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Rodel Naval feat.Hatsune Miku - Lumayo Ka Man Sa Akin [OsuMa

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Topic Starter
arviejhay
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, 11 January 2016 at 5:00:07 PM

Artist: Rodel Naval feat.Hatsune Miku
Title: Lumayo Ka Man Sa Akin
Tags: betacarotinoid OPM Filipino Youtube Even if you go away from me Vocaloid Tagalog
BPM: 104
Filesize: 7606kb
Play Time: 03:57
Difficulties Available:
  1. 4K EZ - 4Key (1.27 stars, 512 notes)
  2. 4K NM - 4Key (1.89 stars, 850 notes)
  3. 7K EZ - 7Key (1.13 stars, 500 notes)
  4. 7K NM - 7Key (1.94 stars, 901 notes)
Download: Rodel Naval feat.Hatsune Miku - Lumayo Ka Man Sa Akin
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Storyboard Finished but i wont put english lyrics in the SB. so instead
English Lyrics
If you go away from me
And you forget me
it hurts my feelings
Still forced to endure it

Expired Happiness
Hopeful Yesterday
Endless dream
Disappeared leaving you , my love.

[Chorus]
Because wherever you are
My heart is beating for you
Suffering yet
My Feelings
Still loving you my dear
trying to forget you but i can't
I still haven't changed
My love for you is always included

Rewarding moments
If you are the one with
I was not finished yet
No one wanted more
In the evening is remembered
Depressed because your not here
Your embrace my hopes
Would repeat again
My love.

[Repeat Chorus]

Whether we have not met
I still hoping my love
Cause I love you believe it
Nothing like you in my life
You just now,
Tomorrow, ever
Expect me to came here

My love for you is always included
4th osu!mania beatmap

VOCALOID SINGS OPM (ORIGINAL PHILIPPINE MUSIC)

Song by: Rodel Naval
Sing by: Hatsune Miku
Make her Sing by: betacarotinoid Subscribe him pls
Lel first time working with lyrics


lel 4th filipino song?

KEYS: 4K , 7K


Modders
- Harbyter
- [ GraveChaos ]
- ShikiNoHollow
- Tidek
- -Kamikaze-
- hutunohito
- avalon_n
- xLoupGarou
- Blocko
- Yuutosan
- Starry-
- Amefurashi-
- RuberusuScarlet
- wagara
- Verniy_Chan
- Marirose
- Eternalie
- Kiviman
- schwarzvgrune
- JamesHappy15
- Gomuryuu
- Feerum
- Kazamastar11
- Rayz141
- Candiize
- ExUsagi
- Frim4503
Harbyter
ok, tried to mod but it felt really strange at the start so i deleted everything,the problem is that you should resnap everything.


is the offset correct? have you checked if the song got 2 didfferent bpm?


i like this song so after you have checked those thing pm me again i will mod again
Topic Starter
arviejhay

Harbyter wrote:

ok, tried to mod but it felt really strange at the start so i deleted everything,
the problem is that you should resnap everything. i check everything and some are off. so i fixed it


is the offset correct? yes
have you checked if the song got 2 didfferent bpm? i checked it and clearly there's no reason to add another bpm.


i like this song so after you have checked those thing pm me again i will mod again
Topic Starter
arviejhay
double post
Harbyter
ok let's start!

[MOD]


Column -1-2-3-4-

4K HD
Put the divisor 1/16 then

00:01:584 (1584|0,1584|2) - move here 00:01:620 -
00:02:449 (2449|3,2449|1) - move here 00:02:485 -
00:03:026 (3026|2,3026|3) - move here 00:03:062 -
00:03:603 (3603|0,3603|3) - move here 00:03:639 -
00:03:891 (3891|2) - here 00:03:927 -
00:04:180 (4180|1) - here 00:04:216 -
00:04:468 (4468|0) - here 00:04:504 -
00:04:757 (4757|1) - move here 00:04:793 -
00:04:901 (4901|2) - move here 00:04:937 -
00:04:973 (4973|3) - delete
00:05:045 (5045|2) - move in col 4
00:05:045 (5045|0) - delete
00:05:153 - add note in col 3
00:05:442 - add note 1
00:05:694 (5694|2) - move in col 4
00:06:812 - add note 3
00:07:064 (7064|3,7064|1) - move here 00:07:100 -
00:07:389 - note 1
00:07:641 (7641|2,7641|1) - move here 00:07:677 -
00:09:372 (9372|1) - move here 00:09:408 -
00:09:588 (9588|2) - move here 00:09:552 -
00:09:660 (9660|3,9660|0) - move here 00:09:696 -
00:10:382 (10382|2) - move here 00:10:346 -
00:10:526 (10526|1) - move here 00:10:490 -
00:10:670 (10670|0) - move here 00:10:634 -
00:10:814 (10814|1,10814|3) - here 00:10:850 -
00:11:103 (11103|2) - here 00:11:139 -
00:11:391 (11391|1) - here 00:11:427 -
00:11:680 (11680|0) - here 00:11:716 -

