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nora2r - VISION [OsuMania]

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dionzz99
677 posts
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Topic Starter
dionzz99
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 09 Juli 2016 at 17:41:41

Artist: nora2r
Title: VISION
Source: SOUND VOLTEX BOOTH
Tags: kiss me puxtu
BPM: 173
Filesize: 2167kb
Play Time: 01:55
Difficulties Available:
  1. ADVANCED - 4Key (2,75 stars, 909 notes)
  2. EXHAUST - 4Key (4,25 stars, 1394 notes)
  3. noft.'s INFINITE - 4Key (4,78 stars, 1599 notes)
  4. puxtu's NOVICE - 4Key (1,91 stars, 593 notes)
Download: nora2r - VISION
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Available DLC : EXHAUST + SV


update 1 : BG :O :O :O :O
update 2 : separate EXHAUST with SV and no SV
update 3 : adding more SV in EXHAUST (SV)
update 4 : applied AlisceaSparku's mod
update 5 : applied Zenx's mod
update 6 : applied MEGAtive's mod
update 7 : puxtu's GD , lowering Sound
update 8 : applied NIHIL's mod
update 9 : applied TheZiemniax's mod
update 10 : applied -[ AmiShici ]-'s mod
update 11 : added noft's INF


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Last edited by dionzz99 , edited 17 times in total.
MEGAtive
1,656 posts
Joined August 2013
MEGAtive
Just going to mod this, is this a serious project or just a joke? Since the Mapset aren't completed yet, but it's on pending section.
dionzz99
677 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
dionzz99
i don't really have that much time to focus on this beatmap..
but looking at the pattern. i know there's a potential chance to rank this

and yes its missing one diff.. Novice..
(how lazy are you puxtu..)
AlisceaSparku
704 posts
Joined August 2013
AlisceaSparku
Hi~!

incomplete mapset?
Anyway here's my mod :D
mod~
[ADVANCED]
00:15:345 - add a note. We need to differentiate the number of notes of this and 00:14:999 so that players will know the beat is different
00:18:120 - ^
00:19:507 - ^
00:20:895 - ^
00:21:588 - ^
00:22:282 - ^
00:23:322 - add a note, the beat is strong
00:23:669 (23669|2,23842|1) - swap columns. It's for the cymbal sound. Putting the notes apart helps emphasize the beat
00:43:091 - add note, for cymbal
00:43:784 - ^
00:44:478 - ^
00:45:519 - add note, a strong beat
00:45:865 - add note at 2, cymbal sound
00:48:640 - add note, ^
00:52:802 - ^
the following are optional
00:53:495 - add note, strong beat
00:48:987 - ^
00:49:680 - ^
00:49:333 - ^, and this part is confusing. Rearrange it
00:50:027 - add note, strong beat
00:50:374 - ^
00:50:721 - ^
00:51:414 - ^
00:51:761 - ^
00:52:455 - ^
00:54:536 - ^
00:54:883 - ^
00:55:229 - ^
00:55:576 - ^
00:55:923 - ^
00:56:270 - ^
00:56:617 - ^
00:56:963 - ^
00:57:310 - ^
00:57:657 - ^
00:58:004 - ^
00:59:044 - ^
00:59:391 - ^
00:59:738 - ^

01:00:085 - missing note?
01:05:287 - add note, strong beat
01:21:587 - add note? ^

hope these helps :D
Good luck with your map!
Evening
2,464 posts
Joined December 2012
Evening
[EXH]
Consider :
Raising HP
Making the Source more specific, SOUND VOLTEX itself is rather general as SOUND VOLTEX has a lot of variations
https://remywiki.com/VISION

Kinda the first issue i encountered is that the hammers go over 2 or 3 notes which might be out of most player's comfort zone
Notes like :
00:07:542 (7542|2,7629|2,7715|2,7802|2,7889|2) -
00:04:247 (4247|0,4334|0,4421|0,4941|2,5028|2,5114|2) -
00:09:796 (9796|2,9883|2,9970|2,10490|0,10577|0,10663|0) -

Mainly the patterns that play well and do not stress on 1 hand/finger to much would be to just limit the hammers to a maximum of 2

For Example :

112
223
334
443
etc.

This kinda makes everything jack easier to play and makes it less stressful on the fingers, with the expense of making it less technically correct

00:23:669 - At the chorus here, I personally think that you can spice up the note rhythm by another level instead of a constant 1/2 by adding notes on the 1/4s like these :
00:24:623 -
00:27:397 -
and so on
Using hammers may be a possible way of emphasizing the synth here too

00:34:767 - Same thing here if possible
01:33:032 - ^

00:57:657 (57657|2,57744|2,57830|2,57917|2) - Might want to consider changing this to 3322
00:58:004 (58004|1,58004|0,58351|2,58351|3,58437|1,58524|2,58611|0) - if so, change this to {34}{12}423

01:21:587 (81587|2,81587|0) - Consider making this a 3 note chord for the cymbal


01:23:148 (83148|3) - Pretty sure this LN contains two synths here, consider splitting this into :


01:24:535 (84535|3) - Same goes for other similar synths

01:33:032 - Same

01:54:969 (114969|1,115142|3) - Ghost notes, please do take note

[ADV]

Consider :
Making the Source more specific, SOUND VOLTEX itself is rather general as SOUND VOLTEX has a lot of variations
https://remywiki.com/VISION

00:10:837 (10837|0) - Wrongly snapped LN end?

