1. Futsuu (2.18 stars, 237 notes)
2. Inner Oni (6.03 stars, 950 notes)
3. Kantan (1.46 stars, 145 notes)
4. Lite Oni (3.6 stars, 620 notes)
5. Muzukashii (2.84 stars, 381 notes)
6. Oni (4.51 stars, 787 notes)

xtrem3x wrote:

Reduce mp3 to 192kbps or Take This Thanks! My foobar2000 doesn't give me 192kbps mp3

Futsuu:

00:27:146 - kk dd -> d acceped!
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Muzukashii:

01:23:324 - Change to k (high sound) accepted!

TwilightForest wrote:

Muzukashii
00:01:359 (11,15) - they can be k, IMO sounds better accepted!

SV multiplier on 267 BPM part reduced to 0.9x (on Muzukashii)

1. Audio bitrate. You can use this webpage for the video and select 192 kbps or lower when converting the file
   
2. Difficulty spread doesn't seem quite right at all. Oni isn't supposed to be that difficult. Consider making a proper Oni and rename the actual one to Inner/Ura
   
3. No tags?
   
4. Consider SV 1.2 in Kantan and Futsuu

1. HP2 is not a good idea for a such low note density, consider making it higher
   
2. OD4 in kantan seems a bit too high
   
3. Sounds better if you remove 00:00:854 (2) - and move 00:01:528 (2) - to 00:01:022 - I think
   
4. 00:46:246 (22,23,24,25) - Consider monocouloring them as they can be confusing for newer players
   
   Other than that, pretty good diff.

1. HP should be higher
   
2. OD3 would be better for a futsuu i think
   
3. 00:22:427 (62,63,64,65,66,67,68) - Some of this notes could be removed without altering the rhythm
   
4. 01:23:830 (77) - can be turned into a k since to simplify the pattern
   
5. 01:29:223 (94) - Same
   
6. 01:43:550 (135,136,137,138,139,140,141,142,143,144) - same reason I stated above, some notes can be removed without altering the rhythm

Raiden wrote:

[*]Consider SV 1.2 in Kantan and Futsuu Changed on Kantan

[ Kantan]
HP2 is not a good idea for a such low note density, consider making it higher Changed
OD4 in kantan seems a bit too high Changed

Backstep wrote:

- What the 267 bpm? I suggest you remove this timing section and use green timing section to increase speed instead! (since it's all 178 bpm in this song)
I follow official GITADORA bpm. You can see bpm changes here https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PvNE5I8-fds


Kantan
HP+1 OD-1 and use 1.2 SV (since it's fast song.) Changed

Futsuu (prepare to Muzukashii.)
* for your new Futsuu diff make sure you don't put any 1/6 notes + try not use 1/4 often, use 1.2 SV and setting HP 4 OD 3 it's look be okay.
00:07:184 (22) - Add note with d in this time (1/6)
00:07:409 (23) - Same above.
00:07:633 (24) - Change to K to fitting guitar freak.
00:10:498 (30) - Add note with d
00:13:364 (40) - ^
00:14:038 (42) - Change to k for high pitch sound.
00:15:217 (46) - Change to d here
00:15:555 (48) - If you fixed above add k here.
00:16:060 (50) - Add note with d.
00:19:431 (60) - Change to k for high pitch sound.
00:20:611 (64) - Change to d like my previous pattern
00:20:948 (66) - Add this with k like above reason.
00:30:048 (2) - Add note with d here to make a bit hard?
00:31:396 (7) - ^
00:32:745 (12) - ^
00:34:093 (17) - ^
00:35:441 (22) - ^
00:36:790 (27) - ^
00:38:138 (32) - ^
00:39:486 (37) - ^
01:00:441 (4) - You can add slider here and end at 01:00:946 to fit guitar sound c: (since 01:04:486 (13) - you use this pattern)
01:01:789 (8) - Same above reason.
01:03:137 (12) - ^
01:05:834 (17) - ^
01:07:182 (21) - ^
01:08:531 (25) - ^
01:12:239 (38) - Change to d
01:12:407 (39) - Add note with k
01:12:576 (40) - change to k
01:12:744 (41) - Add note with d
01:13:081 (43) - Change to k
01:13:587 (41) - Change to d
01:13:755 (42) - Add note with k
01:13:924 (43) - Change to k
01:14:093 (44) - Add note with d
01:15:104 (49) - ^
01:15:441 (51) - Add note with k
... after that you can repeat your pattern c:
01:22:520 (78) - Add note?
01:23:194 (81) - ^
01:24:205 (86) - ^
01:24:542 (88) - ^
01:25:216 (91) - ^
01:25:890 (94) - ^
... after that you can repeat your pattern.