and this in all the song,

dude i still think the offset isn't correct lol
Topic Starter
arviejhay

Harbyter wrote:

ok let's start!

[MOD]


Column -1-2-3-4-

4K HD
Put the divisor 1/16 then

00:01:584 (1584|0,1584|2) - move here 00:01:620 -
00:02:449 (2449|3,2449|1) - move here 00:02:485 -
00:03:026 (3026|2,3026|3) - move here 00:03:062 -
00:03:603 (3603|0,3603|3) - move here 00:03:639 -
00:03:891 (3891|2) - here 00:03:927 -
00:04:180 (4180|1) - here 00:04:216 -
00:04:468 (4468|0) - here 00:04:504 -
00:04:757 (4757|1) - move here 00:04:793 -
00:04:901 (4901|2) - move here 00:04:937 -
00:04:973 (4973|3) - delete
00:05:045 (5045|2) - move in col 4
00:05:045 (5045|0) - delete
00:05:153 - add note in col 3
00:05:442 - add note 1
00:05:694 (5694|2) - move in col 4
00:06:812 - add note 3
00:07:064 (7064|3,7064|1) - move here 00:07:100 -
00:07:389 - note 1
00:07:641 (7641|2,7641|1) - move here 00:07:677 -
00:09:372 (9372|1) - move here 00:09:408 -
00:09:588 (9588|2) - move here 00:09:552 -
00:09:660 (9660|3,9660|0) - move here 00:09:696 -
00:10:382 (10382|2) - move here 00:10:346 -
00:10:526 (10526|1) - move here 00:10:490 -
00:10:670 (10670|0) - move here 00:10:634 -
00:10:814 (10814|1,10814|3) - here 00:10:850 -
00:11:103 (11103|2) - here 00:11:139 -
00:11:391 (11391|1) - here 00:11:427 -
00:11:680 (11680|0) - here 00:11:716 -

and this in all the song,

dude i still think the offset isn't correct lol i will ask someone if the offset is right
Thanks for the mod! :) Sorry i don't have time to reply to your mod :(
Gravey-
Hi MOD here as requested in my Queue~ (~*w*)~
[Minor/Basic 4K MOD]

"I accept osu!mania maps with a duration under 3 minutes." Tis' almost 4mins @w@
Offset: 1620
Add kiai:
From 00:59:312 to 01:25:526
From 02:18:891 to 02:52:353
From 03:24:660 to 03:40:814
|1|2|3|4|
4K EZ
OD = 6
00:22:353 (22353|0) - Move to 00:22:389
00:24:660 (24660|3) - Move to 00:24:696
00:26:968 (26968|1) - Move to 00:27:004
00:29:276 (29276|2) - Move to 00:29:312
00:31:584 (31584|3) - Move to 00:31:620
00:32:160 (32160|1) - Move to 00:32:196
00:33:891 (33891|2) - Move to 00:33:927
.............
Arrange the notes onward due to change of Offset~
4K NM
OD = 7
00:10:562 (10562|1) - Move to 00:10:526
00:10:706 (10706|0) - Move to 00:10:670
00:22:353 (22353|0) - Move to 00:22:389
00:24:660 (24660|3) - Move to 00:24:696
00:26:968 (26968|1) - Move to 00:27:004
00:29:276 (29276|3,29276|2) - Move to 00:29:312
00:31:584 (31584|2) - Move to 00:31:620 Column 4
.............
Arrange the notes onward due to change of offset~
4K HD
Arrange the notes due to change of offset~

Tagalog song <3
Good luck!~
Topic Starter
arviejhay

[GraveChaos] wrote:

Hi MOD here as requested in my Queue~ (~*w*)~
[Minor/Basic 4K MOD]

