1. Marathon (4.9 stars, 1203 notes)

1. 00:29:817 (7,1,2) - this gap is awkward
2. 00:35:817 (6,7,8) - ^
3. 01:24:726 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this stream is so overmapped... doesn't fit imo
4. 01:53:726 (6,7) - delete this and make 01:53:635 (5,6) - anti jump. it fits with the song
5. 03:11:635 (1,2) - this jump is unnecessarily big and 03:11:817 (2,3) - this spacing makes it really awkward after a huge jump
6. 03:15:271 (9) - could add nc here to cut down the long stream
7. 03:39:271 (1) - could do a better job with this slider ...
8. 03:53:090 (9,9) - same. could add nc
9. 04:07:453 (3,4) - unfitting overmap
10. 04:09:635 (2) - should add nc and delete nc at 04:10:181 (1) -
11. 04:10:726 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - why overmap
12. 04:51:453 (4,5) - the jump is so big for no reason

No Dap wrote:

m4m

1. 00:29:817 (7,1,2) - this gap is awkward I left it because I think it goes well with this song.. it is awkward tho hehe xD
2. 00:35:817 (6,7,8) - ^ ^
3. 01:24:726 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this stream is so overmapped... doesn't fit imo Didn't change because I like getting players ready for kiai time, it's my type of mapping and it gets you all pumped :3 At least, for me.
4. 01:53:726 (6,7) - delete this and make 01:53:635 (5,6) - anti jump. it fits with the song Ok. Anti-jump is opposite of jump, but I made it the way you want to (I think) with a sort-of jump that I think looks nice.
5. 03:11:635 (1,2) - this jump is unnecessarily big and 03:11:817 (2,3) - this spacing makes it really awkward after a huge jump Ok I stacked them in the middle of the two sliders
6. 03:15:271 (9) - could add nc here to cut down the long stream done
7. 03:39:271 (1) - could do a better job with this slider ... I made it hawter :3
8. 03:53:090 (9,9) - same. could add nc done
9. 04:07:453 (3,4) - unfitting overmap I did the same thing earlier in the map, and I think this is also fun, but I feel okay about it. If more mods say bad things about this, then I'll change it.
10. 04:09:635 (2) - should add nc and delete nc at 04:10:181 (1) - Done, I see. Because slider speed change
11. 04:10:726 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - why overmap getting ready for kiai time=I like to do that
12. 04:51:453 (4,5) - the jump is so big for no reason Kiai time is crazey tyme 4 mei :3 If more mods say so, I'll change. :3

your map has 0 hitsounding. it's unrankable added hitsounding, ty to baraatje123!
gl! thank you

baraatje123 wrote:

Hi
http://puu.sh/guD4C/e828941013.osz
Here is the set hitsounded
As the music is pretty weak in most parts, I kept it peaceful and quiet, mostly because it doesn't have drumrolls which you mapped with streams, which I thus also cannot hitsound ;-;

Good luck!

[Rei-tan] wrote:

uhhhhhhmmm I have no problems with this map >.> i was supposed to mod it buttttt ehhh.. sorry ;A;

1. Place a round slider and select it
2. Go to "Compose" and choose "Convert Slider to Stream"
3. Select the distance snap you used for the stream and voila.

Sala- wrote:

Hi, you solved my puzzle, so you won a mod and an extra kudosu star on this map! yas ty, lol you get double kds :3

[General]

|Some sounds are penetrantly loud. This only applies to certain streams such as 01:24:747 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -. This is not a green line issue, but caused by a custom hitsound being way too loud. so I decreased the volume of "soft-hitclap" for you. http://puu.sh/gRt5k.wav ty and done

|Your beatmap lacks a bit of structure. You are trying to use symmetry to structure it, which is fine, but you don't follow that symmetry enough and that's why patterns sometimes are pretty much wildly spread. So for parts that don't underlie any symmetry rule, you should either make them more coherent (as in: more linked, flowing) or apply the same symmetry like before. You told me to be specific about these parts, that's why I will list some inconsistencies now. thank you

[Marathon]

Here are some symmetrical issues:
00:11:292 (1) - Never appears again. changed area
01:17:838 (3,1,2) - Problems with DS, they all have the same rhythmical distance but different local distances; do not decrease DS if not totally nessecary. i made it better to my taste
01:31:292 (1,2,3) - structureless now it's structure-full
01:35:656 (1,2) - symmetrical, but doesn't suggest any structure because of the mouse movement that is needed to hit those objects. I would suggest a shape like ") (" okey