00:23:669 - Same idea as EXH
01:33:032 - ^

01:21:414 - Kinda predicting a reading problem with ADV level players here,
Consider :
01:19:160 (79160|1) - Shortening by 2/1
01:21:761 (81761|0) - Move to 2

01:23:148 (83148|1) - This contains 2 synths, just like i mentioned in EXH, do take note of that, and consider mapping both separately

01:28:177 (88177|2,88871|0,89564|2) - Might want to arrange all these notes on the right hand side of the stage for pitch relevancy OR just arrange this so that there is pitch relevancy between the synths and the notes

01:54:969 (114969|3,115142|1) - Ghost notes, take note of this
dionzz99
677 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
dionzz99

AlisceaSparku wrote:

Hi~!

incomplete mapset? yes
Anyway here's my mod :D
mod~
[ADVANCED]
00:15:345 - add a note. We need to differentiate the number of notes of this and 00:14:999 so that players will know the beat is different
00:18:120 - ^
00:19:507 - ^
00:20:895 - ^
00:21:588 - ^
00:22:282 - ^
00:23:322 - add a note, the beat is strong
00:23:669 (23669|2,23842|1) - swap columns. It's for the cymbal sound. Putting the notes apart helps emphasize the beat
00:43:091 - add note, for cymbal
00:43:784 - ^
00:44:478 - ^
00:45:519 - add note, a strong beat
00:45:865 - add note at 2, cymbal sound
00:48:640 - add note, ^
00:52:802 - ^
the following are optional
00:53:495 - add note, strong beat
00:48:987 - ^
00:49:680 - ^
00:49:333 - ^, and this part is confusing. Rearrange it
00:50:027 - add note, strong beat
00:50:374 - ^
00:50:721 - ^
00:51:414 - ^
00:51:761 - ^
00:52:455 - ^
00:54:536 - ^
00:54:883 - ^
00:55:229 - ^
00:55:576 - ^
00:55:923 - ^
00:56:270 - ^
00:56:617 - ^
00:56:963 - ^
00:57:310 - ^
00:57:657 - ^
00:58:004 - ^
00:59:044 - ^
00:59:391 - ^
00:59:738 - ^

01:00:085 - missing note?
01:05:287 - add note, strong beat
01:21:587 - add note? ^

hope these helps :D
Good luck with your map!
all accept lelelel


Zenx wrote:

[EXH]
Consider :
Raising HP ah ok
Making the Source more specific, SOUND VOLTEX itself is rather general as SOUND VOLTEX has a lot of variations
https://remywiki.com/VISION
i choose SDVX BOOTH

Kinda the first issue i encountered is that the hammers go over 2 or 3 notes which might be out of most player's comfort zone
Notes like :
00:07:542 (7542|2,7629|2,7715|2,7802|2,7889|2) -
00:04:247 (4247|0,4334|0,4421|0,4941|2,5028|2,5114|2) -
00:09:796 (9796|2,9883|2,9970|2,10490|0,10577|0,10663|0) -

Mainly the patterns that play well and do not stress on 1 hand/finger to much would be to just limit the hammers to a maximum of 2

For Example :

112
223
334
443
etc.

This kinda makes everything jack easier to play and makes it less stressful on the fingers, with the expense of making it less technically correct

mainly i made it "correct" with the music. i will think about it later.

00:23:669 - At the chorus here, I personally think that you can spice up the note rhythm by another level instead of a constant 1/2 by adding notes on the 1/4s like these :
00:24:623 -
00:27:397 -
and so on
Using hammers may be a possible way of emphasizing the synth here too

00:34:767 - Same thing here if possible
01:33:032 - ^

i don't really like it since it feels weird.

00:57:657 (57657|2,57744|2,57830|2,57917|2) - Might want to consider changing this to 3322
00:58:004 (58004|1,58004|0,58351|2,58351|3,58437|1,58524|2,58611|0) - if so, change this to {34}{12}423

changed it to 4433 instead. is it okay?

01:21:587 (81587|2,81587|0) - Consider making this a 3 note chord for the cymbal

yep. agreed

01:23:148 (83148|3) - Pretty sure this LN contains two synths here, consider splitting this into :


01:24:535 (84535|3) - Same goes for other similar synths

okay

01:33:032 - Same

okay

01:54:969 (114969|1,115142|3) - Ghost notes, please do take note

okay

[ADV]

Consider :
Making the Source more specific, SOUND VOLTEX itself is rather general as SOUND VOLTEX has a lot of variations
https://remywiki.com/VISION

already done

00:10:837 (10837|0) - Wrongly snapped LN end?

o.O! i didn't notice that lol

00:23:669 - Same idea as EXH
01:33:032 - ^

still thinking about it..