"I accept osu!mania maps with a duration under 3 minutes." Tis' almost 4mins @w@
Offset: 1620
Add kiai:
From 00:59:312 to 01:25:526
From 02:18:891 to 02:52:353
From 03:24:660 to 03:40:814
|1|2|3|4|
4K EZ
OD = 6
00:22:353 (22353|0) - Move to 00:22:389
00:24:660 (24660|3) - Move to 00:24:696
00:26:968 (26968|1) - Move to 00:27:004
00:29:276 (29276|2) - Move to 00:29:312
00:31:584 (31584|3) - Move to 00:31:620
00:32:160 (32160|1) - Move to 00:32:196
00:33:891 (33891|2) - Move to 00:33:927
.............
Arrange the notes onward due to change of Offset~
4K NM
OD = 7
00:10:562 (10562|1) - Move to 00:10:526
00:10:706 (10706|0) - Move to 00:10:670
00:22:353 (22353|0) - Move to 00:22:389
00:24:660 (24660|3) - Move to 00:24:696
00:26:968 (26968|1) - Move to 00:27:004
00:29:276 (29276|3,29276|2) - Move to 00:29:312
00:31:584 (31584|2) - Move to 00:31:620 Column 4
.............
Arrange the notes onward due to change of offset~
4K HD
Arrange the notes due to change of offset~

Tagalog song <3
Good luck!~
Thanks for the mod! :)
some of the notes already been moved
SReisen
hi - FaL3C's osu!mania Team Modding

sorry i cant mod this , is very long and easy map , not many people will map easy map
ill give you hitsound mod okay?

heavy piano used whistle , :D

HS
[7K EZ]

00:59:312 (59312|0) - finish
01:17:773 - add note to 7 + finish
01:18:639 - heavy piano
01:30:466 (90466|0) - remove
01:38:254 (98254|2,98543|1) - what this follow?
01:38:831 - to - 01:40:273 - piano going
01:41:427 (101427|4,101716|5,102004|1) - vocal?

arghh im getting sleepy ==

02:20:081 (140081|1) - finish
02:38:543 (158543|2) - ^
02:52:389 (172389|2) - ^

the rest please follow the hitsound , which is the same or heavy no need all for hitsound :)

im so damn sorry , thats all i can help you
Topic Starter
arviejhay

ShikiNoHollow wrote:

hi - FaL3C's osu!mania Team Modding

sorry i cant mod this , is very long and easy map , not many people will map easy map
ill give you hitsound mod okay?

heavy piano used whistle , :D i didn't know :o

HS
[7K EZ]

00:59:312 (59312|0) - finish
01:17:773 - add note to 7 + finish
01:18:639 - heavy piano
01:30:466 (90466|0) - remove
01:38:254 (98254|2,98543|1) - what this follow? guitar
01:38:831 - to - 01:40:273 - piano going i think it's a guitar sound
01:41:427 (101427|4,101716|5,102004|1) - vocal?

arghh im getting sleepy ==

02:20:081 (140081|1) - finish
02:38:543 (158543|2) - ^
02:52:389 (172389|2) - ^

the rest please follow the hitsound , which is the same or heavy no need all for hitsound :)

im so damn sorry , thats all i can help you That's ok. you just gave me an idea
Thanks for the mod! :) applied all
Tidek


Overall, I dont understand your chords usage in 4k diffs, so I will focus mainly on them

Columns 1234

4K HD
  1. HP 8
  2. 00:02:196 - note on 3?
  3. Timing through 1st 10sec looks strange, better if some1 experienced will check bpm and offset
  4. 00:13:735 (13735|3) - its very very low sound here, no1 will hear that, suggest to remove
  5. 00:27:004 (27004|2) - delete and add note here on 2 00:27:870 -
  6. 00:29:312 (29312|3,29312|2) - delete 1 note
  7. 00:34:504 - add 4
  8. 00:41:716 - add 4
  9. 00:43:446 - add 3
  10. 00:50:081 - and 00:50:946 - make chords?
  11. 01:13:735 (73735|2) - delete
  12. 01:18:062 (78062|1) - delete
  13. 01:20:081 (80081|2,80081|3,80370|3,80370|1,80658|0,80658|2,80946|3,80946|0,81235|2,81235|0) - i dont know why u put a lot of chords here, it makes no sense, remap it
  14. 01:24:120 (84120|2) - delete
  15. 01:43:735 (103735|3,103735|0,103735|1) - i dont know those 3chords are necessary, it fits more on that kind of sounds 01:44:312 - because its louder and u put ONLY 1 note on most of them. You should consider that because atm it looks like chaos, sometimes 1 note, sometimes 2chords/3chords etc
  16. 02:18:927 - another example, strong piano and only 1note? before u put 3chord on light piano, it makes no sense
  17. 02:59:312 (179312|2,179312|3,179312|0,179312|1) - 4chord?...
  18. 03:03:350 - add note
  19. 03:23:543 (203543|2,204696|0,205850|3,207004|0,208158|3,209312|1,210466|2,211620|3) - those LNs are going wrong with music, it goes like this:
    1st LN 03:23:543 -
    2nd LN 03:24:696 -
    3rd LN 03:28:158 -
    4th LN 03:29:312 -
    5th LN 03:31:620 -
  20. 03:45:466 (225466|0,225466|2,225466|3) - avoid 3chords in calm parts

