1. Easy (2.86 stars, 91 notes)
2. Hard (4.9 stars, 199 notes)
3. Insane (5 stars, 240 notes)
4. Normal (4.18 stars, 124 notes)

Qzectbumo wrote:

Hard

00:09:795 (4) - slider repeat one more time
00:41:644 (1) - slider end at 00:41:849 is better
00:43:287 (5) - end at 00:43:493
01:21:292 (1) - slider end at 01:21:703
01:22:936 (1) - end at 01:23:347

Normal

00:43:493 (1) - start at 00:43:287 “use the same pattern 00:41:027 (3,1)”
00:45:137 (1) - start at 00:44:931
01:20:881 (4) - remove the circle? 01:19:237 (3) slider end at 01:20:881?

Easy

01:15:960 - add a circle between 01:14:717 (3) and 01:16:371 (1)

neonat wrote:

For M4M

Easy

00:52:123 (1) - it's less than 1 sec after the end of the slider, which might be too difficult for Easy will keep for now
01:04:854 (1) - replace the finish sound at the end of the slider with a whistle mkay
01:19:237 (2) - try this rhythm? good idea, ty

SPOILER

01:25:401 (1) - start the spinner at 01:25:299 - vocals start here, end same place at 01:27:045 okay


Normal

00:42:671 (2) - sounds a little off because it is halfway in between no vocals and vocals, maybe just keep it simple and have a note at 00:42:671 and at 00:43:082 only sure
01:22:525 - add a note added


Hard

00:14:316 (5) - replace it with 3 circles? 00:14:316 -, 00:14:419 and 00:14:521 will consider, but might be a sudden spike in difficulty, may just replace with 2 circles instead
00:22:124 (1) - replace with a slider, slider ends at 00:22:535 okay
01:04:854 (1) - remove finish from the end of the slider, put finish at the start of the slider okay
01:08:758 - add a note added
01:19:237 (5) - having it repeat after every 2 beats is kinda long, for that period of 01:19:237 to 01:20:881 - try to have some thing every beat.
This is just an example of what I meant: fixed

SPOILER

01:21:292 (1) - slider should end at 01:21:703 aight
01:22:936 (1) - ^ aight


Hope this helps. it did! thanks

Natsu wrote:

General:

haji.png is 1018x768, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768. You should resize or find other

Unused Image Files kami.png delete it plz

Inconsistency in Source the problem is on easy is not the same fix plz

tags are not the same in all diffs check the problen is on easy

I see you got alot of red timing lines you should remove they just keep this 00:05:686 delete the others for kiai used a green line plz after you do that go to timing resnap all notes :3

Why are you using same slider velocity in all the diffs? you should do differents like easy 0.80 normal 1.0 hard 1.40

00:52:123 set previou time here for all diffs

Easy:

00:08:973 remove whistle from body
00:10:160 x:428 y:207 for keep same distance
00:13:083 remove whistle from body
01:15:949 unsnapped
00:14:727 x:184 y:311 for keep distance
00:18:836 (1,2,3) - distance error 00:19:658 move this to x:422 y:178 to fix it
00:36:919 x:301 y:170 to fix distance problems
00:44:726 can you move it fr other place? since is confuse for new players do that things
00:52:123 you have to remove it or make the spinner short because so early after spinner for easy diff

Normal:

00:07:329 (5,6) - distance error 00:07:329 move it to x:226 y:271 to fix it
00:08:973 (1,2,3) - ^
00:10:617 (1,2,3,4) - distance error
00:24:590 (5,1,2,3,4) - ^
00:36:097 why are you hidden it?
00:52:123 same as easy

you have to use same distance on normal be consisten with it

Ok i stop here since hard look better and the map is good but same slider velocity is not good if you have any question ask me in game good luck :3

Broccoly wrote:

Hello. from my queue~

[General]
I don't know the reason, but why is there a skip button in Hard diff but not in the others?
ask in #modhelp.. since i can't help :c I have no idea LOL, I will try asking around

[Normal]
00:26:850 - how about adding a note here to fit to the vocal? suree
00:34:453 (1,2,1) - Distance check: consistent spacing~ thanks for catching that
00:48:220 - add a note? added
00:59:727 - (same) add a note? added

[Hard]
00:09:795 (4,5,1) - 5 should be right in the middle of 4 and 1 Hmmm, I'm comfortable with how it is now, but I will consider it
00:42:055 (2,3) - I think these two are a bit close.. space like 00:43:698 (6,1) - this i'll change it
01:19:032 (4,1) - sudden jump. I don't know if hard players can read this and respond fast enough.. although I like your intention. fixed by rotating the previous combo lol

[Easy]
Couldn't find anything wrong.. good job yayyy


I'm sorry for a short mod. Couldn't find much... The maps are pretty neat It's alright, thank you!
Good luck!!

qkenan wrote:

Red = Unrankable
Blue = It should be modified
Black = My suggestion

M4M from qkenan's queue _(:з」∠)_

General

1. Kiai must start from long white tick, suggest 00:51:713 fixed
2. unsnapped inherited points: 01:04:854 and 01:21:292 fixed
3. try avoid using .PNG as bg, because they are too bigger than .JPG . change the format fixed
4. wrong bg size, 1024x768 or 800x600 plz fixed
5. unused files: kami.png (1.27MB) fixed deleted
6. Tags: add 'tomoe' to WF's Insane fixed

