Kozato - Tsuki -Yue- [OsuMania] · forum

Harbyter

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Harbyter 2015-02-18T14:36:58+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年5月1日 at 23:57:50

Artist: Kozato
Title: Tsuki -Yue-
Tags: spiritual Trance
BPM: 150
Filesize: 3547kb
Play Time: 02:36
Difficulties Available:

HD - 4Key (2.72 stars, 1129 notes)
MX - 4Key (3.58 stars, 1347 notes)
NM - 4Key (1.86 stars, 701 notes)

Download: Kozato - Tsuki -Yue-
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Check on kozato's personal youtube channel
雪月こざと // platinawing sounds label

Enjoy with DT ~

by Shana Lesus

by ExUsagi

23/3 redownload please~

all ~~stolen~~ borrowed from forum/t/270275

Thanks to everyone who helped me

NM by me

HD by me

MX by me

Last edited by Harbyter 2022-09-17T02:34:56+00:00, edited 32 times in total.

Danielslz9

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Danielslz9 2015-02-18T22:51:34+00:00

First

Harbyter

Beatmap Nominator

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Harbyter 2015-02-19T01:21:07+00:00

xD

lenpai

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lenpai 2015-02-21T15:18:41+00:00

Hue stealing BG from CLSW :v
colums 1-4
mowd:

MX

hd

Pattern heavy. Try to check pitch too to improve pattern usage.
I see certain patterns here that are also used in MX. If a certain exact pattern in MX exist in this diff and got modded, apply the same mod here.
Looks like there's nothing wrong here

nm

Remember pitch as always
No complaints.

Shooting star for song choice kek
I'm sick of animu + vocals

[ A v a l o n ]

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[ A v a l o n ] 2015-02-22T03:02:42+00:00

Really love this beatmap and this song too XD
thanks for make it =w=)b

the pattern is already good, so i will do a quick mod =w=
*uncheck widescreen support

1 2 3 4 <(^o^<)

note: test it before you reject it, ahahh . . . XD

NM

HP OD = 7

00:16:631 (16631|3,16831|2) - how about make this guy to 2 and 4 ? try it . . . :3
00:19:431 (19431|0,19631|2) - move 1 column to the right
00:22:231 (22231|0,22431|1) - swap column, and after that 00:22:631 (22631|3) - move to 3
00:28:831 - add 1 note
00:31:231 (31231|3) - move it to 3 ? same sound like 00:24:831 - (optional)
00:31:031 (31031|0,31431|1) - swap column
00:34:631 (34631|0) - move to 4
00:35:431 (35431|3,35631|1) - move 1 column to the left
00:36:631 (36631|2) - move to 2
00:39:431 - try this XD
00:49:631 (49631|3,49631|2,50031|1) - swap it
00:54:231 (54231|3) - move to 3 or 00:54:431 (54431|0) - move to 3
00:57:231 (57231|0) - move to 4
01:04:031 (64031|1,64431|2) - Ctrl G
01:08:431 (68431|0) - move to 2
01:09:631 (69631|3,69831|0) - move to 3 and 2
01:09:831 (69831|0,70231|1) - Ctrl G
01:11:431 - maybe try this ?
01:17:831 (77831|0,78031|2,78131|0,78231|3) - maybe this too difficut for nowcomer player, so . . . try this
01:22:631 (82631|0) - move to 2
01:23:831 (83831|0) - move to 4
01:32:831 (92831|3,93097|2,93364|3) - rotate it horizontally ( i mean swap that, to 3 4 3 )
01:43:031 (103031|2) - move to 2
01:46:331 (106331|2) - ^
01:47:231 (107231|3) - ^
01:49:831 (109831|2,110031|3,110231|1) - move to 1 3 4
01:52:331 - missing note ?
01:53:631 (113631|3) - move to 2
02:01:231 (121231|2,121431|2,121631|1,121831|1) - no need to be same column, since the sound is different
02:05:231 (125231|2,125431|1) - move to 1 and 3
02:13:831 (133831|2) - move to 2
02:21:431 (141431|1,141531|2,141631|3) - Ctrl G
02:25:631 (145631|2) - move to 2
02:26:231 (146231|3,146331|1,146431|0) - Ctrl G

HD

00:18:231 (18231|2,18431|1) - Ctrl G
00:20:831 (20831|3,21031|3,21231|2,21431|2,21631|1,21831|1,22031|0,22231|0) - if you jack it . . . i think the pattern is not be a melodical, try to re- arrange these guy

00:32:631 (32631|0,32831|1,33031|2,33231|3) - the stair is not follow the music, try this XD
00:33:631 (33631|3,33831|3,34031|2,34231|2,34431|1,34631|1) - Please don't this

00:38:231 (38231|3,38631|3) - move to 3
00:40:231 (40231|1) - ^
00:41:631 - start this i willleave it to you

i know you expert for pattern like this Harby . . . =w=)b

00:48:631 (48631|2,48731|1) - Ctrl G ?
01:08:031 (68031|0) - move to 2
01:12:031 (72031|1,72231|0) - Ctrl G
01:18:431 (78431|0) - move to 3

Okay, mod done

i'm sorry i can't mod MX

i lose my sense for that diff XD
i leave my star here XD /

good luck Harby =w=)b

shionelove

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shionelove 2015-02-22T08:53:12+00:00

from M4M

column 1234

[HD]
00:47:231 (47231|0,47831|2) - add bass notes
00:53:831 (53831|2,54231|3) - add 1
00:59:231 (59231|3,59331|2,59431|1,59531|0,59631|3,59731|2,59831|1,59931|0) - same rhythm as
00:46:631 (46631|1,46731|2,46831|3,46831|0,47031|2,47131|1) -
01:16:431 (76431|3) - delete
02:16:431 (136431|3) - add
02:22:831 (142831|3) - ^
[MX]
00:54:131 - add 2,your HD has
00:59:231 (59231|2,59231|3,59331|0,59431|1,59531|0,59631|3,59631|2,59731|0,59831|1,59931|0) - same as HD
01:16:431 (76431|3) - delete
01:43:431 (103431|2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2808846
02:23:631 (143631|1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2808851

good luck

Harbyter

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Harbyter 2015-02-22T09:02:31+00:00

ty guys, all applied

Kurisu Makise

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Kurisu Makise 2015-02-24T20:15:01+00:00