4K NM and 4K EZ, similar suggestions like in 4K Hard.

Good Luck
Topic Starter
arviejhay

Tidek wrote:



Overall, I dont understand your chords usage in 4k diffs, so I will focus mainly on them

Columns 1234

4K HD
  1. HP 8
  2. 00:02:196 - note on 3? ok
  3. Timing through 1st 10sec looks strange, better if some1 experienced will check bpm and offset i think there's nothing wrong with the bpm nor the offset
  4. 00:13:735 (13735|3) - its very very low sound here, no1 will hear that, suggest to remove ok
  5. 00:27:004 (27004|2) - delete and add note here on 2 00:27:870 - ^
  6. 00:29:312 (29312|3,29312|2) - delete 1 note ^
  7. 00:34:504 - add 4 ^
  8. 00:41:716 - add 4 ^
  9. 00:43:446 - add 3 ^
  10. 00:50:081 - and 00:50:946 - make chords? ^
  11. 01:13:735 (73735|2) - delete ^
  12. 01:18:062 (78062|1) - delete ^
  13. 01:20:081 (80081|2,80081|3,80370|3,80370|1,80658|0,80658|2,80946|3,80946|0,81235|2,81235|0) - i dont know why u put a lot of chords here, it makes no sense, remap it
  14. 01:24:120 (84120|2) - delete
  15. 01:43:735 (103735|3,103735|0,103735|1) - i dont know those 3chords are necessary, it fits more on that kind of sounds 01:44:312 - because its louder and u put ONLY 1 note on most of them. You should consider that because atm it looks like chaos, sometimes 1 note, sometimes 2chords/3chords etc
  16. 02:18:927 - another example, strong piano and only 1note? before u put 3chord on light piano, it makes no sense
  17. 02:59:312 (179312|2,179312|3,179312|0,179312|1) - 4chord?...
  18. 03:03:350 - add note
  19. 03:23:543 (203543|2,204696|0,205850|3,207004|0,208158|3,209312|1,210466|2,211620|3) - those LNs are going wrong with music, it goes like this:
    1st LN 03:23:543 - What?
    2nd LN 03:24:696 - ?
    3rd LN 03:28:158 - ^
    4th LN 03:29:312 - ^
    5th LN 03:31:620 - ^
  20. 03:45:466 (225466|0,225466|2,225466|3) - avoid 3chords in calm parts

4K NM and 4K EZ, similar suggestions like in 4K Hard.

Good Luck
Thanks for the mod! :) almost applied all
Kamikaze
You should apply Tidek's suggestions to 7k also before I mod it (density and chords)
Topic Starter
arviejhay
:roll:

-Kamikaze- wrote:

You should apply Tidek's suggestions to 7k also before I mod it (density and chords)
already applied :)
Kamikaze

arviejhay wrote:

already applied :)
kk, so I guess I should get on with it

Dank Modding vol.2 here heuehuehuehuehuehueh

General outline of what my mods contain:
>My thoughts about mapset
>Some advices
>Harsh opinions about map if I feel like it needs more work
>Complaining about mapstyle (sometimes even shouting)
>Commenting on 90% of things I mention
>Funny maymay arrows
>w33d
>Random images
>All the bad shit you may not expect
Keep in mind that all harsh things I say, not because I hate stuff, but because I care about every single map I mod and want to help you get it ranked. I'm voicing all of my opinions without restraint. Please don't rage at me because of this, I don't mean to offend you in any way. Also do note that I'm still learning, so I might misunderstand some things. and I'm terrible at naming instruments orz

