1. Hard (4.32 stars, 349 notes)
2. Insane (4.83 stars, 495 notes)
3. Rakuen's Normal (2.02 stars, 194 notes)

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello ^^ first mod!

[Hard]
00:20:830 (1) - Add finish on the tail.
00:21:671 (2) - First object appearing in Kai should be NC
00:30:362 (5) - Add finish on the head.
00:39:334 (1) - ^
00:57:278 (2) - ^
01:12:979 (5) - ^
01:14:942 (2) - Add finish on the tail.
01:24:194 (3) - Add finish on the head.
01:42:138 (1) - ^
01:51:110 (4) - ^
02:06:811 (3) - ^
02:08:774 (2) - Add finish on the tail.
02:09:334 (3) - NC
02:17:746 (4) - Add finish on the tail.
02:26:998 (3) - Add finish.
02:35:970 (1) - ^
02:43:820 and 02:44:381 and 02:44:942 could have a note, since the current verse the vocals are singing isn't done yet. Or place a 1/1 slider with a reverse here at 02:43:820.
03:04:848 (5) - Add finish on the tail.
03:14:101 (4) - Add finish on the head.
03:21:110 (1) - Add finish.

Has no hitsounds at all o3o Are hitsounds still WIP for this diff? :S If so, my bad >w<

[AIshiteru]
00:21:390 (5) - Add finish on the head.
00:30:362 (3) - Add finish
00:39:334 (1) - ^
00:57:278 (2) - Add finish on the head.
01:12:979 (5) - Add finish on the head, and how about having the slider velocity slow down to 0.75 for this slider, to match how the vocals has a hold on that 'ta' on 'katta'? :3 Great Idea
01:15:222 (5) - Add finish on the head.
01:24:615 (5) - Move its tail higher like this?

01:33:166 - Add a note here, as this is where the chorus really finishes! >.< opps mistake :p
01:42:138 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:51:110 (1) - ^
02:06:811 (7) - ^
02:09:054 (1) - ^
02:18:026 (3) - ^
02:26:998 (1) - ^
02:35:970 (1) - ^
02:42:979 (1) - Add whistle?
03:02:605 (1) - Add finish on the tail?
03:05:129 (3) - Add finish on the head,and NC
03:14:101 (3) - Add finish on the head, and should be NC instead of 03:12:979 (1) -
03:22:512 (9) - Add finish on the tail?
03:41:017 (2) - Add finish
Same comment as Hard[/notice]

Really cute song, so I'll definitely wanna re-check this map later :3
Hope this helps~! ^^

Pizza Kun wrote:

From your modding queue please check my post ^^


[AIshiteru]

01:00:643 (4) - Try this: http://d.pr/i/lmyW+/
01:12:979 (5,2) - Stack
01:17:465 (5) - Move to 24||252
01:23:633 (3,4) - Blanket? ~i will keep the original :p
01:24:194 (4,5) - Fix stack
01:25:316 (2) - No clap at start (you can replace it with a finish or whistle)
01:29:521 (4) - ^
01:31:484 (6) - Clap
02:06:811 (7,1) - Try to make the same shape: http://d.pr/i/5rnI+/ ~opps mistake :p fixed
02:08:493 (2) - Start: add clap
02:19:147 (5,6) - Fix stack
02:42:979 (1) - Finish?
02:58:119 (4) - Move to 192||180
03:05:129 (1,2) - Fix stack
03:07:372 (3,4) - ^
From 03:52:232 - To 03:58:680 - Decreases slowly the volume ~Great idea

[Hard]

00:27:839 (4) - Clap only at start
00:32:325 (3) - Clap only at end
Tip: do not use the clap to change the rhythm, use the whistle - To change in all diffs i will learn it! thx
01:10:736 (2,3) - Blanket ~i think its okay to keep the original :p
01:25:316 (5) - These are ugly claps
01:28:119 (4) - ^
01:30:643 (2) - ^
02:07:932 (1) - Clap at end
02:40:456 (1,2) - Fix stack
02:43:820 (4) - Finish at end
03:05:689 (1,4) - Stack
03:07:091 (3,2) - ^
03:49:989 (2) - Finish

-Sapphire wrote:

Aishiteru <3
IRC Mod

1. i suggest that add silence slider slide. because 00:01:194 - 00:19:979 - this part is really quiet, so slider slide sound is noisy imo.↓try it.
   http://puu.sh/4QPrK.wav

1. 00:05:399 (4) - add whislte? fit the song.
2. 00:16:334 (4) - remove whistle of the slider start? a bit loud it and not found sound something.
3. 00:28:109 (1) - add whistle of the slider start please. i can hear something high sound here.
4. 00:30:352 (3) - add finish instead of whistle? like a follow the back cymbal.
5. 00:32:595 (3) - same above 00:28:109 (1) -
6. 00:37:222 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - rhythm is a bit weird. try it.
   
