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Shimotsuki Haruka - Kibou no Sora

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Fia
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Fia
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年2月12日 at 16:52:26

Artist: Shimotsuki Haruka
Title: Kibou no Sora
Source: キミへ贈る、ソラの花
Tags: galgame opening Eggache0 imoutosan Laurier Kihhou cabbit Kimi e Okuru, Sora no Hana
BPM: 169
Filesize: 14020kb
Play Time: 03:54
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.7 stars, 244 notes)
  2. Hana (5.47 stars, 788 notes)
  3. imouto's Insane (4.06 stars, 643 notes)
  4. Kihhou's Hard (3.52 stars, 595 notes)
  5. Laurier's Insane (4.17 stars, 653 notes)
  6. Normal (2.1 stars, 342 notes)
Download: Shimotsuki Haruka - Kibou no Sora
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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PC game キミへ贈る、ソラの花 Opening song
Just a 2013 map, don't think too much.
Kihhou's Hard by Kihhou
imouto's Insane by 蛋妹imoutosan
Laurier's Insane by Laurier
Storyboard by imoutosan
Thank you all guys! :3 failed to reach 50favs while pending

Extreme streams in Hana's end

BG source
Last edited by Fia , edited 107 times in total.
Laurier
1,785 posts
Joined February 2011
Laurier
nice SB :oops:
AllStar12
488 posts
Joined January 2013
AllStar12
Test played this beatmap ( Decent player):

[Laurier's Insane]

Results for Laurier's Insane
1st try:

2nd try(With Hidden):

If you don't mind I like to point out that there's one part I got a bit confused on the two tries.
01:06:968 (5,1,2,3,1,2) - But after analyzing it I fully know what to expect from it now. (Just saying)
Overall I actually enjoyed playing it, smooth flow yes indeed.

As for Hana difficulty, I need to play this more often to know how to beat it hahah
though I like the creativity and challenge it brought to me ^ ^
If you want me to post the results for this then I won't mind doing so. (But it would most likely be on NoFail ;w;) Fav. and best of luck!

Edit: Screw it I anxiously wanted to test play it on NoFail because I love these kinds of maps also on the first run and here's my result:
Results for Hana Difficulty
1st try:
Last edited by AllStar12 , edited 1 time in total.
Mei
1,053 posts
Joined March 2012
Mei
简直爽飞

蛮简单的，随便打了下应该之后98acc fc问题不大，有些不顺手的地方，mod一下应该能改善

hana简直爽飞了Σ(っ °Д °;)っ
我改了ar9（建议也改否则怎么打

最后一段太。。。。手没力了，前面还是能pass的问题不大，后面看运气了，当然ar8的话我觉得没几个人能打吧。。。
S o a p
359 posts
Joined March 2012
S o a p
太难。
楼上上的GD你没给
AllStar12
488 posts
Joined January 2013
AllStar12
I finally beat it without NoFail mod hahaha ^ ^

Result
DreaM117er
1,594 posts
Joined September 2012
DreaM117er
OK...use Englise...

※Notice RED!!!

Hana
Open to read
00:20:991 (1) - can del this, make 00:20:814 (4,5) stacking better
00:44:246 (5) - stacking slider's head
00:44:778 (2,3,4) - no one can play this, must fix
00:52:766 (4) - suggest this move to x436 y88, and 00:52:944 (1) stacking on 00:52:234 (3) 's head
00:58:979 (4,5,6) - hard to read, change should be better
01:01:465 (1,1,1,1,2,1) - this hana, make my eyes be hana= =
01:02:796 (2) - del, follow lyric, all flower same as this
01:06:968 (3,1,2,3,4) - no stacking, very hard to read
01:12:115 (4) - I suggest this slider can del red bending point
01:16:198 (3) - head stack at circle (4)
01:25:074 to 01:31:110 - del object in this period, and add break
01:39:098 (7,8,9) - same as 00:44:778 (2,3,4)
01:41:050 (1,2) - three circle or reverse slider better
02:06:968 (2,3,4,5) - same as 00:58:979 (4,5,6) , and don't do this better
02:14:157 (3) - del, and 02:15:666 (3) stack on this
02:15:311 (1) - stack on circle (4)
02:16:021 (1,2,3) - same as 00:58:979
02:46:642 (1) - del spinner
02:50:814 (1,2) - I think this can play, but same as 00:44:778 (2,3,4)
02:52:234 (1) - slider too fast
02:57:559 (1,1) - same as 00:44:778 (2,3,4)
03:05:370 (4,5,6) - It's OK
03:23:743 (3) - del better
03:26:494 (2) - this follow what??
03:50:613 (7,8,9) - reverse slider as ending better


Eggache's Hard
Open to read
Did you use Distance Snap to make this diff??
Should open. And allow some jump.