Hi! From random queue.
|1|2|3|4|

NM

I didn't notice any serious mistakes, so just worked on balance.
00:18:031 (18031|3) - Move to 1 for balance.
00:28:831 (28831|3) - ^
00:30:231 (30231|2,30631|2) - Move to 2 for balance.
00:32:231 (32231|2,32431|3) - Move 1 column left for balance.
00:32:231 (32231|2,32431|3) - Move to 2 for balance.
00:41:031 (41031|2,41231|3) - Move 1 column left for balance.
00:46:431 (46431|3,46431|0,46831|1,46831|2,47231|0,47231|3,47631|2,47831|1) - ctrl+h for balance.
00:51:231 (51231|1,51631|3) - 1-2 for balance.
01:05:631 (65631|2,65631|0,66031|1,66031|3,66431|2,66431|0,66831|3,66831|1,67031|2) - ctrl+h for balance.
01:16:431 (76431|2,76831|3) - Move 1 column left for balance.
01:19:231 (79231|3,80431|2) - Move to 2 for balance.
01:25:431 (85431|2) - ^
01:32:431 (92431|1,92831|2) - Maybe ctrl+j for completing piano slide.
01:37:631 (97631|0,97631|1) - One of them to 3 for balance.
01:50:831 (110831|1,111231|0) - 1-4 for balance.
02:06:831 (126831|3,127631|3) - To 2, 02:07:231 (127231|1) - to 4 for balance.
02:15:131 (135131|1) - To 3 for balance.
02:17:231 (137231|0) - To 4 for balance and completing piano slide.
02:21:431 (141431|3,141531|2,141631|1) - Move 1 column left for balance.
02:32:731 (152731|2) - To 2 for balance.
I really counted notes, so modded diff must be almost ideally balanced C:

HD

00:42:031 (42031|2) - To 2 for pitch?
00:48:231 (48231|1,48331|2) - Maybe ctrl+h.
00:52:831 (52831|0,53231|0) - Add second notes for strong beat (4-3 is good).
01:13:031 (73031|3,73131|2,73231|1) - ctrl+h, seems more balanced.
01:30:231 (90231|2) - To 4, 01:30:631 (90631|3) - to 1 and 01:31:031 (91031|3) - 1 column left. It's just example, you can do this pattern more balanced any other way.
01:32:431 - Add note.
02:18:331 - Missed note.

MX

00:54:331 - You can add note here, since it's MX diff.
01:03:631 (63631|0,63831|0,64031|0,64231|0,64431|0,64631|0) - I don't think, pedal point is good pattern here. There's no dominating monotonous sound that repeats every 1/2, so no need in additional stressing every 1/2 beat. I highly recommend you to move 01:04:231 (64231|0) - to 4th column and maybe 01:03:831 (63831|0) - to 2nd.
01:20:231 - You could use sounds like this to force difficulty.
01:27:431 - ^
01:32:431 - Add note.
02:05:531 - ^
02:07:131 - ^ (better deny this for sake of pattern, lol).
02:10:731 - Add note to 3 and 02:11:131 - add note to 1. I think, sounds here are just intensive enough for doubles.
02:18:231 (138231|1) - Move 1/4 higher (missed sound).
02:20:631 (140631|0,141031|0) - To 3 and 02:20:831 (140831|2) - to 1 for pitch and balance.
02:35:231 - You can use double stream from here to 1/8 notes. Change alternating pairs on white lines if accept previous suggestion about doubles.

Nice map, good luck! :3

Harbyter

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Harbyter 2015-02-27T15:29:27+00:00

Kiviman wrote:
Hi! From random queue.
|1|2|3|4|

NM
I didn't notice any serious mistakes, so just worked on balance.
00:18:031 (18031|3) - Move to 1 for balance.
00:28:831 (28831|3) - ^
00:30:231 (30231|2,30631|2) - Move to 2 for balance.
00:32:231 (32231|2,32431|3) - Move 1 column left for balance.
00:32:231 (32231|2,32431|3) - Move to 2 for balance.
00:41:031 (41031|2,41231|3) - Move 1 column left for balance.
00:46:431 (46431|3,46431|0,46831|1,46831|2,47231|0,47231|3,47631|2,47831|1) - ctrl+h for balance.
00:51:231 (51231|1,51631|3) - 1-2 for balance.
01:05:631 (65631|2,65631|0,66031|1,66031|3,66431|2,66431|0,66831|3,66831|1,67031|2) - ctrl+h for balance.
01:16:431 (76431|2,76831|3) - Move 1 column left for balance.
01:19:231 (79231|3,80431|2) - Move to 2 for balance.
01:25:431 (85431|2) - ^
01:32:431 (92431|1,92831|2) - Maybe ctrl+j for completing piano slide.
01:37:631 (97631|0,97631|1) - One of them to 3 for balance.
01:50:831 (110831|1,111231|0) - 1-4 for balance.
02:06:831 (126831|3,127631|3) - To 2, 02:07:231 (127231|1) - to 4 for balance.
02:15:131 (135131|1) - To 3 for balance.
02:17:231 (137231|0) - To 4 for balance and completing piano slide.
02:21:431 (141431|3,141531|2,141631|1) - Move 1 column left for balance.
02:32:731 (152731|2) - To 2 for balance.
I really counted notes, so modded diff must be almost ideally balanced C:

HD
00:42:031 (42031|2) - To 2 for pitch?
00:48:231 (48231|1,48331|2) - Maybe ctrl+h.
00:52:831 (52831|0,53231|0) - Add second notes for strong beat (4-3 is good).
01:13:031 (73031|3,73131|2,73231|1) - ctrl+h, seems more balanced.
01:30:231 (90231|2) - To 4, 01:30:631 (90631|3) - to 1 and 01:31:031 (91031|3) - 1 column left. It's just example, you can do this pattern more balanced any other way.
01:32:431 - Add note.
02:18:331 - Missed note.

MX
00:54:331 - You can add note here, since it's MX diff.
01:03:631 (63631|0,63831|0,64031|0,64231|0,64431|0,64631|0) - I don't think, pedal point is good pattern here. There's no dominating monotonous sound that repeats every 1/2, so no need in additional stressing every 1/2 beat. I highly recommend you to move 01:04:231 (64231|0) - to 4th column and maybe 01:03:831 (63831|0) - to 2nd.
01:20:231 - You could use sounds like this to force difficulty.
01:27:431 - ^
01:32:431 - Add note.
02:05:531 - ^
02:07:131 - ^ (better deny this for sake of pattern, lol).
02:10:731 - Add note to 3 and 02:11:131 - add note to 1. I think, sounds here are just intensive enough for doubles.
02:18:231 (138231|1) - Move 1/4 higher (missed sound).
02:20:631 (140631|0,141031|0) - To 3 and 02:20:831 (140831|2) - to 1 for pitch and balance.
02:35:231 - You can use double stream from here to 1/8 notes. Change alternating pairs on white lines if accept previous suggestion about doubles.

Nice map, good luck! :3

ty for the mod~ almost all applied except the adding note in the piano part or jacks in the MX

Feerum

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Feerum 2015-02-27T23:14:13+00:00

Hello Harbyter!

This time it's my turn

From Feru's Mania Modding

First, sorry for the delay!

Column: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

I'll start with the MX

MX

00:35:031 (35031|3) - move to 2 and rearrange with the Chord above
00:47:431 (47431|3,47531|2,47631|1,47631|0,47731|3) - maybe Ctrl+H and 00:47:831 (47831|3) - to 4?
00:54:031 - Maybe remove one?
01:01:431 (61431|0,61531|1,61631|0,61631|3) - Ctrl+H
01:08:031 (68031|1) - Move to 2
01:23:631 - Add one (Optional)
01:58:231 (118231|2,118331|3) - booth one to the right
01:53:431 - and 01:58:631 - make them similar
02:16:531 (136531|0) - Maybe remove?
02:24:631 (144631|3) - Move to 2
General to MX: Maybe Add Kiai from 00:41:631 - to 01:07:231 -

HD

00:52:031 (52031|3) - move to 2
01:09:131 (69131|3) - move to 3
Make 01:53:431 - and 01:58:631 - similar?

