1. Easy (1,64 stars, 192 notes)
2. Insane (4,02 stars, 587 notes)
3. Normal (1,89 stars, 239 notes)

Zarthbenn wrote:

Entschuldigung, Deutsch nicht Muttersprache.

Easy:

00:12:413 (1) - bewegen diese zu x: 120 y:72 done
00:25:913 (7) - bis die Markierung x 240 y: 96 (Symmetrie)done
00:28:163 (12) - das gleiche wie 00: 25: 913 (7) - bis die Markierung x 240 y: 96done
00:31:913 (3) - bis die Markierung x 256 y: 96done
00:32:663 (4) - bis die Markierung x 344 y: 224done
00:54:413 (14) - Neu-Combodone
01:00:413 (20) - Neu-Combodone
01:07:913 (30) - Neu-Combodone

Normal:

00:13:163 (3) - bis die Markierung x 256 y: 304done
00:14:663 (6) - bis die Markierung x 348 y: 304done
00:25:913 (8) - bis die Markierung x 240 y: 96done
00:28:163 (13) - wie ^ Umzug nach x: y 240: 96done
00:31:913 (3) - bis die Markierung x: y 272: 96 für eine bessere Musterdone
00:32:663 (4) - bis die Markierung x: y 368: 224 für eine bessere Musterdone
00:37:163 (11) - Neu-Combodone
00:41:850 (19) - Neu-Combodone
00:51:038 (12) - Neu-Combodone
00:55:538 (21) - Neu-Combodone
00:59:663 (31) - Neu-Combodone
01:03:413 (40) - Neu-Combodone
01:07:350 (49) - Neu-Combodone

Hard:

00:52:163 (9) - Neu-Combodone

Anders als das Harte und Insane Schwierigkeiten haben viele Abstände und Formproblemen . Alles ist richtig abgestimmt und klingt nett. Viel Glück.

1. this diff is simply not done yet, so i wont make a comment on this one

1. the same as issue by easy

1. 00:30:319 (2,3,4) - this doesn't go with the beat. i think you should just remove it and replace it with just 1 circle
2. 00:36:319 (4,5,1) - same as above
3. 00:49:069 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - the beats stand two close on eachother. i should make it like this:
   
4. 00:53:663 (12) -add a circle here
5. 00:55:069 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - same problem, make it like how it looks in the picture.
6. 01:00:413 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - the spacing between the beets is irregular. you need to make the distance even.

1. 00:19:913 (9,10,11) - overlap this with the seven in the same combo.
2. 00:20:663 (11,1) - make the jump smaller or remove the beat of the NC.
3. 00:24:413 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - needs better spacing. they have a different rythym,
   so they should have a different distance between them as well.
4. 00:35:663 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - same here.
5. 00:42:413 (13,14,15) - i think you should mae the distance between 13 and 14, 14 and 15 a bit larger.
6. everything after 00:45:413 needs better spacing. like i said in the previous modding, i suggest you use that 'Distance snap' button.
   just to make sure you dont miss, i'll leave a picture of it right here:
   
   left is toggled off, right is toggled on
7. if you hold alt you see that something changes at the top right on your screen. you can move this bar to the left and right.
   it will say something 0.1x to the upper left and 2.0x to the upper right. the bigger the number, the bigger the distance is between your notes.
   i suggest you do something in the 0.8x to 1.1x for easy diff. the higher this number it is, the harder the maps gets.
   here another pic of the bar:
   

1. 00:24:413 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - same as in easy.
2. 01:06:413 (6) - maybe NC here
3. 01:27:788 (1,2,3) - the first beat is to close to the previous combo. the space in the combo needs to be bigger too.
4. you might want to add cirlces in the next places:
   02:05:288 (3) - 02:08:288 (7) - 02:11:288 (3) - 02:14:288 (3) - 02:17:288 (3) - ( i should ddo it because it gives a better flow).
5. 02:57:413 (9) - this beat is on the wrong spot. it should be on:02:57:225 (9) -
6. you want to add a circle on: 03:14:663 (1) - this should also be a NC.
7. 03:26:663 (5) - ^

1. in the beginning you hide many notes, which is a bit hard for the ones who is playing to see the note.
   here is a list on the notes that are 'hidden':
   00:13:725 (1,2) - 00:20:288 (6) - 00:21:975 (3) - 00:39:413 (7) -
2. i suggest you add circles add the following places: 00:37:163 (6) - 01:19:163 (3) - 01:19:913 (5) -
   01:20:475 (7) - 01:31:913 (6) -
3. i suggest you remove this circle: 01:46:725 (3) - ( but it is your choice ofcourse)
4. 02:09:413 (1,2) - i should make the distance a bit bigger between these two. it is to small compare to the rest of the map.
5. 02:41:475 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - you might want to change this. it is a bit hard to see the circles, especially since the distance between circles changes two times.
6. 03:06:038 (7,1) - make the distance between these two a bit bigger.
7. 03:10:350 (2,3) - ^
8. 03:24:413 (1,2,3) - i think the 2 should be a bit further away from 1 and 3.
9. 03:36:413 (1,2) - needs to stand just a tiny bit closer to eachother.
10. 03:43:350 (3,4,5,1) - it kind of feels odd here. it has something to do with spacing, but i can tell what it is exactly. i suggest you take a look at it.