I can't see hard diff in this diff, should be Insane.

01:25:074 (1) to 01:30:932 (3) - same as Hana diff. del and add break.


Normal
Open to read
00:07:145 (2,1) - change reverse slider
00:21:701 (3,4) - ^
00:24:542 (3,4) - del this, copy 00:23:121 (1) at 00:24:186, and then reverse
00:27:027 - add circle
00:27:382 (2) - change slider
00:33:950 (4) - no hiding
00:46:553 (3,4) - how about this↓

00:47:796 (5) - del??
00:49:926 (4,5,6) - same as 00:46:553 , 00:47:796 (5)
00:55:607 (2) - no hiding
01:01:465 (3,4,5,6,1) - don't make star, change other way
01:12:826 (3,4,5,6,1) - ^
01:17:086 (1) - no hiding
01:18:506 (1,2) - slider??
01:25:607 (1) to 01:29:867 (3) - del and add break.
01:42:115 (3) - no hiding
01:54:719 (3,4,5,6) - same as 00:46:553 (3,4)
01:58:092 (4,5,6) - ^
02:03:772 (2) - no hiding
02:09:630 (3,4,5,6,1) - don't make star, change other way
02:20:991 (3,4,5,6,1) - ^
02:25:252 (1) - no hiding
02:26:672 (1,2) - slider??
02:51:524 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - make very good, keep this
03:07:855 (3,4,5,6,1) - Star
03:19:216 (3,4,5,6,1) - ^
03:30:577 (3,4,5,6,1) - ^
03:36:257 (1,2,3) - reverse slider


Laurier's Insane
Open to read
01:33:062 (2) - move to x380 y368
01:41:228 (1) - remove finish on the slider head
01:41:760 (3,4) - remove finish
01:46:376 (5) - bending point move to x156 y56
02:02:530 (1) - bending point move to x236 y56
02:51:346 (5) - slider's end on the blue line, tail on the red line
02:53:476 (1) - add finish on the head better
03:04:837 (4) - bending point move to x340 y140, tail point x296 y224
03:09:275 (1) - bending point moveto x468 y272, tail point x400 y180
03:19:216 (1) - forget finish on the head, and bending point move to x328 y288
03:21:701 (4) - move to x216 y(don;t change)
03:21:879 (1) - bending point moveto x264 y320, tailpoint move to x320 y240

Nice.

For my mod
Good song, and Good lock
Fia
Topic Starter
Fia

m1223961117 wrote:

OK...use Englise... 用中文挺好的呀0 0

※Notice RED!!!

Hana
Open to read
00:20:991 (1) - can del this, make 00:20:814 (4,5) stacking better deleted
00:44:246 (5) - stacking slider's head no
00:44:778 (2,3,4) - no one can play this, must fix most of testers I found can play it
00:52:766 (4) - suggest this move to x436 y88, and 00:52:944 (1) stacking on 00:52:234 (3) 's head I remaped this part
00:58:979 (4,5,6) - hard to read, change should be better ...I don't think so
01:01:465 (1,1,1,1,2,1) - this hana, make my eyes be hana= = well, anyway it's not so hard to play
01:02:796 (2) - del, follow lyric, all flower same as this no, it has drums here
01:06:968 (3,1,2,3,4) - no stacking, very hard to read not so hard
01:12:115 (4) - I suggest this slider can del red bending point ok
01:16:198 (3) - head stack at circle (4) I don't think this stacking can be noticed during playing
01:25:074 to 01:31:110 - del object in this period, and add break no
01:39:098 (7,8,9) - same as 00:44:778 (2,3,4) same
01:41:050 (1,2) - three circle or reverse slider better I think it's fine now 0 0
02:06:968 (2,3,4,5) - same as 00:58:979 (4,5,6) , and don't do this better ...this is quite hard to read. I'll fix it when I got a good idea
02:14:157 (3) - del, and 02:15:666 (3) stack on this no
02:15:311 (1) - stack on circle (4) ^
02:16:021 (1,2,3) - same as 00:58:979 ok
02:46:642 (1) - del spinner ok
02:50:814 (1,2) - I think this can play, but same as 00:44:778 (2,3,4) it's not hard to play this
02:52:234 (1) - slider too fast hmm, yes, but I want to keep it
02:57:559 (1,1) - same as 00:44:778 (2,3,4) same no
03:05:370 (4,5,6) - It's OK
03:23:743 (3) - del better ok
03:26:494 (2) - this follow what?? fixed
03:50:613 (7,8,9) - reverse slider as ending better maybe, I'll keep it first