NM

01:32:431 - maybe add LN to 01:32:631 - ?
01:58:631 (118631|2) - remove
01:59:831 (119831|1) - ^
02:06:231 (126231|1) - ^

Thats all :3
Hope my little mod is helpfull ^_^

Fubukicat

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Fubukicat 2015-02-28T07:48:14+00:00

Osu Harby-chwan >w< mod request from : 『 Hitsound Mod(All) & Normal Mod( Mania only ) 』

9 days ago ~ (( huh delay , welp sorry about that ^^' ))

Will try to help as I can :3b

Peace Mod of Justice

collumn 4K = 1/2/3/4
[MX]
01:08:831 (68831|3) - add note to 2 or 4
01:40:831 (100831|0) - add to 1
01:42:431 (102431|0) - add one more note
01:44:031 (104031|0) - ^ to 1?
01:56:831 (116831|1) - add (optional) I 'm pretty sure you intended to put only one note ,I just Suggest for the lulz
02:23:931 (143931|1) - shouldn't it be 2 notes ? it sound exactly like : 02:23:831 (143831|3,143831|2) -

Noice diff~
[HD]
00:44:431 (44431|0) - add note , ( follow your pattern number of notes = 3,2,2,3,3 ((chords thingys)) )
OR : 00:42:831 (42831|1,42831|0,42831|3) - remove one of them
^ according the one you choose :
00:46:031 (46031|1) - add note , or 00:49:231 (49231|3,49231|0,49231|2) - delete one
00:50:831 (50831|3) - add note
00:52:431 (52431|2) - add note
^ suggestion is really optional , you may change the patterns if you add , I would suggest deleting one instead , that's my opinion

00:57:231 (57231|2,57231|0,57231|3) - should be 3 notes
01:06:031 (66031|3) - Add to 4 ? (optional imo )
01:08:831 (68831|1) - adding one to 2 wouldn't affect the flow of the pattern imo , and it's the same as 01:21:631 (81631|3,81631|0,81731|2,81831|3,81931|2,82031|1) -

Nicu~
[NM]
01:13:031 (73031|2) - maybe change this to 1/2 simples ? it feels kind of weird to press LN for piano roll imo ( seing next pattern I think it's fine)
01:31:631 (91631|0) - that thing surprised me ( and broke my SS llooool) playable :3
01:45:531 (105531|1) - add note ?
02:17:231 (137231|3) - I suggest , move to 1 , add another note on 2 , 02:17:431 (137431|2) - move to 4
02:30:031 (150031|2) - add to 3

good good

Done~ Good Luck, Hope my mod didn't mix with the previous one ( I didn't wanted to make you wait even more LOL , so welp err )) also hope it'll help :3

Have a nice day harby-chan >w< ~ on a side note : this song is love XD

TTGL

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TTGL 2015-02-28T23:20:26+00:00

Yo from Hawxx's Modding Queue that will pierce the heavens!

Also sorry for the very late mod!

Column : \1\2\3\4\

Mod.

NM

01:10:431 (70431|3,70731|2,71031|1) - I think this pattern here deserves to have double notes, like in your HD diff
01:18:431 - to 01:19:231 - you could probably fit in a LN if you want, though this is optional.
01:39:431 (99431|0) - I don't think this note is mapped to any background instrument ( at least I can't hear anything ) so I'd say delete it and maybe rework the pattern there to maybe look better or play better without that note.

and that's all for this diff, nice pattern variety and good hand balance. Altogether fun to play!

HD

00:27:831 - a double note could go here
01:30:031 - a note could go here some where for the background beat
Apart from that this difficulty is very nicely done! Can't really say much more for this diff haha

MX

00:19:431 (19431|0,19631|2,19831|0,20031|3,20231|1,20431|3,20631|2) - this pattern is the exact same than the one on your HD difficulty, I suggest to change it up a bit for a bit of pattern variety across diffs
00:22:631 (22631|2,22831|0,23031|2,23231|3,23431|2,23631|0,23831|3) - this pattern is the same as the one in your HD diff too.
00:24:231 (24231|3,24431|2,24631|3,24831|1,25031|2,25231|0,25431|1) - same with this one
00:25:831 (25831|1,26031|2,26231|0,26431|3,26631|1,26831|3,27031|2) - and this one
00:27:431 (27431|2,27631|3,27831|1,28231|2,28431|3) - ^
00:29:031 (29031|2,29231|0,29431|2,29631|3,29831|1,30031|3,30231|2) - ^
00:30:631 (30631|2,30831|3,31031|0,31231|3,31431|1,31631|3,31831|2) - ^
00:35:431 (35431|3,35631|1,35831|3,36031|2,36231|0,36431|3,36631|2) - ^
00:38:631 (38631|2,38831|0,39031|2,39231|3,39431|0,39631|3,39831|1) - ^
00:40:231 (40231|1,40431|3,40631|1,40831|0,41031|2,41231|3) - ^
01:14:431 (74431|2,74431|0,74831|3,74831|1,75231|2,75231|0,75631|2,75631|1,76031|1,76031|0,76431|2,76431|1,76831|3,76831|2) - 01:14:431 (74431|2,74431|0,74831|3,74831|1,75231|2,75231|0,75631|2,75631|1,76031|1,76031|0,76431|2,76431|1,76831|3,76831|2) - ^
So I could list a whole lot more of these but that would just make this look helluva lot messier, there are lots of patterns which are directly copied from your HD difficulty, I'd say it's okay to keep some if you wanna stay with that style or pitch relevancy but it can make that diff quite boring if there are a lot of reused patterns. I would say that you should just check over the whole off your MX difficulty and compare it to your HD difficulty to spot the same patterns and just switch some of the patterns around or even mirror them if you want too.

Though other than that, another fantastic diff! Well done.

So that's all for my mod! Hope it helps ya.

Harbyter

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Topic Starter

Harbyter 2015-03-01T13:12:34+00:00

ty guys,too lazy to reply to all xD

expect for adding some notes i've applied some suggestion

@Hawxx : HD is from the MX, just removed several notes xDDD

[ kenon ]

[ kenon ] 2015-03-02T15:05:11+00:00

hi harby >w<
first try mod xD
so sorry if it not helpful xD
i just focus on hand balance