   
7. 01:31:053 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
8. 01:42:128 (1) - add finish
9. 01:51:100 (1) - add finish instead of whistle. exist loud sound here.
10. 02:06:801 (7) - finish?
11. 02:26:988 (1) - finish
    

1. 00:09:605 (5) - add whistle of the slider end.
2. 00:27:829 (4) - i think that it is weird rhythm here. like this?
   
   
3. 00:30:352 (5) - add finish of the slider start. not fit here because not sound cymbal.
4. 00:39:324 (1) - ^
5. 00:43:810 (1) - add whistle instead of finish.
6. 00:48:296 (2) - ^
7. 00:57:268 (2) - add finish instead of whistle.
8. 01:12:969 (5) - add finish of the slider start.
9. 01:14:932 (2) - ^ of the slider end.
10. 01:24:184 (3) - add finish instead of whistle.
11. 01:24:184 (3,4,5) - like this placement? ((5)is copy of the (3).)
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 01:32:175 (3) - suddenly follow the vocal here the part. so hard to read imo. like this?
    
    
13. 01:51:100 (4) - add finish of the slider start.
14. 02:06:801 (3) - finish of the slider start?
15. 02:14:932 (5) - move to x464 y168. more good flow.
    
    SPOILER

    
16. 02:17:736 (4) - add finish of the slider end.
17. 03:04:838 (5) - ^
18. 03:08:764 (2,3) - spacing is a little near?
19. 03:14:091 (4) - add finish of the slider start.
20. 03:51:941 (1,2) - like this? i like this pattern.
    
    
    SPOILER

    

1. 00:57:268 (3) - add finish of the slider start.
2. 01:42:128 (3) - ^
3. 01:51:100 (2) - ^
4. 03:13:530 (1) - add finish of the slider repeat.
   
   nothing to say.

Guy wrote:

Hi! from my queue :3

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.


[General]

1. i suggest that add silence slider slide. because 00:01:194 - 00:19:979 - this part is really quiet, so slider slide sound is noisy imo.↓try it.
   http://puu.sh/4QPrK.wav

[AIshiteru]

1. 00:05:399 (4) - add whislte? fit the song.
2. 00:16:334 (4) - remove whistle of the slider start? a bit loud it and not found sound something.
3. 00:28:109 (1) - add whistle of the slider start please. i can hear something high sound here.
4. 00:30:352 (3) - add finish instead of whistle? like a follow the back cymbal.
5. 00:32:595 (3) - same above 00:28:109 (1) -
6. 00:37:222 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - rhythm is a bit weird. try it.
   
   
7. 01:31:053 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
8. 01:42:128 (1) - add finish
9. 01:51:100 (1) - add finish instead of whistle. exist loud sound here.
10. 02:06:801 (7) - finish?
11. 02:26:988 (1) - finish

[Hard]

1. 00:09:605 (5) - add whistle of the slider end.
2. 00:27:829 (4) - i think that it is weird rhythm here. like this?
   
   
3. 00:30:352 (5) - add finish of the slider start. not fit here because not sound cymbal.
4. 00:39:324 (1) - ^
5. 00:43:810 (1) - add whistle instead of finish.
6. 00:48:296 (2) - ^
7. 00:57:268 (2) - add finish instead of whistle.
8. 01:12:969 (5) - add finish of the slider start.
9. 01:14:932 (2) - ^ of the slider end.
10. 01:24:184 (3) - add finish instead of whistle.
11. 01:24:184 (3,4,5) - like this placement? ((5)is copy of the (3).)
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 01:32:175 (3) - suddenly follow the vocal here the part. so hard to read imo. like this?
    