Easy

1. 00:13:905 (3) - not suggest to use multiple repeat slider in easy diff fixed
2. check the soft sliderwhistle issue fixed
3. just suggestion, you'd better make the last spinner start from the same time fixed

Normal

1. Many many notes are unsnapped ! press Ctrl+Shift+A using AImod to check them ! fixed
2. 00:07:329 (5) - blanket fixed
3. 00:11:439 (2,3) - suggest to use straight slider fixed
4. 00:27:055 (1) - discontinuous DS fixed
5. 00:57:054 (2) - ^ fixed
6. 01:11:429 (3) - ^ fixed
7. 00:59:109 (3) - how about rotating it by -50°~-70° ? maybe
8. 00:59:931 (1) - soft sliderwishle, as said in Hard fixed
9. 01:21:302 reduce volume by10~20% ? fixed
10. 01:25:412 (1) - mute it or make a fade-in set volume to 15%

Hard

1. 00:06:302 (2) - blanket, about x141y189 fixed
2. 00:12:261 (3) - more curved, avoid overlap fixed
3. 00:14:316 (2) - missed clap ? fixed
4. 00:21:302 (3) - ^ tail fixed
5. 00:57:055 (2) - ^ fixed
6. 01:04:042 (3,4) - how about adding clap ? fixed
7. from 00:42:261 to 00:48:425 , the part is not suitable with normal 24clap. try listen to the drum beats in the music and add correct clap attempted to fix lulz
8. 00:16:371 (4) - tail point up, make it perfect blanket fixed
9. 00:33:631 (6) - not so beautiful and bad flow changed
10. 00:35:069 (4) - move to x408y96 to make perfect triangle with ③ and following① ? fixed
11. 00:59:932 (4) - attention, if you just want to add whistle to head and tail of slider, plz select one and add, not select the whole slider. or there will be extra soft-sliderwhistle. and this point often annoys xAT fixed
    01:00:754 (2) - ^ fixed
    01:01:576 (4) - ^ fixed
12. 01:08:768 (6,1) - stack them well fixed
13. 01:12:877 (1,2) - how about vertical symmetry ? fixed
14. 01:21:302 reduce volume by10~20% ? fixed
15. 01:25:412 (1) - mute it or make a fade-in changed volume to 15%

WF's Insane

1. 00:08:562 (5) - NC and 00:08:973 (1) - Remove NC ? fixed
2. 00:16:782 (6) - how about this?
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3. 00:18:836 (1) - put it between previous② and ③, no overlap fixed
4. 00:46:987 (1) - no overlap with previous⑧ fixed
5. 01:19:247 (3) - Finish should be added at 01:19:247 ,so how about making it 1/2 beat earlier ?
   like this
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   well i just added more beats afterward and took out the repeating slider
6. 01:22:946 (1) - remove finish, and use 5% to mute the spinner ? fixed
   Need more work on placing, seems not very neat. eh, wishfulfiction will work on it hehe

Very soft and cute song~ Good luck~ thank you!

kevinelson wrote:

Hi from #modreqs
I'm new at modding then, take most as suggestions

Easy

[Easy]
00:53:357 (2) - This slider is huge and borring for this part try this I thought easy modes were supposed to be boring! Well, fixed all



00:59:932 (1) - Same here



01:04:864 (1,2) - Same here and keep clap at 01:06:919



01:09:795 (3) - Again

Normal

[Normal]

00:33:425 - Add note fixed

00:40:412 - Remove Wistle at this point Keep the others fixed

00:41:028 - 00:43:083 - Try this and keep the clap at 00:42:261 and 00:43:083 put in a modified version of this



00:44:110 (7) - Make this slider end 00:44:521 add a note at 00:44:727 and keep the clap here. fixed

Hard

[Hard]
01:04:555 - Add note fixed
01:13:494 - ^fixed
01:14:316 - ^ fixed

WF's Insane

[WF's Insane]

00:05:891 (2,3) - Remove this notes dont follow any beat removed

00:26:645 (3) - Move this, dont put it under the slider okayy
00:28:083 (3) - ^ okay

00:49:966 - Add note okay


00:36:713 - 00:37:740 - Here try this: no sorry, I think the way it is now fits a bit better with the beat in the background D:



01:09:076 - Add note added

01:21:302 - 01:22:535 - Try this: changed



same here 01:22:946 - 01:24:179 changed

Loved this song, I wish you good luck ♥♥♥ thank you D

00:41:028 - 00:43:083 - Try this and keep the clap at 00:42:261 and 00:43:083 put in a modified version of this

Sample

Here the Slider (6) is a reverse, I forgot to show it.

neonat wrote:

Insane

00:32:809 (6) - shorten slider to 00:33:014 fixed
00:33:220 - add a note fixed
00:34:761 - ^ fixed
00:43:288 - skipping this part of the vocals? added stuff
01:03:323 - add a note? fixed
01:21:302 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - lengthening each slider more than 1/2 beat doesn't really sound nice though okay
01:25:412 (1) - start at 01:25:309 -(vocals start here) fixed

Moway wrote:

Hi, M4M from my queue.