01:21:414 - Kinda predicting a reading problem with ADV level players here,
Consider :
01:19:160 (79160|1) - Shortening by 2/1
01:21:761 (81761|0) - Move to 2

applied with some modifications from myself.

01:23:148 (83148|1) - This contains 2 synths, just like i mentioned in EXH, do take note of that, and consider mapping both separately

okay

01:28:177 (88177|2,88871|0,89564|2) - Might want to arrange all these notes on the right hand side of the stage for pitch relevancy OR just arrange this so that there is pitch relevancy between the synths and the notes

finally got the pattern by myself. now it's perfect

01:54:969 (114969|3,115142|1) - Ghost notes, take note of this

okay
MEGAtive
1,656 posts
Joined August 2013
MEGAtive

Hi
Mod from Re:volutionary Modding Team

nora2r - VISION


Column
|1|2|3|4|

[EXHAUST]
Mods
Sorry Long Mod ;_;
  1. 00:01:646 (1646|0) - Sebenerny ini LN gk punya instrumen buat d ikutin. Yg ad instrumen lain mulai uplifting frekuensinya. Saran LNnya delete, dan repattern.
  2. 00:01:646 - 00:01:733 - Rada faint, tpi d sini ad suara kyk 00:01:993 sm 00:02:080 . Jdi add note.
  3. 00:02:253 - 00:02:773 - D sini juga ad instrumen kyk 00:02:080 (2080|1) . Jdi d add note.
  4. Klo ketiga mod d atas d apply semua, saran pattern coba d bikin jdi kyk http://puu.sh/iSMBt/87c6da9f43.png . Lebih relevan sm pitch dan instrumen yg brusan d point-out.
  5. 00:02:860 - Mungkin pas bagian sini coba pattern kyk http://puu.sh/iSMMN/94ef686338.png . Soalnya antara 00:02:860 - 00:03:033 sm 00:03:207 - 00:03:380 beda pitch.
  6. 00:03:554 (3554|1,3900|1) - Ini dua not klo itu bsa d bikin LN. Toh, suarany juga kedengeran panjang. Cek 00:09:103 (9103|0,9103|1,9450|1,9450|0) . Tpi jangan separah itu. Coba kyk http://puu.sh/iSMJH/20f6db32b6.png
  7. 00:04:421 (4421|0) - D sini pitch udh berubah. Saran coba dibikin jadi http://puu.sh/iSMZK/f2f84d8dda.png
  8. 00:04:594 (4594|3) - Ini dri sini smp 00:04:768 bsa d bikin LN. Suara instrumenny lumayan mendukung.
  9. 00:04:768 - Pas bagian sini pitchny kurang relevan, coba d bikin jdi kyk http://puu.sh/iSN4t/3ef05100e4.png
  10. 00:06:155 (6155|0,6241|0) - Saran klo abis LN jangan langsung ngejack, itu lumayan susah d pencetnya. Coba geser k kolom 2. Lebih enak buat mencetnya. Jangan lupa geser 00:06:675 (6675|1) k kolom 1 biar gk nubruk abis ngejack.
  11. 00:07:542 (7542|2,7629|2) - Ok, ini kedengeran jelas pitchnya beda. Jadi saran d pindah, mungkin jdi kyk http://puu.sh/iSMSe/7976fe6195.png
  12. 00:08:236 (8236|3,8322|3) - Saran juga klo abis mencet not jgn d bikin biar buru2 ngeJack, kyk gitu berat. Coba d geser k kolom 2 atau 3 trus pindah not yg d depan ini k kolom lain. Mungkin klo saran pattern nanti jdi kyk http://puu.sh/iSNl9/7da54b5995.png biar lebih relevan sm pitchnya juga.
  13. 00:09:103 (9103|1,9103|0,9450|1,9450|0) - Gk perlu double LN tiap mencetnya. Single LN juga cukup buat ngecover instrumennya. Dan LN yg d 00:09:103 (9103|1,9103|0) abis d 00:09:363 .
  14. 00:09:970 (9970|2) - Pindah k kolom lain, mungkin d kolom 2 lebih fit. Pitchny beda d sini.
  15. 00:10:143 - Jangan lupa, tambah not. D sini ad suara Clap loh. Kyk d 00:07:369
  16. 00:10:317 (10317|3,10403|3) - Pindah k kolom lain. Berat juga abis mencet not diem bentar trus ngejack.
  17. 00:24:709 (24709|1) - Pindah k 00:24:623 buat suara lead synth. Mumpung pas d 00:24:709 juga cuman suara Kick, jdi lebih relevan sm instrumen2nya.