I will try this to reduce difficulty of present Muzukashii. Thanks.

[_Chichinya_] wrote:

[Kantan]

-change this to k 00:33:250 (6) - Done
- ^ 00:39:318 (15) - Done
- change to d 01:00:441 (2,4) - Changed first one
- ^ 01:05:834 (10,12) - Changed first one
- change the beat divisor and this pls put this slider in the line 01:04:486 (8) - , 01:26:733 (47) - Done

[Futsuu]

- change to k 00:37:295 (23,24) - Done
- to k 00:49:318 (64) - Done

[Muzukashii]

no changes.

[Oni]

no changes.

- Love1yV1ruS - wrote:

[Muzukashii]
00:22:465 (152,153,154,155,156,157,158,159,160,161,162,163,164) - eh, just my suggestion, since this is a speedchange part and this diff is muzu, set all the notes to d to make it more friendly?
00:23:588 (162,163) - delete this two note. make a space for newbies to breath. partially changed. like below

01:43:588 (464,465,466,467,468,469,470,471,472,473,474,475,476,477,478,479,480,481,482,483,484,485) - same as before. changed like below

shionelove wrote:

from queue

[General]
change Signature 1/3 in 267BPM accepted
[Futsuu]
for overall,depend on https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/152263,you should make more breaks
for example from 00:00:218 (1) - to 00:28:195 (83) - there's no breaks which are made by intention
but it seems you can't make breaks so much because of song,so i recommend reduce some 1/2
for example 00:10:667 (28,31) -
00:22:465 (62,63,64,65,66,67,68) - this is quite hard for Futsuu because they are same as 1/2 inBPM130,and 6 or more 1/2 streams are not allowed in Futsuu
maybe you will get same things when you ask BN to bubble rip accepted
from 00:40:666 (33,34,35,36) - same,1/1 in 267=1/2 in 133.5 you know
deleted 00:40:891 (34) , 00:43:363 (43)
01:43:588 (135,136,137,138,139,140,141,142,143,144) - 10 rip changed 01:44:261 (138,139,140) to 1/1
[Muzu]
this also too much hard depend on https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/152263
"Stick to simple 1/4 patterns like ddd/kkk, ddk/kkd and do not overuse them."
00:12:352 (79,80,81,82,83) - from it "Same applies for 1/4 ddddd/kkkkk, but these should stand rather alone."
00:15:049 (98,99,100,101,102) - too... and etc
good luck
no changes here

[Oni]
on the other hand nothing to say good
[Inner Oni]
00:08:897 (87) - delete?

actually BN always check easy diffs carefully,you should make them good especially
Oni and Inner Oni are seems fine already,good luck

NlHIL wrote:

[Futsuu]
00:41:340 (35) - move to 00:41:453 -
00:43:812 (44) - move to 00:43:924 -

Flying Pan wrote:

[Oni]
00:30:329 (5,6) - swap

Kasha wrote:

[Futsuu]


01:16:621 (51) - kat Changed.


[Muzukashii]

00:34:374 (31) - kat

00:34:936 (36) - ^



[Oni]


00:30:554 (7) - kat Changed.

nyanmi-1828 wrote:

umm...it look good.

instead of star~><ノ　ミ★

JUDYDANNY wrote:

The difficulty spread is too far gap between to Kantan~ Muzukashii.
You need add more notes on Kantan, and nerf Muzukashii.

Bow Queue

1. 00:24:824 - Change to k. This note has the same pitch as 00:24:150 -
2. 00:41:115 - Move this to 00:41:453 - . It seems weird to just map something in the middle of a guitar solo, if you can't map the rest of it. Whereas moving it would make it fall at the end of that rhythm.
3. 00:43:138 - Move to 00:43:026 - I think it makes more sense to follow the same pattern that you're following with 00:41:677 - / 00:41:902 - and 00:44:149 - / 00:44:374 -
4. 00:43:587 - Move to 00:43:924 - Same reason as for 00:41:115 -
5. 00:53:362 - Add a k. Why map this sound at 00:52:014 - but not at 00:53:362 - ? It sounds rather empty without it.
6. 00:56:733 - Add a d. Same reason as above.
7. 00:57:744 - Change to K. You already have 00:57:070 - as D, and 00:57:744 - has about the same amount of power as that note.