1|2|3|4

HD

00:17:623 (17623|1) - move to 4
00:19:223 (19223|2) - move to 4
00:24:023 (24023|1) - to 3
00:29:423 (29423|1) - 2
00:29:823 (29823|1) - 1
00:33:223 (33223|1) - 4
00:36:223 (36223|0) - 2
01:09:823 (69823|0) - 2
01:10:223 (70223|1) - 4
01:18:123 (78123|0) - 2
01:31:723 (91723|2) - 2
01:39:423 (99423|0) - 3
01:42:623 (102623|3) - 2
01:51:023 (111023|0) - 2
01:51:123 (111123|1) - 3
01:58:223 (118223|2) - 1
01:58:323 (118323|3) - 2
01:58:423 (118423|1) - 4
02:03:823 (123823|3) - 2
02:24:623 (144623|3,144723|2) - 2 and 3

okay thats all >w<
thanks harby fir giving me a chance

its just sugesstion if u dont like just ignore it xD
good luck =w=)b

Adinata28

551 posts

Joined March 2014

Adinata28 2015-03-04T05:21:33+00:00

Hai Harby >.<)/
Mod from Moe Hunter Mania Queue
Key :
1|2|3|4

General

Seems Fine to me~

NM

01:13:023 (73023|2) - Change this to 1/4 ? like 01:08:823 (68823|0,68923|3,69023|0,69123|3) -
01:15:223 - Add a note
01:16:423 - Delete 1 note, i think it's not neccesarry if you add 2 notes here.
01:16:823 - Add a note
01:21:623 (81623|3) - Change this to 1/4 ? like 01:08:823 (68823|0,68923|3,69023|0,69123|3) -
01:28:023 - Add a note, Consistency with 01:26:423 (86423|0,86423|1) -
01:31:223 (91223|2,91623|3,92023|0) - Delete ?
* 01:33:356 (93356|2) - Move to 2
* 01:33:623 (93623|0) - Move to 4
* 01:35:823 (95823|2) - Move to 2
* 01:36:289 (96289|1) - Move to 3
01:56:823 (116823|1,116823|0,117223|1,117223|2,117623|2,117623|3,118023|2,118023|1,118423|0,118423|1) - Change to 1 note and make 1/2 or change 1 note to LN ? i feel awkward on this part.
01:59:023 (119023|1,119223|0) - change to 1/4, consistency with 01:46:223 (106223|0,106323|1,106423|3) -
02:00:623 (120623|3,120823|1) - change to 1/4 again, consistency with 01:54:223 (114223|2,114323|3,114423|0) -

02:22:423 (142423|3,142423|2,142823|1,142823|0,143223|2,143223|3,143623|1,143623|0) - change to 1 LN and 1 Note, like 02:28:823 (148823|0,148823|2,149223|3,149223|1,149623|0,149623|2,150023|3) -
02:32:423 - Add note
That's All

HD

from 00:01:623 - to 00:14:023 - feel so empty, lol xD
00:59:620 - Add a note, consistency
01:01:223 - Add a note, consistency
01:06:923 (66923|2,67123|2) - Delete, no instrument sound here. except the 1/6.
01:15:223 - and 01:16:823 - i think you should add 3 notes here xD
01:18:423 - add a note ? louder sound than 01:19:223 (79223|3,79223|1) -
01:23:223 (83223|2,83223|3) - Delete 1 note here, i think this sound isn't loud
02:18:023 - Add a note ? consistency
02:23:423 - Add a note ? drum sound like 02:23:223 (143223|3,143223|1,143623|1,143623|3,143823|1,143823|0) -
02:29:223 - Add a note ? consistency
02:30:823 - Add a note ? consistency

That's it, Pretty good diff.

MX

from 00:01:623 - to 00:14:023 - ahh, poor piano sound

00:52:623 (52623|1,52623|2,52823|0,52823|1) - change to 1 note ._.
01:13:623 - Add note ?
01:15:223 - Add note ? louder sound
01:16:823 - ^
01:18:423 - ^
01:24:823 - ^
01:26:423 - ^
01:28:023 - ^
01:29:623 - ^
01:58:623 (118623|2) - Delete
01:59:823 (119823|1) - Delete
Beyond my imagination D:
That's it

Nice Mapset & Good song, this make me remembered jonathan's mapset xD
Good Luck, Harby ^^)/

Harbyter

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Harbyter 2015-03-05T21:31:36+00:00

[ kenon ] wrote:
hi harby >w<
first try mod xD
so sorry if it not helpful xD
i just focus on hand balance

1|2|3|4

HD
00:17:623 (17623|1) - move to 4
00:19:223 (19223|2) - move to 4
00:24:023 (24023|1) - to 3
00:29:423 (29423|1) - 2
00:29:823 (29823|1) - 1
00:33:223 (33223|1) - 4
00:36:223 (36223|0) - 2
01:09:823 (69823|0) - 2
01:10:223 (70223|1) - 4
01:18:123 (78123|0) - 2
01:31:723 (91723|2) - 2
01:39:423 (99423|0) - 3
01:42:623 (102623|3) - 2
01:51:023 (111023|0) - 2
01:51:123 (111123|1) - 3
01:58:223 (118223|2) - 1
01:58:323 (118323|3) - 2
01:58:423 (118423|1) - 4
02:03:823 (123823|3) - 2
02:24:623 (144623|3,144723|2) - 2 and 3
okay thats all >w<
thanks harby fir giving me a chance
its just sugesstion if u dont like just ignore it xD
good luck =w=)b

ty kenon

almost all applied

Adinata28 wrote:
Hai Harby >.<)/
Mod from Moe Hunter Mania Queue
Key :
1|2|3|4

General
Seems Fine to me~
NM
01:13:023 (73023|2) - Change this to 1/4 ? like 01:08:823 (68823|0,68923|3,69023|0,69123|3) -
01:15:223 - Add a note
01:16:423 - Delete 1 note, i think it's not neccesarry if you add 2 notes here.
01:16:823 - Add a note
01:21:623 (81623|3) - Change this to 1/4 ? like 01:08:823 (68823|0,68923|3,69023|0,69123|3) -
01:28:023 - Add a note, Consistency with 01:26:423 (86423|0,86423|1) -
01:31:223 (91223|2,91623|3,92023|0) - Delete ?
* 01:33:356 (93356|2) - Move to 2
* 01:33:623 (93623|0) - Move to 4
* 01:35:823 (95823|2) - Move to 2
* 01:36:289 (96289|1) - Move to 3
01:56:823 (116823|1,116823|0,117223|1,117223|2,117623|2,117623|3,118023|2,118023|1,118423|0,118423|1) - Change to 1 note and make 1/2 or change 1 note to LN ? i feel awkward on this part.
01:59:023 (119023|1,119223|0) - change to 1/4, consistency with 01:46:223 (106223|0,106323|1,106423|3) -
02:00:623 (120623|3,120823|1) - change to 1/4 again, consistency with 01:54:223 (114223|2,114323|3,114423|0) -

02:22:423 (142423|3,142423|2,142823|1,142823|0,143223|2,143223|3,143623|1,143623|0) - change to 1 LN and 1 Note, like 02:28:823 (148823|0,148823|2,149223|3,149223|1,149623|0,149623|2,150023|3) -
02:32:423 - Add note almost all applied
That's All
HD
from 00:01:623 - to 00:14:023 - feel so empty, lol xD xD
00:59:620 - Add a note, consistency
01:01:223 - Add a note, consistency
01:06:923 (66923|2,67123|2) - Delete, no instrument sound here. except the 1/6. no drum in 1/8
01:15:223 - and 01:16:823 - i think you should add 3 notes here xD
01:18:423 - add a note ? louder sound than 01:19:223 (79223|3,79223|1) -
01:23:223 (83223|2,83223|3) - Delete 1 note here, i think this sound isn't loud
02:18:023 - Add a note ? consistency
02:23:423 - Add a note ? drum sound like 02:23:223 (143223|3,143223|1,143623|1,143623|3,143823|1,143823|0) -
02:29:223 - Add a note ? consistency
02:30:823 - Add a note ? consistency sorry all deny Dx,keeping pattern 3-1 1-1-2