[Easy]
00:26:645 (2) - for your easiest difficulty i don't really like having 1/2 objects of any kind, so I'd suggest turning this into a 1/1 slider instead. eh, beginners can handle 1/2 sliders >:D i got faith in them
00:38:151 (3) - ^ ^
00:47:603 (1) - remove NC fixed
00:48:425 (3) - NC fixed
00:55:001 (4,5) - make (4) blanket (5), would look nice. fixed
00:56:234 (5,2) - have these perfectly stack fixed
01:04:042 (2) - replace with 1/1 slider same as others
01:19:247 (2) - delete this, then nah
01:18:014 (1) - add a repeat on this slider mm no
01:20:480 (3) - you could probably delete this, there isn't any sound here anyway except for the held note which you're not mapping anyway. fixed by elongating previous slider
01:21:302 (1,2) - make these both symmetrical across the y-axis fixed

[Normal]
Personally, I think this difficulty looks cleaner with CS 4. Also HP4 and OD4. changed HP and OD, not CS

00:36:713 (2,3,5) - don't really like that you have the slider end of (5)completely obscured here, I'd prefer to be able to see it. should be visible when you do 4
00:49:042 (1,2,3) - try to aim for symmetrical placement of these objects. fixed mostly
01:11:439 (4) - NC fixed
01:18:014 (1,2) - I'd prefer for this to be spaced rather than stacked, since this is not a simple 1/1 rhythm, and the other places in the map that you have this rhythm are spaced, me too, but it runs the symmetry ;_;

This is a pretty difficult Normal o_o ehehe

[Hard]
00:13:494 (2,4) - fix this stack fixed
00:16:782 (6) - have the end stack perfectly with the end of the (4) fixed
00:33:425 (4,5,1,2) - these overlaps look a bit sloppy to me. fixed
00:40:823 (4,5) - this doesn't blanket perfectly. go to time 00:40:823 (4,5) and use the approach circle of (4) to make (5) perfectly blanket. fixed
00:44:727 (1) - remove NC fixed
00:44:932 (2) - NC here. fixed
00:46:782 (7) - NC fixed
00:47:192 (1) - remove NC fixed
00:59:110 (3) - fix stack fixed
00:59:932 (2) - ^ fixed
01:19:247 (1) - add finish on the sliderhead fixed
01:19:658 - maybe decrease the volume here to 40% or so, I think it would sound better with lower volume. fixed


[WF's Insane]
00:18:014 (1,2,3,4,1) - This arrangement is slightly off. Make it so that 3 and 4 can ctrl H each other and 2 and the 2nd 1 can also. fixed
00:18:836 (1,2,3,4,5) - it looks like you were trying for some sort of symmetry here, so center this whole pattern. fixed
00:21:713 (6,1) - I think a jump fits here better than an antijump fixed
00:48:425 (4) - NC fixed
00:57:261 (3,4,5) - uniformly space these fixed
00:59:829 (1,2) - I think this is a mistake, but 5.0x jump O_O yeaaaa fixed
01:04:042 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - form this into a perfect square, would look much cleaner, or even for that matter a perfect diamond. Just stack (3,4,5) on top of (2) and (6) on top of (1), select (3,4,5,6) and distance snap and move to wherever you would like to form a nice square or diamond. erm, did it in another way
01:18:014 (1,2,3) - Bigger jumps fit better here. no sorry D:
01:21:097 (6,1) - too big of a jump, especially since it leads into a SV decrease i dont' think it's that big D:
01:21:302 (1) - whistle on the slider head fixed
01:22:946 (1) - ^, beatsounding here would be nice and it fits with the piano notes. the default hitsounds don't quite fit here D: But if I had a piano-like hitsound, I would totallyyy use it.
01:24:590 (4) - whistle fixed


This is a really nice first mapset, most of what I said just is to clean it up and add some polish. Good luck!
my chrome crashed, so I had to type out all my replies 3 times ;_; ty though <3 have some kudosususususu

1. 01:25:309 (1) - this spinner ends here 01:27:055 -

1. Inconsistent spacings =-=
2. 00:12:261 (3,1,2) - Inconsistent spacing, please check the distance (1,6x current)
3. 00:15:138 (1) - DON'T touch the other slider --> 00:15:549 (2) -
4. 00:18:425 (4) - ^
5. 00:34:864 (3) - ^ i don't like it, please don't do that! D:
6. 00:46:371 (4) - clap on the head?

-Cloudchaser wrote:

this will be short
all are suggestions, you're free to refuse ^^

Hard

1. 01:25:309 (1) - this spinner ends here 01:27:055 - fixed

Normal

1. Inconsistent spacings =-= fixed
2. 00:12:261 (3,1,2) - Inconsistent spacing, please check the distance (1,6x current) looked alright to me
3. 00:15:138 (1) - DON'T touch the other slider --> 00:15:549 (2) - bwahaha ok
4. 00:18:425 (4) - ^ fixed
5. 00:34:864 (3) - ^ i don't like it, please don't do that! D: fixedd
6. 00:46:371 (4) - clap on the head? erm there's no 'thud' in the music that indicates I should do that though :/

Easy and Insane are ok ~ yaaay


Good luck!! thanks for your mod~

• General

1. Inconsistency in tags. Make sure to add "wishfulfiction" to the other difficulties tags.
   
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• Easy

1. 00:13:905 (3) - How about making this slider curved so you can make a pretty blanket with it?
   
