1. Onozuka's Journey on the Sanzu River - 4Key (3,66 stars, 3034 notes)

Desperate-kun wrote:

The Kiais need more HW-Style 1/4. Kudosu please

schwarzvgrune wrote:

Hi Feerum~タン ~\(≧▽≦)/~
Mod as requested from Grune's modding queue
Feel free to implement or reject if you think this is useless ~~o(>_<)o ~~

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Timing : ( √ )
Audio :( √ )
Background :( √ )
Hitsounding :( √ )

4K = |1|2|3|4|

In general, I will mod based on these considerations ♪(^∇^*)
( X ) I will not take this into consideration when modding
( √ ) I will take this into consideration when modding
( ? ) I might unconsciously take this into consideration when modding
Pitch Agreement / Relevancy : ( √ )
Hand Balancing : ( √ )
(Consistent) Patterning : ( √ )
Possibility of Long Notes Abuse : ( √ )
Suggestions / Opinion only : ( √ )

Icon Bibliography

No emoticon in Black = normal suggestions based on rationale of modding above
Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ = error / mistake / extremely recommended to be modified
(⊙o⊙)？ = unclear / questionable parts, thus cannot give a decisive recommendations
O(∩_∩)O~ = other comments

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because you are using pitched piano, then it is natural to take into account pitch relevancy into consideration when mapping o(>﹏<)o so。。。
00:01:965 - Σ( ° △ °|||)︴add another B6, 40% volume
00:03:353 - Σ( ° △ °|||)︴^ Booth done. Feels nice to play! Thanks!
00:09:595 (9595|1) - to 3 Yes, thanks.
00:11:503 - Σ( ° △ °|||)︴F#7, 30%ｖｏｌｕｍｅ Added. I Also Added a G6H on the next White line with 20% Volume. It's great! Thsnks!
00:22:601 (22601|2) - Σ( ° △ °|||)︴＾^ Yes. Sounds good!
00:21:908 - http://puu.sh/gU7iH/a3b3a1efa2.jpg Great. Thanks! I also added a F#7 sound with 40% on the last Red line before the LN's start!

00:27:110 (27110|0) - to 2 Very nice. Was a bad jack before. Done!
00:31:098 - http://puu.sh/gU7o8/288a9c0b20.jpg Very nice Handbalance. Thanks!
01:19:306 (79306|2) - Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ends at 01:20:000 - Done
01:21:387 (81387|3,81734|1) -(⊙o⊙)？ should be 4/4 instead of 2/4? I'll try to follow the Vocal. So i will leave it how it is
01:30:405 (90405|1,91098|0) - Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ should be 1 LN, not 2. combine them Booth LN's follow her voice. i Leave it how it is.
01:32:486 (92486|1) - Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ lengthen by another 2/4 Vocal LN's. It's fine how it is

Excellent Beatmap!!! Nice Song!!! d(≧v≦)b~~ T-Thanks grune <3
Good Luck for rank!! O(∩_∩)O

- Bad Apple - wrote:

Suprise Mod \(°-° )/

Column | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

Gonna keep the mod in german, just for easier understanding and communication.

- Lé Mod -

General
- 04:50:173 - Kiai kürzer als 15 Sekunden, manche BN's machen da Stress. Geht zwar schlecht länger, aber du findest bestimmt 'ne Lösung
- Rügenwalder Rübenfest Zitat: "Don't worry no one will notice"