That's it, Pretty good diff.
MX
from 00:01:623 - to 00:14:023 - ahh, poor piano sound xD
00:52:623 (52623|1,52623|2,52823|0,52823|1) - change to 1 note ._. ?Xd
01:13:623 - Add note ?
01:15:223 - Add note ? louder sound
01:16:823 - ^
01:18:423 - ^
01:24:823 - ^
01:26:423 - ^
01:28:023 - ^
01:29:623 - ^ keep 2 notes for those piano
01:58:623 (118623|2) - Delete
01:59:823 (119823|1) - Delete intended here ,not the same as the previous pattern where they are missing xD
Beyond my imagination D:
That's it

Nice Mapset & Good song, this make me remembered jonathan's mapset xD
Good Luck, Harby ^^)/

ty for the mod guys

i have to rework on NM and HD ,really bad done :V

puxtu

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puxtu 2015-03-07T14:21:48+00:00

ok my turn
2 days late lmao
[Genereal]
you might want to remove these two timing points

also, resize your bg

and set sample volume to 50%

[NM]
00:16:031 (16031|3) - replace with LN? and do the same with the others
00:53:831 - add, kick
01:01:031 (61031|2,61431|0,61831|2) - remove, no kick?
01:01:231 - add, drum thingy
01:07:231 - add hs in this part and the intro too like this part 01:46:031 -
01:20:031 - drum sound > piano sound at this part. i think you should layer the louder sound to avoid making player confuse
01:39:431 (99431|0) - remove, it's background piano. no need to layer it. follow the main sound ok?
01:56:831 (116831|0,117231|3,117631|3,118031|0) - remove, no kick like previous pattern. and re-arrange the LNs too
02:06:431 - feels empty
02:08:031 - ^
02:09:631 - ^
02:10:431 - ^
02:18:031 (138031|0) - this should be double like the others
02:22:431 (142431|2,143231|2) - ugh remove? feels weird because it's not a stronk beat like 02:22:831 (142831|0,142831|1) -
nice diff harb, gj

[MX]
OD HP 8,5
00:16:031 (16031|0,16031|2,16031|3) - why don't you replace one of these into a ln?
00:47:731 (47731|0,47931|2) - how about ctrl+j this and move this note to 3 00:48:031 (48031|0) -
00:53:431 (53431|3) - move to 2, hand balance thingy
01:32:631 - pretty stronk
02:04:831 - dat trills hurts my eyes lmao, make it more beatiful pls

call me back when you're done editting your HD

Muu-chan

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Muu-chan 2015-03-11T10:49:25+00:00

Hi Harby san ｡◕‿◕｡ mod here as requested from ✿Nekoworks
All of them are just suggestions, you can decline it if unnecessary ｡◕‿◕｡
|1|2|3|4|
Tsukiiiii yuee >n<b

General

* The BG resolution should be 1024x768

NM

* How about to start the notes from here? 00:01:631 - ^^ i think it would be nice

* 00:16:031 ~ 00:40:031 - how about adding one more note for additional chord sound ? 00:16:031 here 00:17:631 and so on ^^
* 00:53:631 (53631|3,54231|3) - i suggest to avoiding hammer on NM

maybe harby san could try this.
* 01:06:431 (66431|1,67031|1) - same with ^, i suggest to avoiding hammer. CTRL + H them and move them 1 column to the right would be nice

* 01:10:431 - i suggest to add 1 more note for chord, bcz harby san add a note for chord here 01:23:231 ; 01:07:231 ; 01:13:631 ; 01:15:231 ; 01:16:831
* 01:12:031 - ^
* 01:24:831 - ^
* 01:26:431 (86431|1,86831|2,87231|1) - i suggest to CTRL + H them to avoiding hammer 01:26:031 (86031|1,86431|1) -
* 01:37:631 - i suggest to single it, or add 1 more note to every chord sound
* 01:41:231 (101231|1) - how about change this LN to notes for continue following the piano sound?

* 02:30:231 (150231|0) - i suggest to move on 2 (avoiding hammer

)
Nice difficulty >n<

HD

* * How about to start the notes from here? 00:01:631 - ^^ i think it would be nice

* 00:59:631 - how about adding 1 more note? based on harby san's pattern, it should be 3 notes here.
* 01:01:231 - ^
* 01:00:631 - how about adding 1 more note here? it has same drum kick with 01:00:431 also with 02:17:431 -
* 01:08:831 - i suggest to add a note for additional chord sound ^^ same with 01:10:431 ; 01:12:031 -
* 02:11:431 - i suggest to add a note here, i hear a cymbal here (but it is okay if harby san follows the piano sound^^) ~ I suggest to all of cymbal sound like this that doesn't have any note on it

Amazing difficulty >n< hard but enjoyable to play

MX

* How about to start the notes from here? 00:01:631 - ^^ i think it would be nice

* 00:54:331 - how about adding one more note here? i hear same kick sound with 00:54:231 -
* 01:08:831 - ^ for additional chord sound, same with 01:21:631 -
* 01:40:831 - ^ for chord

* 01:42:431 - ^
* 01:44:031 - ^
yay, nice one too >n<

i think that's all from us Harby san, i would it could help you^^
GOOD LUCK ｡◕‿◕｡

Harbyter

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Harbyter 2015-03-11T16:37:12+00:00

~~thank you guys for the mod will check later~~

some applied some denied

hitsound done~

ready for bobz

Kawawa

Kawawa 2015-03-12T05:54:00+00:00

Habito - Tsuki - Yue
:p

x M e l

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x M e l 2015-03-12T17:03:15+00:00

Hi Harby

mod for req in queue

Columns: 1|2|3|4

General

Why don't start at 00:01:631 - ? :c

NM

00:28:831 - isn't same sound than 00:28:431 - for put in same column, so move to 1, 2 or 3
00:34:431 - same sound than 00:33:631 - and 00:35:231 -
00:41:231 (41231|3) - move to 3 for balance?
00:52:831 - : http://puu.sh/gxiCP/ef836b6345.png I recommend change for this: http://puu.sh/gxiNO/cbaf3fd66b.png
00:58:831 (58891|2) - move to 2
01:12:631 (72631|2) - move to 2
01:21:631 - delete one note, hard for nm because there is a stream
01:30:631 (90631|3) - move to 1

HD

00:22:231 - move to 3
00:25:431 - ^
00:30:631 - ^
00:35:031 - ^
00:38:231 - ^
01:10:231 - move to 1
01:12:231 - move to 3
01:30:631 - move to 1

MX

01:30:631 (90631|3) - move to 1
01:53:631 - I don't hear a sound stronger than the other doubles for put a triple
01:59:831 - delete

that's all ^^ good map and good luck~

Harbyter

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Harbyter 2015-03-12T20:08:44+00:00