Normal
Open to read
00:07:145 (2,1) - change reverse slider ok
00:21:701 (3,4) - ^ no
00:24:542 (3,4) - del this, copy 00:23:121 (1) at 00:24:186, and then reverse no
00:27:027 - add circle ...maybe not
00:27:382 (2) - change slider
00:33:950 (4) - no hiding
00:46:553 (3,4) - how about this↓

I keep it now
00:47:796 (5) - del?? no
00:49:926 (4,5,6) - same as 00:46:553 , 00:47:796 (5)
00:55:607 (2) - no hiding ok
01:01:465 (3,4,5,6,1) - don't make star, change other way fixed
01:12:826 (3,4,5,6,1) - ^ ^
01:17:086 (1) - no hiding ok
01:18:506 (1,2) - slider?? no
01:25:607 (1) to 01:29:867 (3) - del and add break. no
01:42:115 (3) - no hiding ok
01:54:719 (3,4,5,6) - same as 00:46:553 (3,4)
01:58:092 (4,5,6) - ^
02:03:772 (2) - no hiding ok
02:09:630 (3,4,5,6,1) - don't make star, change other way fixed
02:20:991 (3,4,5,6,1) - ^ ^
02:25:252 (1) - no hiding fixed
02:26:672 (1,2) - slider??
02:51:524 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - make very good, keep this
03:07:855 (3,4,5,6,1) - Star fixed
03:19:216 (3,4,5,6,1) - ^ ^
03:30:577 (3,4,5,6,1) - ^ ^
03:36:257 (1,2,3) - reverse slider no


For my mod
Good song, and Good lock
Thanks for mod~
Laurier
1,785 posts
Joined February 2011
Laurier
http://puu.sh/5daXy.osu

I dont forget this map

fixed!
Azer
World Cup Organiser
1,107 posts
Joined December 2012
Azer
Hi, from my queue.

Hana
  1. 00:03:240 (1,2) - I feel the distance between these should be bigger to improve the flow and match the song a bit better
  2. 00:13:003 (6) - ctrl+g
  3. 00:26:672 (2,3,4) - how about this instead?
  4. 00:34:837 (2,3) - hard to read without knowing that this is a 3/4 slider.
  5. 00:35:725 (1) - Why is this slider 3/4? Theres nothing in the song here
  6. 00:37:678 (2) - ctrl+g
  7. How about moving 00:39:630 (2) - to x:258 y:244 and 00:39:985 (2) - to x:315 y:38? (Rough values, to improve flow)
  8. 00:45:843 (1,2) - low distance here kills the flow
  9. 00:59:334 (5) - move somewhere else (ctrl h ctrl j?)
  10. 01:00:577 (3,4) - move closer to eachother
  11. 01:04:482 (2) - ctrl+g and fiz position of the next 2 notes to fix flow
  12. 01:54:364 (2) - ctrl+g]
  13. 02:07:145 (3,4,5) - unrankable I think? Not sure.
  14. 02:26:494 (6,1) - distance betweeen these two notes should be higher
  15. 02:48:447 (2,3,4,5,6) - Every single player who will play this map for the first time will not know that these are 1/6. You should make some sliders.
  16. 02:52:234 (1) - way too fast.
  17. 03:05:725 (5) - move somewhere else.
  18. 03:36:169 (8,1) - these dont flow into eachother at all.
    Overall good difficulty, I also suggest changing a few of the star 5xslider shapes because they are really overused.

