 note , 00:57:935 (57935|3,57935|7,58092|6,58092|2) - and more ,is only a beat，why 2 note pattern...?maybe overnote // all done
05:02:961 - ^ //ok

01:10:265 (70265|7,70343|6,70422|5) - a little uncomfortable pattern // ok

LN too hard www // rip o2jam

All of the above is recommended, map is no problem rip my English;w; // unless the 1st suggestion, all applied /w/
good luck~

MEGAtive wrote:

Replying a mod reply Lol

01:43:092 (103092|3,108118|1) - I don't know for what purposes are these LNs.... // to layer long string ?_?

In that case, 01:45:605 - 01:50:631 - should have those long LNs too since the long string is still playing here.... // i guess i will only follow the 1st and 3rd string, its the most audible & the string sound is more noticable.. so no change

05:46:862 - I think you can emphasize this section since it's the ending impulse. // ;w; i really want to, but i guess it would be fine for now

Well, you're doing that on 8K ExTrA so I think you can do that in 4K ExTrA, too.... // ok

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ajeemaniz wrote:

maybe someday, the 8K layering style is beyond too random & inconsistent hahahahah

Shinzo- wrote:

MOD READY

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Mod Inside

[General]

AiMod

1. please add the 4K's Tag on 8K tho
   

Timing

1. 03:05:710 - is this kiai is a necesary ? // ya

Difficulty

1. ~Marathon~

Hitsound

1. Fine

Metadata/Song Setup

1. please add Marathon to the Tags[/img]

File/BG/etc.

1. Clear

// all done
[4K ExTrA]

00:17:019 - maybe add note since there is a snare + synt, just like you do on 00:15:762 - 00:18:275 -
00:22:045 (22045|0,22359|0) - if you following 00:21:574 (21574|3,21731|2,21888|1) - these sound, then it's a wrong snap. it should be on 00:22:124 - and 00:22:438 -
00:24:715 (24715|3,24872|1) - maybe move to 2 3 since 00:24:558 (24558|3,24715|3) - diffrent pitch
00:27:071 (27071|3,27385|3) - same like i mentioned before
00:28:014 (28014|0) - should be LN like before, except you want a variation
00:29:741 - 00:30:055 - should be 2 note just like 00:19:689 (19689|1,19689|2,20003|1,20003|2) - but if not, maybe just 00:30:055 - since there is a synt and kick here
00:49:532 (49532|0) - wrong snap, should be on 00:49:453 -
01:03:747 (63747|1) - i don't know what is this // synth 'w' not a ghost
01:13:799 (73799|2,73955|3) - i don't understand // i cri
01:30:527 (90527|3) - move to 3 ? 01:30:370 (90370|3,90527|3) - just not fit to any sound
01:38:851 (98851|0) - should be deleted since you are currently follow the synt not hithat
02:23:066 (143066|0) - actually hear nothing // there's something D: not a ghost as well
02:48:118 (168118|2,168275|0) - move to 4 3 ? it just to heavy on the left, you also not using 1 collumn spesificly for kick or something like that
02:58:171 (178171|1,178328|3) - same like above ^
03:05:788 (185788|2) - tbh, i hear nothing, it just not fair with 03:05:946 (185946|2) - where the sound is so damn loud // there's a 1/4 sound to layer there 'w')a
03:42:307 (222307|1,222307|0) - maybe delete one of it ? it just no synt there, the synt ends 03:42:254 (222254|2) - and yeah i see 2 note only for kick+synt so..
04:46:312 (286312|2,286391|1) - should be 1 Line to up, it gonna break your pattern but please follow the sound. also i hear nothing on 04:46:312 (286312|2) - // sounds weird to remove rly, there's a different sound to layer there..
04:57:307 (297307|0,297464|0,297621|2,297778|2) - 04:58:720 (298720|3,299035|3) - etc. i even hear nothing on my earphone, i just don't know what sound that you layer // the piano 'w')a
05:16:076 - it just not fair when you make here empty while you make 00:49:532 (49532|0,49689|1,49846|2,50003|3,50003|2,50082|1,50160|0) - crazy LN pattern here
05:46:862 - add 1 more note please, there even 4 note on 8K // added 2 V:

// reply later

[8K ExTrA]