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2. 00:26:645 (2) - I wouldn't recommend making 1/2 patterns in easy. This difficulty feels like a normal diff imo, so to make it a bit different from your normal i suggest you to make this slider a simple long one, with the same duration as the current way but without repeat.
3. 00:39:384 (1,2) - How about adding some claps to these two sliders like you did at 00:41:850 (1) and so on?
4. 00:52:535 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner. (Spotted by AIBat but it would be good if you apply it, it's a very small detail).
5. 00:55:001 (4,5) - This pattern would flow better if you move it a tad to the right like this imo. Try it out. Feels more comfortable to play imo:
   
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6. 01:04:042 (2) - Same thing about sliders with repeat. It IS rankable but I personally think that it would be better to make everything 1/1 in Easy.
7. 01:14:727 (3) - Make this curved to make another blanket?
   
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8. 01:18:014 (1) - It would be good if you prevent overlaps like this one. The slider gets uncovered at the right moment when the player has to click it but remember, beginners read slowly and they might be confused with this so try to make very clear to read your easier difficulties.
9. 01:18:014 (1) - I suggest you to change the sampleset to Normal at both start and end of this slider.
10. 01:20:891 (3) - This note is stacked at the previous slider end and you can't do that in a easy difficulty because it's misleading for begginers. Like i've told you they are slow when reading. But don't worry, My main suggestion here is removing this note since it doesn't follow any sound of the song. There's no sound, so it'll be better to remove it. If you don't agree with this, then unstack the note if you can at least. :p
    To solve this no-sound thing, you should remove (3) and make larger 01:19:247 (2). Make it end at 01:20:891 and that's all.
11. 01:25:309 (1) - Consider adding a greenlines at the duration of this spinner to gradually decrease the volume. Would fit perfectly with the song.
    
    Looks good! good job!. i still think that this plays like a normal but well, i hope it will be fine!

• Normal
  
  *Why did you use 1.1x spacing? It's a bit too much for a Normal diff!

1. 00:09:590 (3,4) - This part doesn't flow good imo. Try settinng spacings like this here, it feels much better to play imo:
   
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2. 00:17:192 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Here I suggest this pattern to make the flow better, and the pattern less messy :p always in my opinion!
   
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3. 00:21:302 (3) - ^ Here I suggest you to move this slider a tad up, just a bit, to make it flow better:
   
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4. 00:22:740 (2) - ^ Same here, more flow issues. Try to follow the slider shapes to make the cursor feel more.. like more naturally when playing. I don't know how to express my point, but I think you get it. I'm reffering that if you place notes more oriented to slider ends they'll feel better to play:
   
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5. 00:34:864 (3) - ^ ~
6. 00:39:384 (1) - This slider repeat isn't following anything! make it shorter, end the slider at 00:39:795. That's the correct way to follow the voice.
7. 00:41:028 (4) - ^
8. 00:52:535 - To give players a bit more of time to recover, consider replacing this slider with a single note. Also, it fits more with the music imo, using a 1/2 slider to follow just the instrumental isn't necessary at all at this part.
9. 01:01:987 (5) - To improve flow, try moving this slider over here:
   
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   There are more flow issues so fix them all by yourself if you agree!
10. 01:04:042 (3) - Here you can change the sampleset at the start of this slider to normal sampleset to follow the drums.
11. 01:04:453 (4) - ^ At both start and end.
12. 01:19:247 (3) - Finish here too? sounds perfectly with the music imo
13. 01:20:891 (4) - This note doesn't follow anything. The exactly same pattern as easy lol~ as i've said about easy, you should remove this note since there's no sound and then make larger 01:19:247 (3), make it end here, at 01:20:891.
14. 01:21:302 (1,2,3,4,5) - This part sounds completely off. I didn't notice in easy, but here it was easier since you added more notes. This part is 1/6, not 1/2.
15. 01:25:309 (1) - Same suggestion as in easy about gradually decreasing volume.
    
    What happened here ? You did a great job with your easy, but this difficulty looks messy at some parts. This needs more mods and has room for improvement. :3

• Hard

1. 00:19:555 (3) - Overmapped note, there's no sound here so it's pointless :c you should remove it.
3. 00:34:453 - This small antijump looks odd, and a bit confusing since it looks like it is 1/2, like if you have to click constantly like before. I recommend you to move this note far away to make this part more clear to read. If you look at it at the editor it looks fine but i got confused when i tested the difficulty.
4. 00:34:658 (2,3,4) - Sounds too redundant due to whistles. I suggest you to remove whistle of (2) and (4). Sounds much better imo~
5. 00:35:275 (1) - Hitfinsh at the start of this slider to emphasise the change of melody?
6. 00:49:145 (7) - Overmapped triplet there's no sound here so better remove this note.
7. 00:49:453 (1) - I suggest you to remove clap from here since the drum sound doesn't sound here, and add whistle instead. I like how it sounds with the voice~
8. 00:52:124 (1) - Here's missing a clap at the start of this slider.
9. 00:55:823 (3) - Small detail but i'll say it anyway :p i think this pattern would flow a bit better if you move this note a bit down, here:
   
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10. 01:10:206 (3) - This slider looks like it doesn't belong here. The shape is too straight and alongside with lots of curved sliders.. it looks just out of place. I suggest you to make it curved like your previous or something different. I came up with this idea, use it if you like it!:
    
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11. 01:17:809 (5,1) - Clicking 5 and then 1 feels uncomfortable to play imo. That's what I felt when testing the map. I suggest you to move (5) more over 01:17:192 (4)'s end, over here. Feels better imo and makes it a less exaggerated jump for a hard diff.
    