  18. 00:25:056 (25056|3) - Ini juga mungkin d snap d 00:24:883 buat suara hihat+Lead synthnya. D 00:25:056 juga cuman kick.
  19. 00:25:403 (25403|1) - Ini juga mending d pindah k 00:25:230 buat Hihat+Lead synth, biar lebih relevan sm instrumennya.
  20. 00:25:577 - 00:25:923 - 00:26:270 - D sini bsa d tambah not buat Hihat+Lead synth.
  21. 00:26:444 smp 00:34:767 - Mungkin mod yg brusan bsa d apply2 d bagian2 ini biar lebih konsisten klo mod yg sebelumny d apply.
  22. 00:34:941 - 00:35:287 - 00:35:634 - Bagian2 ini cuman hihat yg kedengeran, saran pke 1 not aja cukup.
  23. 00:35:808 (35808|1) - Ini d pindah k 00:35:721 buat lead synth. Biar lebih relevan sm instrumen2nya itu not2. Sebenerny bsa pindah not yg lain sih.
  24. 00:37:542 smp 00:40:316 - Mungkin mod yg d atas bsa d apply2 k daerah2 d sini.
  25. 00:40:403 (40403|2,40576|1,40750|1,40923|3,41097|0,41270|2,41443|2,41617|1,41790|1,41964|1,42137|1,42310|2,42484|2,42571|1,42657|0,42831|0,43004|3) - Saran not2 d bagian sini d delete. Soalny pas bagian sini gk ad instrumen yg bsa d gambarin sm not2 ini. (Ghost Note) + mungkin d repattern biar flownya kerasa.
  26. 00:43:091 (43091|2,43264|2,43438|2,43611|2,43784|2,43958|2,44131|2,44305|2) - Ini naikin satu garis. Jdi lebih relevan sm instrumennya.
  27. 00:44:478 smp 00:45:519 - Pas bagian ini bsa d bikin stream 1/4 berhubung kedengeran suara snare 1/4nya. (Dan d bagian akhirny bsa d tambah not buat Snare sm Clap)
  28. 00:45:865 (45865|2,45865|1) - Mungkin pke 1 LN aj lebih pas, tpi yg 1 LN yg lain jdi Normal Notes aja. Jadi kan not d 00:47:253 (47253|3,47339|0,47426|3,47513|0,47599|3,47686|0,47773|3,47860|0,47946|3,48033|0,48120|3,48206|0) bsa d alternate gk ngeberatin jari.
  29. 00:49:767 - Ad suara lead synth. Tambah not deh.
  30. 00:50:027 - Pattern d sini mungkin bsa d bikin jdi http://puu.sh/iSOyC/5710556e35.png biar lebih relevan sm pitchnya.
  31. 00:55:316 - Ad suara lead synth, jdi bsa d tambah. Pattern mungkin jdi kyk http://puu.sh/iSOJU/228858ff01.png biar bsa nyesuain sm mod selanjutnya.
  32. 00:55:576 smp 00:56:270 - Ad missing notes (Clap d 00:55:923 ) dan pattern kurang relevan sm Pitch. Jdi coba d bikin jdi kyk http://puu.sh/iSOOH/81a5a228f5.png biar lebih relevan sm pitch.
  33. 00:57:310 (57310|3,57397|3) - Geser k kolom 3 biar lebih seimbang gk berat d kolom 4.
  34. 01:07:541 (67541|3,67888|2) - Geser k kiri sekali, biar keliatan enak d pencet + seimbang tanganny gk berat sebelah.
  35. 01:23:322 (83322|3,83495|2) - Sebelumny d 01:21:934 dengan suara yg sama pke 1 LN panjang. Jdi, d samain biar konsisten patternnya.
  36. 01:24:709 (84709|3,84882|2) - Ini juga ^
  37. 01:25:923 - Sebelumny patternny kyk http://puu.sh/iSP65/0545f73f92.png . Cek 01:24:535 atau 01:23:148
  38. 01:26:096 smp 01:26:443 - Bikin LN d area ini biar konsisten sm pattern d 01:21:934
  39. 01:27:310 - Ini patternny juga saran mending jdi kyk http://puu.sh/iSP65/0545f73f92.png biar konsisten patternnya.
  40. 01:27:483 ke 01:31:645 - Mungkin sedikit d repattern ya. Kasihan jari yg mencet kolom 1 kebanyakan Jack.
  41. 01:33:032 smp 01:55:229 - MUngkin bsa lebih d perhatiin jumlah notnya. Karena bagian ini sm kyk 00:34:767 smp 00:40:316
dionzz99
677 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
dionzz99

MEGAtive wrote:


Hi
Mod from Re:volutionary Modding Team

nora2r - VISION


Column
|1|2|3|4|

[EXHAUST]
Mods
Sorry Long Mod ;_;
  1. 00:01:646 (1646|0) - Sebenerny ini LN gk punya instrumen buat d ikutin. Yg ad instrumen lain mulai uplifting frekuensinya. Saran LNnya delete, dan repattern. sip
  2. 00:01:646 - 00:01:733 - Rada faint, tpi d sini ad suara kyk 00:01:993 sm 00:02:080 . Jdi add note. no
  3. 00:02:253 - 00:02:773 - D sini juga ad instrumen kyk 00:02:080 (2080|1) . Jdi d add note. no
  4. Klo ketiga mod d atas d apply semua, saran pattern coba d bikin jdi kyk http://puu.sh/iSMBt/87c6da9f43.png . Lebih relevan sm pitch dan instrumen yg brusan d point-out. um..
  5. 00:02:860 - Mungkin pas bagian sini coba pattern kyk http://puu.sh/iSMMN/94ef686338.png . Soalnya antara 00:02:860 - 00:03:033 sm 00:03:207 - 00:03:380 beda pitch. nadanya sama. jadi gk berubah
  6. 00:03:554 (3554|1,3900|1) - Ini dua not klo itu bsa d bikin LN. Toh, suarany juga kedengeran panjang. Cek 00:09:103 (9103|0,9103|1,9450|1,9450|0) . Tpi jangan separah itu. Coba kyk http://puu.sh/iSMJH/20f6db32b6.png oke (pattern sendiri)
  7. 00:04:421 (4421|0) - D sini pitch udh berubah. Saran coba dibikin jadi http://puu.sh/iSMZK/f2f84d8dda.png ok
  8. 00:04:594 (4594|3) - Ini dri sini smp 00:04:768 bsa d bikin LN. Suara instrumenny lumayan mendukung. ok
  9. 00:04:768 - Pas bagian sini pitchny kurang relevan, coba d bikin jdi kyk http://puu.sh/iSN4t/3ef05100e4.png ok (pattern sendiri)
  10. 00:06:155 (6155|0,6241|0) - Saran klo abis LN jangan langsung ngejack, itu lumayan susah d pencetnya. Coba geser k kolom 2. Lebih enak buat mencetnya. Jangan lupa geser 00:06:675 (6675|1) k kolom 1 biar gk nubruk abis ngejack. ok
  11. 00:07:542 (7542|2,7629|2) - Ok, ini kedengeran jelas pitchnya beda. Jadi saran d pindah, mungkin jdi kyk http://puu.sh/iSMSe/7976fe6195.png ok (pattern sendiri)
  12. 00:08:236 (8236|3,8322|3) - Saran juga klo abis mencet not jgn d bikin biar buru2 ngeJack, kyk gitu berat. Coba d geser k kolom 2 atau 3 trus pindah not yg d depan ini k kolom lain. Mungkin klo saran pattern nanti jdi kyk http://puu.sh/iSNl9/7da54b5995.png biar lebih relevan sm pitchnya juga. ok (pattern sendiri)
  13. 00:09:103 (9103|1,9103|0,9450|1,9450|0) - Gk perlu double LN tiap mencetnya. Single LN juga cukup buat ngecover instrumennya. Dan LN yg d 00:09:103 (9103|1,9103|0) abis d 00:09:363 . ok
  14. 00:09:970 (9970|2) - Pindah k kolom lain, mungkin d kolom 2 lebih fit. Pitchny beda d sini. ok
  15. 00:10:143 - Jangan lupa, tambah not. D sini ad suara Clap loh. Kyk d 00:07:369 ok
  16. 00:10:317 (10317|3,10403|3) - Pindah k kolom lain. Berat juga abis mencet not diem bentar trus ngejack. ok
  17. 00:24:709 (24709|1) - Pindah k 00:24:623 buat suara lead synth. Mumpung pas d 00:24:709 juga cuman suara Kick, jdi lebih relevan sm instrumen2nya. no
  18. 00:25:056 (25056|3) - Ini juga mungkin d snap d 00:24:883 buat suara hihat+Lead synthnya. D 00:25:056 juga cuman kick. no
  19. 00:25:403 (25403|1) - Ini juga mending d pindah k 00:25:230 buat Hihat+Lead synth, biar lebih relevan sm instrumennya. no
  20. 00:25:577 - 00:25:923 - 00:26:270 - D sini bsa d tambah not buat Hihat+Lead synth. no
  21. 00:26:444 smp 00:34:767 - Mungkin mod yg brusan bsa d apply2 d bagian2 ini biar lebih konsisten klo mod yg sebelumny d apply. no
  22. 00:34:941 - 00:35:287 - 00:35:634 - Bagian2 ini cuman hihat yg kedengeran, saran pke 1 not aja cukup. yg pertama oke..
  23. 00:35:808 (35808|1) - Ini d pindah k 00:35:721 buat lead synth. Biar lebih relevan sm instrumen2nya itu not2. Sebenerny bsa pindah not yg lain sih. no
  24. 00:37:542 smp 00:40:316 - Mungkin mod yg d atas bsa d apply2 k daerah2 d sini. no
  25. 00:40:403 (40403|2,40576|1,40750|1,40923|3,41097|0,41270|2,41443|2,41617|1,41790|1,41964|1,42137|1,42310|2,42484|2,42571|1,42657|0,42831|0,43004|3) - Saran not2 d bagian sini d delete. Soalny pas bagian sini gk ad instrumen yg bsa d gambarin sm not2 ini. (Ghost Note) + mungkin d repattern biar flownya kerasa. ok & repattern
  26. 00:43:091 (43091|2,43264|2,43438|2,43611|2,43784|2,43958|2,44131|2,44305|2) - Ini naikin satu garis. Jdi lebih relevan sm instrumennya. ok (pattern sendiri)
  27. 00:44:478 smp 00:45:519 - Pas bagian ini bsa d bikin stream 1/4 berhubung kedengeran suara snare 1/4nya. (Dan d bagian akhirny bsa d tambah not buat Snare sm Clap) ok
  28. 00:45:865 (45865|2,45865|1) - Mungkin pke 1 LN aj lebih pas, tpi yg 1 LN yg lain jdi Normal Notes aja. Jadi kan not d 00:47:253 (47253|3,47339|0,47426|3,47513|0,47599|3,47686|0,47773|3,47860|0,47946|3,48033|0,48120|3,48206|0) bsa d alternate gk ngeberatin jari. nah gpp kok..
  29. 00:49:767 - Ad suara lead synth. Tambah not deh. ok
  30. 00:50:027 - Pattern d sini mungkin bsa d bikin jdi http://puu.sh/iSOyC/5710556e35.png biar lebih relevan sm pitchnya. no
  31. 00:55:316 - Ad suara lead synth, jdi bsa d tambah. Pattern mungkin jdi kyk http://puu.sh/iSOJU/228858ff01.png biar bsa nyesuain sm mod selanjutnya. ok
  32. 00:55:576 smp 00:56:270 - Ad missing notes (Clap d 00:55:923 ) dan pattern kurang relevan sm Pitch. Jdi coba d bikin jdi kyk http://puu.sh/iSOOH/81a5a228f5.png biar lebih relevan sm pitch. add note tapi pitch gk berubah.
  33. 00:57:310 (57310|3,57397|3) - Geser k kolom 3 biar lebih seimbang gk berat d kolom 4. ok
  34. 01:07:541 (67541|3,67888|2) - Geser k kiri sekali, biar keliatan enak d pencet + seimbang tanganny gk berat sebelah. ok
  35. 01:23:322 (83322|3,83495|2) - Sebelumny d 01:21:934 dengan suara yg sama pke 1 LN panjang. Jdi, d samain biar konsisten patternnya. no
  36. 01:24:709 (84709|3,84882|2) - Ini juga ^ no
  37. 01:25:923 - Sebelumny patternny kyk http://puu.sh/iSP65/0545f73f92.png . Cek 01:24:535 atau 01:23:148 no
  38. 01:26:096 smp 01:26:443 - Bikin LN d area ini biar konsisten sm pattern d 01:21:934 no
  39. 01:27:310 - Ini patternny juga saran mending jdi kyk http://puu.sh/iSP65/0545f73f92.png biar konsisten patternnya. yg ini kelupaan. ok fixed
  40. 01:27:483 ke 01:31:645 - Mungkin sedikit d repattern ya. Kasihan jari yg mencet kolom 1 kebanyakan Jack. iya deh ane ctrl+H
  41. 01:33:032 smp 01:55:229 - MUngkin bsa lebih d perhatiin jumlah notnya. Karena bagian ini sm kyk 00:34:767 smp 00:40:316 nope. kan musicnya makin semangat. jadi pattern juga dibuat makin semangat (lel ane jelasinnya kek gitu)
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320,192,52108,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,52108,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,52281,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,52455,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,52455,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,52802,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,52802,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,53322,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,53495,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,53495,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,53842,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,53842,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,54189,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,54189,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,54362,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,54536,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,54536,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,54883,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,54883,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,55056,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,55229,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,55229,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,55576,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,55750,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,55923,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,56096,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,56270,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,56270,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,56617,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,56617,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,56963,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,56963,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,57137,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,57310,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,57310,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,57484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,57657,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,57657,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,57830,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,58004,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,58004,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,58351,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,58351,128,0,59044:0:0:0:0:
192,192,59044,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,59044,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,59391,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,59391,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,59738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,59738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,60258,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,60258,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,60432,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,60605,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,60778,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,60778,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,60952,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,61125,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,61125,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,61472,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,61645,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,61819,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,61819,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,61992,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,62166,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,62166,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,62513,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,62513,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,63033,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,63033,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,63206,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,63380,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,63553,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,63553,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,63726,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,63900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,63900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,64073,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,64247,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,64420,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,64593,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,64767,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,64940,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,65114,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,65287,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,65287,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,65807,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,65807,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,65981,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,66154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,66328,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,66328,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,66501,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,66674,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,66674,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,67021,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,67195,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,67368,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,67368,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,67541,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,67715,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,67715,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,67888,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,68062,128,0,69449:0:0:0:0:
320,192,68062,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,70489,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,70489,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,70836,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,70836,128,0,81587:0:0:0:0:
64,192,72223,128,0,73611:0:0:0:0:
192,192,73611,128,0,76385:0:0:0:0:
320,192,76385,128,0,77772:0:0:0:0:
64,192,77772,128,0,79160:0:0:0:0:
192,192,79160,128,0,80547:0:0:0:0:
64,192,80547,128,0,81587:0:0:0:0:
192,192,81587,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,81587,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,81934,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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192,192,82281,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,82628,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,82628,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,82975,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,83322,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,83322,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,83668,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,84015,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,84015,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,84362,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,84709,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,84709,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,85056,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,85402,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,85402,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,85749,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,86096,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,86096,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,86443,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,86790,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,86790,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,87137,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,87483,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,87483,128,0,88871:0:0:0:0:
192,192,87830,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,88177,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,88524,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,88871,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,88871,128,0,90258:0:0:0:0:
320,192,89217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,89564,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,89911,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,90258,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,90258,128,0,91645:0:0:0:0:
192,192,90605,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,90952,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,91298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,91645,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,91645,128,0,92686:0:0:0:0:
320,192,92339,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,92512,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,92686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,92686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,92859,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,93032,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,93032,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,93379,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,93726,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,93726,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,94246,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,94246,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,94593,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,94593,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,94940,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,95113,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,95287,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,95460,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,95460,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,95634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,95807,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,95807,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,96154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,96501,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,96501,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,96761,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,96761,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,97021,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,97021,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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448,192,97368,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,97714,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,97714,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,98061,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,98061,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,98235,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,98235,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,98581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,98581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,98928,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,99275,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,99275,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,99535,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,99535,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,99795,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,99795,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,100142,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,100142,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,100489,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,100662,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,100836,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,101009,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,101009,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,101183,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,101529,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,101529,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,101876,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,102050,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,102223,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,102396,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,102396,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,102570,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,102917,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,102917,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,103263,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,103263,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,103610,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,103784,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,103784,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,103957,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,104131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,104131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,104477,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,104824,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,104824,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,105344,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,105344,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,105691,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,105691,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,106038,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,106211,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,106385,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,106558,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,106558,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,106732,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,106905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,106905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,107252,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,107599,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,107599,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,107859,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,107859,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,108119,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,108119,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,108466,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,108466,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,108813,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,108813,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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192,192,109159,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,192,111414,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,111587,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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192,192,112107,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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dionzz99
677 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
dionzz99
updated...
get ready to fix everything
NlHIL
856 posts
Joined December 2013
NlHIL