1. same issue as in hard. these two gets 'hidden' by other notes: 00:20:288 (6) - 00:21:975 (3) -
2. add a circle here: 00:37:163 (3) -
3. 00:45:413 (1) - remove NC.
4. 00:45:788 (2) - NC here.
5. 00:45:975 (1) - remove NC.
6. 00:46:538 (3) - NC here.
7. 00:46:725 (1) - remove NC.
8. 00:48:225 (4) - add circle here.
9. 00:53:663 (7) - ^
10. 02:30:038 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - i shouldnt make a combo like that. maybe 2 circles overlap eachother, or 3, but dont make it irregular.
    
    

Fryz3 wrote:

Hi again! modder came from p/3589186/

General
Look at your Aimod. it says that you are overusing Kai in the map.you might want to reduce the time.i think it's fine.
easy

1. 00:19:913 (9,10,11) - overlap this with the seven in the same combo.
2. 00:20:663 (11,1) - make the jump smaller or remove the beat of the NC.
3. 00:24:413 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - needs better spacing. they have a different rythym,
   so they should have a different distance between them as well.
4. 00:35:663 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - same here.
5. 00:42:413 (13,14,15) - i think you should mae the distance between 13 and 14, 14 and 15 a bit larger.
6. everything after 00:45:413 needs better spacing. like i said in the previous modding, i suggest you use that 'Distance snap' button.
   just to make sure you dont miss, i'll leave a picture of it right here:
   
   left is toggled off, right is toggled on
7. if you hold alt you see that something changes at the top right on your screen. you can move this bar to the left and right.
   it will say something 0.1x to the upper left and 2.0x to the upper right. the bigger the number, the bigger the distance is between your notes.
   i suggest you do something in the 0.8x to 1.1x for easy diff. the higher this number it is, the harder the maps gets.
   here another pic of the bar:
   

i have completely reworked the easy difficulty allready

normal

1. 00:24:413 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - same as in easy. done
2. 01:06:413 (6) - maybe NC here done
3. 01:27:788 (1,2,3) - the first beat is to close to the previous combo. the space in the combo needs to be bigger too. done
4. you might want to add cirlces in the next places:
   02:05:288 (3) - 02:08:288 (7) - 02:11:288 (3) - 02:14:288 (3) - 02:17:288 (3) - ( i should ddo it because it gives a better flow).i have done something about it, but i didnst just add circles, i added some sliders too.
5. 02:57:413 (9) - this beat is on the wrong spot. it should be on:02:57:225 (9) - done
6. you want to add a circle on: 03:14:663 (1) - no this should also be a NC. done
7. 03:26:663 (5) - ^no

hard

1. in the beginning you hide many notes, which is a bit hard for the ones who is playing to see the note.
   here is a list on the notes that are 'hidden':
   00:13:725 (1,2) - 00:20:288 (6) - 00:21:975 (3) - 00:39:413 (7) - i think it's fine
2. i suggest you add circles add the following places: 00:37:163 (6) - 01:19:163 (3) - 01:19:913 (5) -
   01:20:475 (7) - 01:31:913 (6) - i dont think so
3. i suggest you remove this circle: 01:46:725 (3) - ( but it is your choice ofcourse)done
4. 02:09:413 (1,2) - i should make the distance a bit bigger between these two. it is to small compare to the rest of the map.done
5. 02:41:475 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - you might want to change this. it is a bit hard to see the circles, especially since the distance between circles changes two times. i corrected the distances
6. 03:06:038 (7,1) - make the distance between these two a bit bigger.no
7. 03:10:350 (2,3) - ^ no
8. 03:24:413 (1,2,3) - i think the 2 should be a bit further away from 1 and 3. done
9. 03:36:413 (1,2) - needs to stand just a tiny bit closer to eachother.done
10. 03:43:350 (3,4,5,1) - it kind of feels odd here. it has something to do with spacing, but i can tell what it is exactly. i suggest you take a look at it.i added a circle here 03:43:913 (4) , should be better now

insane

1. same issue as in hard. these two gets 'hidden' by other notes: 00:20:288 (6) - 00:21:975 (3) - i think it's fine
2. add a circle here: 00:37:163 (3) - done
3. 00:45:413 (1) - remove NC. done
4. 00:45:788 (2) - NC here.done
5. 00:45:975 (1) - remove NC.done
6. 00:46:538 (3) - NC here.done
7. 00:46:725 (1) - remove NC.done
8. 00:48:225 (4) - add circle here.no
9. 00:53:663 (7) - ^no
10. 02:30:038 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - i shouldnt make a combo like that. maybe 2 circles overlap eachother, or 3, but dont make it irregular. i overlaped 3 circles each time

maybe this wont say much, but some combo's in the last two maps were awesome! i actually enjoyed playing it ;p
i hope it definitely would be approved/ranked at some point Thanks

ps: would you like to mod mine map as well? i know i've asked it before, but you didn't mod it till now, maybe you've been forgotten it.i will do that

deetz wrote:

Remove all of your tags.
- "Kill la Wormar Cyua" are all already in the metadata deleted
- it's pretty obvious that you'd be playing osu to songs lol :O deleted
- Anime will be added to genre etc. upon rank deleted
- I just don't understand the significance of "difficult" deleted

then add "hiroyuki sawano" as the music is by him. done

You might also want to work on the gigantic gap between normal and hard. I haven't looked at the maps yet, but it already looks huge from star rating. i will do that if more people say the same

edit: took a really quick look.

generally, in your easy and normal, every note should be properly distance snapped - you don't seem to be really using it at all in those diffs. I'd suggest remapping with distance snap. maybe it doesnt seem like it, but i have mapped with distance snap so i wont change it.

you should also pay attention to AIMod.
in your normal 02:11:288 (3) - is offscreen done

there's no reason for so many jumps in a hard, you should make the difficulty curve smaller, and try to focus on having less rigid flow i think it has a good flow and i dont think those jumps are too big or too difficult for a 4 Star hard map. Maybe i will rename it to Very Hard and create a new additional Hard difficulty.

can't look at insane as I've gotta go. np

in general a lot of work is needed, maybe I'll come back for more later. i would appreciate it.

good luck! thanks

structure wrote:

Change background to Ragyo since it's her theme maybe? Besides this background is already used in another map. Just a suggestion.i'll think about it

Insane

In the beginning (before 00:25:538 (1) slider speed change) it felt like the map was a lot faster than the song itself, tried adjusting sliderspeed to around 0.8 - 0.85 from the beginning and felt more accurate - take a look at it atleast, could just be me. Remember to adjust slider length if you change slider speed.ok i changed it to 0.8

Overall a nice start, patterns are good. I would ctrl+G the first 2 sliders to match the speed of the double notes.
00:12:788 (3) - the speed you need to move between the 2 notes before it is much greater than to get to the slider itself. More even with ctrl+G. done
00:14:288 (3) - same^ done



Now to the biggest issue I have overall. The map is quite boring. It's mainly the long single tap chains - the first one being 00:27:788 (4) - mix them up a little, make a pattern, a straight line is very boring not very hard to do either. i've overworked my beatmap and changed this point, so there are at least less of these straight lines.


You already fun patterns in place like this 00:30:788 (5) - so I don't see why you lazed off with the straight lines so much

00:42:413 (1) - 00:43:163 (2) - 00:43:725 (3) - 00:45:038 (5) - Off screen fixed
00:46:538 (1) - same^ fixed
00:48:038 (3) - ^ fixed

00:53:288 (6) - 00:54:038 (7) - Add note inbetween, pause doesn't help anyone here changed

00:54:413 (1) - This section of notes is awfully boring, in the VERY least, remake them into sliders lasting for 1 whole note, as you only have notes starting on every second note as of now. i have tried to do something about this

00:58:913 (7) - I get that this is a slow part, but it's so long and there's no real challenge - I suggest you make some slow jumps gradually getting longer, something like

SPOILER

or

i have tried to do something about this but its not easy to make this part of the song a bit challenging



01:12:788 (2) - Off screenfixed
01:20:663 (1) - Off screen, and also very close to the last notes even though there's a little break, you can afford moving it further away to singify the pause, and also possibly ctrl+G to be opposite of the slider right before it - just adding a bit of difficulty. fixed

01:23:288 (1) - Off screen fixed
01:25:725 (4) - ctrl+G done
01:31:913 (6) - ctrl+G done
01:58:163 (5) - Off screen fixed
02:09:413 (1) - ^ fixed
02:11:288 (6) - ^ fixed

02:16:538 (1) - Starting with a lot of straight line single tapping here, pattern, if not all of them, some of them. fixed

02:18:413 (1) - Off screenfixed

There are several more you can ctrl+G like 02:04:163 (3) or 02:19:163 (2) to add more difficulty, but go through it and consider which direction is the best, bearing in mind where there's a pause, go further away, creating a more fun pattern etc. done

02:08:663 (8) - Off screen fixed
02:28:538 (4) - ^ fixed

02:30:038 (1) and 02:35:288 (1) sound like they could've been going on for that entire part, but you mapped it as she sings instead, feels random as the rest of the beatmap is going on, singing or no singing. Not only does it feel random (where it is and isn't mapped) but it's also very lazy. fixed
02:40:538 (1) - is a little better.

02:49:163 (3) - Off screen (by a lot) fixed
02:58:538 (1) - weird new combo pattern changed
03:10:725 (4) - awkward break before slider i did that on purpose
03:33:225 (2) - Off screen fixed
03:55:163 (4) - outside beatgrid, like several of the ones I've already said are off screen. Keep yourself inside it - it's there for a reason. fixed

Not looking at the other difficulties as I am awful at both mapping and playing anything lower. Good luck with the map
The notes about upping difficulty is related to how your hard and insane are almost the same star difficulty.

Thanks for the mod