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12. 01:19:864 (2,3,4,5,6) - Again, there's no sound here so all of those notes are senseless! You should remove them and do something similar like i've told u to do about normal and easy. Or! if you want to make this diff different from these, you can replace 01:19:247 (1) with a single note and then add a spinner at 01:19:453, with end at 01:20:891.
13. 01:21:302 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - This whole part is 1/6. Snap notes at 1/6 correctly to follow the voice.
14. 01:25:309 (1) - Again same thign about decreasing volume gradually.
    
    Awesome job! o: really good work for your first map! compared to normal, it looks like mapped by somebody else lol. Idk what happened to you with Normal, really.

• WF's Insane

1. 00:07:329 (1) - This curve looks poorly made. Try improving it more, make it more curvy~
2. 00:07:946 (3,4,5) - Waaaaay too overmapped stream. Don't make streams just to increase the overall difficulty of the map. The song is very slow and calm, it doesn't have any streamy parts. Here nothing can be heard at 3 and 5 position, so, due to this, you should delete them: 00:07:946 (3,5).
3. 00:12:980 (3) - ^ in this case, just remove this note.
4. 00:13:802 (7) - ^
5. 00:19:555 (4) - ^
6. 00:24:282 (4) - ^
7. 00:31:679 (2) - ^
8. 00:35:172 (7) - ^
9. 00:35:275 (1) - How about adding a hitfiinsh to emphasise the change of melody?
10. 00:39:384 (1) - Clap at the start to follow the drums?
11. 00:41:131 (5) - ^
12. 00:42:261 (5) - This clap doesn't follow anything at all and sounds redundant so I suggest you to remove it. Sounds much better without it imo.
13. 00:46:062 (6) - Overmapped note again.
14. 00:50:994 (2,3) - ^ Two of them this time.
15. 00:54:076 (5) - ^ moar.
    
    Well I'll stop here please solve this issue. Remove notes that don't follow any sound of the song by yourself. Remember that making triplets just to increase the difficulty so needlessly will derail the quality of your difficulty and make it less rankable. I only mentioned overmapped triplets and streams. I didn't mention anything else than a couple of hitsounds, I focused on the critical problem. Sorry. But well, try fixing this and your diff will be much better than now.
    ___________________

Kei wrote:

m4m'ng back!

• General

1. Inconsistency in tags. Make sure to add "wishfulfiction" to the other difficulties tags. fixed
   
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• Easy

1. 00:13:905 (3) - How about making this slider curved so you can make a pretty blanket with it?
   
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2. 00:26:645 (2) - I wouldn't recommend making 1/2 patterns in easy. This difficulty feels like a normal diff imo, so to make it a bit different from your normal i suggest you to make this slider a simple long one, with the same duration as the current way but without repeat.
3. 00:39:384 (1,2) - How about adding some claps to these two sliders like you did at 00:41:850 (1) and so on?
4. 00:52:535 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner. (Spotted by AIBat but it would be good if you apply it, it's a very small detail).
5. 00:55:001 (4,5) - This pattern would flow better if you move it a tad to the right like this imo. Try it out. Feels more comfortable to play imo:
   
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6. 01:04:042 (2) - Same thing about sliders with repeat. It IS rankable but I personally think that it would be better to make everything 1/1 in Easy.
7. 01:14:727 (3) - Make this curved to make another blanket?
   
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8. 01:18:014 (1) - It would be good if you prevent overlaps like this one. The slider gets uncovered at the right moment when the player has to click it but remember, beginners read slowly and they might be confused with this so try to make very clear to read your easier difficulties.
9. 01:18:014 (1) - I suggest you to change the sampleset to Normal at both start and end of this slider.
10. 01:20:891 (3) - This note is stacked at the previous slider end and you can't do that in a easy difficulty because it's misleading for begginers. Like i've told you they are slow when reading. But don't worry, My main suggestion here is removing this note since it doesn't follow any sound of the song. There's no sound, so it'll be better to remove it. If you don't agree with this, then unstack the note if you can at least. :p
    To solve this no-sound thing, you should remove (3) and make larger 01:19:247 (2). Make it end at 01:20:891 and that's all.
11. 01:25:309 (1) - Consider adding a greenlines at the duration of this spinner to gradually decrease the volume. Would fit perfectly with the song.
    
    Looks good! good job!. i still think that this plays like a normal but well, i hope it will be fine!

thank you, fixed all

• Normal
  
  *Why did you use 1.1x spacing? It's a bit too much for a Normal diff! fixed, changed to 1.0x

1. 00:09:590 (3,4) - This part doesn't flow good imo. Try settinng spacings like this here, it feels much better to play imo:
   
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2. 00:17:192 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Here I suggest this pattern to make the flow better, and the pattern less messy :p always in my opinion!
   