Columns are: |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

General:
Why is OD on all 7K's 8 when on 4K it's 6->7->8? I'm suggesting this: (for both keymodes)

EZ: OD/HP 7
NM: OD/HP 7,5
HD: OD/HP 8

Secondly as Tidek said, timing seems a bit weird, it's a good idea to see if you can get timing check on that one, just to be sure. I mean, notes are placed okay, but metronomes are weird and stuff
Lastly, you should try to hitsound this using this guy's hitsound library, default hitsounds sound horrible on this beauty owo
Nice song you've got there even if I don't understand a fuckin word xD

[EZ]
The following suggestions will make this map less awkward, because there are sounds mapped that are barerly hearable, this will make this diff easier to understand for beginners. Basically focus only on clear sounds and leave some small sounds empty
I'm saying to remove stuff only when I feel like it's barerly hearable. So yeah, density check, you need to rearrange patterns yourself

00:02:196 (2196|4) - Delete
00:04:793 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2207680 Clearly hearable guitar on 1/8, shouldn't be too hard (that pattern is only an example to show where notes should be)
00:08:254 (8254|1) - Move to 1st
00:16:115 (16115|4,16403|5) - Delete those two
00:27:293 - Add on 3rd
00:31:908 - Add on 4th
00:34:793 (34793|5) - Delete, barerly hearable and will emphasize piano more
00:46:331 - Add one
00:46:908 - ^
00:48:639 (48639|4,48927|3) - Remove
00:50:370 - Add one here
00:51:523 (51523|3) - Remove
00:52:100 (52100|1) - ^
00:52:389 - Add one maybe?
00:54:696 - Add one, seems louder
00:55:273 (55273|5,55562|4) - Delete
00:55:850 (55850|3) - Move 1/8 earlier (00:55:778 - )
00:56:427 (56427|4) - Separate this from next two notes since it's a different instrument. Also it should be on 00:56:391 - (1/16 earlier) This is why you need a timing check
01:00:754 (60754|2) - I'm guessing that it's for vocal, but if not, delete
01:01:908 - Add on 5th
01:08:831 - Add on 6th
01:11:139 - Add on 6th
01:12:870 (72870|4) - Delete, guitar still very low and you didn't put it for vocal just 1/1 and 1/2 ago
01:13:446 - I'm not sure about this, guitar is on the edge of being clearly hearable, so I'll suggest to add one here
01:14:528 - Feeling a piano here (might be wrong)
01:21:812 - Add one
01:29:889 - ^
01:31:331 (91331|4) - Delete, will be less awkward considering that guitar sound
01:31:620 (91620|5) - This should be on 01:31:692 - also consider changing into LN until 01:32:196 - and if you do that, move 01:32:196 (92196|4,92485|3) - 1 to the left for better playability
01:35:874 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2207737 this is how those notes for guitar should be arranged (once again pattern is an example)
01:37:677 (97677|6) - Delete
01:38:254 (98254|2,98543|1,98831|2,99120|3,99408|4,99696|5) - I don't know. Those sounds are very low, but then again it's a bit too empty without them. You should leave only strongest sounds out of this bunch and delete rest
01:40:562 (100562|4) - Add
01:40:706 - Add (stair should be okay as a pattern)
01:42:581 - Add
01:44:889 - Add, possibly on 5th (from now on most add suggestions will be for flow, those big gaps that you have between notes make players miss beause of deconcentration. It can be quite frustrating. Don't worry tho, I only pick hearable sounds. This will also make up for earlier deletions)
01:46:043 - Add
01:47:196 - Add
01:51:812 - ^
01:54:120 - ^
01:55:273 - ^
01:56:427 - ^
01:59:889 - ^
02:01:043 - ^
02:05:658 - ^
02:06:812 - ^
02:08:254 (128254|1) - Delete (not exactly noticable sound)
02:09:120 - Add
02:10:273 - ^
02:12:293 - ^ (piano is there, on the edge of being hearable, but it's there)
02:12:870 - ^ (nicely hearable piano)
02:14:889 - ^
02:18:350 - ^
02:18:927 - ^ (maybe, I think it's louder piano than most of piano's in this song, your decision to make)
02:19:504 - ^
02:20:658 - ^ (5th)
02:21:523 - ^ (1/2 piano)
02:21:812 - ^ (^)
02:22:677 - ^ (^)
02:22:966 - ^ (^)
02:25:562 - ^ (stronger)
02:28:735 - ^
02:29:889 - ^
02:31:043 - ^
02:31:908 - ^ (again a 1/2 pattern)
02:32:196 - ^ (^)
02:33:350 - ^
02:34:504 - ^
02:35:658 (155658|5,155946|6) - Delete
02:35:802 - Add (unusual sound, but worth mapping imho)
02:36:235 - Add (stronger)
02:36:523 - ^ (maybe)
02:36:812 - ^
02:37:966 - ^
02:37:389 - ^ (stronger)
02:41:427 - ^
02:42:581 - ^
02:43:735 - ^
02:44:889 - ^
02:47:196 - ^
02:48:350 - ^
02:49:504 - ^
02:50:658 - ^
02:51:812 - ^
02:51:235 - Delete one maybe? (doesn't seem necessary imo)
02:54:985 (174985|2) - Delete
02:55:562 (175562|0) - Delete
02:56:427 - Add
02:58:735 - ^
02:59:023 - ^ (piano, same pitch as 02:59:312 (179312|1) - )
02:59:600 (179600|2,180177|4) - Delete
03:01:908 - Add (piano)
03:02:773 (182773|5,183927|4,185081|3) - Why are those LN's? They fit as 2-chords and totally don't feel like they should be longs
03:07:389 - Add (piano)
03:09:696 - Add (on the edge of being hearable)
03:09:696 - Add (piano, still)
03:12:293 - ^
03:12:870 (192870|5) - Delete
03:14:312 (194312|1) - Delete
03:14:889 (194889|3,195177|5) - Delete
03:15:754 - Add
03:16:908 - Add
03:19:216 - Add (since you've mapped similar sound just 1/2 before)
03:19:793 (199793|5) - Delete
03:20:081 - Add (stronger)
03:22:100 (202100|4) - Delete
03:22:389 - Add (stronger)
03:23:254 (203254|2) - Dunno, seems too low for my taste, suggesting removal
03:23:543 - 03:23:543 - Very weird LN usage, they're totally out of place and breaking flow. If you've mapped them for voal, it's even worse. Delete all of'em please, note density is already good without them
03:24:120 - Add
03:42:870 (222870|6) - Move to 03:42:797 -
03:42:942 - Add
03:52:281 - ^
03:52:389 (232389|5) - Delete
03:52:677 (232677|2) - Delete (unless you're mapping the other guitar, then ingore last 3 suggestions)
03:53:651 - Add
03:56:139 (236139|2) - Delete
03:56:427 (236427|1) - Move to 03:56:355 -
03:56:716 (236716|2) - Move to 03:56:644 -
03:57:004 (237004|4,237004|1) - Move to 03:57:112 - (another example of inaccurate timing)