Map
- Rapetrain incoming!
- 00:02:486 -, 00:03:873 -, 00:06:127 -, 00:06:647 -, usw - müssten alle gemappt werden, wenn du die Töne hier; 00:11:503 (11503|0,11676|2) - auch mappst Gesagt, getan. Spielt sich überraschend gut!
- 00:13:410 - add 2 für's Drum? Man kann's Hit-Hat raushören (hier hast du's auch gemappt; 00:14:798 - , same drum-sound) Done für consistency! Thanks!
- 00:17:225 (17225|1) - move 1, damit der doppel jack auf 2 weg ist Yap
- 00:18:439 (18439|2) - move 1 od. 2, damit der doppel jack auf 3 weg ist Isch nehmene einse!
- 00:21:214 (21214|1) - move 1 und dafür 00:21:561 (21561|0) - auf 3? Nehm ich doch vorerst mal!
- 00:38:208 - wieso doppel-chord? remove 4 (außer du mappst das Piano damit, dann muss hier aber noch eine dazu; 00:38:382 - ) Note entfernt. Danke!
- 00:43:410 (43410|3,43410|2,43757|2,43757|3) - same here, falls du nicht das Piano mappst muss jeweils eine weg. Done! Consistency is pflicht :3
- 00:44:971 - snare-drum hörbar, add auf 1 (hast bei späteren stücken auch 2 noten für die snare bei solchen fills benutzt) Thanks!
- 01:04:220 (64220|1) - move 1, sonst doppel jack auf 2 Yes!
- 01:06:821 - ich persönlich finde 4 hier etwas übertrieben, man könnte aber für das ausklingende cymbal eine LN einbauen, die hier; 01:07:688 - endet. (dann hast du drei noten für die Kick und eine für's Cymbal, die Lücke wäre auch weg) wenn nicht, hier hast du für den selben sound auch nur 3 noten benutzt: 02:24:509 - Ne LN fänd ich da unpassend. Hab eine entfernt!
- 01:16:792 (76792|0) - Ghost-Note, remove (zumindest höre ich da keinen Ton und die anderen Ghosts hast du im Stream auch weggelassen) Aye! Wie konnt ich das überhören. Dabei bin ich die Streams 3x durchgegangen
- 01:27:803 (87803|3) - move 1? würde für den flow jacks vermeiden, soweit möglich Done!
- 01:46:358 - selber cymbal sound wie am anfang erwähnt, add 4 od. 1 Add bei 4
- 01:51:040 - wenn double-chords für's piano, dann add 4 Eine Note ist für Piano, die andere für die Snare oder wie das heißt. jedenfals für den anderen ton da! xD
- 01:51:908 - add 3 für's drum? Yup
- 01:56:069 - wenn double-chords fürs piano, dann muss hier noch eine note dazu Mh.. ich hör bei den 2 davor noch anderes sounds nebenbei mit raus. Neben Piano. Hier nicht. Darum las ich das erst mal so.
- 02:20:000 - Cymbal+Snare drum hier, würde noch ne note dazu machen da sehr laut und deutlich hörbar (auf 2) Added
- 02:24:509 - add auf 4, falls du den Quad-Chord vorher nicht rausgenommen hast, add LN falls du die LN hinzugefügt hast. No Change weil andere bearbeitet
- 02:27:543 (147543|3) - müsste ne Ghost Note sein, falls sie den Synth mappt. Nein. Ton vorhanden
- 02:28:931 (148931|3) - die auch Entfernt
- 02:33:613 (153613|0) - nicht ganz sicher, könnte aber auch eine sein. allgemein, die auf den blauen linien sind öfter ghostnotes, vllt nochmal selber drüberschauen Nein. Ton vorhanden
- 02:34:653 (154653|0) - ^ Auch hier Ton vorhanden
- 02:43:931 - remove 2, hast sonst nie 2 singles+LN für die Kick drums benutzt (während der LN parts.)
- 02:43:757 - wenn ^ befolgt ^, dann move 2 Beides done
- 03:00:289 (180289|2,180578|3) - Strg+G für Pitch
- 03:08:439 (188439|3,188786|2) - ^
- 03:02:370 (182370|2,182543|1,182717|0) - ^
- 03:04:740 (184740|0,185318|2) - ^
- 03:07:225 (187225|0) - move 2, damit nicht 2x note auf 1
- 03:08:266 (188266|1,188439|3) - Strg+G für Pitch Glaub da is dir ein kleiner fehler unterlaufen. Beim anklicken des Timings wird mir nur eine note Marktiert.
- 03:15:087 (195087|3,195549|2) - ^
- 03:16:416 (196416|3) - move 1 für pitch
- 03:16:936 (196936|0) - move 2 für pitch
- 03:17:225 (197225|1) - move 1 ^
- 03:19:538 (199538|2) - move 2, damit 03:19:884 (199884|1) - auf 4 kann und der pitch wieder stimmt Komplett angenommen bis auf das was ich erwähnt hab!
- 03:34:046 (214046|2,214220|2,214393|2,214566|2,214740|2) - kokoro itaii I'm so sorry (Lösung; http://puu.sh/gUcgI/e875031073.jpg, grüne Linie auf 03:33:873 - ) Ich wusste sofort das dir das auffallen wird. Ich wusste einfach keine lösung dafür. Vielen dank <3
- 03:36:301 - move 2 auf 3 oder 4 auf 3 (sonst haste den doppel jack auf 2 und 4) ersteres!
- 03:39:249 (219249|3) - move 1, sonst doppel jack auf 4 Yes
- 03:40:289 (220289|1) - move 2 sonst doppel jack auf 2 Schau dir das bitte nochmal an :^)
- 03:40:462 (220462|3) - wenn ^ befolgt ^, move 1, sonst 3 noten hintereinander auf 4 Nich bei mir
- 04:30:578 (270578|1) - move 1, sind ohnehin schon so viele auf 2 Done