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3. 00:21:302 (3) - ^ Here I suggest you to move this slider a tad up, just a bit, to make it flow better:
   
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4. 00:22:740 (2) - ^ Same here, more flow issues. Try to follow the slider shapes to make the cursor feel more.. like more naturally when playing. I don't know how to express my point, but I think you get it. I'm reffering that if you place notes more oriented to slider ends they'll feel better to play:
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:34:864 (3) - ^ ~
6. 00:39:384 (1) - This slider repeat isn't following anything! make it shorter, end the slider at 00:39:795. That's the correct way to follow the voice.
7. 00:41:028 (4) - ^
8. 00:52:535 - To give players a bit more of time to recover, consider replacing this slider with a single note. Also, it fits more with the music imo, using a 1/2 slider to follow just the instrumental isn't necessary at all at this part.
9. 01:01:987 (5) - To improve flow, try moving this slider over here:
   
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   There are more flow issues so fix them all by yourself if you agree!
10. 01:04:042 (3) - Here you can change the sampleset at the start of this slider to normal sampleset to follow the drums.
11. 01:04:453 (4) - ^ At both start and end.
12. 01:19:247 (3) - Finish here too? sounds perfectly with the music imo
13. 01:20:891 (4) - This note doesn't follow anything. The exactly same pattern as easy lol~ as i've said about easy, you should remove this note since there's no sound and then make larger 01:19:247 (3), make it end here, at 01:20:891.
14. 01:21:302 (1,2,3,4,5) - This part sounds completely off. I didn't notice in easy, but here it was easier since you added more notes. This part is 1/6, not 1/2. halp, how to map in 1/6? Q_Q Oh well, I tried my best
15. 01:25:309 (1) - Same suggestion as in easy about gradually decreasing volume.
    
    What happened here ? You did a great job with your easy, but this difficulty looks messy at some parts. This needs more mods and has room for improvement. :3

I was struck with momentary inspiration.. anyway, fixed all

• Hard

1. 00:19:555 (3) - Overmapped note, there's no sound here so it's pointless :c you should remove it.
3. 00:34:453 - This small antijump looks odd, and a bit confusing since it looks like it is 1/2, like if you have to click constantly like before. I recommend you to move this note far away to make this part more clear to read. If you look at it at the editor it looks fine but i got confused when i tested the difficulty.
4. 00:34:658 (2,3,4) - Sounds too redundant due to whistles. I suggest you to remove whistle of (2) and (4). Sounds much better imo~
5. 00:35:275 (1) - Hitfinsh at the start of this slider to emphasise the change of melody?
6. 00:49:145 (7) - Overmapped triplet there's no sound here so better remove this note.
7. 00:49:453 (1) - I suggest you to remove clap from here since the drum sound doesn't sound here, and add whistle instead. I like how it sounds with the voice~
8. 00:52:124 (1) - Here's missing a clap at the start of this slider.
9. 00:55:823 (3) - Small detail but i'll say it anyway :p i think this pattern would flow a bit better if you move this note a bit down, here:
   
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10. 01:10:206 (3) - This slider looks like it doesn't belong here. The shape is too straight and alongside with lots of curved sliders.. it looks just out of place. I suggest you to make it curved like your previous or something different. I came up with this idea, use it if you like it!:
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 01:17:809 (5,1) - Clicking 5 and then 1 feels uncomfortable to play imo. That's what I felt when testing the map. I suggest you to move (5) more over 01:17:192 (4)'s end, over here. Feels better imo and makes it a less exaggerated jump for a hard diff.
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 01:19:864 (2,3,4,5,6) - Again, there's no sound here so all of those notes are senseless! You should remove them and do something similar like i've told u to do about normal and easy. Or! if you want to make this diff different from these, you can replace 01:19:247 (1) with a single note and then add a spinner at 01:19:453, with end at 01:20:891. a spinner feels a bit awkward here, but I don't want to make a huuuuge slider I'll consider changing it if another person tells me to~
13. 01:21:302 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - This whole part is 1/6. Snap notes at 1/6 correctly to follow the voice. halp, I still don't know how to map in 1/6 Q_Q
14. 01:25:309 (1) - Again same thign about decreasing volume gradually.
    
    Awesome job! o: really good work for your first map! compared to normal, it looks like mapped by somebody else lol. Idk what happened to you with Normal, really.

thank you, fixed most

• WF's Insane

1. 00:07:329 (1) - This curve looks poorly made. Try improving it more, make it more curvy~
2. 00:07:946 (3,4,5) - Waaaaay too overmapped stream. Don't make streams just to increase the overall difficulty of the map. The song is very slow and calm, it doesn't have any streamy parts. Here nothing can be heard at 3 and 5 position, so, due to this, you should delete them: 00:07:946 (3,5).
3. 00:12:980 (3) - ^ in this case, just remove this note.
4. 00:13:802 (7) - ^
5. 00:19:555 (4) - ^
6. 00:24:282 (4) - ^
7. 00:31:679 (2) - ^
8. 00:35:172 (7) - ^
9. 00:35:275 (1) - How about adding a hitfiinsh to emphasise the change of melody?
10. 00:39:384 (1) - Clap at the start to follow the drums?
11. 00:41:131 (5) - ^
12. 00:42:261 (5) - This clap doesn't follow anything at all and sounds redundant so I suggest you to remove it. Sounds much better without it imo.
13. 00:46:062 (6) - Overmapped note again.
14. 00:50:994 (2,3) - ^ Two of them this time.
15. 00:54:076 (5) - ^ moar.
    