    
13. 01:51:100 (4) - add finish of the slider start.
14. 02:06:801 (3) - finish of the slider start?
15. 02:14:932 (5) - move to x464 y168. more good flow.
    
    SPOILER

    
16. 02:17:736 (4) - add finish of the slider end.
17. 03:04:838 (5) - ^
18. 03:08:764 (2,3) - spacing is a little near?
19. 03:14:091 (4) - add finish of the slider start.
20. 03:51:941 (1,2) - like this? i like this pattern. hoho nice
    
    
    SPOILER

    

nothing to say.[/list]

nice map nice song. i like it :3
Good luck!

Unsfamiliar wrote:

Hey AI, that m4m :3

Aishiteru~

Let'su go:

AIshiteru

1. 00:16:194 - How about add a note here? I think it fits pretty well and it feels a bit empty here without it something since there is some funny lyric here. kinda strange after adding it.. so nope lel
   
   Maybe

   
2. 00:20:679 - I think there really needs to be a note here, to account for that drum sound. I know you're trying to follow the lyric here, but that drum is quite powerful and it would be more fun if you mapped it. If you do add a note, I suggest you rearrange your pattern a bit (up to you): Nice idea!
   
   Something like this

   
   And make that reverse slider blanket something if it's like this (It's blanketing 4 in the picture).
3. 00:28:109 (1) - Ctrl+G and adjust it a bit, might be confusing since this is a 4 note kick slider and ends the opposite you started (obviously all even numbers will do this) . Opps my mistake :p
4. 00:32:595 (3) - ^Same sort of thing.
5. 00:46:053 (2) - It's a bit confusing because this one is suddenly a 5 note kick... i will keep this :3
6. 00:56:988 (1) - Remove NC
7. 00:57:268 (2) - Add NC for new measure
8. 01:07:081 (4) - Move the tail point of this slider to maybe 384|240 to blanket it around 01:06:801 (3) better.
9. 01:14:511 - Also add a note here if you decide to add one at 00:16:194
10. 01:16:334 (3,4) - Blanket (4) around the (3) slider's end.
11. 01:19:698 (6,1) - Ah, this is what I mean about the sliders. This one you have here works better, because it follows expectations when you're playing. Some of the other sliders you kind of have to guess how long to hold the slider. Or maybe it's just me because I suck...?
12. 01:23:623 (3,4) - This time blanket (3) around the end of (4). Looks prettier
13. 01:28:109 (2,3) - Please blanket. Looks a lot neater if you do.
    
    Ahhh

    
14. 02:22:222 (2) - Personal preference, but I'd avoid a straight line like this. I'd put (2) down a bit which creates a nicer flow and emphasises the (3) slider better. yea haha its lot better
    
    Yay no more straight lines \o/

    
15. 03:53:063 (1) - I think you could utilise some sort of jump here to emphasise that heavenly high note :3 03:53:623 (2,3) - Like here you have jumps, but I think (1) should also be part of it. eh right!
16. 03:54:184 (4) - I feel this note is too close to the previous, since it was a jump.

Hard

1. 00:30:352 (5) - NC here for the new measure, so remove the NC at 00:31:194 (1) -
2. 00:45:773 (4) - Hmm, not sure about this double repeat on a long slider... I think you could experiment with this rhythm a bit more to make it more fun i will keep this :3
3. 01:30:633 (2) - The repeat of this slider doesn't seem to be on any strong beat and so it feels and sounds strange. Try something on the white ticks here. huhu yea ur right
4. 03:53:343 - xth time hearing this part and at the start, and I still get goosebumps! <3

[/notice]

Overall, nice map set. Really loving this song, it makes me happy

Just some areas where placements could be a bit neater (i.e blankets where possible), this will improve the map both aesthetically and mechanically. Umm well, I would also shoot you a star but I think you have plenty

Good luck!

[Pikachu] wrote:

I love the changes you made in the map (:
And js. I really love the song, passed it on hidden and got an A (:

Thanks allot for the map, this should get ranked in my eyes!

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello ^^ first mod!

[Rakuen's Normal]
00:50:549 (5) - NC?
00:57:278 (3) - Add finish on the head.
01:18:587 (4) - NC
01:25:316 (6) - ^
01:27:559 - 01:29:241 Try this rhythm instead?

