1. Desperate's Easy (1,18 stars, 61 notes)
2. Fumika's Hard (2,61 stars, 195 notes)
3. Gu's Insane (3,35 stars, 292 notes)
4. Insane (3,35 stars, 307 notes)
5. Normal (1,56 stars, 111 notes)

Amamiya Yuko wrote:

I DID MAKE A SHORT SAMPLE OF THE KIAI TO MAKE SURE WHETHER YOU WERE FINE

Amamiya Yuko wrote:

AND NOW YOU SAID "sorry, no"

Umi wrote:

1. The music is quite relaxing and the way how you mapped it doesn't fit the song to me (tbh this is not what i was expecting from u :/ I usually like your mapping style but this is too much here, blame 2014 mapping) my previous post can answer this
2. The begining and kiai part are clearly overmapped (00:11:499 (5) - /00:13:389 (1,2) - /00:11:499 (5) - and more ..) actually i don't hear anything at these spots. "overmapping doesn't exist" said a certain person. but w/e, if the points at the beginning you mentioned were considered "overmapped", then every single map in osu would also be considered the same. the kiai parts might be questionable, but after confirming with some people i don't think they're absolutely unacceptable.
3. Sometimes you're skipping important beat for no reason (00:12:444 - /00:14:334 - etc..) i followed only one instrument here thus i ignored the others.

U might hate me for this, but i don't feel like add a difficulty that i don't like. so i guess this reason "i don't like it" sums it up? i don't know about you, but for me, when i see a guest diff coming for my set that doesn't really satisfy me, i'd try to consult with the mapper and see what we can do, doing a mod to improve it, asking various people for opinions, or talking to each other to get around the problem, but definitely not removing the map instantly, considering the fact that the request wasn't even done by me, it was done by you, wasn't it? the lack of consultation is the reason why i acted this mad, i hope you can understand the point, my dear friend.

Amamiya Yuko wrote:

so i guess this reason "i don't like it" sums it up? i don't know about you, but for me, when i see a guest diff coming for my set that doesn't really satisfy me, i'd try to consult with the mapper and see what can we do[

appleeaterx wrote:

Hello Umi! from pm request o3o/

:idea: General

* Check AIBat about the preview time. fixed

Normal

* 00:06:074 (1) - Personally, I'd put this much lower than it is right now to keep the flow with (3) - but I can see you refusing this, because you'll have to rework like almost the whole diff. fixed
* 00:19:302 (2,3) - Improve the blanket here. okay

* 00:24:971 (1) - Put the slider point before the red point a little more down, to make it more or less symmetrical.more or less fixed

* 00:45:523 (4) - (EZ/NM/HD/Gu) The finish hitsound should be lower imo. This finish is for example not as loud and noticeable as 00:43:869 (1) - . already lowered here
* 00:49:066 (5) - (all) This note has a different a clap in some diffs, a whistle in Hard and a Finish in Gu's. Make it consistent? A clap + whistle would fit nicely here, since the sound in the song isn't loud enough for a finish. i personnally use finish on normal and insane cuz it fit pretty good to me, people can have different taste, they're not forced to use the same HS as the others :3

Good DT map! Should be good to go.

Insane

* 00:02:294 (1) - Why not put the slider point perfectly on (3). Looks better, and it won't hurt :3 why not lol even if we can't notice it during the play

* 00:09:381 (4,1,3) - This blanket is off.fixed
* 00:13:633 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Almost every blanket here is not done correctly. Might be for flow, but you can blanket all of these notes and keep the flow. I re-blanket'd this part and avoided ugly overlaps, and stacked where needed. Use the code if you want.yeha not bad i used it

196,256,13633,6,0,L|116:256,1,80
260,348,14105,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,344,14342,2,0,P|400:271|368:192,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,272,15050,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,344,15286,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,352,15523,6,0,P|172:324|163:284,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,200,15877,2,0,P|160:192|116:208,1,80
264,272,16231,2,0,P|300:280|344:264,1,80