Das wäre für den Moment erstmal alles. Sieht nach viel aus,ist es auch, aber solange es hilft, ist es das doch wert!
Hoffe ich konnte helfen.

I hope this was somewhat of a useful mod.
Good luck with ranked! :3

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Hi Feerum-san >.<)/
NM as requested from ☆ Moe Hunter Mania Queue ☆

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4K = |1|2|3|4|

(Focus : Note Presence , Hand/Row Balance, Aesthetics/Consistency Pattern)

Onozuka's journey

00:23:481 (23481|0,23481|3) change into normal note, check 00:45:678 for consistency Yes, done.
00:56:429 (56429|0) LN..?? if you following vocal, should start here 00:56:256 I tried to catch the "woooosh" sound. But i think to follow the vocal is better here, thanks!
01:51:053 add note, still piano sound here No thanks. The 2 Chords are for the Snare sound. At this Point it's only the Piano. More notes would be to much
01:58:684 (118684|1) remove, no sound or low No Thanks. i know the Sound is maybe low but that would destroy a little bit the LN part's. See here 02:01:098 -
02:03:366 add note consistency parttern Yes, done.
03:04:464 (184464|2,184753|2) avoid same row Yes, moved.
03:55:562 (235562|3) move to 1 Yes.
very good pattern, but i suggest you
kick beat sound = 2 note like 00:13:597 and Snare beat sound = 3 like 00:13:770
it's optioanl (afraid if it broken your pattern T_T) It's a nice suggestion.. i really think about it too.. but i'm afraid too that could destroy the patterns.. so i will leave it now how it is

Nice map
Good Luck -nya~ (づ｡◕‿‿◕｡)づ

-Kamikaze- wrote:

holy shit I'm like 3 weeks late with mods, fml

General outline of what my mods contain:
>My thoughts about mapset
>Some advices
>Harsh opinions about map if I feel like it needs more work
>Complaining about mapstyle (sometimes even shouting)
>Commenting on 90% of things I mention
>Funny maymay arrows
>w33d
>Random images
>All the bad shit you may not expect
Keep in mind that all harsh things I say, not because I hate stuff, but because I care about every single map I mod and want to help you get it ranked. I'm voicing all of my opinions without restraint. Please don't rage at me because of this, I don't mean to offend you in any way. Also do note that I'm still learning, so I might misunderstand some things. and I'm terrible at naming instruments orz

Unrankable stuff
Highly recommended various stuff
Rest of shite
Things after // comments about proposed stuff

Keys: |1|2|3|4|

Metadata:

Source is wrong. It should be 東方Project because that's how ZUN calls it, thus how it's in original. Move touhou to tags
Tags to add: ほたる すみじゅん くまりす 東方花映塚 retour ~ riverside view 小野塚 小町 おのづか こまち Done


[Onozuka's Journey]

00:10:289 (10289|3) - Delete, ghost note //That's an echo and it's almost gone when the note is placed
00:11:503 (11503|0) - ^
00:11:676 (11676|2) - ^ Oh okay. All done!
00:23:208 - Add note Done
00:44:624 - Something like this is better to emphasize drums:
//applies to all similar patterns Thats Great! Thanks! Done for all these Parts
03:43:584 - This part feels like a prefect place for hard chordmash and not the same LN+1/2 stuff again I'll check this later.