Laurier's Insane
  1. 00:12:115 (2) - ctrl+g
  2. 00:13:536 (2) - ctrl g and fix blanket
  3. 00:23:121 (1) - something like this would be better
  4. 00:31:465 (1,2,3) - questionable flow
  5. 00:37:323 (1) - how about placing it higher for better flow? (rough positionning)
  6. 00:54:897 (3) - I'm not sure what would be bettter here but the flow is meh
  7. 01:05:015 (3) - ctrl+g
  8. 01:52:589 (1) - same as earlier, move up for better flow (and fix stack 01:52:589 (1,6) - )
  9. 02:00:755 (4) - something like this instead?
  10. 02:48:506 (5,6) - blanket?
  11. 02:55:074 (1) - ctrl+g
  12. 03:10:695 (1,2) - blanket?
  13. 03:12:471 (2) - ctrl+g
  14. 03:21:879 (1,2) - ctrl+g on both
  15. 03:25:962 (4,5,6,7,1) - fix stream position
    not much to say apart from flow improvements, good difficulty as always Laurier :)

Eggache's Hard
  1. 00:05:725 (1) - how about this instead for better flow? also remove NC
  2. 00:07:500 (1) - does this really have to be at the very bottom? ;~;
  3. 00:09:453 (2) - blanket
  4. 00:10:163 (4,1) - this doesnt flow very well into eachother, I suggest changing the 00:10:340 (1,2,3) - pattern
  5. 00:16:908 (2,1) - same, doesnt really flow well into eachother. Maybe moving 00:17:441 (1) - more up would help.
  6. 00:33:950 (3,4) - pretty high spacing for a difficulty like this
  7. 01:53:654 (6,7,1) - spacing
  8. 02:50:814 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1) - this whole section has questionable flow
  9. 03:15:843 (4,5) - ctrl+g
  10. 03:27:914 (2) - fix position and spacing to be in the middle
  11. 03:45:311 (3) - end the slider on blue tick
    Nice diff

Love the SB! Good luck guys :)
Fia
Topic Starter
Fia

Azer wrote:

Hi, from my queue.

Hana
  1. 00:03:240 (1,2) - I feel the distance between these should be bigger to improve the flow and match the song a bit better Hmm, maybe
  2. 00:13:003 (6) - ctrl+g no
  3. 00:26:672 (2,3,4) - how about this instead? good idea
  4. 00:34:837 (2,3) - hard to read without knowing that this is a 3/4 slider. considering remap this part
  5. 00:35:725 (1) - Why is this slider 3/4? Theres nothing in the song here ^
  6. 00:37:678 (2) - ctrl+g ^
  7. How about moving 00:39:630 (2) - to x:258 y:244 and 00:39:985 (2) - to x:315 y:38? (Rough values, to improve flow)
  8. 00:45:843 (1,2) - low distance here kills the flow
  9. 00:59:334 (5) - move somewhere else (ctrl h ctrl j?) I think it's fine now
  10. 01:00:577 (3,4) - move closer to eachother
  11. 01:04:482 (2) - ctrl+g and fiz position of the next 2 notes to fix flow considering remap this part
  12. 01:54:364 (2) - ctrl+g]
  13. 02:07:145 (3,4,5) - unrankable I think? Not sure. fixed
  14. 02:26:494 (6,1) - distance betweeen these two notes should be higher ok
  15. 02:48:447 (2,3,4,5,6) - Every single player who will play this map for the first time will not know that these are 1/6. You should make some sliders. I keep it now since I got no good ideas
  16. 02:52:234 (1) - way too fast. ^
  17. 03:05:725 (5) - move somewhere else. no
  18. 03:36:169 (8,1) - these dont flow into eachother at all.
    Overall good difficulty, I also suggest changing a few of the star 5xslider shapes because they are really overused. ._.

Love the SB! Good luck guys :)
Thanks for mod.
rEdo
809 posts
Joined November 2008
rEdo
[Timing]
I'm pretty sure that this ending needs a timing revamp. Since I can't do an accurate check on this (my headphones are broken), please ask somebody competent after some more mods to have a deeper look into this.

[Normal]
Nothing I can complain about. Well done.

[Eggache's Hard]
00:23:831 (2) - I'm sure you can come up with a better placement of this slider. I mean, there's the same distance between the previous note being 1/1 earlier and next note being only an 1/2 after >_>
Except for that, nothing really that I could argue about. Just take a look all over the map and check for unstacked notes, there's plenty of them.

[Laurier's Insane]
01:05:547 (5) - New combo here, I guess.
02:28:447 (2,3,1,2,3,1) - I know that you wanna strictly follow the vocals here, however that plays... awkward. I had that irking feeling of "where's the rest of the map?" when the break started. I'd just end that section at the moment where've placed your stream.