    Well I'll stop here please solve this issue. Remove notes that don't follow any sound of the song by yourself. Remember that making triplets just to increase the difficulty so needlessly will derail the quality of your difficulty and make it less rankable. I only mentioned overmapped triplets and streams. I didn't mention anything else than a couple of hitsounds, I focused on the critical problem. Sorry. But well, try fixing this and your diff will be much better than now. I'll try to fix them all, thank you~
    ___________________

That's all I've got. Hard is my favourite difficulty of the mapset. Overall a nice work for your 1st map, really.
Insane really needs some work on those overmapped streams, and Normal needs some visual polishment of patterns.

Good luck! :>

SilverJetter wrote:

Only a bit because i didnt found so much

Normal:

00:49:864 (3) - 00:52:535 (1) add something betwenn them oh yea, there's supposed to be a spinner in between.. i wonder what happened to it
01:19:247 (3) - place it better...it seems that its a bit out of the playfield fixed

Hard:
00:31:987 (1) - different spacing like the beat before
01:09:590 (1) - bad spacing
01:18:014 (1) - again
01:22:946 (1) - confusing spacing

fixed all, some were accidents haha

hope it helps a bit ^^ thank you~

-iCo- wrote:

General

Kiai time stops at 01:18:014 not 01:04:864 kiai time hurts my eyes after a while, but i'll change it~

song is so kawaii and cute >w< go go rank!! thank you ^_^

Easy

00:05:686 (1) - 2nd dot move it to x:364 y:104 for better look

00:08:562 (4,1) - needs a better blanket

00:16:371 (2,3,1) - slanted triangle

00:30:343 (3,4,1) - distance error here

00:34:453 (4) - Clap ehh maybe not

00:34:864 (5) - Finish there's like a finish right afterward

00:38:151 (3,1) - keep the distance

00:40:206 (2) - move it between 00:38:151 (3,1) already like that XD

00:43:494 (3,4) - distance error

01:11:439 (5,6,1) - ^

01:11:850 (6,1) - make a better blanket

01:14:727 (3,4) - this notes are confusing. why sudden change in beat? accident LOL

01:16:371 (1) - not symmetrical slider

01:19:247 (2,1) - distance error

01:25:309 (1) - spinner for easy should start at white line. why not 01:25:412 vocals start here

fixed everything else , most of the distance errors are quite tiny haha

Normal

00:08:562 (1) - Remove NC

00:08:973 (2) - Nc here~

00:11:028 (1) - Remove NC

00:12:261 (3) - NC

00:12:877 (1) - Remove NC

00:15:138 (1) - Remove NC

00:15:549 (2) - NC

00:17:192 (1,2,3) - distance error

00:22:946 (3,4) - ^

00:25:412 (1,2) - ^

00:36:919 (3,4) - ^

00:57:261 add note for better sound/style

00:57:466 (2,3) - distance error

01:05:686 (2,3,4) - 3 notes in 1 space is not fun. Might be bring for some players. why don't you add sliders there are tons of sliders right afterward

01:07:740 (2,4) - not stacked

01:16:371 (1,1,2) - ^

01:21:302 (1,2,3,4,5) - huge distance error here LOL

fixed everything else~

Hard

There are lot of distance errors. Unless they're jumps, you better follow your distance setting which is 1.2x yes sir, jumps >:D

Insane

There are also some distance errors. PLEASE keep your distance consistent. will do except during dramatic parts

00:07:329 (1,2) - don't use blue ping unless it's a stream. use red ping accident

00:08:562 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - very hard to read. Change the layout

00:12:261 (5) - NC

00:12:672 (1) - Remove NC

00:26:439 (2,3,4,5) - such a wierd shape it's a diamond D:

00:27:877 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ fix it

00:30:754 (4,5,6,1) - make it symmetrical or nice looking

00:31:987 (3,6) - you better stack these

fixed errthang else, thankyou~

eldnl wrote:

Not sure what do you meant, because your timing is correct and the notes before the spin fits with 1/2.

Cobra wrote:

Hi! From my queue.

General
MP3 is only 128kbps D: it's better if it's 192 I think it's fine for now

Easy
00:05:686 (1,2,3,4) - You should do something like this so (2) and (4) stack. Looks nice. You should do this in several other places, including the other difficulties. fixed for certain parts, not going to fix for all

01:19:247 (2,1) - these don't go well together i think changed
Unsnapped timing points at the end o_O on the spinner AiMod doesn't catch that for me for some reason :/ Also, I'm not really sure how to fix it besides "Resnap all notes" //newbie mapper ;A;