Meiko Senpai wrote:
Hi Harby mod for req in queue

Columns: 1|2|3|4

General
Why don't start at 00:01:631 - ? :c feel bad mapping that part

NM
00:28:831 - isn't same sound than 00:28:431 - for put in same column, so move to 1, 2 or 3 ok
00:34:431 - same sound than 00:33:631 - and 00:35:231 -
00:41:231 (41231|3) - move to 3 for balance? keep
00:52:831 - : http://puu.sh/gxiCP/ef836b6345.png I recommend change for this: http://puu.sh/gxiNO/cbaf3fd66b.png ok
00:58:831 (58891|2) - move to 2 keep
01:12:631 (72631|2) - move to 2 keep
01:21:631 - delete one note, hard for nm because there is a stream ,keep
01:30:631 (90631|3) - move to 1 ok

HD
00:22:231 - move to 3
00:25:431 - ^
00:30:631 - ^
00:35:031 - ^
00:38:231 - ^
01:10:231 - move to 1
01:12:231 - move to 3 sorry all denied >.<
01:30:631 - move to 1 ok

MX
01:30:631 (90631|3) - move to 1 ok
01:53:631 - I don't hear a sound stronger than the other doubles for put a triple nice lol
01:59:831 - delete intended here

that's all ^^ good map and good luck~

thanks for the mod

Ayachi-

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Ayachi- 2015-03-20T02:13:23+00:00

[NM]
00:44:231 (44231|2) - putting this note makes other parts feel incomplete such as 00:45:031 -
00:45:831 (45831|1) - ^
00:47:631 - Better to have LN to 00:48:031 - just like 00:46:431 (46431|3,46831|1,47231|3) -
00:55:431 - You should probably add a note like you did before for the same sound
00:57:031 - ^ 00:58:631 - ^
01:00:431 - Suggest to have LN to 01:00:831 -
01:01:031 (61031|2,61231|1,61431|0,61631|1,61831|2) - Suggest to map the drum here, strange without 01:01:131 - 01:01:531 - because players will just be pressing 1/4 and missed these. or you can decide to add those notes
02:11:231 - What is this green line for
01:30:831 (90831|3,90931|2,91031|3) - a bit hard for NM if all three notes on same hand
01:32:531 - 01:32:631 - suggest to add note, felt left out
01:39:631 - Suggest to use LNs here to represent to sound like you did before because missing some notes feels strange.
02:03:231 - ^
02:09:831 (129831|1,130031|2,130231|3,130631|1,130831|0,131031|1) - ^ but you already have LN so I suggest to remove them
02:17:231 - Suggest to add a LN to 02:17:631 - , same as 02:16:831 (136831|2) -

[HD]
00:47:631 - suggest to remove one note here if you are going to map the sound of 00:47:031 - for the part
01:00:431 - same as above
01:01:231 - add a note because it is same as 01:02:031 -
01:06:931 (66931|2,67031|1,67131|2) - sugest not to put 3 notes here, should just put the LNs to represent the 1/8 sound or only map the sound at 01:07:031 -
01:10:231 (70231|2) - different picth, shouldn't be jack, switch to other column
01:12:231 (72231|0) - ^
01:23:031 (83031|2) - ^
01:32:531 (92531|1) - Suggest to move to column 3
01:32:631 (92631|3) - move column 2
Just avoiding 01:32:431 (92431|3,92631|3,92831|3) - these notes with different pitch in same column in a short time, you don't need to follow what I said above as long as you have your own solution.
01:32:831 (92831|3) - You can also try to switch column of this note to solve the problem.
01:56:831 - to 01:58:431 - seems really random
02:16:431 - There should be 3 notes here just like 02:15:631 -
02:16:431 - 02:16:831 - suggets just map the sound of 02:17:031 (137031|1) - here.
02:22:831 - ^
02:29:631 - ^
02:18:031 - add a note
02:29:231 - ^
02:30:831 - ^
02:35:631 - 02:36:031 - suggest only one note here or you will left out others note such as 02:36:231 -

Harbyter

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Harbyter 2015-03-20T03:27:37+00:00

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:
[NM]
00:44:231 (44231|2) - putting this note makes other parts feel incomplete such as 00:45:031 - rearranged
00:45:831 (45831|1) - ^ ^
00:47:631 - Better to have LN to 00:48:031 - just like 00:46:431 (46431|3,46831|1,47231|3) - rearranged
00:55:431 - You should probably add a note like you did before for the same sound no add ,keep pattern consistency
00:57:031 - ^ 00:58:631 - ^ same here
01:00:431 - Suggest to have LN to 01:00:831 - rearranged
01:01:031 (61031|2,61231|1,61431|0,61631|1,61831|2) - Suggest to map the drum here, strange without 01:01:131 - 01:01:531 - because players will just be pressing 1/4 and missed these. or you can decide to add those notes rearranged
02:11:231 - What is this green line for lol
01:30:831 (90831|3,90931|2,91031|3) - a bit hard for NM if all three notes on same hand rearranged
01:32:531 - 01:32:631 - suggest to add note, felt left out rearranged
01:39:631 - Suggest to use LNs here to represent to sound like you did before because missing some notes feels strange. ORZ i know is strange lol
02:03:231 - ^
02:09:831 (129831|1,130031|2,130231|3,130631|1,130831|0,131031|1) - ^ but you already have LN so I suggest to remove them keep
02:17:231 - Suggest to add a LN to 02:17:631 - , same as 02:16:831 (136831|2) - rearranged

[HD]
00:47:631 - suggest to remove one note here if you are going to map the sound of 00:47:031 - for the part note for that other strange sound here
01:00:431 - same as above same
01:01:231 - add a note because it is same as 01:02:031 - i know that there is the kick there but keep pattern consistency with 1-1-2 in 1/4 and 2-1-3 in 1/2
01:06:931 (66931|2,67031|1,67131|2) - sugest not to put 3 notes here, should just put the LNs to represent the 1/8 sound or only map the sound at 01:07:031 - rearranged
01:10:231 (70231|2) - different picth, shouldn't be jack, switch to other column keep , 4k hasn't so much space to put all those different pitch orz , can't avoid those jack
01:12:231 (72231|0) - ^
01:23:031 (83031|2) - ^
01:32:531 (92531|1) - Suggest to move to column 3
01:32:631 (92631|3) - move column 2
Just avoiding 01:32:431 (92431|3,92631|3,92831|3) - these notes with different pitch in same column in a short time, you don't need to follow what I said above as long as you have your own solution. rearranged
01:32:831 (92831|3) - You can also try to switch column of this note to solve the problem.
01:56:831 - to 01:58:431 - seems really random lol xD
02:16:431 - There should be 3 notes here just like 02:15:631 - same reason as before,pattern consistency
02:16:431 - 02:16:831 - suggets just map the sound of 02:17:031 (137031|1) - here.
02:22:831 - ^
02:29:631 - ^
02:18:031 - add a note
02:29:231 - ^
02:30:831 - ^ ^ all declined sorry Dx
02:35:631 - 02:36:031 - suggest only one note here or you will left out others note such as 02:36:231 - keep here too

ty for mod sakura

Ayachi-

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Ayachi- 2015-03-20T17:35:40+00:00

[MX]
00:43:231 - is same as 00:43:631 - , but they have different amount of notes?
There are something similar like this
00:54:831 - Shouldn't be 4 notes from here
and there are some inconsistent parts with same sound, it should be fine after those are fixed

Starry-

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Starry- 2015-03-21T01:25:33+00:00

Hiya~

General is all clear.