4K=|1|2|3|4|
puxtu's NOV
01:33:986 - add 2 notes to 2,3 'w'
01:45:084 - add 2 notes 'w'
EXH
01:00:085 - add a note
01:02:859 - ^
01:05:287 - this LN ....why not end at 01:05:547
01:05:634 - add some notes
ADV is ok.
dionzz99
677 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
dionzz99

NlHIL wrote:


4K=|1|2|3|4|
puxtu's NOV
01:33:986 - add 2 notes to 2,3 'w'
01:45:084 - add 2 notes 'w'
EXH
01:00:085 - add a note
01:02:859 - ^
01:05:287 - this LN ....why not end at 01:05:547
01:05:634 - add some notes
ADV is ok.
done
_underjoy
704 posts
Joined January 2013
_underjoy
Hi! Mod from Potato's Queue!

1|2|3|4

EXHAUST
Change your tags lol

00:10:317 (10317|1,10403|1,10490|0,10577|0,10663|0) - You made a 5-jack here. I suggest moving first note to 1, and the last three to 4 (there was no jack in this column plus hand balance)
00:11:010 - you can add an additional LN here in 1 (ending same as the other one)
00:24:623 - add a note on 3. Or if you can you can make minijacks out of it.
00:25:750 - You can add some LNs here to make the pattern less boring ;)
00:27:397 - add a note on 4
00:28:524 - Another possibility for LNs (just make sure to apply none or all)
00:30:085 (30085|2) - move to 1 or 2 and add 3 at the blue line
00:31:299 - LNs
00:32:946 - add a note on 2.
00:40:316 - add on 3. By the way pattern before also can be changed like previous pattern, its up to you.
00:50:721 - you can add LNs on 1,2 or on both (second chord too) (ending on 3/4 snap, blue line), to make a nice flow ^^
00:56:270 - ^
00:56:963 (56963|3,57050|3) - you didn't use jacks before, why do you use them now? Sound is the same... but well, if you want to keep them (or make more jacks earlier), just move this 00:57:657 (57657|3,57744|3) - to 2 (to not jack twice with same hand)
00:59:044 - exactly what I meant on 00:50:721
01:00:952 (60952|1) - you can move to 1, sound is the same
01:08:582 - you can add 4 here
01:09:102 - and something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3457135 works here
01:10:836 - add 3,4 or both
01:52:107 - add 2. And you can also try to apply changes from 00:24:623 and 00:25:750.