[Hana]
00:09:275 (2) - This clap is way louder than the others. Fix that.
00:10:340 (1) - Add a finish for consistency.
00:16:021 (1) - The finish here, though, feels overused.
01:03:240 (2) - New combo here.
01:19:039 (4) - I understand the concept, however there's nothing in the music that you could follow as for the last slider's end. I'd suggest using a single circle here, however if you're that desperate to keep it, just silence its end.
02:48:447 (2,3,4,5,6) - Compare the distance between these 1/3 notes and the distance between these: 02:46:376 (7,8,1)­ ­notes. I was pretty much certain it's going to be a 1/4 stream.
02:52:234 (1) - This NEEDS a storyboard warning that it's speeds up.
03:36:790 (4) - Same as before.


Good luck!
Fia
Topic Starter
Fia

rEdo wrote:

[Timing]
I'm pretty sure that this ending needs a timing revamp. Since I can't do an accurate check on this (my headphones are broken), please ask somebody competent after some more mods to have a deeper look into this.

[Normal]
Nothing I can complain about. Well done.

[Hana]
00:09:275 (2) - This clap is way louder than the others. Fix that.
00:10:340 (1) - Add a finish for consistency.
00:16:021 (1) - The finish here, though, feels overused.
01:03:240 (2) - New combo here.
01:19:039 (4) - I understand the concept, however there's nothing in the music that you could follow as for the last slider's end. I'd suggest using a single circle here, however if you're that desperate to keep it, just silence its end.
02:48:447 (2,3,4,5,6) - Compare the distance between these 1/3 notes and the distance between these: 02:46:376 (7,8,1)­ ­notes. I was pretty much certain it's going to be a 1/4 stream.
02:52:234 (1) - This NEEDS a storyboard warning that it's speeds up.I don't know how to make this...
03:36:790 (4) - Same as before.

Good luck!
Thanks for mod~
-Neipezi
2,246 posts
Joined October 2011
-Neipezi
hi, modding to the late, sorry (so tired :o )

[General]
- sources "キミへ贈る、ソラの花" after change, "Kimi e Okuru, Sora no Hana" is put the tag.
- storyboard "2x.png" the "Hana" applies only difficulty.
- uninherited timing points conflict with all diff.
- difficulty "easy" add.
- You can check the widescreen support. but you need to change a bad place.

[Normal]
00:08:033 - circle add? (drum sound)
01:41:228 (2) - HP bar duplicate.
02:27:559 (5) - NC add?

[Eggache's Hard]
00:05:725 (1) - arrow point x24 y224 move?
00:08:033 - circle add?
00:08:388 - 1/2 slider add?
00:14:246 (3) - after one rotation, move here?
box1
01:01:820 (1,1,1) - NC remove
01:02:885 (3) - NC add
02:40:873 - Two timing points at the same time.
02:47:086 - circle add?
02:47:441 - 1/2 slider add?
03:08:210 (1,1,1) - NC remove
03:09:275 (3) - NC add
03:30:932 (1,1,1) - NC remove

[Laurier's Insane]
02:27:737 (1,1) - NC remove
02:29:601 (1) - spinner end 02:30:932 - ?

[Hana]
overmapping:o

wow, SB good.. :lol:
Fia
Topic Starter
Fia

-Kirito wrote:

hi, modding to the late, sorry (so tired :o )
Sorry, due to some reason I failed to answer your mod.
Anyway fixed a lot, thanks!
wcx19911123
3,862 posts
Joined June 2010
wcx19911123
from my queue

[Normal]
00:10:873 - why not start the slider here? same as 00:09:453 -
01:18:506 (2,3,4,5) - this pattern is too hard to play as a Normal diff, I suggest to use slider instead
01:36:968 (1) - out of screen
02:26:672 (1,2,3,4) - same here
02:49:926 - add finish? sound nice
03:09:630 (2) - out of screen
03:44:778 (3,4) - hope you can increase this spacing a bit, cuz it's hard to know the music become slow from here, the spacing is a bit sudden

[Hana]
rename to Extra, custom diff name is not allowed to use now
00:44:778 (2,3) - the jump is too huge, and too hard to read. reduce the spacing please
01:01:465 (1,1,1,1,2,1) - nice idea, but the shape can be better..
01:13:181 - ^
01:18:062 (4,5,6,7,8) - too hard to play imo..
01:19:394 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - ^
02:27:559 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - ^

[Laurier's Insane]
01:19:571 - useless newcombo here
01:44:778 - missed clap?