[]

Probably best to make MX OD8.5 since it has no LNs. (Also because HD is OD8)

Why are there two red timing points at the start? o.o No need for them.

Counting in 0123

[]

[NM]

00:16:031 (16031|0) - (Applies to all diffs using this) What's the point of using normal-hitnormal for these parts? It's meant to represent chords but it just sounds awful. Best to make it soft like the rest of the piano.

00:16:031 (16031|0,16231|1,16431|2,16631|0,16831|3,17031|1,17231|3,17431|2) - Pitch relevancy in this pattern can be improved quite a lot to make it more balanced. Perhaps something like this?
00:16:031 (16031|0,16231|1) - CTRL+G
00:16:631 (16631|0) - Move to 1
00:16:831 (16831|3) - Move to 2
00:17:031 (17031|1) - Move to 0
00:17:431 (17431|2) - Move to 1
Looking like:

Ex.1

Also in the next section of the slow part - it appears copy and pasted? Surely you can rearrange the second pattern.

00:42:031 (42031|2,42831|2,43631|2,44431|2,45231|2,46031|2,46831|2,47631|2,48431|2,49231|2,50431|2) - Uh.. This column is played every second white tick for 8 seconds... You should really focus on spreading these patterns out. If it's intentional, then it doesn't play well ;w;..

01:08:431 (68431|1) - Lower pitch - move to 0
01:08:831 (68831|0,68931|3,69031|2,69131|1,69231|2) - This stream should play a bit smoother. No need for such a big jump in the stream in NM. Try something like 01232

01:14:831 (74831|2) - Move to 3, same pitch as the note before it at 3 and creates better balance for next notes.

01:17:431 (77431|2,77531|1,77631|3) - Descending in pitch, best to use 321 instead.
Actually to be honest, try something like this: (a lot smoother in terms of playability and fits pitch better.)

Ex.2

01:46:831 (106831|3) - Move to 2, lower pitch.
01:47:231 (107231|1) - Move to 3, higher pitch.
01:47:431 (107431|2,107831|1) - Then CTRL+H for balance.

01:47:931 (107931|3,108031|0,108231|3,108431|0) - No need for this 0303, just smooth patterns out since it's a soft section.

01:52:231 (112231|1,112631|2,113031|1) - CTRL+H, more balanced.

01:56:231 (116231|0) - Move to 1 for balance.

02:18:031 (138031|0) - Move to 1 for balance.

02:30:831 (150831|3) - Move to 2 for balance.

02:32:031 (152031|3,152231|2,152431|3,152631|2,152831|3,153031|2) - This 323232 doesn't really play that well since it can confuse players in terms of the 1/4 in the middle.

02:36:431 (156431|1) - Move to 2 for balance.

[HD]

00:22:431 (22431|0) - Move to 1, no need for jack.

00:23:231 (23231|3) - Move to 2, lower pitch.

00:30:631 (30631|1) - Move to 2, no need for jack.
Or you can make the pattern like this instead:

Ex.3

00:35:231 (35231|0) - Move to 1, no need for jack.

00:36:031 (36031|3) - Move to 2, lower pitch.

aaa copy paste, I don't need to mention the same things.

00:47:031 (47031|2) - Honestly for this stream something like this could work better: (Flows nicely into the next notes and plays a lot better.)

Ex.4

00:52:831 (52831|0) - Try:

Ex.5

Honestly some of these streams just feel unnecessarily awkward.

01:10:431 (70431|2,70731|1) - Move left by 1
01:11:031 (71031|1,71431|0) - Move right by 1, these suggestions just make it a bit more balanced, the spaced chords work better here.

02:01:031 (121031|3,121231|2) - Move left by 1, no need for jacks since wrong pitch.

02:06:031 (126031|0) - Try: (Just flows better)

Ex.6

[]

I've taken a quick look at the MX diff and it seems quite a lot better in terms of map quality. Your main focus should be on the easier diffs, I've intentionally left a few things out since it was the same problems / issues coming up repeatedly.

Also the hitsounds are just noisy in general. They don't particularly fit the music or are consistent, therefore you may have a few issues in the future if you're not willing to change a few samples. (I understand that a map recently got ranked with the same hitsounds although they weren't considered good at all.)

Goodluck!

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Harbyter 2015-03-21T02:49:02+00:00

Starry- wrote:
Hiya~

General is all clear.

[]

Probably best to make MX OD8.5 since it has no LNs. (Also because HD is OD8)

Why are there two red timing points at the start? o.o No need for them. Keep,if someone in the future want to map this song at the start then they'll have the correct timing

Counting in 0123

[]

[NM]

00:16:031 (16031|0) - (Applies to all diffs using this) What's the point of using normal-hitnormal for these parts? It's meant to represent chords but it just sounds awful. Best to make it soft like the rest of the piano.

00:16:031 (16031|0,16231|1,16431|2,16631|0,16831|3,17031|1,17231|3,17431|2) - Pitch relevancy in this pattern can be improved quite a lot to make it more balanced. Perhaps something like this?
00:16:031 (16031|0,16231|1) - CTRL+G
00:16:631 (16631|0) - Move to 1
00:16:831 (16831|3) - Move to 2
00:17:031 (17031|1) - Move to 0
00:17:431 (17431|2) - Move to 1
Looking like:
Ex.1

Also in the next section of the slow part - it appears copy and pasted? Surely you can rearrange the second pattern.

00:42:031 (42031|2,42831|2,43631|2,44431|2,45231|2,46031|2,46831|2,47631|2,48431|2,49231|2,50431|2) - Uh.. This column is played every second white tick for 8 seconds... You should really focus on spreading these patterns out. If it's intentional, then it doesn't play well ;w;..

01:08:431 (68431|1) - Lower pitch - move to 0
01:08:831 (68831|0,68931|3,69031|2,69131|1,69231|2) - This stream should play a bit smoother. No need for such a big jump in the stream in NM. Try something like 01232

01:14:831 (74831|2) - Move to 3, same pitch as the note before it at 3 and creates better balance for next notes.

01:17:431 (77431|2,77531|1,77631|3) - Descending in pitch, best to use 321 instead.
Actually to be honest, try something like this: (a lot smoother in terms of playability and fits pitch better.)
Ex.2

01:46:831 (106831|3) - Move to 2, lower pitch.
01:47:231 (107231|1) - Move to 3, higher pitch.
01:47:431 (107431|2,107831|1) - Then CTRL+H for balance.

01:47:931 (107931|3,108031|0,108231|3,108431|0) - No need for this 0303, just smooth patterns out since it's a soft section.

01:52:231 (112231|1,112631|2,113031|1) - CTRL+H, more balanced.

01:56:231 (116231|0) - Move to 1 for balance.

02:18:031 (138031|0) - Move to 1 for balance.

02:30:831 (150831|3) - Move to 2 for balance.