Nice song and great patterns, good luck!
-[ AmiShici ]-
-[ AmiShici ]-
hii dionz

jus suggestion

4K = |1|2|3|4|
Click me!
[NOV] 00:35:114 (35114|3) - move to 3? lower pitch from 00:34:767 (34767|3) -

[ADV]00:08:149 - add note for synth like as 00:08:062 (8062|0,8236|0) - . suggest on 1 since the sound is same.
00:26:357 (26357|2) - what for? it's make inconsisten. looks this 00:29:045 (29045|2,29218|3,29218|1) - ; 00:31:819 (31819|3,31993|1,31993|0) -
00:49:767 - add note, synth sound like as 00:49:680 (49680|2,49854|2,49940|1) -
00:55:316 - ^
01:55:055 (115055|2) - move to 2?
[EXH]00:02:253 - add note synth
00:02:687 (2687|1) - move to 1 then add note on 00:02:773 - on 2
00:04:854 (4854|1) - move to 3
00:05:114 (5114|0) - move to 3
00:07:889 (7889|2) - move to 2
00:08:149 - add on 1
00:08:236 (8236|1,8322|1) - move to colomb 1
00:10:663 (10663|0) - move to 4
00:44:651 (44651|0) - suggest delete the LN, i think that LN make inconsisten. since you not follow that sound before it
00:50:374 (50374|0) - move to 4? balance
00:55:923 (55923|1) - ^ to 1
01:25:923 (85923|3) - ini LN mulai dari 01:26:096 - trus add note di 01:25:923 - di kolom 4
01:33:032 - awww it mind me about aiae SHD :)

Well Good luck ^^)b
puxtu
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puxtu
Absurd tags is absurd
dionzz99
677 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
dionzz99

puxtu wrote:

Absurd tags is absurd
lel

TheZiemniax wrote:

Hi! Mod from Potato's Queue!

1|2|3|4

EXHAUST
Change your tags lol LOL

00:10:317 (10317|1,10403|1,10490|0,10577|0,10663|0) - You made a 5-jack here. I suggest moving first note to 1, and the last three to 4 (there was no jack in this column plus hand balance) i kinda want the note pitch to be correct
00:11:010 - you can add an additional LN here in 1 (ending same as the other one) nope.
00:24:623 - add a note on 3. Or if you can you can make minijacks out of it. sure
00:25:750 - You can add some LNs here to make the pattern less boring ;) nah. i already modified some
00:27:397 - add a note on 4 sure
00:28:524 - Another possibility for LNs (just make sure to apply none or all) none. sry
00:30:085 (30085|2) - move to 1 or 2 and add 3 at the blue line sure
00:31:299 - LNs nope
00:32:946 - add a note on 2. sure
00:40:316 - add on 3. By the way pattern before also can be changed like previous pattern, its up to you. added
00:50:721 - you can add LNs on 1,2 or on both (second chord too) (ending on 3/4 snap, blue line), to make a nice flow ^^ sure
00:56:270 - ^ ^^
00:56:963 (56963|3,57050|3) - you didn't use jacks before, why do you use them now? Sound is the same... but well, if you want to keep them (or make more jacks earlier), just move this 00:57:657 (57657|3,57744|3) - to 2 (to not jack twice with same hand) um. its better that way. #pitch
00:59:044 - exactly what I meant on 00:50:721 ???
01:00:952 (60952|1) - you can move to 1, sound is the same ok
01:08:582 - you can add 4 here
01:09:102 - and something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3457135 works here ok.
01:10:836 - add 3,4 or both both lol
01:52:107 - add 2. And you can also try to apply changes from 00:24:623 and 00:25:750. added 2 on 01:52:107 - others no change

Nice song and great patterns, good luck! huehuehuehue

-[ AmiShici ]- wrote:

hii dionz

jus suggestion

4K = |1|2|3|4|
Click me!
[ADV]00:08:149 - add note for synth like as 00:08:062 (8062|0,8236|0) - . suggest on 1 since the sound is same. nope
00:26:357 (26357|2) - what for? it's make inconsisten. looks this 00:29:045 (29045|2,29218|3,29218|1) - ; 00:31:819 (31819|3,31993|1,31993|0) - ???????????
00:49:767 - add note, synth sound like as 00:49:680 (49680|2,49854|2,49940|1) - nope
00:55:316 - ^ nope
01:55:055 (115055|2) - move to 2? ok

[EXH]00:02:253 - add note synth ok
00:02:687 (2687|1) - move to 1 then add note on 00:02:773 - on 2 ok
00:04:854 (4854|1) - move to 3 ok
00:05:114 (5114|0) - move to 3 nope. pitch
00:07:889 (7889|2) - move to 2 yes
00:08:149 - add on 1 oh no..
00:08:236 (8236|1,8322|1) - move to colomb 1 ok
00:10:663 (10663|0) - move to 4 nope
00:44:651 (44651|0) - suggest delete the LN, i think that LN make inconsisten. since you not follow that sound before it nope. added more LN instead :P
00:50:374 (50374|0) - move to 4? balance ok
00:55:923 (55923|1) - ^ to 1 ok
01:25:923 (85923|3) - ini LN mulai dari 01:26:096 - trus add note di 01:25:923 - di kolom 4 ok
01:33:032 - awww it mind me about aiae SHD :) lel Fullerene- plz

Well Good luck ^^)b
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18:39 marcostudios: well...the only this is in NOVICE 01:12:223 (72223|0) - i don't think it it should be added a slider except for the one in the 4th column.
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