Holy shit that took me way longer than I expected, try to apply same/most of suggestions to NM and HD, also call me back to re-check HD after you get a timing check. Good luck! o/
Topic Starter
arviejhay

-Kamikaze- wrote:

arviejhay wrote:

already applied :)
kk, so I guess I should get on with it

Dank Modding vol.2 here heuehuehuehuehuehueh

General outline of what my mods contain:
>My thoughts about mapset
>Some advices
>Harsh opinions about map if I feel like it needs more work
>Complaining about mapstyle (sometimes even shouting)
>Commenting on 90% of things I mention
>Funny maymay arrows
>w33d
>Random images
>All the bad shit you may not expect
Keep in mind that all harsh things I say, not because I hate stuff, but because I care about every single map I mod and want to help you get it ranked. I'm voicing all of my opinions without restraint. Please don't rage at me because of this, I don't mean to offend you in any way. Also do note that I'm still learning, so I might misunderstand some things. and I'm terrible at naming instruments orz

Columns are: |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

General:
Why is OD on all 7K's 8 when on 4K it's 6->7->8? I'm suggesting this: (for both keymodes)

EZ: OD/HP 7
NM: OD/HP 7,5
HD: OD/HP 8

Secondly as Tidek said, timing seems a bit weird, it's a good idea to see if you can get timing check on that one, just to be sure. I mean, notes are placed okay, but metronomes are weird and stuff
Lastly, you should try to hitsound this using this guy's hitsound library, default hitsounds sound horrible on this beauty owo it's too hard to find the correct piano sound. I just found 1 hitsound and it's finger snap
Nice song you've got there even if I don't understand a fuckin word xD