A lot of problems, even problems with symmetry, are caused by following issue.

|00:25:656 (6,4) - This will probably cause some confusion: The sliders end on something called "downbeat". It is highly suggested to start an object on those downbeats. That would be basically every white line.Further examples for wrongly pronounced downbeats would be 00:36:565 (2,3) - , 00:30:747 (2) - , 00:37:656 (2,5) - , 00:40:565 (1,2) - 00:44:565 (1,1,2) - , 00:47:474 (8) - , etc. Those end on important white ticks that should be pronounced with a starting object, not with the end of one. Players release the slider on this point, meaning that the hitsound does not emphathise a button hit or a mouseclick, which is bad. A hitsound should give feedback when clicking, so try to keep that in mind and put sliders in a way that they support a hit.
Moreover, you have sometimes ignored the downbeats on parts where it was dominant. Examples are: 00:30:201 - , 00:30:565 - , 00:36:020 - , 00:36:383 - ok, I fixed these now. I hope I didnt miss any downbeats to change. This was VERY HELPFUL. NOW MY BEATMAP SOUNDS BETTER TY MUCH THANK YOU MASTER!!

|00:27:292 (1,2,3) - I don't think you really need to extend any of those sliders. There are multiple occasions on which sliders are extended without a certain reason. kept because i think it flows nice, to my taste I'm weird
|03:06:201 (1,1,1) - Too many NCs. woops forgot to update that part lols

|03:52:383 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Streams like that don't look very appealing, Try to form round curves. If you can't do it by hand and eye, perform following steps:

1. Place a round slider and select it
2. Go to "Compose" and choose "Convert Slider to Stream"
3. Select the distance snap you used for the stream and voila. what the hell you can do this? holy freakin balls! anyways, I was gonna keep it because remote control is, y'know, flat and robotic n' stuff, but NOW WITH THESE STEPS I ACTUALLY WANT TO MAKE IT LIKE THAT edit: ok nvm im keeping old stream im horrible at making sliders

|04:22:747 (3,4,5,6) - Could be a nicer square. yes, it could. Changed
|04:56:747 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Maybe a bit harsh, I suggest that you decrease the distance a bit. changed

Yeah, that's basically it. Some slider shapes were a bit unclean, such as 01:08:747 (3,4) - , but they are the smallest problem here. Try to make your map more appealing by avoiding overlaps, creating good patterns by orientating on geometrical shapes like triangles and keep your distance snap clean and playable. thank you

Good luck. thank you

DahplA wrote:

Hi, DahplA here posting from Jloughman14's and DahplA's Modding team. This is a response in regards to this request. Please be sure to vote here on how helpful our mod was.

General

1. You should probably use Audacity or some external audio editor software to make the volume of the song louder. k
2. Ctrl+Shift+A (I go into more detail about the Kiai times below)
   
   SPOILER

   
3. I think you can disable Letterbox during breaks, because there are no breaks... I don't get it

Marathon

1. 04:34:565 - 04:36:020 Make this non Kiai so it splits up the Kiai times ok
2. 04:11:292 Kiai starts here k
3. 04:59:292 Kiai ends here k
4. 03:46:565 Kiai starts here k
5. 03:58:201 Kiai ends here k
6. 01:25:474 Kiai starts here k
7. 01:48:747 Kiai ends here k
   
8. 00:09:474 (2) - Blanket? I don't like blanket for some parts
9. 00:30:565 Place something here instead of leaving a gap if you suggest something, then I will (There is nothing at all to fit in this gap or else it won't fit with the music imo)
10. 00:51:474 (4) - Stack didn't fix
11. 01:23:111 (3,4,5) - Triple doesn't fit here. The single circle works fine I think it's fine for a difficulty increase
12. 02:31:838 (3) - Not stacked properly what?
13. 02:35:656 (2) - Make this go straight no it's fine
14. 02:38:747 (3) - Again didn't fix
15. 02:46:020 (2,3) - Not stacked properly ?
16. 03:42:929 (2) - Remove NC done
17. 03:52:383 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I feel like for such a long stream, you shouldn't make it weirdly shaped. Just make it go straight or at least have the distance spacing be consistent I'm being unique here (imo), if more mods suggest stream changes then I will change
18. 04:00:020 (6) - Blanket I don't like a blanket here
19. 04:01:656 (2) - Fix blanket I don't see anything wrong about it.
20. 04:02:565 (5) - Blanket -
21. 04:06:747 (9) - Move left slightly so it makes it look more straight
22. 04:07:474 (3,4,5) - Again -
23. 04:08:747 (1) - Remove NC ok
24. 04:24:383 (1,2,3) - Make symmetrical? no I use way too much symmetry, I don't want to add more Dx lol
25. 05:00:747 (7) - Add a circle here and put the spinner back done
26. 00:09:474 (2) - Blanket you already mentioned this.
27. 00:50:565 (1,2,3) - Consistent distance spacing not needed imo
    
