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There is some conflicts between the 2 diffs, according to the AiMod.
First time I mod a Chinese song, seemed a quite kitsch at the first time I listened it but after all I like it, sweet song
[Easy]
00:10:275 (2,1) - I personally prefer something like this:
http://puu.sh/aFVEB/a5647ca25a.jpg :3
00:21:746 (1,2,3) - Maybe try to align like this?
http://puu.sh/aFVRO/97c11c891e.jpg00:37:187 (2,3) - Preferably don't stack it because it's an Easy.
00:37:959 (3) - Try to improve this slider curve a little with (1)'s hitcircle:
http://puu.sh/aFWl6/8fa75bacb6.jpg00:49:981 (1) - The slider curve can be improved too:
http://puu.sh/aG2fZ/a43b14a45d.jpg00:53:069 (1) - Try to improve this slider curve a little with (4)'s hitcircle:
http://puu.sh/aG2kZ/3362d20c62.jpg00:57:040 (1) - ... with (3)'s hitcircle.
00:59:687 (4,1) - This pattern can be improved like this:
http://puu.sh/aG2BB/6fa095180c.jpg01:13:805 (4) - I'm not sure straight bent sliders are good for this song, but it brings a little of diversity
01:16:010 (3) - Use the same slider than 01:15:128 (2) because this one seem a little too curved compared to the previous one.
01:17:334 (5) - Adjust this with (4)'s hitcircle.
01:21:746 (1) - ^ ... with (4)'s hitcircle.
01:33:216 (1) - If you ctrl+g this you can see that 01:34:099 (2) curve can be improved with (1)'s hitcircle.
01:35:863 (1) - Try to do something funnier with this slider maybe. I made this, if you want to try it:
http://puu.sh/aG40n/8f1681fa6a.jpgCode250,106,95863,6,0,B|272:156|272:156|248:188|248:188|291:218|258:257|258:257|244:274|240:313|261:329,1,240
01:42:922 (1) - The curve can be improved with (4)'s end hitcircle.
01:49:099 (3) - ^ ... with (2)'s hitcircle
01:54:393 (2) - ^ ... with (1)'s end hitcircle.
02:04:099 (1) - ^ ... with (3)'s hitcircle.
02:08:510 (2) - ^ ... with (3)'s hitcircle.
02:14:687 (1) - ^ ... with (3)'s hitcircle
02:20:863 (4) - Maybe use the same slider than 02:19:981 (3), same reason than 01:16:010 (3)
02:26:157 (1) - Maybe remove NC
02:39:393 (1) - I think it should be better to add a new timing point here with a BPM of 54, change the timing point SV multiplier to 1.30 and resnap the slider a little. The slider tick before the reversed part will sound better in time, but it will still sound unclear for the reversed part. Maybe it will be better because of this not to reverse the slider and add another one from 02:43:004 to 02:43:837 ...
[Hard]
00:10:295 (2,1) - I personally prefer something like this:
http://puu.sh/aG5SZ/b2b92b849e.jpg (1) is hidden under (2)'s end.
00:21:765 (1) - Not easy, but the curve can be reworked a little to fit better with (3)
00:37:648 (3) - Curve can be improved a little with (2)'s hitcirle.
00:48:236 (4) - Maybe remove this, because it's not really something audible and as it's moreover stacked with the previous object it's a little "sneaky" :p
00:59:707 (5,1) - Maybe do something more horizontal:
http://puu.sh/aG6Bc/6de1c81aba.jpg it would maybe seem a little "cleaner"
01:05:442 (2) - It is too curved to fit well with (1)'s end hitcircle.
01:07:207 (1) - The begininng can be better if you look at (4)'s hitcircle.
01:10:294 (5,6,7,8,1) - The space between these circles is really too hard! You can do a more reasonable pattern if you add an inherited point at 01:10:294 with SV multiplier at 1 and use a distance spacing of 2x for this part. Move the inherited point at 01:11:177 to 01:11:287 . This is what you get:
http://puu.sh/aG7ir/47c31e5b68.jpg it's hard enough imo.
01:13:825 (5) - Adjust this with (4)'s hitcirle as a reference.
01:18:236 (1) - ^ ... with 01:16:472 (4) hitcirle as a reference.
01:20:001 (3) - Use a "cleaner" slider, this one for exemple, then ctrl+r : 01:17:354 (6)
01:21:325 (5,2) - These sliders are maybe a little too curved on themselves. Same thing: 01:44:266 (3)
01:49:780 (1) - Adjust this with (2)'s hitcirle as a reference.
02:14:707 (1) - Try to rework it a little because it's not perfectly symmetrical
02:30:589 (4) - Maybe show the separation between the 2 parts of the slider better and add another point on the second part to make a "cuter" curve :3
http://puu.sh/aG8gX/7e907d980b.jpg02:35:883 (1) - You can do a better curve if you use (5)'s hitcircle as a reference
02:39:413 (1) - Same thing than for easy.
I hope it was helpful and good luck for ranking!