[EZ]
The following suggestions will make this map less awkward, because there are sounds mapped that are barerly hearable, this will make this diff easier to understand for beginners. Basically focus only on clear sounds and leave some small sounds empty
I'm saying to remove stuff only when I feel like it's barerly hearable. So yeah, density check, you need to rearrange patterns yourself

00:02:196 (2196|4) - Delete
00:04:793 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2207680 Clearly hearable guitar on 1/8, shouldn't be too hard (that pattern is only an example to show where notes should be)
00:08:254 (8254|1) - Move to 1st
00:16:115 (16115|4,16403|5) - Delete those two
00:27:293 - Add on 3rd
00:31:908 - Add on 4th
00:34:793 (34793|5) - Delete, barerly hearable and will emphasize piano more
00:46:331 - Add one
00:46:908 - ^
00:48:639 (48639|4,48927|3) - Remove
00:50:370 - Add one here
00:51:523 (51523|3) - Remove
00:52:100 (52100|1) - ^
00:52:389 - Add one maybe?
00:54:696 - Add one, seems louder
00:55:273 (55273|5,55562|4) - Delete
00:55:850 (55850|3) - Move 1/8 earlier (00:55:778 - )
00:56:427 (56427|4) - Separate this from next two notes since it's a different instrument. Also it should be on 00:56:391 - (1/16 earlier) This is why you need a timing check
01:00:754 (60754|2) - I'm guessing that it's for vocal, but if not, delete no
01:01:908 - Add on 5th
01:08:831 - Add on 6th
01:11:139 - Add on 6th
01:12:870 (72870|4) - Delete, guitar still very low and you didn't put it for vocal just 1/1 and 1/2 ago
01:13:446 - I'm not sure about this, guitar is on the edge of being clearly hearable, so I'll suggest to add one here
01:14:528 - Feeling a piano here (might be wrong) there's no piano
01:21:812 - Add one
01:29:889 - ^
01:31:331 (91331|4) - Delete, will be less awkward considering that guitar sound
01:31:620 (91620|5) - This should be on 01:31:692 - also consider changing into LN until 01:32:196 - and if you do that, move 01:32:196 (92196|4,92485|3) - 1 to the left for better playability
01:35:874 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2207737 this is how those notes for guitar should be arranged (once again pattern is an example)
01:37:677 (97677|6) - Delete
01:38:254 (98254|2,98543|1,98831|2,99120|3,99408|4,99696|5) - I don't know. Those sounds are very low, but then again it's a bit too empty without them. You should leave only strongest sounds out of this bunch and delete rest
01:40:562 (100562|4) - Add
01:40:706 - Add (stair should be okay as a pattern)
01:42:581 - Add
01:44:889 - Add, possibly on 5th (from now on most add suggestions will be for flow, those big gaps that you have between notes make players miss beause of deconcentration. It can be quite frustrating. Don't worry tho, I only pick hearable sounds. This will also make up for earlier deletions)
01:46:043 - Add
01:47:196 - Add
01:51:812 - ^
01:54:120 - ^
01:55:273 - ^
01:56:427 - ^
01:59:889 - ^
02:01:043 - ^
02:05:658 - ^
02:06:812 - ^
02:08:254 (128254|1) - Delete (not exactly noticable sound)
02:09:120 - Add
02:10:273 - ^
02:12:293 - ^ (piano is there, on the edge of being hearable, but it's there)
02:12:870 - ^ (nicely hearable piano)
02:14:889 - ^
02:18:350 - ^
02:18:927 - ^ (maybe, I think it's louder piano than most of piano's in this song, your decision to make)
02:19:504 - ^
02:20:658 - ^ (5th)
02:21:523 - ^ (1/2 piano)
02:21:812 - ^ (^)
02:22:677 - ^ (^)
02:22:966 - ^ (^)
02:25:562 - ^ (stronger)
02:28:735 - ^
02:29:889 - ^
02:31:043 - ^
02:31:908 - ^ (again a 1/2 pattern)
02:32:196 - ^ (^)
02:33:350 - ^
02:34:504 - ^
02:35:658 (155658|5,155946|6) - Delete
02:35:802 - Add (unusual sound, but worth mapping imho) not fit
02:36:235 - Add (stronger)
02:36:523 - ^ (maybe)
02:36:812 - ^
02:37:966 - ^
02:37:389 - ^ (stronger)
02:41:427 - ^
02:42:581 - ^
02:43:735 - ^
02:44:889 - ^
02:47:196 - ^
02:48:350 - ^
02:49:504 - ^
02:50:658 - ^
02:51:812 - ^
02:51:235 - Delete one maybe? (doesn't seem necessary imo)
02:54:985 (174985|2) - Delete
02:55:562 (175562|0) - Delete
02:56:427 - Add
02:58:735 - ^
02:59:023 - ^ (piano, same pitch as 02:59:312 (179312|1) - )
02:59:600 (179600|2,180177|4) - Delete
03:01:908 - Add (piano)
03:02:773 (182773|5,183927|4,185081|3) - Why are those LN's? They fit as 2-chords and totally don't feel like they should be longs
03:07:389 - Add (piano)
03:09:696 - Add (on the edge of being hearable)
03:09:696 - Add (piano, still)
03:12:293 - ^
03:12:870 (192870|5) - Delete
03:14:312 (194312|1) - Delete
03:14:889 (194889|3,195177|5) - Delete
03:15:754 - Add
03:16:908 - Add
03:19:216 - Add (since you've mapped similar sound just 1/2 before)
03:19:793 (199793|5) - Delete
03:20:081 - Add (stronger)
03:22:100 (202100|4) - Delete
03:22:389 - Add (stronger)
03:23:254 (203254|2) - Dunno, seems too low for my taste, suggesting removal
03:23:543 - 03:23:543 - Very weird LN usage, they're totally out of place and breaking flow. If you've mapped them for voal, it's even worse. Delete all of'em please, note density is already good without them
03:24:120 - Add
03:42:870 (222870|6) - Move to 03:42:797 -
03:42:942 - Add
03:52:281 - ^
03:52:389 (232389|5) - Delete
03:52:677 (232677|2) - Delete (unless you're mapping the other guitar, then ingore last 3 suggestions)
03:53:651 - Add
03:56:139 (236139|2) - Delete
03:56:427 (236427|1) - Move to 03:56:355 -
03:56:716 (236716|2) - Move to 03:56:644 -
03:57:004 (237004|4,237004|1) - Move to 03:57:112 - (another example of inaccurate timing)