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DahplA wrote:

General

1. I think you can disable Letterbox during breaks, because there are no breaks... I don't get it

SPOILER

DahplA wrote:

DahplA wrote:

General

1. I think you can disable Letterbox during breaks, because there are no breaks... I don't get it

SPOILER

Kurocho wrote:

It's a good song and map, but two things bother me: Thank you for choosing to mod my map out of your niceness

01:23:111 (3,4,5) This triple and the other one later in the song seems so off, and it always feel like i shouldn't click 4 and 5. A lot of people complained about this. Therefore, I have finally made it normal!
01:32:747 (1,2,3) You use this style of slider timing so many times, perhaps add hit circles or shorten the sliders for subsequent rhythms. A lot of people complained about this too. So, I changed this too!

Good luck with ranking! Thank you!

DragonSlayer96 wrote:

hey. just stopping by with some helpful info that you might want to hear.

general

the artist is Jesus-P, not the kagamines (you can check here and here for a couple of my reference points) done

you can take out <remote> <control> and <nolanm> from the tags. for remote control, it is because that is the song name. for nolanm, it is because it is your username, not someone who did a collab on the map or a guest difficulty on the map oops yeah xD, changed

source should not be vocaloid. i don't think i have seen a single vocaloid map with that in the source field, only in the tags. I kept it because I'm stupid and Idk what else to put there then ;W;

marathon

00:30:383 (3) - why not make this into a slider ending at 00:30:565 - to hit the sound here ok well as I was fixing it to what you said I made something I thought was nicer :3
00:32:292 - you can add a note to this beat ^
00:36:111 (2) - cant hear anything under said note What..? Meh I kept it because ^
00:36:383 - you can add a note to this beat ^
00:40:383 (5,6) - move these back one tick. where they are now, the tick before 5 has a beat to it (and on 5 also) while 6 is mapped over no sound done, I think
00:41:838 - you can add a note to this beat done
00:42:201 - ^ done
00:44:838 (2) - cant hear anything under said note I cant, it's a downbeat
00:46:201 (1,2) - same reason as 00:40:383 (5,6) - done
00:48:020 - you can add a note to this beat
00:52:383 - ^ no, it isn't in the vocals
00:52:747 - ^ ^
00:58:201 - ^ ^
01:07:565 (6,7) - move these forward one tick. same reason as 00:40:383 (5,6) - basically doesn't sound right with this part, sounds too hollow. Didn't change
01:08:292 - you can add a note here I could, but I like the way it is now
01:11:383 - ^ ^
01:11:929 (6) - i cant hear anything underneath it's fine unless more people say so
01:12:474 (2,4) - sounds better if these two are removed to me ^
01:19:020 (5,8) - I cant hear anything underneath guitar
01:22:292 (8,9) - ^ ok removed
01:23:111 (3,4) - ^ removed in previous mod :3
01:29:747 (5) - ^ it's fine to me
01:32:656 (10) - ^ ^
01:34:292 (2) - ^ ^
01:40:111 (2,4) - ^ if more people say it, I'll remove it
01:41:383 (9) - ^ nu I can totally hear this in the music (not literally but I still really hear it)
01:45:929 (2,4) - ^ will remove if more people say so

Breaks

for the sections here, i did not try to find things wrong with these times in case you actually take the break times i suggest

i suggest one from 01:48:838 - to 01:54:474 - for the first one no
03:04:838 - to either 03:14:565 - or 03:15:929 - for the second break no

again, these are just suggestions if you want to take them. playing marathon maps with no breaks gets really taxing on the player With breaks this can't be a marathon

I will be posting and editing a few more times, just saving progress right now okey

Ty very much for your kindness of modding this :3