the spread is not that good imo
good luck
Fia
Topic Starter
Fia

wcx19911123 wrote:

from my queue

[Normal]

All fixed

[Hana]
01:01:465 (1,1,1,1,2,1) - nice idea, but the shape can be better.. I don't know how to improve it ;_;
01:13:181 - ^
01:18:062 (4,5,6,7,8) - too hard to play imo.. I got no better ideas. So i'll keep it now.
01:19:394 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - ^ ...I think it's fine.
02:27:559 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - ^

the spread is not that good imo
good luck
那些大间距stream找人testplay的时候基本都连上了 就先保留了…… Thx for modding.
Mikazuki
34 posts
Joined July 2011
Mikazuki
IRC MOD
15:16 *Mikazuki is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/312484 Shimotsuki Haruka - Kibou no Sora]
15:16 PinkHeart: 都是sb的错
15:16 Mikazuki: hana把
15:16 PinkHeart: 嗯
15:20 Mikazuki: 虽然说整体都看出来是overmap向的...但是有些地方感觉还是过头了。
15:21 Mikazuki: 草 原来5.5
15:21 PinkHeart: 节奏吗 0 0
15:21 Mikazuki: 不 主要是排列
15:21 Mikazuki: 间距你还是改小点把
15:21 Mikazuki: 这么大不太符合这歌
15:21 Mikazuki: 没那么奔放的
15:21 PinkHeart: ...也是 我试试
15:22 Mikazuki: 进EDIT我指出点地方给你
15:22 PinkHeart: 好 0 0
15:23 Mikazuki: 01:01:997 -
15:23 Mikazuki: 这连续五个滑条
15:23 Mikazuki: 你用了好几个地方
15:23 Mikazuki: 某的意见是 滑条短点
15:24 Mikazuki: 01:18:506 (1) -
15:24 Mikazuki: 这一串有点反人类
15:24 PinkHeart: ...那样形状就要变了吧 改了之后不太好看
15:24 Mikazuki: 唔 小点花朵啊
15:24 Mikazuki: 五个滑条都短点
15:25 Mikazuki: 滑那么大一个移动压力挺大的 打的时候有点突兀
15:25 PinkHeart: 我看看/.\
15:25 PinkHeart: 每次这个梗都被挑/.\
15:25 Mikazuki: 对于这样的梗某是感觉挺好的
15:25 Mikazuki: 就是你做的有点过了
15:25 Mikazuki: 然后之前说的那个串,,
15:25 Mikazuki: 要不做成回转滑条？
15:25 PinkHeart: ..其实打的时候没必要画那么大的弧度也能连上吧 我把弧度调小点试试
15:25 Mikazuki: 嗯
15:25 Mikazuki: 某其实也连上几个
15:26 Mikazuki: 不过还是觉得突兀了点
15:26 Mikazuki: 难度其实那个不算什么
15:26 PinkHeart: 串其实我觉得还好0 0要怎么改？
15:27 Mikazuki: 比较多的连续滑条还挺长之后要按上这么大间距的串。。
15:27 Mikazuki: 反人类啊
15:27 Mikazuki: 改成一个连续回转滑条怎么样？
15:27 PinkHeart: ...总觉得那样太缩了/.\
15:27 PinkHeart: 中间改成两个短滑条？
15:28 Mikazuki: 缩？某是按照对这歌的想法是说的
15:28 PinkHeart: 这样就只有3连了
15:28 Mikazuki: 要打也打的上就是了
15:28 Mikazuki: .
15:28 Mikazuki: 回转滑条啊
15:28 Mikazuki: 铃铛样的
15:28 Mikazuki: 你不是五连么
15:28 Mikazuki: 来回五次呗
15:29 PinkHeart: 啊...
15:29 PinkHeart: 看错地方了/.\
15:29 Mikazuki: 02:48:447 (2) -
15:29 Mikazuki: 这一段节奏实在是，。
15:29 PinkHeart: 这里就那么改吧 其实我也不满意/.\
15:29 Mikazuki: 本身就是变速你还搞成这么大间距的。。
15:30 Mikazuki: 改成滑条会好很多 可读性上啊 效果上啊
15:30 PinkHeart: ...不会当成1/4吗？主要是担心这个
15:30 Mikazuki: 02:52:234 (1) -
15:30 Mikazuki: 某不懂什么四分之一啊啥的 只是说直观感觉
15:30 Mikazuki: 然后这个滑条 太长了。
15:31 PinkHeart: 改了改/.\
15:32 Mikazuki: 感觉上来说把 这歌做成最多5.2难度就够了
15:33 Mikazuki: 后面应该没什么可说的 就是总体上 间距太大了
15:33 PinkHeart: 嘛 基本上我也觉得玩的有些过头/.\
15:33 Mikazuki: 嗯
15:33 Mikazuki: 你看其他两个GD的INS都是四星。
15:33 Mikazuki: 你一个5.5
15:34 Mikazuki: 这歌扛不住啊
15:34 PinkHeart: 不过有两个In呢 0 0 我觉得听歌的话应该能满足需求吧
15:34 Mikazuki: 调整到5.1会好很多把。
15:34 PinkHeart: lol 扛不住23333
15:34 Mikazuki: 是啊 这歌没那么疯
15:34 Mikazuki: 你做的说难听点就是有点毁歌了
15:35 Mikazuki: 不过整体上节奏下的还是不错
15:35 Mikazuki: 完整版好评，祝早日RANK
15:35 PinkHeart: 谢谢 0 0
15:35 PinkHeart: 我再往简单了走走
15:35 Mikazuki: 嗯 希望对你有帮助 就这样了
15:36 PinkHeart: 嗯嗯 那么要骗kd吗（喂
15:36 Mikazuki: .
15:36 Mikazuki: 好啊(。)
Good luck
Yumeno Himiko
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Yumeno Himiko
It's a beautiful song ~
Add the lyrics if possible
lyrics
青い空の下　君はそこに立って
眩しすぎるその笑みは
暗い闇の中　諦めていた僕に
降り注ぐ光の花になる