To be honest, this map is quite solid, but it has 2 main issues so I'm not going to bother with more of technicalities. Patterns are okay/good.
1) Some triples feel like they're unneeded, for example 00:35:780 - normal beat mapped with 3 notes when crash on 00:34:913 - is also 3 notes. Suggesting to use 2 notes for those beats unless it has more stuff into it.
2) The worse issue is however, that this map is pretty boring. It's pretty much constant 1/2 patterns with occasional LNs, when there is A LOT of REALLY LOUD 1/4s just everywhere in faster parts. In order to make it enjoyable you should map those 1/4s into a jumpstream (streams with chords). This i will Check later too.

Sorry for a really lazy mod, but hope it helps o/

Crono wrote:

Hi, great song choice. I love the map but I feel it could be far better. Whether you think my mod helps or not is completely up to you just know I want to help make it better. I must stress that this is all optional and will am not demanding you implement these changes.

This will mostly be about adding more diversity to the map to make it less repetitive. It will also cover a few points that Kami mentioned but a little more detailed.

A detailed explanation of a couple issues Kami pointed out

In the majority of the map you have notes like this 1/2 beat at 00:16:358



Perhaps it should be like this?



The only issue I have with this is that the sound is stronger on the top row, usually there would be three notes on the stronger beats instead of the weaker beats like in the second picture. It may be that it's to another sound, but that sound is difficult to determine for me personally. This also applies to places like where you have LNs but pretty much the same 1/2 patterns. The picture below is an example where a single is on the stronger sound instead of a 2 note chord. Another option would to just have them both as 2 note chords.



I think it would better like this because the 3 note chord is on the stronger sound.

Options to Improve Diversity and lessen boring repetition

The main issue I have with the map as a whole is that it is almost entirely 1/2 patterns. It's too repetitive.
In some sections you could make use of the hitsounds a bit better. You could add a personal touch to your diff to make add diversity and make it less repetitive. Like some louder soft normal hitsounds to add some brief streams here and there.

Option 1: add 1/4 patterns

If you listen closely there is a fair bit of 1/4 in the background you can map to as well. Why is 00:13:064 to 00:13:584 the only place with a short stream?



Having more of these would make the map alot better imo.
Below is just a few more places where you could add 1/4 patterns:

• 00:14:277 to 00:14:451
  00:16:879 to 00:17:225 and 00:17:399 to 00:17:746
  01:23:988 to 01:24:335
  01:39:249 to 01:39:769

There are many more where you could add short streams or even jump streans like Kami's example, but when used effectively can lessen the boring repetition.

Option 2: Add more Long Notes to make a more lyrical pattern.

This may sound obvious but switching the note focus (like the sounds you are mostly focused on such as vocals, drums etc) can change the feel in a map a little and feel a little more immersed while playing your map.

Combining this with option 1 creates can make put out some more interesting effects.

...................................



There is of course a lot more advice I can't think of at the moment. The rest of this is just general modding.

[Onozuka's Journey]

///[1][2][3][4]

01:34:827 Add note to 1 Yes, done
01:44:624 change 1 to a long note and end it at the next 1/2
01:44:798 change 2 ^
01:44:971 change 3 ^
01:45:318 change 1 ^ To this all i have to say no. I don't want to Map the Piano with LN's.. it feels a little bit Random while Testplay

These are just examples and ideas that could improve this mania diff.

If any of this is helpful to you and you would like further suggestions. Let me know. I will be looking forward to seeing how you improve it. Be modding again later after your next few updates.

Jinyan wrote:

really fun Taiko diff, going to make a mod soon If you don't mind

Jinyan wrote:

really fun Taiko diff, going to make a mod soon If you don't mind