First slider hits the'demo' and second slider hits the 'kimi'.
01:42:138 (3) - Add finish on the head.
01:51:110 (2) - ^
02:12:419 (4) - NC
02:16:905 (1,2,3,4) - How about replacing these notes with two 1/2 sliders instead? (Same reason as said for 01:27:559 - 01:29:241)
02:19:148 (6) - NC
02:23:634 (4) - ^ Instead of 02:21:391 (1) -
03:13:540 (1) - add finish on the reverse.

Looks nice Only the NC's are a bit inconsistent, and that's it for this diff!

Really cute song, so I'll definitely wanna re-check this map later :3
Hope this helps~! ^^

Guy wrote:

Hi! from my queue :3

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.


[General]

1. i suggest that add silence slider slide. because 00:01:194 - 00:19:979 - this part is really quiet, so slider slide sound is noisy imo.↓try it.
   http://puu.sh/4QPrK.wav

[Rakuen's Normal]

1. 00:57:268 (3) - add finish of the slider start.
2. 01:42:128 (3) - ^
3. 01:51:100 (2) - ^
4. 03:13:530 (1) - add finish of the slider repeat.
   
   nothing to say.

nice map nice song. i like it :3
Good luck!

Unsfamiliar wrote:

Hey AI, that m4m :3

Aishiteru~

Let'su go:

Rakuen's Normal

1. 00:43:250 (5,1) - I think you could blanket this better.
2. 01:45:493 (1) - Drag the middle point of this slider down to about 160|288 to blanket it around the end of 01:44:371 (6).
3. 03:54:184 - I think you should add a note here and maybe even at 03:53:063 as well. Feels a bit empty without it and the lyric is really nice~

Overall, nice map set. Really loving this song, it makes me happy

Just some areas where placements could be a bit neater (i.e blankets where possible), this will improve the map both aesthetically and mechanically. Umm well, I would also shoot you a star but I think you have plenty

Good luck!

P A N wrote:

hi AI.

[General]

I agreed with Guy, I see you still don't have soft-sliderslide in your song's folder yet so please add it. .-. i tot i already added it tho..

[AI]

00:29:651 - this beat is so loud, I think add note here would be great.
00:38:764 (7,8) - move both to 140|64, I think stack is better because the beat of (8) is low volume from (7) and make a little jump to next (1) for a new stanza.
00:46:053 (2) - the end of slider is go to the left but the next note is on the right, please try to avoid this if possible, its not a problem that much.
01:15:212 (5) - try to curve like this because next note is down of this slider.

SPOILER

01:54:465 (1,2,3,4,5) - move them to 348|140 , 316|108 , 272|96 , 228|104 , 196|132 for better blanket.
02:19:698 (6) - 358|275 for stack better.
02:58:390 (5) - ctrl+G is more flow and more playable for me. if you follow this, please ctrl+g of (6) too. and fix the note after these.
03:04:418 - add note here? I think its strong beat here. i will keep this :p~

[Hard]

00:20:679 - I think hard diff still need a bit triple note if necessary like here?
00:40:165 - please add note here too if you follow the vocal.
02:09:885 - add note?



that's all, good luck :3

Ntasuto wrote:

Comming from #ModHelp Mushi Mushi :3


Hard

SPOILER

Also GJ here ,
General: It feels too easy for a hard, almost easy as normal, i suggest AR+1! I will keep it in ar7 :p

00:21:661 (1) - remove new combo
00:22:782 (1) - new combo
00:30:352 (1) - remove new combo (so random )
00:53:063 (1) - remove new combo
01:48:577 (1) - Turn it into a return slider instead, fits perfectly ! Yea you're right!
02:09:324 (1) - remove new combo

AIshiteru_

SPOILER

General:Same as above map feels easier for its diff, AR+1 here is my suggestion(EDIT: forgot to say HP+1 also)
AR9 look too fast with the song :p so nope

00:10:165 (1) - remove new combo
00:24:184 (6) - i suggest replacing with 2 notes instead and creating a new combo at 00:24:465 Great idea
00:53:343 (1) - remove new combo
01:22:081 (1) - remove new combo + 01:22:782 (6) - add new combo + 01:23:063 (3) - remove combo
01:27:268 (5) - new combo + 01:27:549 (1) - remove combo
03:05:119 (1) - remove new combo

and again GJ