* 00:26:861 (1) - (Gu/Umi) Same with the whistle-issue again, but maybe you want to discuss this with all the other maps in the diff. Only the easier diffs have a whistle. added whistle
* 00:45:523 (4) - Other diffs have a finish here. I highly recommend adding one added
* 00:49:066 (5) - (all) This note has a different a clap in some diffs, a whistle in Hard and a Finish in Gu's. Make it consistent? A clap + whistle would fit nicely here, since the sound in the song isn't loud enough for a finish.same as normal diff
* 01:03:475 (4,5,6,7,8) - Place at x216/y268 for a blanket with (2,3), and the slider end is also stacked with (8) from the previous combo. done

Nice as always

nice song, nice map, a star for you

TEKON wrote:

Normal:
00:24:263 (5) - this end could use drum sample true added
01:04:656 (1) - this might need finnish sound, or the standard whistle if you don't want it to be loud yup added finish
01:25:444 (2) - remove drum additions nop there is a drum sound here


Insane(I like this one most, good job!):
Why is snap divisor set to 1/8?what happeneeeeedddd not a problem don't worry

Regraz wrote:

Normal

• 
  Rhythm:

1. 00:45:286 (3,4) - How about this one? http://puu.sh/coro8/e4ccfe2319.jpg The finish and the high pitch vocal can be emphasized. rythm feel weird to me
2. About Kiai Time, you use some 1/1 ones such as 00:57:097 (1,2,3,4,5) - . that's nice, but I'd rather recommend you follow the vocal instead.
   Using 1/2 will make the map more easier, so...it seems a little weird to see the map is getting easier especially at the start of Kiai Time. Also, in this two sections: 01:04:656 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - The density of notes varies suddenly, the latter part is much harder than the former part....So I guess you can make the difficulty more consistent. yeah i remapped a bit eh kiai part
   Structure:
3. 01:01:586 (2,3) - maybe you can blanket here? (just a nazi lol) i think it's fixed now
   Hitsounds
4. Fine
   Others:
5. 01:27:334 (1,1) - Regarding this....I dont know if this is allowed in Normal I remember that there is some debate about this kind of spinner which follow its previous note very closely, but I dont know.....i moved it on redline should be good now

Insane

• 
  Rhythm:

1. 00:30:641 (1,2) - Why not continue using the rhythm like 00:21:192 (1,2,3) - ? cuz i like diversity
   Structure:
2. 00:16:940 (6,7,8,9) - Use a larger DS between these 4 notes, also use higher volume here since the music has slightly changed here.i did something else instead
3. 01:03:475 (4,5,6,7,8) - I'd recommend you not stack them since there are 5 notes.... i might consider if i get others reflexion on it
4. 00:15:523 (1,2,3) - (Just personal idea)This one is fine, but how about creating a more neat one like this? http://puu.sh/cpmfp/a7dd5ec3c1.jpg Also the flow between the note 00:16:231 (3) - and stream 00:16:704 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - will be better. prefer the current pattern
5. 00:27:216 (2) - End at 389|321 for a better stack. done
   Hitsounds
6. 00:03:712 (3) - Lower the volume of the 1/4 ones in the soft part? They feels a little loud. Also, by making a volume difference, you can emphasize the background music at 00:04:184 (1) - it's fine imo
   Others:
7. None

Very nice mapset indeed Hope this can get ranked soon!
take my star~ :3
Good Luck Umi!~

1. Desperate's Easy and Gu's Insane diff delete Widescreen Support please

1. 00:02:294 (1) - hmm i think slider end 00:03:003 - this batter rhythm
2. 00:04:184 (2) - same here end 00:04:893 - here
3. 00:08:436 - flowing piano sound here so add note please

1. 00:58:042 (3) - your missing slider tail add clap?
2. 01:20:483 - note?
3. 01:20:719 (2) - this move 01:20:956 - here?

1. 00:10:326 (1) - Delete NC here. I think don't need NC
2. 00:58:987 (5,6) - patten swap flow batter. so Ctrl + g
3. 01:27:097 (1) - Delete NC

1. 00:38:672 (2) - This patten batter
   
   SPOILER

   

HabiHolic wrote:

Sorry for late. for ticket~

[General]

1. Desperate's Easy and Gu's Insane diff delete Widescreen Support please disabled

[Normal]

1. 00:58:042 (3) - your missing slider tail add clap? added
2. 01:20:483 - note? nop doesn't plat good
3. 01:20:719 (2) - this move 01:20:956 - here? ^