02:32:031 (152031|3,152231|2,152431|3,152631|2,152831|3,153031|2) - This 323232 doesn't really play that well since it can confuse players in terms of the 1/4 in the middle.

02:36:431 (156431|1) - Move to 2 for balance.

[HD]

00:22:431 (22431|0) - Move to 1, no need for jack.

00:23:231 (23231|3) - Move to 2, lower pitch.

00:30:631 (30631|1) - Move to 2, no need for jack.
Or you can make the pattern like this instead:
Ex.3

00:35:231 (35231|0) - Move to 1, no need for jack.

00:36:031 (36031|3) - Move to 2, lower pitch.

aaa copy paste, I don't need to mention the same things.

00:47:031 (47031|2) - Honestly for this stream something like this could work better: (Flows nicely into the next notes and plays a lot better.)
Ex.4

00:52:831 (52831|0) - Try:
Ex.5

Honestly some of these streams just feel unnecessarily awkward.

01:10:431 (70431|2,70731|1) - Move left by 1
01:11:031 (71031|1,71431|0) - Move right by 1, these suggestions just make it a bit more balanced, the spaced chords work better here.

02:01:031 (121031|3,121231|2) - Move left by 1, no need for jacks since wrong pitch.

02:06:031 (126031|0) - Try: (Just flows better)
Ex.6

[]

I've taken a quick look at the MX diff and it seems quite a lot better in terms of map quality. Your main focus should be on the easier diffs, I've intentionally left a few things out since it was the same problems / issues coming up repeatedly.

Also the hitsounds are just noisy in general. They don't particularly fit the music or are consistent, therefore you may have a few issues in the future if you're not willing to change a few samples. (I understand that a map recently got ranked with the same hitsounds although they weren't considered good at all.)

Goodluck!

ty for modderino starry all applied

are hitsound so bad??:V ~~let me rework on them then X.X~~

MX hitsound done lel

Harbyter

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Harbyter 2015-03-23T07:15:58+00:00

hitsound done xd

pls redownload the song /o/

ToifAmri

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ToifAmri 2015-03-24T06:06:36+00:00

Help me..

Harbyter

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Harbyter 2015-03-24T06:07:39+00:00

ToifAmri wrote:
Help me..

wut

Deep Sea

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Deep Sea 2015-04-28T17:20:42+00:00

Hello Harby
BN check

[General]

BG :

- http://puu.sh/htLJ9/3cc11b52a3.jpg 1024 x 768

Audio :

Timing :

Spread :

Metadata :

turn off Widescreen Support

Pattern Review:
(notice that columns are following like 1 2 3 4 for 4K diffs)

[NM]

00:48:031 (48031|3) - remove clap
00:54:431 (54431|2) - ^
01:00:831 (60831|3) - ^
01:32:631 (92631|3) - move to 2
01:46:031 - 02:11:231 - remove whistle on notes (W/C)
02:11:231 (131231|3) - remove clap
02:24:031 (144031|0) - move to 2 and remove clap
02:30:431 (150431|3) - remove clap
02:36:831 (156831|3) - ^

[HD]
HP 7,5

01:01:531 (61531|2) - move to 2
01:01:431 (61431|3) - move to 3
01:12:231 (72231|0) - move to 3
01:13:431 (73431|1) - move to 4
01:16:831 (76831|2) - move to 4
01:18:431 (78431|0) - move to 3
01:43:631 (103631|3) - move to 1
01:46:231 - 02:11:231 - same in NM
02:04:831 - 02:11:231 - i think better and continue to follow piano

[MX]

01:07:631 - add note to 4
01:46:031 - 02:11:231 - same in NM

Harbyter

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Harbyter 2015-04-29T08:09:21+00:00

[Shana Lesus] wrote:
Hello Harby
BN check

[General]

BG :

- http://puu.sh/htLJ9/3cc11b52a3.jpg 1024 x 768 is already 1024x768 o,o

Audio :
Timing :
Spread :
Metadata :

turn off Widescreen Support

Pattern Review:
(notice that columns are following like 1 2 3 4 for 4K diffs)

[NM]

00:48:031 (48031|3) - remove clap
00:54:431 (54431|2) - ^
01:00:831 (60831|3) - ^
01:32:631 (92631|3) - move to 2
01:46:031 - 02:11:231 - remove whistle on notes (W/C)
02:11:231 (131231|3) - remove clap
02:24:031 (144031|0) - move to 2 and remove clap
02:30:431 (150431|3) - remove clap
02:36:831 (156831|3) - ^

[HD]
HP 7,5

01:01:531 (61531|2) - move to 2
01:01:431 (61431|3) - move to 3
01:12:231 (72231|0) - move to 3
01:13:431 (73431|1) - move to 4
01:16:831 (76831|2) - move to 4
01:18:431 (78431|0) - move to 3
01:43:631 (103631|3) - move to 1
01:46:231 - 02:11:231 - same in NM
02:04:831 - 02:11:231 - i think better and continue to follow piano

[MX]

01:07:631 - add note to 4
01:46:031 - 02:11:231 - same in NM

all applied ,expect for the HD 02:04:831 - 02:11:231 - ,keep the stream xD

Deep Sea

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Deep Sea 2015-04-29T10:41:16+00:00

Nice patterns
Bubbled

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Harbyter 2015-04-29T11:22:31+00:00

[Shana Lesus] wrote:
Nice patterns
Bubbled

<3

Arzenvald

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Arzenvald 2015-05-01T03:42:14+00:00

ay got something to fix

[General]
3 hitsound has delay (around 3 > 50 ms) here's the fix http://puu.sh/hx4mN.rar

[Hyper]
01:13:231 (73231|1,73331|2) - http://puu.sh/hx4ud.jpg

==a your map too gud for me

[Normal]
00:22:031 (22031|2,22231|1,22431|0,22631|2,22831|0,23031|1) - 1 2 3 1 2 3
00:34:831 (34831|2,35031|1,35231|0,35431|2,35631|0,35831|1) - ^ 1 2 3 1 2 3

lel normal has LN

01:45:097 (105097|0,105364|2) - remove, then
01:44:831 (104831|2) - turn into LN until 01:45:231 -
01:45:231 - add LN until 01:45:631 (105631|3) -

overall this map is too gud for me.. go go go

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Harbyter 2015-05-01T22:01:43+00:00

ExUsagi wrote:
ay got something to fix

[General]
3 hitsound has delay (around 3 > 50 ms) here's the fix http://puu.sh/hx4mN.rar

[Hyper]
01:13:231 (73231|1,73331|2) - http://puu.sh/hx4ud.jpg

==a your map too gud for me

[Normal]
00:22:031 (22031|2,22231|1,22431|0,22631|2,22831|0,23031|1) - 1 2 3 1 2 3
00:34:831 (34831|2,35031|1,35231|0,35431|2,35631|0,35831|1) - ^ 1 2 3 1 2 3

lel normal has LN

01:45:097 (105097|0,105364|2) - remove, then
01:44:831 (104831|2) - turn into LN until 01:45:231 -
01:45:231 - add LN until 01:45:631 (105631|3) -

overall this map is too gud for me.. go go go

applied all ty xD