00:15:762 - 00:17:019 - you sure to just 2 note ? it jsut not fair with 00:10:736 (10736|3,10736|5,10736|7) - 00:11:993 (11993|3,11993|5,11993|7) - which the sound still fading imo
00:18:590 (18590|3,18590|5,18904|5,18904|3,19218|5,19218|3) - idk why just 2 note but i know you know dis so..
00:29:898 - maybe try http://puu.sh/m64Xx/044c062f58.png for pitch, and yeah it's not simmilar to 00:19:689 (19689|6,19689|2,19846|6,19846|2,20003|2,20003|6) -
00:31:940 (31940|5,32097|5) - this jack isn't fit to any sound, if you want jack then i think 00:31:783 (31783|7,31940|5) - are supposed to be jack instead of 00:31:940 (31940|5,32097|5) -
00:49:532 (49532|3) - wrong snap, should start 00:49:453 -
00:58:092 (58092|6,58092|2,58406|6,58406|2,58720|6,58720|2,59035|2,59035|6) - i almost hear nothing tbh
00:58:249 (58249|5,58249|1) - 00:58:877 (58877|5,58877|1) - 00:58:563 (58563|7,58563|3) - almost hear nothing, or even there is nothing
01:00:291 - consider making 2 note since the snare is kinda loud, its oki tho if not
01:10:186 - i though you missed a note here, may take a look on 4K
01:10:343 (70343|6,70422|5) - Ctrl J ? maybe crazy but, up to you
01:20:003 - ummm actually you should add note for the synt here, since you layer it on 01:18:747 (78747|6,79061|1) - but.... idk
02:03:197 - according to what you mapped here and 02:08:223 - , 02:06:966 - 02:11:993 - this part should be 3 note if there is a kick ? o.o idk maybe this is one of the style, idk, it just not fair with the part which has kick every 1/2 02:13:249 -
02:23:066 (143066|3,143066|1) - ghost note ? it just no excuse for ghost note even for what style imo
02:21:888 (141888|4,141927|3,141966|2) - maybe move 1 collumn to left, since it shoudn't be same stair just like you do on 03:04:453 (184453|5,184493|6,184532|7,184610|4,184650|5,184689|6) -
03:05:788 (185788|2,185788|6) - delete one of it and move to 5th collumn ? since it's not loud as 03:05:867 (185867|5,185867|3,185946|2,185946|6) -
03:13:563 (193563|1) - consider to end the LN on 03:14:192 - since there is kinda a sound that stop there. (with some re-arrangement indded)
03:29:427 (209427|2,209427|4) - i only hear hithat, and you currently following the ysnt, please delete since no synt there
04:03:668 (243668|4) - consider moving to 6th collumn (1collumn to right) for better pattern
04:05:946 (245946|1) - inb4 these kind of sound should be on the Special key
04:05:946 (245946|1) - it was like playing 4K with one hand hahaha xD (i think only jhlee can do that)
04:45:134 (285134|1) - move to 4th collumn for better pattern
05:25:501 (325501|6,325501|5,325815|5,325815|6,326129|6,326129|5) - consider to move to left a bit since it's a snare not a kick like 05:24:244 (324244|5,324244|6,324872|5,324872|6) -
05:26:364 (326364|6,326364|5) - this is just not consisten with your pattern on this sound (05:26:443 (326443|3,326443|1,326521|4,326521|2,326600|3,326600|5,326679|4,326679|6) - )

very nice pattern, the layering is just uhh, sometime i can't understand but.. idk

ajeemaniz wrote:

maybe someday, the 8K layering style is beyond too random & inconsistent hahahahah

ikr, baka ><

good luck usagi~~

SpectorDG wrote:

RANDOM MOD
rain pp in 4K :3

|1|2|3|4|

4K PP

almost all suggestion :3 feel free reject xD
#1 00:29:427 (29427|2,29584|3) - Ctrl+H ?
#2 00:56:679 (56679|3,56757|1) - Ctrl+G actually people like this xD
#3 00:59:427 - |1|2| // keep
#4 01:15:370 - missing note ? // keep
#5 01:18:982 (78982|2,79061|1,79139|0,79218|3,79218|2,79218|1) - Ctrl+G
#6 01:40:893 - http://puu.sh/m7fih/7bc7fbe885.png // keeeepp
#7 02:21:731 - maybe you can follow this http://puu.sh/m7fob/4de064fded.jpg // naaa keep
#8 03:18:590 - add note ? 03:19:846 - like a this
#9 03:44:663 - i hear 1/8 lel // it was 1/8

goodluck usagi ~ <3