1. 00:14:712 - Remove. This note doesn't feel like it's following anything other than the drums. Yet you've mainly been following the guitar.
2. 00:15:386 - Change to k. This note has the same sound as 00:14:880 -
3. 00:20:105 - Same as 00:14:712 -
4. 00:20:779 - Same as 00:15:386 -
5. 00:25:835 - Change to k. Has the same pitch as 00:26:173 -
6. 01:35:834 - Same as 00:14:712 -
7. 01:36:508 - Same as 00:15:386 -
8. 01:41:227 - Same as 00:14:712 -
9. 01:41:902 - Same as 00:15:386 -
10. 01:45:946 - Change to k. Has the same pitch as 01:44:935 -

Grimbow wrote:

[General]

The Oni and Inner Oni have different preview points than the rest of the difficulties, might want to put them all on the same place

[Kantan]

00:28:532 (1) - I think this would be better suited as a slider as it is only a short held note and a short spinner might be a bit disorientating for a beginner player Changed
00:32:576 (5) - Add finish to this note, you have one on every other cymbal crash Removed Other Finishes.
00:37:969 (13) - Same here, add a finish Removed Other Finishes.
00:46:284 (22) - This note is off center!!! please fix!!! (not unrankable but everything else is centered!)
00:58:418 (1) - Same as the first suggestion, I think this might fit better as a slider Fixed.
01:04:486 (8) - I'm not sure why this slider is here however? It doesn't map anything that I can think of that would warrant a slider, so maybe putting a d at 01:04:486 - would be a better option? Deleted.
01:30:104 (53) - You had a finish at 01:24:711 (44) - so you could add one here to make them consistent Added
01:26:059 (46) - More off-center notes!!! There are a few after these too!

[Futsuu]

00:22:128 (49) - Add a finish to this note, all the other cymbal crashes in this section have them
00:26:173 (58) - Change this to k, the guitar note played here is a much higher pitch than the note previous to it and this would reflect the pitch change Changed.
01:04:486 (9) - Same as in the Kantan, I'm not quite sure what this slider is for? You could add a d at 01:04:486 - and a K at 01:04:823 - to map the bends on the guitar if that is what you are following? Deleted.
01:13:587 (27,28) - Ctrl+g these two notes, the guitar goes from low to high here and you have it going from k to d which is higher pitch to lower
01:17:632 (37,38) - Same here, Ctrl+g these two notes
01:18:980 (41,42) - These also, Ctrl+g them

[Muzukashii]

00:12:605 (45) - Since you already have another harder Muzukashii I think you should delete this note and make it a kkk k, that way it's not too much of a step up from the Futsuu and you can still have it in your harder version Changed
01:12:407 (44,45) - Ctrl+g these two, the pitch of the guitar suggests you should map this as kddk as it goes from high to low then back up, it would also add some pattern variation from 01:14:767 (54,55,56,57) - which is mapped the same, but sounds different in the music Changed
01:17:800 (69,70) - Same applies here, Ctrl+g these two notes Changed


[Inner Muzukashii]

Maybe rename it to Ura Muzukashii?
00:46:846 (112,113) - Ctrl+g these notes, the pitch of the guitar goes from low to high and then back from high to low and this would reflect it better Changed
00:47:857 (117,118) - Same here, except it goes from high to low and then low to high, Ctrl+g will fix it Changed
00:50:329 (130) - The density of this part is a massive jump from the Muzukashii, you might want to remove a few of the notes in this part to make the spread a bit more even (00:50:918 (135) - Even just deleting notes like this and removing some triplets makes it a bit better) Changed

That's all from me for now! If you want to call me back to mod the Oni and Inner Oni I can in about two weeks time maybe, sorry if this mod is a bit too short ! All the best in getting it ranked! It's a fun set and song.

Ulqui wrote:

[Inner Muzukashii]
Lite Oni(? Changed

00:09:487 (54,55) - delete and 00:09:656 (54) - D Changed

00:22:577 (139) - move to 00:22:802 - Changed
00:23:251 (143) - move to 00:23:476 - Changed

00:32:127 - add k? Changed
00:37:520 - add k? Changed

00:32:464 - add k??? (Suggestion)
00:37:857 - add k??? ^

00:46:059 - i think it sounds good with a k Changed

01:30:272 (179,181) - delete and 01:30:357 (179) - change to k? Changed

[Oni]
00:17:493 (143,145) - change to d?

00:32:464 - add k? Changed
00:37:857 - ^? Changed

01:10:553 - add d, it feels better Changed

01:30:441 (226) - move to 01:30:525 -
and 01:30:272 (224,225) - Ctrl + g

This diff is really good