Normal
Whoa, whoa, your kiai times aren't the same. They need to be the same through each difficulty. Fix this please accidentt!
00:12:261 (1,2) - i think you should make these sliders the same shape. nahh
00:20:480 (1) - i dont think there should be a clap here will keep for now
00:27:466 (1) - make this start on the head of (2) from the purple combo fixed
00:50:069 (1) - this spinner should have a finish fixed
00:59:932 (1) - does not fit well with the previous combo flipped it horizontally lulz
more unsnapped timing points.. and there are more timing points in this diff again, not exactly sure how to fix it @__@ //newb

Hard
This diff looks good besides the regular stacking issues and stuff that i point out in other diffs, also the unsnapped timing points yayy, thank you

Collab
Add the names of who's part it is? Since it's a collab. Ummm, we didn't split the beatmap into parts that we mapped separately. Rather, he gave me a first draft, and I basically edited, rearranged the notes, and implemented the mods from this thread

Nice map! Good luck thanks!~

buhei wrote:

Hi Zhengster~ from my M4M Queue

[Easy]
I think the hitsound and placement are all good enough. But the colors in Kiai are disordered. NC doesn't depend on the numbers on the notes. You can think taht spinner is always a part of next color.
00:55:001 (4) - add NC here My NCs depend on the stanzas, not the numbers D: I'll consider the NCs, but I'll leave them the way they are right now
00:56:645 (3) - remove NC here

'Do the same things after 01:04:864 (1)

01:13:083 (1) - remove NC here
01:14:727 (5) - add NC here
01:16:371 (3) - remove NC here

[Normal]
00:35:275 (1,3) - can be better i think it's fine D:
01:19:247 (3,4) - change into a spinner
01:21:302 (1,3) - what's wrong with these sliders?

[Hard]
Colors are disordered too.
00:07:740 (2) - Ctrl+G
00:16:371 (5,6) - change to this:

00:17:192 (1,2,3,4,5) - can be better
00:18:425 (6) - Ctrl+G
00:24:590 (4) - it's a bit ugly..
00:34:453 (1,2,3,4,1) - can be better
00:41:028 (5) - Ctrl+G and move 00:41:645 (1,2) to another place sorry, i like the way it is now
00:54:179 (6) - a bit ugly
01:02:809 (4) - Ctrl+G
01:10:206 (3) - this slider is much better than 00:54:179 (6) and 00:24:590 (4)
01:19:247 (1) - a bit ugly..._.
01:20:480 (4) - change to this:

01:21:302 (1,1,1) - what's wrong..

[Collab]
00:30:960 (5,6,1) - let (1) be far away from (6) it's pretty far, i think
00:45:138 (1) - sounds strange. move to 00:44:932
00:47:603 (2) - Ctrl+G
01:03:014 (1,2,3,4) - terrible..
01:06:302 - add a note to go with the rhythms before
01:21:302 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - so what's wrong..orz


Good map, Good song~ Good luck~! You will need it!

changed all that I didn't comment on, and those sliders at the end ended on the blue ticks.. I changed them so that they ended on the white ticks instead thanks for your mod!

Verlaren wrote:

Hi. From Aincrad's Modding queue.

General:
Deselect Letterbox during breaks, because you haven't a storyboard. (Song setup --> Storyboarding)

Easy:
AR -1
CS -1, So to play a lot better. In addition it will be easier for beginners to play. I think it's fine the way it is now D:
00:17:603(3) - add at the end of the slider clap.
00:47:603(4) - NC. Try not to make in easy diff of more than 4 or 5 combo, otherwise it will be difficult for beginners to restore the level of XP after misses.
01:11:439(5) - ^

Normal:
AR -1
00:32:809(4) - in normal diffs should not be hidden notes. Move to x:264 y:52.
00:44:932(4) - move on two ticks back. So it will be much better.
01:24:590(1) - unsnapped slider (end). Remove him. But instead him put there circle. Since the end of the card will be more readable. The more you follow the vocal part. extended slider instead

Hard:
CS -1 i think my settings are fine now D:
AR -1
OD -1
01:24:590(1) - unsnapped slider (end).
In some places, slipping random spacings. Fix it please use distance snap tool.
01:24:590(1) - remove NC. mmm maybe not


Collab:
CS -1 i think it's fine like this
01:03:323(2) - remove note.
01:04:761(6) - ^
These notes do not fit into the overall rhythm of the song. which? D:
01:16:371(2) - unsnapped slider. Reduce him to one tick.
01:21:302(1,2,1,2,1) - unsnapped sliders. Use 1/2 sliders. They are more suitable.
01:24:590(1) - remove NC. mmm maybe not

Good luck. thank you! Fixed all I didn't comment on

Onisakura wrote:

Hi :3
from #modreqs

[General]
delete LetterBox in Collab diff

[Easy]

00:52:535 (1) - NC

[Hard]
Unsnapped green sections at:
01:21:292 - snap to 01:21:302

00:15:549 (3,4) - sounds weird (1/4 tick distance) move the end of slider (3) at 00:15:960, remove (4) and add circle at 00:16:165


00:29:521 (2,3) - same, remove circle 00:29:932 (3) and move the end of slider at 00:29:932

01:21:097 (6) - superfluous, remove (honestly, needs spinner here 01:19:244 - 01:20:891, because player doesn't hear a beats in this moment)


[Collab]

00:38:151 (4,5,6) - without (5) sounds nice

01:21:097 (6) - superfluous, like in Hard diff, remove

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Good luck ^_^