小さな世界　君はそこにしか
居れなくても　溢れる希望

その手繋ぎ歩こう
この場所で出会ったことに
どんな意味があるか見つけたいんだ
空に昇る体
それでもまだこの脚で
希望の一歩を踏み出してみたい

赤い夕陽に　包まれたこの街で
手を繋いで歩いたね
２人黙ったまま　君は微笑んだ
僕だけの長い影見つめて

儚い世界　咲いたソラの花が
切なさに揺れ　僕を見ている

この手伸ばしてもいい？
君の心に触れたなら
隠した想い　溢れだしてしまいそうで
ほらね　また笑った
本当は泣きたいんでしょ
また交差した　２人の生きる場所

君を抱き寄せた
同じ場所に僕たちは
居るよ　君を守るって誓うから
この手離さない
行かないで　ここに居て
君の笑顔に救われる人がいる

君に贈るから
受け取ってくれるかな
僕だけに見えるソラの花
この手繋ぎ歩こう
ソラの花咲くこの場所で
共に歩く希望の未来を探そう

Dealing with exams these days so may not mod your map very soon :(
But I'll mod it as soon as possible.

BTW 这图你放了1个Normal 2个Insane和1个Extra，整体难度变化太大，建议加上Hard来保证难度的平衡性
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Fushimi Rio
Fushimi Rio

examination wrote:

It's a beautiful song ~
Add the lyrics if possible
lyrics
青い空の下　君はそこに立って
眩しすぎるその笑みは
暗い闇の中　諦めていた僕に
降り注ぐ光の花になる

小さな世界　君はそこにしか
居れなくても　溢れる希望

その手繋ぎ歩こう
この場所で出会ったことに
どんな意味があるか見つけたいんだ
空に昇る体
それでもまだこの脚で
希望の一歩を踏み出してみたい

赤い夕陽に　包まれたこの街で
手を繋いで歩いたね
２人黙ったまま　君は微笑んだ
僕だけの長い影見つめて

儚い世界　咲いたソラの花が
切なさに揺れ　僕を見ている

この手伸ばしてもいい？
君の心に触れたなら
隠した想い　溢れだしてしまいそうで
ほらね　また笑った
本当は泣きたいんでしょ
また交差した　２人の生きる場所

君を抱き寄せた
同じ場所に僕たちは
居るよ　君を守るって誓うから
この手離さない
行かないで　ここに居て
君の笑顔に救われる人がいる

君に贈るから
受け取ってくれるかな
僕だけに見えるソラの花
この手繋ぎ歩こう
ソラの花咲くこの場所で
共に歩く希望の未来を探そう

Dealing with exams these days so may not mod your map very soon :(
But I'll mod it as soon as possible.
唔 其实我之前考虑过加歌词不过懒逼了 有空我再看看
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