Holy shit that took me way longer than I expected, try to apply same/most of suggestions to NM and HD, also call me back to re-check HD after you get a timing check. Good luck! o/
Thank you so much for this mod!
I feel bad to myself i have many mistakes :cry:
Kamikaze
There's nothing to feel bad about though, everyone makes many mistakes at the beginning xD You should just take it as a hint on what to avoid in next maps :D
shionelove
hi~from queue
column 1234 1234567

i think you should delete NM diff,because of diff spread
i also made EZmap,but Spy told me to delete EZ+(EZ,EZ+,NM diff)
2 diffs each keys is enough to rank

[4K EZ]
00:06:307 (6307|0,6307|2) - one move to 00:06:235
03:03:927 (183927|2) - add 1
[7K EZ]
00:06:307 (6307|4,6307|1) - one move to 00:06:235
00:56:391 (56391|2) - unsnap
01:17:773 (77773|0,77773|6) - delete one
02:35:370 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2212253
03:05:081 - add
03:14:600 - add
03:42:797 (222797|6) - unsnap
Topic Starter
arviejhay

hutunohito wrote:

hi~from queue
column 1234 1234567

i think you should delete NM diff,because of diff spread
i also made EZmap,but Spy told me to delete EZ+(EZ,EZ+,NM diff) oh. i should delete it
2 diffs each keys is enough to rank

[4K EZ]
00:06:307 (6307|0,6307|2) - one move to 00:06:235
03:03:927 (183927|2) - add 1
[7K EZ]
00:06:307 (6307|4,6307|1) - one move to 00:06:235 ok
00:56:391 (56391|2) - unsnap need timing check first before i snapped this. there's no queue that have timing check :(
01:17:773 (77773|0,77773|6) - delete one no
02:35:370 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2212253
03:05:081 - add ok
03:14:600 - add no
03:42:797 (222797|6) - unsnap ok
Thanks for the mod! :)
Rizen
arviejhay wrote:
C.

NaruHina yes!!!

Timing check pls
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/223944
is timing check in any modes?

Yessss, NaruHina :3
Sorry, time check is only for STD
However, I checked it and got a BPM of 104.00 and offset of 1608
Don't take this for granted though, I didn't know how to snap the mania notes in editor so couldn't really check :<
PLEASE PLEASE CHECK BY YOURSELF IF THE OFFSET IS RIGHT BECAUSE I MIGHT BE WRONG

copyerino/pasterino from modding queue.
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